Bleach Blessings In Disguise - Bleach/AMG AU Fic

Wheeljack

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Y'know, I keep promising myself that I wouldn't let these chapters grow so big, but I figured I had a problem when the outline ended being larger in size than Chapter 3... Uh, yeah...

Well, I guess I can blame it on an appearance by a long awaited character 'n all...

I also want to mention that zerohour was correct in the last thread and my math was fuzzed up. It has been 5 years since Masaki died at this moment in the story. I will be fixing those soon.

Once again all C&C is welcome, especially when it's constructive. Please, also, by all means point out any mistakes in spelling that I missed as well as grammer if it can be fixed. If you think that a line or two or a paragraph can be phrased better than send it along as well.

Again, many thanks to all of you who are still reading and enjoying.

There will be multiple sections so if you don't see 'To Be Continued' at the end I haven't finished posting it all.

So, without further ado:



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Disclaimer: Bleach is created by Tite Kubo and is distributed by Weekly Shonen Jump, Shueisha,Studio Pierrot, TV Tokyo, Adult Swim, & Viz Media. Ah My Goddess is created by Kousuke Fujishima and is distributed by Kodansha, Afternoon Magazine, AIC, Tokyo Broadcast Station (TBS), Animeigo, Geneon, Dark Horse Manga, Media Blasters, ADV Films & FUNimation Entertainment. No infringement is intended.

Blessings In Disguise

Book I: Be Careful What You Wish For

Chapter 5

-...But You Can't Choose Your Family-

A Few Days Ago...

June in Karakura Town was unfortunately for many people a small preview of the coming summer. The sun overhead, just bearable at the moment seemed to be teasing the inhabitants, letting them know that it could go higher, and within a few weeks would.

This day however the cause of much sweat and panting wasn't due to the warm sun overhead, for this day much to it's dismay it had been eclipsed by something that caused the heat within oneself to rise on it's own.

Or at least, to a normal human male the heat would rise upon catching a glimpse upon this object.

To a female the heat would rise in reaction to the male's reaction, or realizing that comparison was moot.

Paying attention to none of the people around her Urd continued to strut herself to her destination. Smiling to herself as she turned at the second to last corner she could feel some of the anxiety leave as she found herself closer to her goal.

Swiftly snapping her head to the side, her hair flew from one end to the other, giving off an effect that most supermodels would hard pressed to emulate.

Unfortunately an added affect was that cars began to swerve in an out, their drivers twisting their heads to get another glimpse of perfection. For the traffic officers on duty, this only caused their heat to rise at the chaos around them.

With one final turn, Urd closed her eyes and remembered the data Yggsdrasil was able to give her on the subject. In just a few moments the boy would be reduced to putty and the first major clue to her sister's disappearance would be at hand.

Opening her eyes she found herself looking forward to catching the first glimpse of the Kurosaki's family...

...ramen shop?

"Eh?", Urd squeaked out. Quickly concentrating she recalled the data she studied before leaving and looked once more at the shop in front of her.

The address she had matched the one in front of her.

'What..what the hell?'

She stood there a few moments attempting to make sense of it all.

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Present

Breakfast at the Kurosaki's was normally an active affair; usually with the girls talking amongst themselves or including their mother or more recently the father and son verbal sparring. With the recent blessing of a new arrival life at the table was sure to be more bustling.

Yet that was not quite the case this morning.

"DAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!"

Of those gathered at the table two were currently rolling over the floor clutching their stomachs as if they'd burst if they let go.

Still at the table Belldandy took a sip of her tea while Yuzu watched her fraternal twin and father continue to bust their guts out. Keiichi was next to his mother in a baby carrier on an extra table seat, happily kicking around and waving his hands. Orihime sat next to Yuzu, quiet with her hands on her lap and head lowered, attempting to hide a blush that matched her copper colored hair.

Ichigo sat opposite Orihime, a hand on his bowl of rice with chopsticks in the other, attempting and failing miserably to ignore the two while hiding his reddening face. He was just about to break the chopsticks in his hand when suddenly both Karin and Isshin stopped and sat up.

Surprised at the abrupt halt all eyes were on the two as they rose. Seeing both Ichigo and Orihime both of their cheeks bubbled, attempting and then failing to hold another round in, Isshin then slapping his lap.

While the chopsticks in Ichigo's hand had begun to crack at the antics, one would be hard pressed to tell if his face was red from either embarrassment or anger.

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Last Night

Karin exhaled as she slid into the bath, joining her sister Yuzu. Stretching she slid further down until the water reached her neck.

"Ah, man, what a day", she muttered, feeling the heat of the water work it's magic on her.

