Nasuverse An as of yet untitled F/SN idea

Fatuous One

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#1
An idea that came from surfing 4chan and finding an interesting picture, as well as the usual 4chan dialogue. I only spent about 20-30 minutes writing up this small prologue/drabble, so just tell me what you think of the idea itself.

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æTraceà on!Æ At that moment, it was all that defined him. If he screwed it up, he wouldnÆt live through the night, hell it might not evenà

æNo, donÆt thinkà only on it. Material compositionà strengthening, complete!Æ

æNOW! DEFEND!Æ Shirou was barely able to bring up the enhanced newspaper in time to deflect the blow. As it was, not only was he his shoulder slashed, he could feel his bones ache from the strike, and his hands were numb.

ôHA! Pretty good!ö The grin was vicious, but the words were sincere. His killerÆs eyes flashed in glee as he swung his lance in a horizontal arc, clashing against ShirouÆs impromptu weapon again. However, this time, Shirou couldnÆt fully defend against the monstrous strength of his opponent and felt his body lift into the air and fly through the nearby window.

ôGahh!ö Shirou couldnÆt hold the pained grunt as he hit the ground heavily. Thankfully, Shirou didnÆt feel any of the glass shards slicing into him, a small favor.

Leaping back onto his feet, Shirou was immediately attacked again. Again, pain, again only barely staying on feet with each strike. Almost impossibly, the attacks were getting stronger with each succession. Shirou hadnÆt been able to strength his weapon that much, if it co-

Sliceriptear

ôShit!ö Shirou cursed as he desperately flung his useless weapon at his enemy. He deflected it without a thought and continued to advance, slowly. Shirou knew that this was a deception, for in an instan-

STRIKEduckdodgestumblefall

ôGahhh!ö Shirou abandoned any feeble attempts at defense and ran. Bashing aside the door of store house, Shirou quickly searched for anything he could use for a weapon. If he could ju-

CLANGSLASHCRASHCRUMBLE

Stumbling from the force of the door being swiped off its hinges. Shirou tried in vain to search for somethingà ANYTHING to fight against this monster. He couldnÆt die hereà he still needed to become a hero.

ôGeh!ö Shirou lost his balance in the haze of panic. Falling onto his back, Shirou tried to get up wh-

ôHey,ö a voice spoke.

Shirou glanced up, expecting his killer and-

ôHey!ö

A woman. Beautiful. Her golden hair and armor, both shining in the moonlight with her-

ôHey, you fucking mongrel,ö

Shirou glanced up at her face, and into her crimson eyes.

ôAre you my master?ö

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Yes, it is what you (may) think. Instead of Saber, that is Arturia, Shirou gets Archer, that being Gilgamesh...-ko. ^_^

Tell me your thoughts. I'm off for the moment.
 

Moshulel

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#2
A woman. Beautiful. Her golden hair and armor, both shining in the moonlight with her-

ôHey, you fucking mongrel,ö

Shirou glanced up at her face, and into her crimson eyes.

ôAre you my master?ö
:rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:

Nice. :p

It will be interesting to see how Gilgamesh-ko is going to interact with Shirou, also fun to see how the original Gill is going to react to his female counterpart... (Oh you are so perfect! I want you! in duo...)

Questions:

How does Shirou summon Gill? Does he still have Avalon sealed in him?

Who is Tohsaka going to summon?

What stops Gilgames-ko from going Caster on her master?

How is Lancer going to get away?

Is she going to have the same NP as Gilgamesh the original? Although in the begining they should be weeker...


I'm sure i have more questions, but not at the moment.
 

Fatuous One

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#3
In order...

At the moment, I'm unsure. I have a few thoughts, but nothing too solid. I'll have to get back to you on this one. This fic is mostly unformed, which is the reason why it's in the 'idea' section.

Why, Saber, of course. ^_^ ^_~

A well-placed (if accidentally used) command seal, most likely. Or Gilgamesh may just decide to stick with Shirou for the moment until another option pops up.

