² for the price of one [AMG]

Lord Raa

Exporter of Juice Tins
#1
Have a terrible idea I had some years ago which I have no clue as how best to continue it. 

If you can come up with a suitable pitch to me, you can continue this idea. You can even use a different title.


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² for the price of one
 
 
By Lord Raa
 
 
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Disclaim-me-do: What do I know about fanfiction?
 
 
AU elements ahoy! Why? Because it amuses me to write this world in such a manner
 
 
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Megumi Morisato stretched in her dorm room. She’d been given the dubious honour of taking messages for her roommates while they took a break from their studies. Deciding that it was time for something to eat, she picked up the phone and dialled the number for a randomly selected fast food joint for some piping hot takeaway.
 
She was rather surprised to hear a pleasant voice on the other end of the line mention that she had gotten through to the “Goddess Relief Hotline”.
 
Hanging up, the engineering student gently slapped her face to check that she wasn’t asleep.
 
A bright light radiated from the mirror in the hallway and out stepped a beautiful and obviously foreign woman. “Hello there,” the figure smiled as she spoke in perfect Japanese, “I’m the goddess, Belldandy. I’m here to grant you a wish.”
 
“A wish?” Megumi parroted.
 
“Yes, I’m here to grant your heart’s desire. Whether it is for a vast wealth, to be the first woman Formula One World Champion or for chocolate to actually help you loose weight,” Belldandy explained with a pleasant smile.
 
“Oh. Ok,” the student nodded. Thinking that it was an elaborate prank at the hands of her fellow Motor Club members, she was about to ask for something outrageous until something in the back of her mind made her think of her little brother, Keiichi.
 
“You’re thinking of someone special to you, aren’t you?” the goddess asked. “This isn’t a trick; I can really help you with anything you’d like.”
 
“Well, it’s my brother, Keiichi,” Megumi sighed. “He’s a great guy, but he can’t get a girlfriend to save his life. I don’t get it, I mean, he’s smart, maybe not street smart, but he’s got a knack for engines and all things mechanical and he’s really kind and gentle – if you asked him, he’d give you the shirt off his back to keep you warm while he froze to death. Perhaps you could do something to help him?”
 
“What sort of girl does he like?” Bell enquired, hoping that she could help make some people happy during her brief stay on the mortal realm.
 
“I don’t know, to be honest. I wish that he had someone smart enough to appreciate his technical knowledge and someone sexy to build up his confidence. I don’t suppose you know any girls that are single right now?” the mortal girl asked with an amused look on her face.
 
“I d-” the Norn of the Present was cut off as a pillar of light erupted forth from her being, straight up into the ceiling.
 
“WISH GRANTED!”
 
As the light faded and the mysterious wind died down, Megumi asked her visitor what had just happened.
 
“The Ultimate Force will set events in motion to bring your brother into contact with some nice girls,” Belldandy answered. “Oh my, I didn’t realise that this would make such a mess. Please, let me help you clean it up.”
 
 
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Elsewhere on the Nekomi Institute of Technology, a short young man looked somewhat despondent at the news he’d just been given.
 
“What? You mean that we’re being evicted?”
 
“Not ‘we’, you, Morisato,” a large young man in a black leather jacket and Mohawk replied. “The building inspector came and told us that there’s too many people living here and since you’re the newest tenant, you’re drawing the short straw.”
 
“Oh, ok,” Keiichi Morisato said sadly. “I’ll get my things.”
 
Minutes later as the lowest rung on the NIT Motor Club social ladder left the building Keiichi’s head dropped in despair. “Now what do I do? I don’t know anyone with a spare room and I don’t have the cash for even a night in a capsule hotel…”
 
“Ah, just the person I’m looking for,” an older gentleman smiled.
 
“Yoshikawa-sensei, what can I do for you?”
 
“I need you to give our new exchange student a campus tour,” the greying man smiled.
 
“Ok, but I was looking for a find a new place to stay,” the young student replied.
 
“I know just the place, it’s off campus and it needs a fair bit of work, but if you’re willing to put the effort in, I think you’ll like it,” Professor Yoshikawa smiled,
 
“Ok, where is it?” Keiichi asked with a hopeful smile.
 
“It’s the old temple up on the hill that overlooks that campus.”
 
“That place does need a lot of work, but if it’s cheap, then I’ll take it,” the engineering student nodded in thanks.
 
“Well, then, if you’d like to come with me, I’ll introduce you to our visitor, Morisato-kun.”
 
 
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Keiichi Morisato entered Yoshikawa-sensei’s office to see a young lady of 16 years sitting in front of the desk.
 
“Morisato-kun, this is Skuld Vanir, she’s a foreign exchange student from, where was it, Miss Vanir?” the grey haired man asked, slightly embarrassed by his lapse in memory.
 
“I’m from a town called Valhalla, it’s inside the Artic Circle,” Skuld answered with a polite smile.
 
“Pleased to meet you, I’m Keiichi Morisato,” the young man bowed.
 