"Yes", Yuzu agreed with her, sitting opposite of her. Sighing, she looked upward. "Oniisama hasn't come home yet".

"He should be home soon", Karin supplied, though not quite getting it out as cheeful as she hoped.

Before Yuzu could reply the door slid open and Orihime walked in, one hand carrying a towel which covered her front while also holding her bathing supplies and change of clothes. Closing the door with her free hand, she swiftly stripped down and made her way to the wash section. Sitting down she placed her clothes and bucket down nearby and grabbed the shower hose and began to rinse herself off.

"Orihime-neesama, has oniisama...", she trailed off and lowered her head as Orihime paused and shook her head at her.

"No, but I don't think he'll be gone much longer. It's not like he did anything bad."

"That's right", Karin piped up, sitting straight. Her eyes then squinched up. "But what I don't get is why he ran off. Stupid old man, I bet he managed to skunk things up somehow. He knows Ichi-ni wouldn't do anything like that without reason."

The other two girls nodded at that.

Orihime began scrubbing herself up with soap as Yuzu spoke once more. "Hearing from Asano-san and Kojima-san about oniisama earlier makes me feel better but I wish he'd come home..."

"Yuzu", Karin growled out. "He's not some stray puppy, he'll be fine".

"She's right, Yuzu-chan", Orihime said, turning to her. Scrubbing her head she continued. "If anything does happen Ichigo-kun will take his fighting pose and scare any bad guys off!", she then demonstrated by holding her arms out and bringing them in quickly, giving off a soft though cute kiai. Her out held fists were clenched and her elbows were at her waist.

Her little maneuver wasn't quite so effective while sitting down, though it did sufficently make her chest bounce as a few sizeable soap suds went airborne.

Both Karin and Yuzu's heads followed the suds as they went up and came down nearby, sounds of admiration coming through their mouths at that demonstration. "Wow", they both muttered before looking down and patted themselves, wondering when they could do that.

It was then that Orihime fully rinsed off and made her way toward the furo, stepping in and sitting back. "Aaah", she moaned happily as she set herself in.

They continued to make small talk about the day's events until the girls finally got out and began to dry themselves off. Bidding her a good night, both left her alone as they first shut the bath door and then the entrance door after.

It was then that Orihime brought her legs in, her arms wrapping around them and rested her head on top of her knees, which were the only parts above water. Some of her wet bangs broke free from what little hold the water had, allowing them to fall over eyes.

"Ichigo-kun", she whispered softly. She found herself wishing that the girls were back, as alone her self assured words from earlier seemed to lose their power in the silence that immediately followed in their departure. It chilled her, despite the heat of the water that enveloped her.

The words she overheard earlier came back to her, of when they all heard him confront his father. In the two years she had known them, nothing like that had ever happened. While Ichigo would at times grow frustrated and argue with his father, there was always a sense that much of their verbal sparring was for show.

What little she overheard gave none of that impression, and it bothered her greatly. Ichigo just hadn't been quite himself lately, at times staring off into space, or just gazing as if seeing something or noticing something for the first time.

Like when he referred to her...

It really seemed to start the night when they went to see Keiichi for the first time after he was born and Ichigo had collapsed after entering the room. She had froze, utterly frightened by what had happened but couldn't move, even after Tatsuki rushed to him.

He had looked so lost when he had come to, and that she couldn't do anyting after...

Later she had talked to Tatsuki about it, but she didn't quite seem to think much was wrong, other than Ichigo-kun had had a bad spell. Even after pointing out how strange he had acted at school Tatsuki still seemed to pay it no mind. Though she did end up getting a strange look from her when she hypothesized if he had been abducted by aliens and replaced with double.

Or maybe he was upset at her for not helping him when he collapsed at the hospitable? It was then that she had hit upon her idea to help him; that she'd stay over the night to help them with the baby, chores, cooking - to help give back for everything they did for her. Maybe then he would be ok again.

When she asked Isshin he had been quick to agree and give his approval, though he did seem to want her to stay more with Ichigo-kun than the kitchen...

But now with all this happening it all seemed for naught, as the day was gone and Ichigo was still not home. While she would be leaving the day after tomorrow, it already seemed like she wouldn't be able to get anything accomplished.

Sighing she rose from the bath and let the water run off her as she squeezed her hair, the droplets making rapid dripping sounds as they fell into the water below. Stepping out she made her way toward her towel and paused as she reconsidered her thoughts.

Ichigo *would* be back soon, and she *would* find a way to make him feel better! There still was tomorrow and some of the day after! Determination rose within her and she again struck a pose that would have made Karin proud, standing tall and pointing forward, legs slightly spread with the other arm on her hip.