Hmm, I left his parts intentionally vague, as I'm not even sure I'm going to be using him as Shirou's attacker. If I do keep him as he is, he might not get away.

Yes, Gilga-ko is going to have GoB. Same as her male counterpart.

Actually, you've unintentionally given me an idea. The thought hadn't even crossed my mind to actually keep the original male Gilgamesh. I had been planning on switching around the servants a bit to suit my needs, but your option is VERY tempting.

Also, to give you an idea of what Gilga-ko looks like, here are the pictures that inspired me in the first place.

Gilga-ko (1), (2), (3), (4), (5). (6), (7), (8), (9).
 

Moshulel

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#4
Interesting....

Glad to be of help. :p

One more question:

Seeing that there is only one servant of each class summoned for a war, is Archer!Shirou going to make an appearence?

Another weird thought that popped into my head, we all know how obssesed Gill otoko was with Saber, what if Gill-ko gets the same onsession for let's say... the hero of justice aka Shirou? Could be a reason to hang around him.
 

Fatuous One

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#5
Sadly, Archer!Shirou will not be making an appearance in this fic. Not that I wouldn't LIKE to have him in, but unless I decide to go with the switcharoo option with the Servants, he isn't going to make the cut.

While that's a possibility (although, in my mind, a slim one) that would take a bit of time. Gilga-ko would already have needed a different reason to stick around before that.

Oh, and for fun, here are some other trans-gendered Servants.

(1), (2), (3), (4), (5).
 

TheEcchiSessha

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#6
Fatuous One said:
A woman. Beautiful. Her golden hair and armor, both shining in the moonlight with her-

ôHey, you fucking mongrel,ö

Shirou glanced up at her face, and into her crimson eyes.

ôAre you my master?ö
Two words: Pure Genius. When I finished reading this, I was kinda shocked :eek: , then the idea hit home. :snigger: Once again, I feel like a young "grasshopper" watching a master of the art at work. :lol: F1, you rock. :hail:

If you do keep Gil-otoko, I'm looking forward to two encounters. The first encounter with Saber and the encounter with Gil-otoko.

Moshulel said:
Another weird thought that popped into my head, we all know how obssesed Gill otoko was with Saber, what if Gill-ko gets the same onsession for let's say... the hero of justice aka Shirou? Could be a reason to hang around him.
As for the possiblity of Gil-ko becoming obsessed with Shirou? It's actually quite possible. Gil-otoko likes strong-willed women. Why wouldn't Gil-ko like strong-willed men? Shirou has to be one of the most stubborn characters i've ever seen.

As for Gil-ko, not killing Shirou? She probably would keep him around because it's not 100% she could find a new master. She might have different ideas though after she hangs around with him some. In a way, I feel kinda sorry for Shirou. :help: Then I start laughing my ass off again. :rofl:

Although, I like Archer!Shirou. I won't be too broken up about it if he doesn't appear. Gil-ko is 1000 times better. :D (or would it be Gil-onna?)

Just my two cents on this. Looking forward to the chaos. :yay:

~The Ecchi Sessha
 

Fatuous One

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#7
Two words: Pure Genius. When I finished reading this, I was kinda shocked :eek: , then the idea hit home.? :snigger: Once again, I feel like a young "grasshopper" watching a master of the art at work.? :lol: F1, you rock.? :hail:
Heh, you flatter me. It's not that good. Nevertheless, thanks for the compliment. ^^

If you do keep Gil-otoko, I'm looking forward to two encounters. The first encounter with Saber and the encounter with Gil-otoko.
Odds are looking good for Gilga-kun being part of the story, very good.

