Comartemis said:
Your analysis depends on most humans being such immensely evil bastards that only society and fear of punishment holds us back from raping and killing each other all the time. Call me crazy, but I think your analysis is completely full of shit. Also, this scenario takes place in a Sailor Moon fic that conforms to the original flavor, which means the universe is tilted in the direction of the idealists, the pessimists are wrong by default, and Love Conquers All is practically one of the laws of physics.
And quite apart from questions of human capacity for good and evil, we're social creatures, even if the government up and vanished we'd still band together into communities for mutual protection, it wouldn't instantly devolve into every man for himself.
... Go look up 'Blood Diamonds' sometime.
Humanity has capacity for terrible evil, directly equal to it's capacity for good. If it tilts either way here, we're boned.
Even with Love Conquers All acting as a fundamental law of physics in this world, evil still won't go away. And even if you're going with a much lighter aim here, you have BRAINWASHING on a large scale happening. That's gonna throw your mood abit.
And I still have yet to hear a reason to root for your Sailor Squad. They're composed of people from both factions, but I haven't heard whether their goal is equally deserving of my disapproval. I hope you have a good Third Option planned.
But, before I go away, just to drag this point out. Humanity is a smart bunch. Since you're setting this in modern day, we're going to notice what's going on inside of three months, unless multiple governments coordinate on a deep and wide level to cover this up. At which point, it's a borderline open secret anyway.
This is the part where you shoot magical BS about memory erasure at me. Lot's of people passing out, camera phones, regular security cameras, mass loss of memory, and property damage aren't covered there. Somebody's gonna notice.
... Which, now that I think of it, could actually make a pretty epic fic. The investigation of the mysteries and urban legends surrounding Tokyo. Searching for truth, one only finds more questions. Does the Rabbit Hole ever end?