'Maybe making a late dessert would help to start things off', she thought positively. Humming, she resumed drying herself off.

Soon satisfied that she was dry, she made her way toward her clothes and picked up her panties, holding them out to look at and stretching them a bit she then bent over to slip her legs in.

Once secure, she grabbed her pajama bottoms and held them out as well, again seemingly to look at them as she then lowered and slid a foot through.

It was at that moment the door slid open and another figure entered, facing the door as it was closed before turning around.

Wiggling her hips as she let loose the elastic on her pajama bottoms she felt a small gust of cool air and stood still, attempting for a few seconds to think what may have caused it. Realizing that it was because the door was opened she turned around, thinking maybe it was Belldandy.

And found Ichigo standing there.

Her eyes widened as she smiled widely at the realization.

He's back!

For Ichigo Kurosaki, he went rigid in shock at the sight in front of him. After a long day of contemplation, understanding, a brief brawl and reconciliation it was somewhat forgivable that he would allow some things to slip his mind.

This was not the kind of reminder he would have expected.

He had stepped into the bath to figuratively and literally wash off the events of the day when he found himself first staring at a waving rump several feet in front of him before the owner of said rump stood up and turned. That last bit of information of who it belonged to made it's way to his currently short circuiting brain as he saw her state of dress, or rather undress as she turned to face him.

His mouth went dry and his mind froze up as he caught sight of two large, slightly wet, round-

"Ichigo-kun! You're back!", she shouted before she then bounded toward him, stopping just a foot away.

The lack of moisture in his mouth made gulping difficult as he saw every movement as Orihime quickly made her way to him.

"You're back, you're finally back!", Orihime cried, her face now alight with enough power to run a city block. "We were so worried! Your mom had gone out and then when she came back you weren't there and were gone so long!"

Ichigo just nodded his head, eyes still cast downward.

Orihime's face then became stern as she bent forward a brought a finger up and waved it at him. "Yuzu was just so worried about you! You should have called especially when we had company stop by!"

"Wha- huh?", Ichigo replied, his brain attempting to reboot.

"It was just so sudden!" Orihime had continued. "We were all in the living room, wondering where you went and then a knock came from the door and Karin went -WHHOOOOOOOOMMM-", Orihime said she had described by bringing her arms from one side and swinging them to the other side quickly, showing how fast Karin moved, "all the way to the front door!"

Ichigo promptly dropped his bathing contents, all feeling gone from his hands.

Orihime continued not noticing, "But it wasn't you, it was...", she stopped as she then stood straight, looked up and brought a hand to her chin to tap her finger against it, now in thought. "It was...Asano-san and Koji- Yes! Asano-san and Kojima-san! They had visited when we went to see Keiichi and - and?"

Orihime paused as Ichigo suddenly lowered himself to the floor, grabbing his fallen contents and holding them with one hand in front of his pants as he then stood up. With his free arm he grabbed the shouji door and slid it open, stepping backwards and closing it when he made it though. Looking at the shadow he gave off she then saw him grip the waistline of his pants and quickly jerk it side to side as his shadow faded, hearing the entrance door slide open then shut.

Orihime blinked in surprise at Ichigo's sudden departure before she realized that her upper body suddenly felt cooler at the doors opening and closing. Looking down her eyes widened as her face then turned a bright shade of red.

Giving a soft yelp she brought her arms up to her chest, her hands discovering that her heart was now attempting to burst forth.

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Present

"BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!"

"Oh my god, Ichi-ni!", Karin managed to get out. "You just missed one set of twins but ended up meeting another!"

That set off another round between the two, with Karin now starting to wheeze. Isshin was still at the counter trying to stand up, one arm holding himself up while the other was trying to wipe away tears.

Ichigo sat rooted to his spot at the table, teeth clenched, staring into his bowl of rice as he gripped the remains of his chopsticks. Orihime was still facing downward, her hair managing to hide most of her face as father and daughter seemed to finally start calming down.

Yuzu, who had been watching the two with great interest clasped her hands together and spoke up.

"Does this mean you two are going to get married?", she asked, her eyes sparkling.

Orihime's face shot up as she held her hands up. "Yu-yu-yu-yuzu-chan! I-I-I-we-we....", she continued to stutter, her face now turning a shade darker than her hair as she began to sway back and forth.

Ichigo who had been doing his best effort to mimic a statue turned to look at his sister open mouthed, stunned at her question.

