Bleach Bleach Omake Files

Amodelsino

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#29
broken_soul01 said:
Amodelsino said:
Die.


"Headshot!"
Call em as I see em, and all that was to me was a Fanboi drabble. Not like there aren't plenty of them on ff.net already.

Which is actually very disappointing, as I usually like Innortal's stuff, and I like Orihime as a character too.
 

Innortal

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#30
Everyone is entitled to their opinion. Some series I write for people love or hate, if the latter than the won't read it, no matter what their thoughts of the author is.
 

Amodelsino

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#31
Innortal said:
Everyone is entitled to their opinion. Some series I write for people love or hate, if the latter than the won't read it, no matter what their thoughts of the author is.
Don't get me wrong, I'm not implying that you shouldn't write whatever you want to. Just that I didn't like it and to me all of it came across as if you ignored all logic and previously established characterization "just 'cause".

Writing based entirely on whatever pops into your head is the reason their are so many badly written yaoi fics littering the internet (which is fine as long as your not against them).
 

jaredstar

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#32
Amodelsino said:
Innortal said:
Everyone is entitled to their opinion.? Some series I write for people love or hate, if the latter than the won't read it, no matter what their thoughts of the author is.
Don't get me wrong, I'm not implying that you shouldn't write whatever you want to. Just that I didn't like it and to me all of it came across as if you ignored all logic and previously established characterization "just 'cause".

Writing based entirely on whatever pops into your head is the reason their are so many badly written yaoi fics littering the internet (which is fine as long as your not against them).
:headbanger: :headbanger: :headbanger: :headbanger: :headbanger:


dude (at least i assume so) this is crack, one of the defining characteristics of crack is that the normal logic that would be present in a normal fic gets thrown out the window.

it doesn't matter that this would never ever realistically happen in canon or on a normal fic. all that matters is that it is funny (which it is)
 

Amodelsino

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#33
jaredstar said:
Amodelsino said:
Innortal said:
Everyone is entitled to their opinion.á Some series I write for people love or hate, if the latter than the won't read it, no matter what their thoughts of the author is.
Don't get me wrong, I'm not implying that you shouldn't write whatever you want to. Just that I didn't like it and to me all of it came across as if you ignored all logic and previously established characterization "just 'cause".

Writing based entirely on whatever pops into your head is the reason their are so many badly written yaoi fics littering the internet (which is fine as long as your not against them).
:headbanger: :headbanger: :headbanger: :headbanger: :headbanger:


dude (at least i assume so) this is crack, one of the defining characteristics of crack is that the normal logic that would be present in a normal fic gets thrown out the window.

it doesn't matter that this would never ever realistically happen in canon or on a normal fic. all that matters is that it is funny (which it is)
Which is why I acknowledged that it is fine, simply that I don't find it particularly interesting (or funny).

Read the post fully next time.
 

jaredstar

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#34
i did, and from reading all your previous post in this thread i came to the conclusion that the reason you didn't find it funny (or interesting) was because it was so unrealistic hence my previous post
 

Amodelsino

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#35
jaredstar said:
i did, and from reading all your previous post in this thread? i came to the conclusion that the reason you didn't find it funny (or interesting) was because it was so unrealistic? hence my previous post
And did I say it wasn't crack? Or that it was inherently bad? No. Someone somehow found it horrible that I didn't like it, so I stated why I didn't.

/Pointless conversation.
 

Darkforce222

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#36
Amodelsino said:
jaredstar said:
i did, and from reading all your previous post in this threadá i came to the conclusion that the reason you didn't find it funny (or interesting) was because it was so unrealisticá hence my previous post
And did I say it wasn't crack? Or that it was inherently bad? No. Someone somehow found it horrible that I didn't like it, so I stated why I didn't.

/Pointless conversation.
I'm fairly positive you were just being a jerkface by responding with "Boring" and nothing else. But I digress.

This is comedy gold.
 