As for the possiblity of Gil-ko becoming obsessed with Shirou? It's actually quite possible. Gil-otoko likes strong-willed women. Why wouldn't Gil-ko like strong-willed men? Shirou has to be one of the most stubborn characters i've ever seen.
That's true, however, there is a certain amount of majestic nature that needs to be involved. Saber was both stubborn, AND elegant. Gilga-ko is somewhat... less impressed with Shirou at the moment, if you can tell. :p

As for Gil-ko, not killing Shirou? She probably would keep him around because it's not 100% she could find a new master. She might have different ideas though after she hangs around with him some. In a way, I feel kinda sorry for Shirou. :help:? Then I start laughing my ass off again. :rofl:
That was sort of my reasoning. Caster was pretty stupid to kill her master right off the bat, and it almost killed her. While Gilga-ko could go on a killing spree to keep her mana up, it isn't exactly a bright idea...

Oh, and no sympathy Shirou, he deserves it. :p

Although, I like Archer!Shirou. I won't be too broken up about it if he doesn't appear. Gil-ko is 1000 times better.? :D (or would it be Gil-onna?)
Hmm, I may yet find a way to fit him in. This fic is in the planning stages. I'm just fishing for any feedback/ideas to add into it.
 

TheEcchiSessha

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#8
Fatuous One said:
TheEcchiSessha said:
As for the possiblity of Gil-ko becoming obsessed with Shirou? It's actually quite possible. Gil-otoko likes strong-willed women. Why wouldn't Gil-ko like strong-willed men? Shirou has to be one of the most stubborn characters i've ever seen.
That's true, however, there is a certain amount of majestic nature that needs to be involved. Saber was both stubborn, AND elegant. Gilga-ko is somewhat... less impressed with Shirou at the moment, if you can tell. :p
Yes, I didn't see Gilga-ko (Gilga-chan? Gilgameia?) being too impressed with Shirou at first either. But if he where to develop his Reality Marble..... (Gilga-ko's thinking after seeing Shirou use UBW: It's simply wouldn't do to have a "mere human" walking around that can perform a copy of one of my greatest attacks. I'll have to lock him away in a room.... with chains.... and whips, yes whips too.... :p~ ) jk jk :snigger:

Also don't forget she would have a rather "possesive" nature anyway. It would be "her" master, therefore "her" property. I could see her making Shirou wait on her hand and foot. :snigger:

Edit: Which reminds me of this. Sometimes ,on other forums, my post have offended others( for whatever reason <_< ), If any of my posts ever offend someone please don't hesitate to PM me and i''ll try to tone down whatever was offensive or just delete it entirely for Great Justice.

Anyway, until next time.

~The Ecchi Sessha
 

Fatuous One

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#9
Yes, I didn't see Gilga-ko (Gilga-chan? Gilgameia?)? being too impressed with Shirou at first either. But if he where to develop his Reality Marble..... (Gilga-ko's thinking after seeing Shirou use UBW: It's simply wouldn't do to have a "mere human" walking around that can perform a copy of one of my greatest attacks. I'll have to lock him away in a room.... with chains.... and whips, yes whips too....? :p~ ) jk jk? :snigger:
Well, it'd be a while for Shirou to develop his Reality Marble, and honestly, I'm not sure he CAN without Archer!Shirou's influence. In all the scenarios, Archer has somehow given Shirou a boost (and in UBW, even going so far as Shirou copying all the weapons that Archer used against him). So, more then likely, UBW is out.

And honestly, I can actually see Gilga-ko (Gilgameia, Gilgamesh-onna... I'll go with Gilga-ko for the moment) doing some strange stuff with Shirou. After all, to her, he IS her property. A toy... one that she can play with as she likes.

Also don't forget she would have a rather "possesive" nature anyway. It would be "her" master, therefore "her" property. I could see her making Shirou wait on her hand and foot.
Oh, definitely, and that's primarily why Shirou will be able to lead Gilga-ko around at all. He's going to rush in headfirst and she's going to follow him, since (to her) he's like a misbehaving puppy that keeps running away. In turn, he's the domestic slave. I can easily see Sakura getting... annoyed.