Karin, still wheezing as she plopped herself in her seat, turned to look at her sister, whose face was beaming at the possibilities. She then turned to look at the two in question; Orihime who looked like as if she could have steam coming out of her ears from the short circuit dance she was doing in her chair while her brother continued to stare at Yuzu.

"Heh", Karin managed to get out between wheezes. "I just gotta wonder -wheeze- what Tatsuki-nee's going to say about all this".

It was at that point Belldandy put her cup down. "I would imagine that Tatsuki-chan would want you to take responsibility", she mentioned with a small twinkle in her eye.

Ichigo stunned anew turned to face her. Before he could say anything his father wailed.

"OOOOOOOoooooOOOHHHhhhhhh!", Isshin cried, his hands covering his face. He swayed back and forth from his place at the counter to Belldandy, who moved her arms aside with practiced ease while Isshin in one motion fell to his knees and laid his head on her lap.

"Mother! Our son is now a man and ready to leave the nest! How joyous this is to be alive to be able to witness such an event!" He then held on to his wife tighter and his shoulders shook as if he were crying. Belldandy then began to stroke his head, comforting him.

Ichigo swiftly stood ramrod straight, the chair he was sitting in sliding back a few feet, and pointed at his father. "I AM NOT LEAVING ANYWHERE AND DON'T BE DOING THAT AT THE TABLE OLD MAN!"

From below Ichigo's line of sight at the table Isshin replied, "As you are now a man you must leave the safety of your mother's lap behind!"

Ichigo's eye twitched at the comment. Unfazed at his outburst a few seconds prior, Yuzu stood up herself and gestured towards Orihime before her brother could retort. Yuzu's eyes still sparkled as she spoke, "It's ok, oniisama! You can do that now with Orihime-neesama!"

Ichigo's rising anger was again snuffed as he gaped yet again at his sister. He then turned towards Orihime, still a bit razzled from earlier caught Ichigo's eye and Yuzu's comment registered in her head. She yelped as her hands snapped to her lap and her face lowered.

This movement however managed a semi decent bounce that her seifuku and bra were unable to contain.

-The lack of moisture in his mouth made gulping difficult as he saw every movement as Orihime quickly made her way to him.-

Ichigo brought a hand to his face so fast it left a blur. Quickly turning his head he pinched his nose and tried to snort whatever liquid that managed to make their way to his nostrils.

More laughter reached his ears as he turned to find his grinning father finally take a seat. Removing his hand from his face he stood straight as he quickly turned to address Orihime. "We better get going now or we'll be late", he said, more so just to get out of the house before his dad and sisters could embarrass him any further.

"Thanks for the meal", he said as he brought his hands together and turned. Before he could make his way to his room Isshin called to him.

"Ichigo! Remember what we spoke about last night! You have a new temp to help get acclimated starting today!"

Orihime, who was just now getting over her embarrassment, blinked at Isshin's announcement.

"Yes, dad, I remember", he grumbled.

"And don't think that now that you are a man that you can take advantage of her in her current emotional state!", Isshin rightously roared, pointing at Ichigo.

"What?"

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Yesterday Afternoon, Kurosaki Clinic, Isshin's Office-

"It's ok, it's ok", Isshin comforted, a waterfall of tears running down his own cheeks. He pulled some tissues that were off to the side and handed them to the emotionally distressed interviewee, who was seated across his desk.

"Thank you", a gorgeous, but teary-eyed woman said as she took them and dabbed her eyes.

"I understand completely", Isshin related, taking a tissue and blowing into it loudly. "It must be so hard".

"It is", replied the woman. "I've looked everywhere and I can't seem to find her! And without any money I won't be able to keep searching for her!", she lamented, clasping her hands together and bringing them to her chest.

"It's alright", a completely sympathetic Isshin comforted. "You can stay here and work as long as you need to until you find her." He sniffed again and nodded, wiping tears away with his arm.

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Present

Ichigo just stared at his father before sucking in a breath. "Sure thing, dad", he drowled as he turned to rush into his room.

At the table Orihime stood up, "Thank you for the meal", she said, also bringing her hands together briefly. She picked up her school carrycase and made her way towards the living room to wait for Ichigo.

Before she could leave the kitchen Belldandy had made her way towards her. Just before she could speak Ichigo managed to rush by. Seeing them he slowed to a stop and stood next to Orihime as his mother brought an arm to his shoulder.

"You know we were just teasing you, dear", she said to them, both of them blushing. "But next time Ichigo, please knock before entering, especially when we have guests".

Ichigo nodded, before stiffly moving by his mother. He then grabbed Orihime's hand, pulling her along. "We'll see you later!", they said as they made their way past the front door.