“Pleased to meet you, Mr. Morisato,” the young lady bowed back.
 
Keiichi took the offered spare seat. “What are you here to study, Vanir-san?”
 
“I’m here to study engineering, unfortunately, the universities in my country aren’t really suited to help me out and as your country is famous for its gadgets, I asked to be placed as an exchange student,” Skuld explained her cover story. “I was hoping that I could find a place with enough space that would allow me to practice for the projects on the course.”
 
“There is a disused temple nearby, however it requires some serious renovation to make it habitable, even as a club house,” Yoshikawa explained.
 
“It’s alright, a little hard work never hurt anyone, well, with the possible exception of my sister, Urd,” the young goddess smiled.
 
“I know what you mean – my sempai in the Motor Club are just the same,” Keiichi smiled before becoming slightly depressed when he realised that he probably wouldn’t be getting his pre-paid rent back any time soon.
 
“What’s up, Morisato-kun?” the grey-haired professor asked.
 
“I was asked to leave my dorm – they said that there were too many people living in there.”
 
Yoshikawa looked at a memo on his desk that he hadn’t seen before. “Ah, yes, here’s the report. I’m afraid that they’re not playing a joke on you, there were too many people living there for the fire safety regulations. But you won’t have that problem where you’ll be staying.”
 
Before the lecturer could explain further, his intercom buzzed.
 
“¬Yoshikawa-sensei, there’s an Urd Vanir to see you.¬”
 
“Please send her in; I need to introduce her to someone.”
 
A few moments later, there was a knock on the door.
 
“Enter,” the grey-haired man replied.
 
“Hi,” a shapely, well tanned woman smiled as she entered the room. “I’m Urd Vanir.”
 
‘She’s so beautiful.’ Keiichi mused. After a moment, he remembered to bow. “Hello, I’m Keiichi Morisato.”
 
“Hi there,” Urd winked playfully. “Hiya, Squirt.”
 
“Don’t call me squirt; I’m not a little girl anymore!” Skuld huffed indignantly.
 
The younger girl’s attitude just brought a smile to Urd’s face. “I hear that you’ve found somewhere for us to stay while we’re studying, Yoshikawa-sensei.”
 
“We have,” the professor nodded. “There is a double room in the women’s dormitory free and well, as you’re sisters, we thought it would be best to put the pair of you in the same room.”
 
“Makes sense,” the tanned foreigner agreed. “It’ll help me keep an eye on Skuld, make sure she doesn’t get into too much trouble.”
 
Skuld’s left eye started to twitch at her eldest sister’s comment. “It’s you that keeps getting into trouble,” she muttered under her breath.
 
“What are you studying, Vanir-san?” Keiichi asked the bronze-skinned young lady.
 
“I’m not actually studying,” Urd replied with a smile. “I’m helping to teach art to the freshmen class. Are you the lucky man that’s going to be showing us around NIT?”
 
“Y-yes?” the hapless young man shrugged when the elder sister winked suggestively.
 
“Yes, Morisato-kun here was selected because he is in Skuld-san’s classes,” Yoshikawa-sensei explained. “The fact that he’s completely hopeless with women is also a factor” was added silently.
 
“Well then, shall we begin our tour?” Skuld asked as she stood up. “I want to get my stuff moved in before it gets dark.”
 
“Me too,” Urd seconded.
 
Yoshikawa stood up to shake the hands of his newest exchange students. “I hope that the three of you are successful in your courses. Morisato-kun, I’ll have your fellow Motor Club members drop off your stuff at the temple.”
 
“Thank you, Sensei,” Keiichi bowed respectfully.
 
 
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“So what’s that about a temple, Keiichi?” Urd asked as the trio walked to the female dormitories.
 
“I sort of got kicked out of my dorm because there’s too many people there at the moment. But Yoshikawa-sensei told me that I’m allowed to stay at the old temple on the hill that overlooks the southern part of the campus,” the male engineering student answered.
 
“But why would he ask you?” Skuld enquired. “I mean, no offence, but you’re hardly likely to be at the top of a list for something like that.”
 
“Yeah,” Keiichi sighed. “But it’s not that great a deal when you look into it. I mean you can see holes in the roof from the campus.”
 
“And why would you be offered the chance to stay at the temple?” the platinum haired lovely asked, her eyes scanning the crowd that seemed to be gathering near them.
 
“I tweaked the engine in his car and increased his fuel efficiency by nearly 20 percent with only a 5 percent drop in power,” the young engineer answered with pride.
 
“Nice,” Urd answered somewhat distractedly. “What are all these people staring at?”
 
“You are something of a stunner, Vanir-sensei,” Keiichi replied with a blush.
 
 “What? Haven’t they seen someone like me before?” the tanned beauty posed.
 
“Not outside of adult movies,” the engineering freshman answered, his blush deepening. “Anyway, here’s the campus cafeteria. It can get a bit rowdy in here during meal times. Also you two may have to watch out for stray hands in the crowd.”
 
