Akamatsuverse Art Pamphlet

Lord Raa

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PCHeintz72

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I might grind out more in the coming centuries, but I make no promises.
Centuries? Bummer...

In any case, thought this pretty good.

Was surprised on one item though. When in the timeline this occurred. I thought for sure that it would have been after her initial stay at Hinata, not before even meeting Keitaro.

The main issue with that is how would she have even recognized the rocks, it certainly never seemed that Tsuruko had been there at least while it was a dorm.

Additionally, if she knew that the work was older than 5 years, it could well have predated the Hinata changing from inn to dorm, thus meaning it could have been drawn by *any* person attending the inn.
 

Antimatter

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But even knowing the landscape was the inn narrows it down a ton. Surely there are guests books that would record the name she could ask Haruka or Keitaro about. We know from canon such records exist, at least for the Annex part.

Given the name is fake though, I'm wondering how she eventually stumbled across the identity. ether she finds who is selling it, or she finds some other drawings of Keitaro's.
 

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Antimatter said:
But even knowing the landscape was the inn narrows it down a ton. Surely there are guests books that would record the name she could ask Haruka or Keitaro about. We know from canon such records exist, at least for the Annex part.

Given the name is fake though, I'm wondering how she eventually stumbled across the identity. ether she finds who is selling it, or she finds some other drawings of Keitaro's.
And they would just give that information out to whomever asked?

Not likely.
 

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PCHeintz72

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Hmmm... if Tsuruko is hoping to buy a painting off Keitaro... she is likely to be in for an uphill battle.

On the other hand, I will be quite disappointed in her were she to try her hand at blackmail...
 

EagleCeres

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Glad to see this idea getting some keyboard love Raa.

I like the take on Haruka, she's not the completely cold "pass the buck" aunt from canon, neither is she the somehow caring yet detached fanon version. Her knowing about Orateki and helping Kei deal with his feelings about his sketches and his perceived quality of them.

Tsuruko is refreshing as she isn't forcing a KeixMotoko situation, and seems genuinely interested in why that Orateki sketch fell into that rich guy's hands. The Emperor bit seems more than a little shocking, but that could help light a fire under Kei... if he was lead to see his own art from someone else's perspective.

I'm interested in seeing how the Hina Girls cope with what Tsuruko's "plans" are, something tells me that their prior experiences with her have left them on the defensive, if not with a slight hair trigger about her usual shenanigans.

Moar whenever you can, Sir.
 

Lord Raa

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Given this was Hinata... How many people listened in?

Kitsune is a sure bet being IIRC next door to his room.

Shinobu since she knew Haruka would be coming.

Naru since she was right above.

Suu or Tsuruko.. I'm doubtful anything could occur in a building either is in w/o her knowing.
 

Lord Raa

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Given this was Hinata... How many people listened in?

Kitsune is a sure bet being IIRC next door to his room.

Shinobu since she knew Haruka would be coming.

Naru since she was right above.

Suu or Tsuruko.. I'm doubtful anything could occur in a building either is in w/o her knowing.
No-one - I figured that everyone allowed Keitaro his space since he was feeling unwell.

That said, have another scene:

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After leaving her cousin to rest, Haruka sought out Shinobu to put her mind at ease.

“Is Sempai going to be OK, Haruka-san?”

“He will be, Shinobu-chan. He’s just feeling a little run down, that’s all,” the smoker replied with a smile. She glanced at the newspaper and saw that there was an article on a recent sale of artwork. “Wait, is this today’s newspaper?”

“Yes, Haruka-san. I was reading about that Orateki sketch,” Shinobu said, missing the look of concern on Haruka’s face. “Naru-sempai mentioned it to me earlier.”

“Hmm,” Haruka nodded as she scanned the article for details. “It doesn’t say who unearthed it, just who bought it and how much they paid for it.”

“Yes,” the Lolita chef nodded. “Orateki-sensei is so mysterious, no-one knows anything about him. He could be living next door to Motoko-sempai’s family for all we know.”