"Come home safe!", Belldandy shouted, making her way out of the kitchen to make sure the front door was shut.

At the table Yuzu giggled. "Did you see! They're at the holding hands stage!"

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Tatsuki yawned as she tossed her carrycase onto her desk. Moving her arms to her legs she held the back of her skirt to them as she took her seat and stretched forward.

'Man, whatta night', she thought and she yawned again. Shi-ichi's problems had her thinking for the rest of her jog all the way to bedtime, wondering how things turned out.

More students began filtering in as Tatsuki rubbed an eye. Orihime had not called, but that wasn't unusual since she was at the Kurosaki's, yet considering what she heard yesterday she'dve thought that she'd be filled in at some point.

And in spite of her words to him she needed some confirmation that things turned out ok. Those thoughts kept her up late, recalling their talk and just old memories coming to fore.

"What the..", she heard one of the male students mutter.

"That bastard", another one quietly grumbled.

Confused, she lifted her head and turned to see what they were looking at and was vaguely surprised to see both Shi-ichi and Orihime here a bit earlier than normal. Well, Shi-ichi was here earlier than normal, but...

'Waittasec', she thought, her mind taking notice of something out of place. Now awake, she realized that both Shi-Ichi and Orihime were holding hands.

She breathed out though her nose and turned away briefly to hide her face before she could get hold of the sudden emptiness that spread within her.

'Seems like Orihime finally made a move', she concluded as she then recomposed herself.

The two finally made their way in and Ichigo let Orihime's hand go. Getting to his desk Ichigo sat down but Orihime hadn't made a move yet, standing where Ichigo let her go. A faint blush graced her cheeks as she looked at her hand.

"I see things are looking up", Tatsuki muttered as Orihime finally came close by on her way to her desk. 'At least now I can get some answers, but from the look of things Shi-ichi must be doing better', she thought, eyeing him, 'he has none of that aura he did last night'.

Orihime hummed, not really hearing her.

Tatsuki sighed. "I said things are looking up for Shi-ichi", she repeated, finally getting her attention. "I ended up running into him yesterday. I take it everything's better now?"

Orihime turned to look at Ichigo. "He came home very late last night, Tatsuki, and it was really bad for awhile, but I'm glad everything's ok now". She then made a contemplating gesture and continued. "He seemed to be better after he walked in on my bath-", Orihime then stopped, realizing what she said.

Everyone in class stopped, hearing what she said.

Ichigo's heart stopped, unbelieving what she said.

"Wha-wh-wha-wha-wh-what?", Tatsuki stuttered out, trying to confirm what she said.

Orihime just stood their quietly, her hand to her mouth, not turning around but feeling all eyes on her.

"Shishishi-shi-shi-shi-ICHI"!, Tatsuki shrieked, hopping out of her seat onto a desk before diving to tackle her shocked target.

Both crashed in the aisle between desks and Tatsuki straddled him, preventing his escape and grabbed his shirt by the collar with both hands, hauling him forward to look him in the eye.

"Explain yourself", she roared. "I told you yesterday to behave, so what the hell happened?!"

"It was an accident", Ichigo finally got out as he got his bearings. He then tried to get out of their position but Tatsuki weighed herself down, pinning him with her hips.

"Accidents like that just don't happen, Shi-ichi", she said, completely focused on Ichigo now. "How exactly did that happen?"

Ichigo was about to answer as his mind decided to replay what was beginning to be it's favorite part, or parts. 'Oh boy', he thought as he could feel his cheeks begin to blush as well as something else begin to come forward. He then grabbed Tatsuki's arms and tried to wiggle free. "It was just an accident" he managed as his hands got hers off him and tried to push her off.

She grappled with him as he wiggled under her. "You're not getting off that easy", she promised him, tightening her legs and grinding her hips to keep her hold on him befo- 'wait, what was that?', she suddenly thought as she felt something new brush under her. She found herself blushing as she tried to figure out-

"If you don't move Arisawa, he will get off that easy", a call came out and both stopped.

Both slowly turned their heads at the same time.

"Freaking Kurosaki, it's bad enough he's got the hottest chick in class but now he's rubbing our faces in it and pulling double duty", one male lamented.

Both blinked.

"I didn't know Arisawa-san was so forward", a girl close by said to another.

"I just knew she liked him", another gushed.

Ichigo and Tatsuki looked at each other again and finally noticed the position they were in.

'Tha-that-that feeling was...', Tatsuki realized, her mouth falling open.

'Oh, god, can it get any worse', Ichigo mentally cried.

Tatsuki finally leaped to her feet and backpeddled, running into a desk and tripping over it.

