Naruto A Naruto AU

DhampyrX2

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#1
I was cruising FF.net reading Naruto fics when this idea popped into my head. Let me know what you think of it...

What if, at a young age, someone actually explains to Naruto why he is so hated and he decides he agrees with the view himself? That is to say perhaps a drunk, or a bitter old villager that's about to die anyway calls him the Kyuubi publicly and forces either Iruka or Sandaime to explain what the transgressor meant. Or perhaps even another shinobi who overheard things is cornered and nagged into explaining just to mix things up. The point will be that Naruto will understand before he's ever a full ninja that he is both jailer and prison to the Kyuubi.

The twist will be that he comes to hate the Kyuubi as fanatically as the rest of the village seems to, and takes his duty as a demon vessel as a sacred mission. When someone insults the fox, Naruto will either agree cheerfully with any disparaging thing they say and insult the fox himself, or get insulted if they direct the insult at him for mistaking him for his tenant and inform them they shouldn't insult him to get at the Kyuubi. After all, you don't insult the warden, or make fun of the prison builiding when you want to jeer at the person locked up, do you?

The concept would go so far as to have Naruto research ways to make certain the Kyuubi is even more secure, and asking village ninjas to help. I see this version of Naruto looking up the Byakugan during his research and asking Hiashi if he could find and close of the fox's tenketsu points for him, or finding reference to the seal Orochimaru used on him in the Forest of Death in canon and asking for someone to put it on him voluntarily to keep him further separated from the fur ball.

Of course the fact he's taking things so seriously would throw more than one villager off balance over the years as the insults they hurl at the child are either agreed with and added on to by him, or corrected to hate the fox rather than himself. It might also make more than one of the council shinobi sit up and take notice of the fact Naruto is bearing his burden with such responsibility and zeal.

So, comments? Criticisms? Cheeze whiz?
 

GenocideHeart

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#2
Hmm. I really like this idea. It has teh potential to go a few ways, possibly making Naruto into a bit of a sarcastic ass.

Problem is, if Jiraiya throws him off teh cliff as usual, I see this Naruto rather dying than even using a fraction of the fo9x's power. Either that, or after he's forced to use it, he'll try to murder Jiraiya with a fanatism very close to Sasuke's towards Itachi...
 

Moshulel

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#3
GenocideHeart said:
Hmm. I really like this idea. It has teh potential to go a few ways, possibly making Naruto into a bit of a sarcastic ass.

Problem is, if Jiraiya throws him off teh cliff as usual, I see this Naruto rather dying than even using a fraction of the fo9x's power. Either that, or after he's forced to use it, he'll try to murder Jiraiya with a fanatism very close to Sasuke's towards Itachi...
I don't see him using the fox's chakra at all! He'll probably prefer to die rather than use it. Also zealots tend to be obssesed with what they believe in, so much that they place it above anything else, so a lot will change given that he'll prefer death rather than using that chakra.
 

DhampyrX2

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#4
Actually, he'd never get to the point where he'd let Jiraiya throw him off of the cliff. He'll start researching ways to more tightly contain the fox when he notices his accellerated healing. That could lead first to asking Hiashi to bind the foxes tenketsu, and when that proves impossible (as far as I know, feel free to correct me if I'm wrong) he'll look into ways to increase the seal in the fox. Of course when he goes to Sandaime for help, he might get Kakashi to that lame evil containment seal on him, but the only other ninja besides Orochimaru I could think of that could put the five point elemental seal on Naruto in Konoha would be Jiraiya. That would cause almost a complete separation if the old man would agree to let it be done and could convince Jiraiya to use it on Naruto.

Of course it might be convincing the pervert to take away a potential advantage of Naruto's that might be the hard part.

Either way, I don't see Jiraiya training Naruto the same way, if he trains him at all.
 

cilrais

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#5
I don't know if the council would want kyuubi's powers completely sealed away, because that is a potent weapon in konoha's arsenal. Perhaps they could look into ways to strengthen the seal while also giving more control of kyuubi's chakra. I mean if kyuubi is a prisoner and naruto is the warden, kyuubi should be doing some community service.
 

DhampyrX2

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#6
It might actually be a role reversal toward Naruto's traditional allies and enemies in the council. Those that hated him and wanted the Kyuubi killed would be all for Naruto doing all he could to hurt and restrict the demon when the witness his fanaticism toward his duty. Those that see him as a weapon or a tool would be upset. Those that only want him to be happy would be concerned about how he's making his whole life into being the perfect jailer at the risk of his own safety by restricting his potential chakra and healing.
 

Moshulel

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#7
Problem is that there are instances where that chakra made a difference:

The fight with Haku, the Forest of Death, the fight against Neji, the end of the fight with Gaara...

With him refusing to us that chakra and searcing new ways to seal it even better...
 