“‘Stray hands’?” a puzzled Skuld asked. In her mind, the stray hands were dismembered appendages falling from the rafters.
 
Urd leant in to whisper something to her sister.
 
“Those perverts!” the raven haired girl spluttered.
 
The tanned beauty smirked. “Well, it’s not always a bad thing to have roaming hands. If they’re gentle and had nimble fingers attached…”
 
Skuld rolled her eyes at her sister’s comment. “Perhaps you should warn the others about Urd?”
 
Keiichi’s mind locked up as he pondered the idea of the very lovely Urd’s hands roaming over his body. Shaking his head and coughing politely, he continued with the tour.
 
“This is where the NIT Motor Club meets. It’s not much, but it keeps us dry in the winter.”
 
The sisters’ attention was directed to the rather shabby looking single story building. The woodwork needed repainting and Skuld looked a bit suspicious of the ability of the roof to keep people dry.
 
“Yeah, it needs some maintenance,” the young guide admitted in an embarrassed tone. “It’s just that we needed to use the repair budget to pay for our entrance into a race last month.”
 
“Did you win?” Skuld asked, intrigued as to the technical ability of the club.
 
“We came in second because the driver messed up showboating on the last lap,” Keiichi answered. “Stupid Tamiya. He just had to do that donut on the last straight, didn’t he?”
 
The sisters smiled sympathetically.
 
“Hey! Morisato!” a gruff voice called out.
 
The trio turned their attention to the big bear of a man walking towards them.
 
“Hi Tamiya-sempai,” Keiichi waved.
 
“Hey, whatcha doing with these babes?” the large man in tight white t-shirt asked. He stopped dead in his tracks when he got a good look at Urd and started to drool slightly.
 
“He was showing us around,” Skuld replied. She was indifferent to huge man that had approached them.
 
Urd sighed at her sister’s attitude towards males. “I’m Urd Vanir and this is my sister, Skuld. And you are?”
 
“I’m Toraichi Tamiya, president of the NIT Motor Club,” the moustachioed man bowed with an exaggerated politeness. “How about I show you the good places on campus?”
 
“Actually, we’re rather tired. Can you show us to the Girls’ Dorm, Keiichi-san?” Skuld asked, hoping to get away from the odious man that was trying to flirt with her sister.
 
“What? Yeah, sure. Right this way, Skuld-san,” the young engineer gestured with his hand.
 
“Coming Urd?” the raven haired girl asked as she looked over her shoulder.
 
“Yeah, yeah. I’m coming, Squirt.”
 
 
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It was a couple of hours later when Keiichi was finally able to sit down in a liveable room with something to eat, even if it was a cup of instant noodles.
 
“Man, that Urd was something special,” he mused as he finished mixing in his sachet of seasoning. “Her little sister was pretty cute, too. She seemed a bit grouchy though. Maybe she was just tired?”
 
Keiichi shrugged before slurping down his noodles. When he finished his snack, he glanced at his watch. “Half ten already? Damn, I better turn in. I dread to think how much work I’m going to have to put in to this place in the morning.”
 
 
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On the NIT campus, Skuld and Urd were settling into their room.
 
“Nee-chan, did you notice the way everyone’s been looking at you?” the younger goddess asked as she put away her t-shirts.
 
“I’d have to be as clueless as Kasumi Tendo not to notice,” the tanned beauty deadpanned. “Still, it’s nice to be appreciated like that.”
 
“If you say so,” Skuld shrugged dismissively. “What do you think to that Keiichi person?”
 
“Dunno really. He seems a decent sort, but I’m looking for someone a little more…manly and exciting, if you know what I mean,” Urd winked suggestively.
 
The mechanically minded girl rolled her eyes. “Well, I think he’s kind of nice. He wasn’t standing too close to us in the hope that he’d get a good look down your dress and he did warn us about perverts in the lunchtime crowds.”
 
“There is that,” the platinum haired sister conceded. Then she let out a rather unladylike yawn. “Anyway, it’s time for bed. G’night, Skuld.”
 
“G’night, sis,” Skuld said with a barely stifled yawn of her own.
 
 
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EagleCeres

Well-Known Member
#2
*tosses money at screen*
MOAR!!!

I can't wait to see them bring out his GAR/BAMF side.
Great Job Raa!
 

balthanon

Well-Known Member
#3
Hmm... not sure what I would do with that either. The overall wish I think could be kind of interesting as a multi-crossover harem prompt potentially too, rather than the route you ended up taking. (Though re-reading it, I do see it pretty much says someone twice, explaining just the two of them.)

One optionI could see being interesting with your route is if the past for AMG was still the same-- so at this point Belldandy is about to have the love of her life stolen by her sisters. A story that basically amounts to her trying to work around the Ultimate Force or usurp one of their positions could be amusing. I could just see the episode where alternate reality Belldandy that granted Keiichi's wish pops in for a visit accidentally leaving this one jealous enough to actually pair up with Mara or something. :)
 
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