Several others in the class started to laugh and more catcalls were thrown out as the snickering turned up a notch.

Ichigo then noticed that most of the girls were looking at him, or rather, looking at a certain-

Making the connection he attempted to save his dignity by twisting in place and tried to jump to his feet, completely missing that he twisted underneath a desk and slammed his head under it, yelping in pain as he clutched his head and sank to his knees.

More laughter came as he then took a seat on the floor and rubbed his head. As he did the laughter died down and two legs came into view. Looking up and up and up he saw the owner of the desk peering down at him.

Yasutora Sado raised an eyebrow at Ichigo's predicament but remained silent as he waited for Ichigo to move out of the way.

'Great freaking morning', Ichigo thought as he finally managed to stand up and wobble to his desk.
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Lunchtime came not too soon enough for Ichigo. After the incident this morning he had to deal with a constant hum of snickering and whispers throughout the classes. Looking back at Tatsuki didn't help matters, as she pointedly ignored him but at least in her case the ones she growled at stopped joking.

Getting up he grabbed his bento and made his way out and followed another of his classmates that left a moment prior.

"Yo, Chad".

Stopping and turning around, the tall boy looked down at Ichigo.

"Sado", he corrected.

Ichigo caught a glint at the larger boy's upper chest and noticed the amulet/pendent hanging around his neck. 'Dunno why I never noticed before', he thought, reminded of yesterday's talk. "Wanna join me for lunch?", he asked aloud.

"......", Sado stood waiting.

After a moment Ichigo raised an eyebrow. "You really aren't the talkitive type. Yesterday was the most I've ever heard you speak", he shook his head ruefully. Sado still stood there, waiting. 'I guess that means 'ok'. "Let's go".

"Kurosaki-san!", a voice called out.

Turning, Ichigo saw Keigo and Mizuiro make their way towards them.

"Asano, Kojima", Ichigo acknowledged them, nodding his head. "I heard you stopped by yesterday", he said to them as they got closer. "Sorry I wasn't there, I was kinda...", he trailed off, thinking of trying to explain himself.

"That's fine", Keigo mentioned. "I actually wanted to thank you for the other day, and that I gotta say your mom knows her stuff!"

"What", he asked, raising an eyebrow.

"She was spot on when she said I'd be feeling better, and I am!", he mentioned happily.

"Oo..okay", Ichigo finally said. "We're heading to the roof for lunch, if you want you can join us and fill me in".

"Thanks", both boys mentioned, and then turned to Ichigo's companion and looked up.

And up, and up.

Sado nodded at them in greeting.

"This's Chad. Chad, this is Asano and Kojima", Ichigo introduced.

"Sado", 'Chad' corrected again.

"Let's go", Ichigo said and walked ahead, the others following him.

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"I tell ya man, it's a miracle", Keigo said, regaling his story.

"Uh-huh", Ichigo mentioned through a mouthful of rice.

"It really is something", Mizuiro said. "He was really banged up yesterday. Seeing him this morning was quite a shock."

Keigo beamed, his face no longer in a sling and his bruises nearly healed as he brought another piece of food to his mouth. Chewing happily, and loudly, he swallowed before a stream of tears fell.

Ichigo stopped in mid-chew, feeling a bit nauseous at seeing an all too familiar display, even if it was from someone else.

"I couldn't do this yesterday without locking up or feeling like I was being poked!", he cried.

"So how did you end up like that", a voice questioned.

Ichigo swallowed before darting his head left and right, trying to see who asked that question before turning to face Sado who was looking at Keigo. He blinked at that.

After being filled in on the excitement yesterday Sado turned to Ichigo. "Sounds like you had a really busy day, even before helping me out".

"He helped you out too", Keigo asked, astounded. Considering Sado's height and look, the thought that he needed help -any help-, seemed like a revelation. "Was this while you were out", he asked Ichigo.

"Yeah", Ichigo said after a moment of thought. "I had some things to...think over, and I saw him getting jumped." He took another bite of food and chewed slowly, looking thoughtful. Gazing forward but not quite looking at anything he spoke again. "It pisses me off when I see that shit".

Keigo and Mizuiro both stopped to look at him, noting the change of tone in his voice. Before they could say anything another voice rang out.

"So this is where you are."

"Man, you'd think that you were ditching us on purpose".

All the boys turned to see two other boys make their way towards them. Ichigo recognized them from class.

"Yuuya, Hideo", he greeted automatically and blinked. 'Friends', his mind supplied and stared.

"Geez man, where've ya been?", Yuuya, a black haired boy standing a few inches shorter than Ichigo questioned.