“That’s true,” the smoker nodded absently. She looked at the picture of the sketch that had been printed. ‘That’s definitely one of Keitaro’s.’


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PCHeintz72

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No-one - I figured that everyone allowed Keitaro his space since he was feeling unwell.
They actually were nice enough to want to give him space and privacy?

Woah... Keitaro must have fallen through Narus ceiling one too many times and ended up in some crazy mixed up world....
 

EagleCeres

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PCHeintz72 said:
No-one - I figured that everyone allowed Keitaro his space since he was feeling unwell.
They actually were nice enough to want to give him space and privacy?

Woah... Keitaro must have fallen through Narus ceiling one too many times and ended up in some crazy mixed up world....
As Raa commented... the girls rarely listen in on Kei, unless the have something to be suspicious of him.

If anything, only Shinobu is and should be concerned at this point, and that's her Modus Operandi... caring for her Sempai
Naru wouldn't bother with him unless its for studying (pre Toudai), she rarely notices him being derpressed.
Kitsune, for all her plots and shenanigans, tends to keep her nose out of other people's business... unless there's lulz/money involved.
Motoko wouldn't bother him unless it's a situation where she needs a handyman/manager.
Kaolla... she'd probably be the only one to actively pester him, but she'd be knocking on his door to get his attention.
 

Antimatter

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I dunno, I think the girls are a bit more observant about him then most would give credit for.

Though, some may be too busy with their own stuff, such as their jobs/studies/etc, to notice this quickly. Wouldn't take very long though.
 

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Poor Keitaro... no good can come of them thinking that...

Even if it is better that them knowing the truth.
 

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Prince Charon

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Haruka has to know that she's going to misinterpret that, right?

Then again, it's no surprise of she feels the urge to troll them.
 

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Heh... Urashima... how dare you abscond with my sister.
 

shiki

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Ha, misunderstandings must happen when they go see him. Mayhaps some out of context moaning and "dirty" talk when they get to his door?
 

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shiki

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So now they are all going to think that he is dying. Great.
 

Prince Charon

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Lord Raa said:
Motoko took a deep breath. “I... I think Keitaro might... that he might be ill. Like organ failure ill.”
Hmm. Well, it's a reasonable supposition. After all, his organs are inside him when he gets impacted by fists and feet and wood and rocks and advanced Molmolese technology and...

I wonder how long it'll be before they jump to that conclusion. It's even kinda-sorta correct, in that they're responsible to varying degrees for a lot of the stress he's under. Just probably not the most recent straw.
 

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Prince Charon said:
Lord Raa said:
Motoko took a deep breath. “I... I think Keitaro might... that he might be ill. Like organ failure ill.”
Hmm. Well, it's a reasonable supposition. After all, his organs are inside him when he gets impacted by fists and feet and wood and rocks and advanced Molmolese technology and...

I wonder how long it'll be before they jump to that conclusion. It's even kinda-sorta correct, in that they're responsible to varying degrees for a lot of the stress he's under. Just probably not the most recent straw.
He should have had organ failure the first day, considering ho much force it would take to propel a standing still object such as a human through walls and out of the property, to them go into free fall and than an instant stop upon impacting cement and the like...
 

Prince Charon

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PCHeintz72 said:
Prince Charon said:
Lord Raa said:
Motoko took a deep breath. “I... I think Keitaro might... that he might be ill. Like organ failure ill.”
Hmm. Well, it's a reasonable supposition. After all, his organs are inside him when he gets impacted by fists and feet and wood and rocks and advanced Molmolese technology and...

I wonder how long it'll be before they jump to that conclusion. It's even kinda-sorta correct, in that they're responsible to varying degrees for a lot of the stress he's under. Just probably not the most recent straw.
He should have had organ failure the first day, considering ho much force it would take to propel a standing still object such as a human through walls and out of the property, to them go into free fall and than an instant stop upon impacting cement and the like...
Well, yes, but they clearly didn't think of that, back then. Now, they're being hit with the idea that he's not totally invulnerable, perhaps they'll consider it.
 
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