http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8743293/1/Another-blade-in-a-second
Yes, it's another one of 'someone appears at the hinata' story and the twist is easily seen, but should that stop me? I don't believe it should, as long as I have fun writing the fic, and the readers enjoy what they read.
After I write the next chapter, I'm going to put the fic on Hiatus while I brainstorm where to go next with the fic. I figure about 2-3 months. I'll need the extra time to also write a few chapters ahead.
Does anyone want to help me brainstorm?
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Alright.... Gonna start a bit of an outline for each chapter or so. It's still in the beginning phases, so expect changes every so often.
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 15
Chapter 16
Chapter 17
Chapter 18-20
Yes, it's another one of 'someone appears at the hinata' story and the twist is easily seen, but should that stop me? I don't believe it should, as long as I have fun writing the fic, and the readers enjoy what they read.
After I write the next chapter, I'm going to put the fic on Hiatus while I brainstorm where to go next with the fic. I figure about 2-3 months. I'll need the extra time to also write a few chapters ahead.
Does anyone want to help me brainstorm?
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Alright.... Gonna start a bit of an outline for each chapter or so. It's still in the beginning phases, so expect changes every so often.
Chapter 11
Gonna have a part where Tsuruko points out that Tomoko just destroyed a necessary fail for Motoko.
Tsuruko and Tomoko enter and drag Motoko away, intending on talking with her.
Tsuruko is deeply disapointed with Motoko's actions and deals out a guilt trip. Tomoko is given permission to guide Motoko Through one of two ways
a: Tomoko suggests it instead of being brought back to the Shinmei-ryu
b: Motoko pleads quite a bit. Tsuruko and Tomoko pretend to be swayed a little bit, bot Tsuruko demands that Tomoko stay and make sure that Motoko is on the right path.
They got back to dinner. Motoko is relieved when she isn't going to be sent back. The others inquire about what happened, but None of the Aoyamas speak much of what happened, except that Motoko isn't going back to the shinmei-ryu and will be guided by Tomoko for awhile.
On an urging/teasing of Kitsune, Motoko sneaks around and hears a bit of Tsuruko's and Tomoko's plan. Motoko gets confused and decides to go check with Su if she wants to go see a movie the next day.
Kitsune also sneaks into Su's room, intending on 'borrowing' the invisibilty suits once again. Both Kitsune and Motoko watch what Su is watching and it is the video of Tsuruko's and Tomoko's meeting.
Tsuruko and Tomoko enter and drag Motoko away, intending on talking with her.
Tsuruko is deeply disapointed with Motoko's actions and deals out a guilt trip. Tomoko is given permission to guide Motoko Through one of two ways
a: Tomoko suggests it instead of being brought back to the Shinmei-ryu
b: Motoko pleads quite a bit. Tsuruko and Tomoko pretend to be swayed a little bit, bot Tsuruko demands that Tomoko stay and make sure that Motoko is on the right path.
They got back to dinner. Motoko is relieved when she isn't going to be sent back. The others inquire about what happened, but None of the Aoyamas speak much of what happened, except that Motoko isn't going back to the shinmei-ryu and will be guided by Tomoko for awhile.
On an urging/teasing of Kitsune, Motoko sneaks around and hears a bit of Tsuruko's and Tomoko's plan. Motoko gets confused and decides to go check with Su if she wants to go see a movie the next day.
Kitsune also sneaks into Su's room, intending on 'borrowing' the invisibilty suits once again. Both Kitsune and Motoko watch what Su is watching and it is the video of Tsuruko's and Tomoko's meeting.
Chapter 12
intended to be a breather chapter.
Kitsune stated that Tomoko is a some kinda criminal. Su brings up the evidence to prove that Tomoko is telling the truth.
Motoko is stunned for a while, but makes plans to either interrogate her future self or to try to merely have a discussion with Su if the evidence can be faked.
Kitsune then leaves for her own room, but debates about telling Naru or not. She also might debate about going after Keitaro herself,either to save Naru and Keitaro from the bad future or to try to get Naru to admit her feelings to Keitaro, even if it winds up destroying Naru's friendship with Kitsune.
Might have a bit of a stinger where Naru had decided to secretly follow Kitsune or Motoko, but also had learned of Tomoko's origins
Kitsune stated that Tomoko is a some kinda criminal. Su brings up the evidence to prove that Tomoko is telling the truth.
Motoko is stunned for a while, but makes plans to either interrogate her future self or to try to merely have a discussion with Su if the evidence can be faked.
Kitsune then leaves for her own room, but debates about telling Naru or not. She also might debate about going after Keitaro herself,either to save Naru and Keitaro from the bad future or to try to get Naru to admit her feelings to Keitaro, even if it winds up destroying Naru's friendship with Kitsune.
Might have a bit of a stinger where Naru had decided to secretly follow Kitsune or Motoko, but also had learned of Tomoko's origins
Chapter 13
Unplanned. Perhaps have Naru tell Mutsumi of Tomoko's secret
Chapter 14
unplanned. Perhaps have Mutsumi confront Tomoko.
Chapter 15
Unplanned. Perhaps have Tsuruko leave the Hinata in this chapter.
Chapter 16
Unplanned. Perhaps do a bit of a flashback chapter of F!Motoko coming in to discover Keitaro's death. Might also do a bit of a flashback where Kuno of Ranma 1/2 really grates on Motoko's nerves.
Chapter 17
Unplanned. Might do a chapter where Su and Tomoko talk a bit and have Su reveal that she knows Tomoko's secret
Chapter 18-20
unplanned. Perhaps do a fight between Tomoko and Motoko?