"From the looks of it he's got some new pals. Hey, Sado", Hideo greeted.

Ichigo found himself surprised, as he remembered these two from before, in his old life, but it had been only as classmates. Here, he had been friends with them, and it surprised him again at how different some things were now.

"Have a seat", he said and scooted. Making quick introductions all the boys resumed eating.

"Where've you been off to all week, man", Yuuya asked again. "I'd been wanting to catch up with you on some of the games that have come out recently and left you a few messages. Hell, you've been running out of class before I could catch you."

"I've... this week hasn't been the best of weeks, y'know".

"I guess", Hideo supplied. "In any case, congrats again, Ichigo. Sorry I wasn't there to tell you in person, man, but being sick sucks".

"Didn't stop you from having play time", Yuuya grumbled, taking a sip from his drink.

Ichigo was silent, watching the by-play from the two newcomers. Bits and pieces were coming to him as they chatted and he found himself shaking his head. 'Games', he thought. He owned a few systems here and back 'home', but he didn't really play all the much. In fact, Karin was the one who liked to play, and he only really got involved when all 3 of them could play co-op. Looks like he had a bit more time here.

"I'll tell you what's happened", Yuuya supplied. "Ichigo's finally graduated, now that he has a girl and all".

Ichigo stopped in mid drink and started to cough.

"You lucky, bastard", Keigo commented. "It's Orihime, right? She was there when we stopped by yesterday".

"Get out", Hideo exclaimed. "You mean all that was true?"

"You saw this morning. He and Tatsuki too, they were practically having sex in class this morning", Yuuya continued.

"Holy shit", Keigo exclaimed, a outright look of admiration in his eyes.

"IT ISN'T LIKE THAT AT ALL", Ichigo finally shouted back, crushing his juice and splattering it.

"Kurosaki-san", Mizuiro said, wiping himself off, "I can give you pointers if you want".

The others turned towards him, curious.

Keigo grumbled. "I don't know how he does it, but not only does he like older women, but they never brush him off", he said enviously.

"You just got to know what to say", Mizuiro said, smiling. "I know some things that can help smooth things over for both your girls if your having problems".

"I'M TELLING YOU IT AIN'T LIKE THAT!"
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"Whatya mean your not going to come in today", Tatsuki asked, annoyed.

With the school day now over, all three were in the hallway, with both Tatsuki and Orihime on their way to their clubs.

"Exactly what it means, I'm not going to be in, as the old man has me breaking in a new temp as my punishment for yesterday".

"It's so stupid that you're being punished for helping someone out", she complained. "And this is going to go on for how long"?

"For the next several days until she gets it, I guess. I go, help, and come home later either closing or a bit prior to work on schoolwork".

A step behind them Orihime's face fell at hearing those words, knowing now he won't home until late.

Both Ichigo and Tatsuki stopped, noticing that Orihime was no longer keeping pace with them.

Ichigo saw her change her sad face into a happy one and misinterpreted it. "S'ok, Orihime, y'know Tatsuki will walk you back to my home".

Tatsuki just looked at Ichigo and fought an urge to roll her eyes. Though somewhat annoyed at his thickheadedness there seemed to be a small bit of relief that went through her. She crushed it when she caught Orihime's face again as she tried to brush his concerns off.

She was nearly successful.

"Yeah, don't worry about Orihime, Shi-ichi. I'll also cover for you when Noriyuki sensei asks about you later on, too".

Ichigo grimaced. "Thanks Tatsuki".

They then came to a corner and Ichigo continued towards the stairwell. "I'll catch you both later!", he told them, lifting an arm.

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Ichigo found himself whistling in appreciation as he arrived at his destination. While his 'memories' gave him more than an idea of what to expect, just seeing the place filled him with a bit of family pride that he could not quite keep down.

Good thing his dad wasn't here to see it.

He looked the place over. Larger than the 'original' Kurosaki clinic, this one was easily 2-3 times the size of their combo home/business house. Large enough that it commanded use of a staff at times was needed around the clock should they have a patient that needed to be there overnight or until a hospital transfer could be made.

Walking to the glass door he reached out to the door handle which suddenly flew open with a shoe sole rapidly filling his vision. He felt a strong gust of wind wash over him as he managed to duck in time.

Turning in mid-rise from his crouch he found his father slide on the pavement and come to a stop.

"OOOH!", Isshin shouted at his son, pointing at him. "Ichigo, I commend you on your awareness! My training is starting to bear fruit!"

"WHAT THE HELL", Ichigo fired back. "I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU'RE CRAZY ENO-", Ichigo stopped as his father had a hand on his shoulder, suddenly at his side.