Epsilon

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#37
Well, my only major nitpick is the lack of BOOM!! before the 'Headshot!' quote.

That and Orihime not addressing Ichigo as 'Kurosaki-kun'.
 

Takerial

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#38
Eh. Not my brand of humor. I can see where it is but I do believe that your other writings have more merit Innortal. I can say it was well written as I have come to expect from you, just I think you went in a direct that you seem uncomfortable writing. Or it could just be me.

As for you Amod. Yes you did declare it wasn't crack by suggesting that Innortal shouldn't be ignoring all logic and personalities splayed out just cause he wants to. I'm sorry but that's the very definition of crack. So stating that means you denied it being crack.

Add to that the fact your initial response was one word, a very condescending word might I add, constitutes your lack of constructive critism.

If you wish to prove me wrong, answer me this. In what way have what you said given Innortal any insight into what he could do better.

My word, if you wish to make an argument at least learn the proper way to justify yourself. If you are arguing a point try not to have posted contridicting evidence only two posts before. I don't care if you argue against it being crack, which is entirely possible if you wish to, but you can't argue both sides of the issue, it just doesn't work.
 

Prince Charon

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#39
:yay: Nice. Since its already a harem-fic, any chance of a lemon version?
 

Innortal

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#40
Can't do lemons. I may rework the chapter to end at Soul Society RR Arc, and add a scene with Chad trying to explain to Ichigo what Orihime was like during training, the rest being outlandish omake.
 
#41
Innortal said:
Can't do lemons. I may rework the chapter to end at Soul Society RR Arc, and add a scene with Chad trying to explain to Ichigo what Orihime was like during training, the rest being outlandish omake.
However you do it, I'm sure it'll be grand. Always looking forward to more. ^_^
 

byakuryuu

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#43
"Shinigami Cup!" came Kon, flying across the screen

"Golden." Aizen's voice finished.

-Cue the studio area-

"Ah, good evening, viewers. In the absence of my loyal subordinate Gin, I shall be host to today's segment." Aizen bowed respectfully to the audience, "Today we shall discuss about Harribel's Resurrecion, Tiburon." he pointed to the screen.

Harribel versus Hitsugaya all over again.

"Tiburon fires high pressure water blasts at its foe, ultimately crushing them. Halibel is able to shape the water into blades as well," he presses a remote on the button, "As effective as any jagged piece of metal, and throws them at will, slicing her opponents into tiny little pieces."

Harribel sighed, flicking a ponytail over her shoulder.

"My Tiburon is the most powerful water-based Zanpakutou. All the water in the atmosphere is my weapon." she looked to the viewers, "With all the water on Earth, I am essentially invincible."

"Arrogant bitch," came Hitsugaya's bored voice. Harribel twitched.

"...Little Shirou, ka?" Harribel shot back at the newcomer. "Get over your loss so quickly?"

"I didn't lose, witch!" Shirou pointed out. Indeed. He didn't lose. The video showed so.

"Ara... it seems he's right." Aizen smiled good-naturedly as the video quite beautifully displayed Harribel being encased in a pillar of ice. "Toushirou won."

"See?"

"However... I do see something I would like to see again."

Aizen rewinded to the moments prior to Harribel's release... when she opened her jacket.

And saw the distinct red blush on Hitsugaya's face on the video... and a little drop of blood from his nose.

"So... Toushirou-kun seems to have a crush on one of my Arrancar."

"N - No, you got it wrong!" he protested, flailing his hands.

"It's completely normal, Toushirou. She is a very pretty woman." Aizen patted his shoulder.

"You got it wrong!"

"...So..." Harribel's eyes positively smirked.

"Little pervert."

"That's enough, I'm leaving!" the Captain slammed the door on his way out.

"Oh my... and I was thinking it would be nice to have some grandchildren running around." he turned to the camera, "Till next time!"
 

grant

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#46
Still an interesting idea that would make the show much more strange and interesting, though Harribel seems cooler.
 
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