Edit: Which reminds me of this.
Heh! It's been a while since I've seen that thing... Just another amusing tack to the Unlimited *something* Works joke.

Sometimes ,on other forums, my post have offended others( for whatever reason <_< ), If any of my posts ever offend someone please don't hesitate to PM me and i''ll try to tone down whatever was offensive or just delete it entirely for Great Justice.
? ...I honestly haven't seen anything to be offended at. The only thing this forum really frowns upon (besides lack of common sense) is insulting another forum member or something similar.
 

Israfel

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#10
? ...I honestly haven't seen anything to be offended at. The only thing this forum really frowns upon (besides lack of common sense) is insulting another forum member or something similar.
And we'll occasionally remind you to keep lemon/hentai material in the lemon forum but hey, who complains about free porn, not I for sure.
 

Fatuous One

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#11
Yes, well, that actually goes along with the "Common Sense" bit.

Ranma fanfiction does not go into the Naruto section. Harry Potter fanfiction does not go into the Hawkverse Section (unless they're crossed over, obviously).

Likewise, Lemon fanfiction does not go anywhere else but the Lemon forum. As said in the 'rules'.
 
#12
Fatuous One said:
And honestly, I can actually see Gilga-ko (Gilgameia, Gilgamesh-onna... I'll go with Gilga-ko for the moment) doing some strange stuff with Shirou. After all, to her, he IS her property. A toy... one that she can play with as she likes.
If she is uninhibited about sex, that would solve her mana problem. :mmm:

Well, it'd be a while for Shirou to develop his Reality Marble, and honestly, I'm not sure he CAN without Archer!Shirou's influence. In all the scenarios, Archer has somehow given Shirou a boost (and in UBW, even going so far as Shirou copying all the weapons that Archer used against him). So, more then likely, UBW is out.
Very true. The whole Shirou using Reality Marble was kinda a joke. However, Shirou's Tracing ability comes from his Reality Marble. Which is why he can create things and ignore toukakoukan. So she might become a bit more interested once he begins to replicate some of the weapons she pulls from GoB. Keyword here is might. She might also just gloat that her 'pet' is better than Saber's. :snigger: Gilgamesh really isn't shown in many social situations, so artistic license could be claimed.

Oh, definitely, and that's primarily why Shirou will be able to lead Gilga-ko around at all. He's going to rush in headfirst and she's going to follow him, since (to her) he's like a misbehaving puppy that keeps running away. In turn, he's the domestic slave. I can easily see Sakura getting... annoyed.
Have I ever mentioned I love the way you think? :hail:

~The Ecchi Sessha
 

Moshulel

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#13
She might also just gloat that her 'pet' is better than Saber's.
This just gave me a ebil idea...

A contest? Between Gill-ko and Gill-otoko, as to who has the better "property", it would be fun to see.

Granted that if they don't kill each other first.
 

EagleCeres

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#14
Moshulel said:
A contest? Between Gill-ko and Gill-otoko, as to who has the better "property", it would be fun to see.
why? oh why? do I see Gil-chan singing "anything you can do I can do better"? :snigger:

interesting premise, Gil-chan, the official anti-hero bad girl... and Shirow's servant (tho we know who's in charge in that Master-Servant relationship) :snigger:

there is much room to work on characters with this pivotal change.

Hope to read more! :D
 
#15
why? oh why? do I see Gil-chan singing "anything you can do I can do better"?á :snigger:
I had an idea so ebil... I just had to share. Picture Gilga-ko and Gilga-kun in a contest to see who is better. Shirou and Kotomine are looking on. Gilga-ko smiles devilishly then french kisses Shirou while grabbing his ass. She challenges Gilga-kun to "do better" with his master. Gilgamesh looks at Kotomine, who is starting to look a little green, and begins to advance. :help:

As a friend of mine said best "That's fucked up like a football bat..." A lesson to everyone, never allow me any room to be ebil. :snigger: (remember how I sometimes offend? here is one such example.) Yeah, i'm a bastard so what?

