Bleach Bleach/AMG AU Fic Blessings In Disguise Chapter 4

blackkyuubi

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#26
The Eromancer said:
Well just read the four chapter we got on site here and of course I'm gonna have to give it :yay: two thumbs up. My inner self agrees :mmm:

I'm most interested in the differences between Shinigami and Gods, they are both have the word "god" attached to them but they also play two very different but essential roles in the world.

Could we eventually be seeing the birth if a "living" Shinigami? Perhaps Ichigo's soul will never have to leave his body!

... Hichigo as his angle :ph43r:
:blink: ....... now there is a thought.
 

Draculthemad

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#27
I would like to second the idea of Chad being descended from Hild.

So much awesome potential.
 

Andy2kk

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#28
That Shi-Ichi thing is gay, why is Ichigo letting her call him that. He should kick
her ass or something. Okay he probably wouldn't but I sure want to everytime she calls him that.

Also I thought Ichigo met Chad when he was yonger? I get this Ichigo, raised by Bell is more of a sissy compared to the real Ichigo but having to fight with Chad would have kept his fighting skills up, right? Still could be some good stuff coming up, cause Chad gets into it with some Yazuka or is it Yakuza wannabes?
Didn't like that you had Ichigo feeling guilty for shouting at Bell, it really is
her fault, her and her 'godly' powers basically taking advantage of Ichigo when he
was in an emotionally unstable state. I know she wouldn't have done that on purpose doesn't change the fact though. Does Bell know about Isshin's past? About what Ichigo might have to go through in the future?

How long is the wish meant to last? Cause if the Divine Force or whatever is not
keeping her there, then she'd have to return to heaven, right? That'd at least keep
her from getting too involved and Deus Ex Machina'ing the Bleach world and Ichigo too much. Though Urd and Skuld! Lol, can't wait for them to get involved. Poor Ichigo! Poor Isshin, Poor everyone who's not Belldandy! lol. Skuld is going to be on a Jealous Overdrive. Just look at what she did to Keiichi to get more of her
Oni-sama's time.

With Ichigo having Bell and a former captain level death god for a father, will his
spiritual power be higher than canon?

Meh, whatever you do, I'll keep reading so more soon!
 

blackkyuubi

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#29
Andy2kk said:
That Shi-Ichi thing is gay, why is Ichigo letting her call him that. He should kick
her ass or something. Okay he probably wouldn't but I sure want to everytime she calls him that.

Also I thought Ichigo met Chad when he was yonger? I get this Ichigo, raised by Bell is more of a sissy compared to the real Ichigo but having to fight with Chad would have kept his fighting skills up, right? Still could be some good stuff coming up, cause Chad gets into it with some Yazuka or is it Yakuza wannabes?
Didn't like that you had Ichigo feeling guilty for shouting at Bell, it really is
her fault, her and her 'godly' powers basically taking advantage of Ichigo when he
was in an emotionally unstable state. I know she wouldn't have done that on purpose doesn't change the fact though. Does Bell know about Isshin's past? About what Ichigo might have to go through in the future?

How long is the wish meant to last? Cause if the Divine Force or whatever is not
keeping her there, then she'd have to return to heaven, right? That'd at least keep
her from getting too involved and Deus Ex Machina'ing the Bleach world and Ichigo too much. Though Urd and Skuld! Lol, can't wait for them to get involved. Poor Ichigo! Poor Isshin, Poor everyone who's not Belldandy! lol. Skuld is going to be on a Jealous Overdrive. Just look at what she did to Keiichi to get more of her
Oni-sama's time.

With Ichigo having Bell and a former captain level death god for a father, will his
spiritual power be higher than canon?

Meh, whatever you do, I'll keep reading so more soon!
Im not sure weither to A, call you a jerk B, ask if your a idiot, or 3, pity you after that speal.
 

tahu1809

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#30
blackkyuubi said:
Andy2kk said:
That Shi-Ichi thing is gay, why is Ichigo letting her call him that. He should kick
her ass or something. Okay he probably wouldn't but I sure want to everytime she calls him that.

Also I thought Ichigo met Chad when he was yonger? I get this Ichigo, raised by Bell is more of a sissy compared to the real Ichigo but having to fight with Chad would have kept his fighting skills up, right? Still could be some good stuff coming up, cause Chad gets into it with some Yazuka or is it Yakuza wannabes?
Didn't like that you had Ichigo feeling guilty for shouting at Bell, it really is
her fault, her and her 'godly' powers basically taking advantage of Ichigo when he
was in an emotionally unstable state. I know she wouldn't have done that on purpose doesn't change the fact though. Does Bell know about Isshin's past? About what Ichigo might have to go through in the future?