DhampyrX2

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#8
Very true, but with then again could you really see a Naruto that is obsessed with keeping the Kyuubi contained at all cost really lacking in things like chakra control and the ability to think things through? If anything Naruto might be more dangerous than in canon because he would study about chakra and about sealing relentlessly out of a desire to do his 'job' as the Kyuubi's jailer to the best of his abilities.

He may not ever meet Haku because he might not complain about D-rank missions. He's used to having the least popular job in the village already. What's picking weeds and walking dogs compared to taking the Kyuubi's flak?

Orochimaru and the forest, well the only difference would be that Naruto wouldn't be attacking the second summons the same way. But then again, with Naruto's creativity under pressure that might just mean he gets more creative.

With Neji, well if Naruto's not a dead last beyond the predjudices of the Academy teaches besides Iruka, and has asked Hiashi to help bind the fox's tenketsus in the past, then he may have enough of an idea of how to deal with fate boy to beat him without the fox.

As for Gaara, he might be the worst off against Naruto. If Naruto learns enough about the 5 point elementai seal to actually peform it, then Gaara is screwed. I don't think he could fight without Shukaku at that point.
 

Israfel

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#9
Very true, but with then again could you really see a Naruto that is obsessed with keeping the Kyuubi contained at all cost really lacking in things like chakra control and the ability to think things through? If anything Naruto might be more dangerous than in canon because he would study about chakra and about sealing relentlessly out of a desire to do his 'job' as the Kyuubi's jailer to the best of his abilities.
Yah, imagine a Naruto that was extremely proficient with seals, like to the point that, like Orochimaru with the Five Element seal, he could just slap it on somebody like that, seal Neji's eyes with a bloodline seal, Neji OWNED.

As for Gaara, he might be the worst off against Naruto. If Naruto learns enough about the 5 point elementai seal to actually peform it, then Gaara is screwed. I don't think he could fight without Shukaku at that point.
I think it would be more likely that Gaara would fall to the ground thanking him for sealing it and then promptly fall asleep (for like the next few months :sweat: ).
 

toraneko

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#10
I've heard theories on other boards which postulate that it's important for Naruto's seal to leak out Kyuubi's chakra in controlled amounts. As the theory goes, if it weren't for the fox's chakra being leeched away by the seal and by (careful) conscious use, Kyuubi no Youko might build up enough power to break free, or at least gain full control over Naruto's body.

That's pertinent to the topic, if you want to go with that. If this zealous warden Naruto blocks off the Kyuubi's chakra with a Five-Part Seal, he has to deal with its rising power. Or, on the other side of that coin, he could see it as his duty to constantly draw as much of Kyuubi's chakra as he safely can at all times, in order to weaken the fox.
 

Surarrin

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#11
toraneko said:
I've heard theories on other boards which postulate that it's important for Naruto's seal to leak out Kyuubi's chakra in controlled amounts. As the theory goes, if it weren't for the fox's chakra being leeched away by the seal and by (careful) conscious use, Kyuubi no Youko might build up enough power to break free, or at least gain full control over Naruto's body.

That's pertinent to the topic, if you want to go with that. If this zealous warden Naruto blocks off the Kyuubi's chakra with a Five-Part Seal, he has to deal with its rising power. Or, on the other side of that coin, he could see it as his duty to constantly draw as much of Kyuubi's chakra as he safely can at all times, in order to weaken the fox.
If by that point he has become a Seal freak he could, as I've seen in some stories, create a set of seals to store the Kyuubi's chakra, seperate from the original seal. Such as, each day he purposely draws as much out as possible then seals it away.

This keeps the idea of him keeping the fox imprisoned at all costs and gives him a trump card to use in dire emergencies. By that, i don't mean regular oh-look-they-can-kill-me fights, I mean Konoha-will-cease-to-be-if-I-don't-use-it fights.
 

Moshulel

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#12
If by that point he has become a Seal freak he could, as I've seen in some stories, create a set of seals to store the Kyuubi's chakra, seperate from the original seal. Such as, each day he purposely draws as much out as possible then seals it away.
That would screw his chakra control a lot... and to mess with seals of that level, you do need control. I figure he'll use something more along the lines of buffer seals... normally inactive but when Kyuubi's chakra is used the absorb the bulk of it, making it impossible for him to be overwhelmed.
 

cilrais

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#13
Kyuubi's chakra is nigh unfathomably strong and in canon I don't think anything naruto has done has even scratched the surface of Kyuubi's true power so I'm not sure how the seal slowly leaking Kyuubi's chakra in the amounts shown would keep Kyuubi weak.
 

Moshulel

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#14
cilrais said:
Kyuubi's chakra is nigh unfathomably strong and in canon I don't think anything naruto has done has even scratched the surface of Kyuubi's true power so I'm not sure how the seal slowly leaking Kyuubi's chakra in the amounts shown would keep Kyuubi weak.
Exactly... that's why i think that a "buffer" would be better.

We have no idea what would happen if he were to seal it completly, eventually the seal would falter and without adapting to that chakra in steps he's going to have a very nasty surprise. *Him and the village.*
 
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