~The Ecchi Sessha
 

Fatuous One

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#16
Not on long, but I'll just say that it's unlikely that this idea will be incorperated in the fic. While amusing, it doesn't mesh well in terms of seriousness. I'd honestly have a hell of a time trying to figure out how to fit it in. Now, if I were to start a side story (ala Fate/hollow ataraxia), or have omakes within the story, it could work easily enough. ^^

And Ecchi, you'll have to do much better then that if you're going to actually offend someone here. Check the "The typo that snowballed" thread if you want pointers. ;)

Also, if you want something REALLY messed up, try this little drabble I wrote up...

ôWhat? WhyÆs everyone staring?ö Gilgamesh-chan asked, her expression mildly annoyed as she looked at each of the residents.

ôWhaàwhaà whaà?ö Shirou stuttered, mostly unheard by everyone.

ôUhà Gil-chan,ö Rin frowned. ôIÆmà guessing that you had an elixir of youth like your male counterpartà?ö

ôHeh.ö Gilgamesh merely smirked as she sat down with a smug expression.

ôButàbutàbutàö

ôNowàö Rin started, momentarily pausing to grasp at the proper words. ôDonÆt take this the wrong way butà donÆt you usually like your late night activities? YouÆre always bragging.ö

ôOf course,ö Gilgamesh said, preening herself slightly. ôShirou is quite skilled in the marital arts.ö

ôIÆmàI donÆtà what aboutà?ö

ôDonÆt you think this is going to cause problems with that?ö Rin said, waving her hand in the golden-haired ServantÆs direction.

Gilgamesh took a minute to look over her prepubescent body, before looking back up with a frown.

ôNo, why would it?ö

ôàö Shirou said.

ôOh dearàö Rin mumbled. ôSorry Shirou, youÆre on your own with this one.ö

Even after his shock wore off, it took a while for Shirou to properly explain the concept of ôLoliconö.
 

Moshulel

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#17
This drabble just reminds me of a doujin called Casko, the servants there were chibified from the summoning... quite a laugh. :rofl:

As for the ideas that don't work being integrated: Omake time. :p

And Ecchi, you'll have to do much better then that if you're going to actually offend someone here. Check the "The typo that snowballed" thread if you want pointers. wink.gif
And even then... you would still have to be more ebil if you actually want to offend, we are pretty hard skinned. :p
 

Fatuous One

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#18
This drabble just reminds me of a doujin called Casko, the servants there were chibified from the summoning... quite a laugh.
Oh, you mean this doujinshi? ;)

Actually, I'm taking this from canon. Gilgamesh has a potion that reduces his age, and he drinks it in Fate/hollow ataraxia, as he can't stand interacting with the other Servants.

And yes, most likely such jokes I get from this thread I'll probably use in an omake.
 

Moshulel

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#19
:rofl:

It always makes me laugh, i know it's canon (somehow) but that was the first thing i thought about when i heard what Gill-ko wanted.

Poor Shirou. Just another question, how is Saber going to interact with Shirou and Gil-ko?
 
#20
And Ecchi, you'll have to do much better then that if you're going to actually offend someone here. Check the "The typo that snowballed" thread if you want pointers.
And even then... you would still have to be more ebil if you actually want to offend, we are pretty hard skinned. :p
It appears so. It was mainly a way to get the idea out of my head and hopefully unleash a little pain on the non-posters of the forums(since most of the people who post can dish out far worse) . I've placed stuff like that on other forums and it would create an up-roar. :huh.: ~begins crying tears of joy in anime style~ I think i've finally found a place to call home. :wub:

Also, if you want something REALLY messed up, try this little drabble I wrote up...
As for your drabble, I actually like it. It's got chaos and a good bit of perversion. :yay: I can also see Gilga-ko doing something like that. If it won't fit in the actual story. I'm with Mosh for using it for an Omake(it's too good to leave out :snigger: ) .