How long is the wish meant to last? Cause if the Divine Force or whatever is not
keeping her there, then she'd have to return to heaven, right? That'd at least keep
her from getting too involved and Deus Ex Machina'ing the Bleach world and Ichigo too much. Though Urd and Skuld! Lol, can't wait for them to get involved. Poor Ichigo! Poor Isshin, Poor everyone who's not Belldandy! lol. Skuld is going to be on a Jealous Overdrive. Just look at what she did to Keiichi to get more of her
Oni-sama's time.

With Ichigo having Bell and a former captain level death god for a father, will his
spiritual power be higher than canon?

Meh, whatever you do, I'll keep reading so more soon!
Im not sure weither to A, call you a jerk B, ask if your a idiot, or 3, pity you after that speal.
D: All of the above. :p
 

The Eromancer

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#31
tahu1809 said:
blackkyuubi said:
Andy2kk said:
That Shi-Ichi thing is gay, why is Ichigo letting her call him that. He should kick
her ass or something. Okay he probably wouldn't but I sure want to everytime she calls him that.

Also I thought Ichigo met Chad when he was yonger? I get this Ichigo, raised by Bell is more of a sissy compared to the real Ichigo but having to fight with Chad would have kept his fighting skills up, right? Still could be some good stuff coming up, cause Chad gets into it with some Yazuka or is it Yakuza wannabes?
Didn't like that you had Ichigo feeling guilty for shouting at Bell, it really is
her fault, her and her 'godly' powers basically taking advantage of Ichigo when he
was in an emotionally unstable state. I know she wouldn't have done that on purpose doesn't change the fact though. Does Bell know about Isshin's past? About what Ichigo might have to go through in the future?

How long is the wish meant to last? Cause if the Divine Force or whatever is not
keeping her there, then she'd have to return to heaven, right? That'd at least keep
her from getting too involved and Deus Ex Machina'ing the Bleach world and Ichigo too much. Though Urd and Skuld! Lol, can't wait for them to get involved. Poor Ichigo! Poor Isshin, Poor everyone who's not Belldandy! lol. Skuld is going to be on a Jealous Overdrive. Just look at what she did to Keiichi to get more of her
Oni-sama's time.

With Ichigo having Bell and a former captain level death god for a father, will his
spiritual power be higher than canon?

Meh, whatever you do, I'll keep reading so more soon!
Im not sure weither to A, call you a jerk B, ask if your a idiot, or 3, pity you after that speal.
D: All of the above. :p
Seconded
 

Andy2kk

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#33
Okay maybe I'm being harsh on Belldandy and Tatsuki.
Retracted.... mostly after a second read from the start.

But I have to say:
A) A-Hole the lot of you.
B.) B-utt lickers the lot of you lol.
C) C-smoking wankers
 

zerohour

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#34
This is a fanfiction site, please try to use correct grammar when insulting others.

Wheeljack: I noticed that you listed the start of the fic as the 6th anniversary of Misaki's death in the prologue. That would mean Ichigo was 15 at that time, and it would be after the start of the series in canon. I think you meant to have it be the 5th anniversary, unless you're fiddling around with the timeline.
 

blackkyuubi

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#35
zerohour said:
This is a fanfiction site, please try to use correct grammar when insulting others.

Wheeljack: I noticed that you listed the start of the fic as the 6th anniversary of Misaki's death in the prologue. That would mean Ichigo was 15 at that time, and it would be after the start of the series in canon. I think you meant to have it be the 5th anniversary, unless you're fiddling around with the timeline.
He's right now that I think about it, Rukia was around for about 2 week I think before the trip to the grave site.
 

Wheeljack

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#36
zerohour said:
This is a fanfiction site, please try to use correct grammar when insulting others.

Wheeljack:á I noticed that you listed the start of the fic as the 6th anniversary of Misaki's death in the prologue.á That would mean Ichigo was 15 at that time, and it would be after the start of the series in canon.á I think you meant to have it be the 5th anniversary, unless you're fiddling around with the timeline.
From what I remember Ichigo's birthday is on July 15th, a month after Masaki's death.

While he would be 15 when Bleach starts he should be 16 as the series goes on (or during the Soul Society Arc, I think).

And I think I did mention in the prologues something like that, that his birthday was coming up (and that he's currently 14).
 

007

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#37
Wheeljack, great work on the new post. How are things coming with chapter 5?
 

Wheeljack

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#38
A little slower than I thought. Currently still in outlining, as I know what I want however I am having difficulty trying to place one certain scene that will lay groundwork for later.
 

CatOnFire

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#39
Is this story posted on ff.net? And If so can I have a link?
 

Wheeljack

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#40
CatOnFire said:
Is this story posted on ff.net? And If so can I have a link?
Not at this moment, no. I'll be posting to ff.net/mediaminer when Book I is finished or close to being finished.

At this moment all previous chapters and both prologues are here in the Bleach Previews section.
 
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