I could see Shirou getting in all sorts of trouble. Like,for example, Gilga-ko comes with him to school and Shirou reminds Gilga-ko that they are gonna try something "new" tonight when they get home. :snigger: The class thinks its something perverted and it's really a new dish that Shirou is gonna cook. (of course, they actually wouldn't be far off on the perverted bit as Gilga-ko probably would ravish Shirou when they got home. She does need her mana after all. :snigger: ) If nothing, possible omake material.

I'm also looking forward to the interaction between everyone. I'm also looking forward to the jelousy that is sure to erupt. Rin, Sakura and Fuji-nee like Shirou and Gilga-ko will be taking all his attention from them. :p At first, I sorta felt sorry for Shirou, then I realized that this is the "world's" way of balancing out his karma. Shirou gets no pity. :evil: ~insert ebil chuckle here~

~The Ecchi Sessha
 

Moshulel

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#21
of course, they actually wouldn't be far off on the perverted bit as Gilga-ko probably would ravish Shirou when they got home. She does need her mana after all. asd.gif )
You just brought something to attention:

1) Gill-ko isn't as "reserved" as Saber is.

2) She wouldn't allow to be weeker. She needs that extra mana. :p

>>> Poor Shirou. :snigger:
 

EagleCeres

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#22
TheEcchiSessha said:
I'm also looking forward to the interaction between everyone. I'm also looking forward to the jelousy that is sure to erupt. Rin, Sakura and Fuji-nee like Shirou and Gilga-ko will be taking all his attention from them.á :p At first, I sorta felt sorry for Shirou, then I realized that this is the "world's" way of balancing out his karma.á Shirou gets no pity. :evil: ~insert ebil chuckle here~
I'm starting to feel sorry for Sakura... especially after picturing the following

Shirou arrives at school, followed by Gil-ko. Sakura notices and fumes cutely... out of curiosity accompanies him home, so does Gil-ko; later that night she goes home. Following morning she arrives early at Shirou's to cook breakfast when she finally sees him, then he appears ragged, out of breath and Gil-ko's grinning like a chesire cat...

why do I get the feeling Sakura might go and take Rider back just to (try to) protect Shiro's purity (for herself!) :snigger:
 

Moshulel

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#23
why do I get the feeling Sakura might go and take Rider back just to (try to) protect Shiro's purity (for herself!) asd.gif
Oh boy... add Rin to the mix... and you have Rin, Sakura, Saber and Rider on one side and Gill-ko on the other, off course Shirou will want to avoid conflict... can anyone guess the result? :p
 

EagleCeres

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#24
Moshulel said:
why do I get the feeling Sakura might go and take Rider back just to (try to) protect Shiro's purity (for herself!) asd.gif
Oh boy... add Rin to the mix... and you have Rin, Sakura, Saber and Rider on one side and Gill-ko on the other, off course Shirou will want to avoid conflict... can anyone guess the result? :p
off the top of my head i'd say HLA (Hot Lesbian Action!!!)...
but no, not that soon... just catfights and Shirou beind the selfless soul he is, gets the brunt of the damage :lol:
 
#25
EagleCeres said:
Moshulel said:
why do I get the feeling Sakura might go and take Rider back just to (try to) protect Shiro's purity (for herself!) asd.gif
Oh boy... add Rin to the mix... and you have Rin, Sakura, Saber and Rider on one side and Gill-ko on the other, off course Shirou will want to avoid conflict... can anyone guess the result? :p
off the top of my head i'd say HLA (Hot Lesbian Action!!!)...
but no, not that soon... just catfights and Shirou beind the selfless soul he is, gets the brunt of the damage :lol:
I wonder what Caster's thoughts on the situation are gonna be while she watching all this play out? Also, another odd thought that came to mind, Is Caster into voyeurism? She is always watching everything from that "crystal ball" thing of hers.
 
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