"But enough about that", Isshin said, suddenly changing subjects. He turned his son around and nudged him to the door. Opening the door he buried a fist in his boy's back and pushed him through. Grumbling, Ichigo went forward.

Before Ichigo could turn around he noticed that they were not alone in the lobby. Trying to get his composure he faced the other room's occupant.

'Whoa', was the first word to come to mind.

Standing before him a without a doubt one of the most beautiful woman Ichigo had ever laid eyes on. Tanned with platinum blond hair, she was already in uniform, however the uniform seemed a size too small for her, as her skirt rose a bit too high on the thigh and her top was not fully buttoned, allowing some of her cleavage exposed. She held her hands clasped in front of her and held a clipboard in them. Forcing his eyes up, he caught her eyes as she smiled. He gulped softly as he felt his pants tighten.

Grabbing the hem of his school jacket he pulled down before bowing and introducing himself. He then mentally kicked himself as he fought the heat down from his face, and other places.

'What the hell', he thought. Never had he had such a strong reaction like this.

"It's a pleasure to meet you", the woman greeted him, also bowing. "I'm Urd. I hope that you'll take good care of me". She smiled, pleased at his reaction. 'All too easy'.

Ichigo silently nodded his head. After a moment he felt a hard tap at the small of his back and winced as his father walked to the side and entered his line of sight. Before making a retort his father coughed in his hand and faced him.

"Ichigo, I'd like to present to you our new temp. She may be with us for some time so I'm expecting you to show her right way of doing things around here.

"Yes, dad", Ichigo responded, again turning to face Urd, who stood waiting for him.

Isshin then walked forward and motioned for them to follow him. "Ichigo I want you to first show Urd how...", Isshin continued, but Ichigo did not hear. Urd had walked in between them, so she was in the middle behind his father as he continued on with his instructions. As she walked, there was a saunter in her gait that drew his eyes to her rear.

Gulping, he did his best to tear his eyes away and back to his father, who was still talking, not knowing Ichigo had tuned him out.

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Ichigo slid the shouji door to his room open and stepped through. Rubbing his face with hand he used the heel of his foot to shut the door behind him. Making sure it was closed he made his way to his desk and turned on the lamp, brightening the dark room a bit. Settling his things on his desk he turned to sit on his bed and laid back lifting his feet and resting them on his chair next to the desk.

'Oh, man', he thought, a bit of weariness coursing through him. Rubbing his eyes with his hands he stretched and yawned, enjoying the feel of his bed under him.

'What the hell is up with that nurse?', he thought. While not the worst he had ever seen, she seemed to be a bit of a butterfingers. His eyes narrowed, as that description seemed to be completely off tangent with the woman herself and the way she carried herself before his father had left the two of them alone.

Urd had, in some cases managed to have several files slip through her fingers several times as he tried to get her familiarized with some of the lobby work. Each time she insisted on picking everything up herself, but he had tried to help her regardless, and in doing so, had strangely managed to position him with some...interesting view points.

In one case she had bent over completely to pick up the dropped papers. Not merely crouching down but actually bending over with barely a bend at her knees. It was extremely difficult not to notice that not only was she facing away from him as she did so, but that her already short skirt rode even higher on her thighs.

Another case had him crouched with her but she had been directly in front of him, facing him this time and crouching as well. Lowering herself further to pick up the files he found himself able to see over her unbuttoned top into her cleavage including a bit of the inner cup of her bra.

He sighed as he recalled that when she had stood up she bounced as well.

With yesterday's events, the ruckus this morning and now this, he moaned as he realized that this was just Urd's first day. 'I don't think I'm gonna survive this...', he mentally lamented.

Before he could go over more a knock came at his door. Taking his hand off slightly to his face he looked toward his door. "Come in", he called out.

The door slid open and a figure walked in, holding a tray. With the light of the hallway behind her and his own darkened room, he could not quite make out her silhouette.

Blinking to improve his vision, the light from his lamp caught her face as she took another step inside and also carefully closed the door with her foot.

"Orihime", he said, managing at the last second to not say 'Inoue'. He rose to a sitting position, his feet now pulled from the chair and on the ground.

"Wel-welcome back, Ichigo-kun", she said as with measured steps she made her way to his desk and carefully placed the tray on it. "This was tonight's dinner", she explained to him before he could ask.

"Tha-thank you", he said, blinking.

A few moments ago out in the hallway Belldandy had exited her room, laying Keiichi to bed. She turned to make way to her eldest's room, curious to know how his day went and to let him know that his dinner was waiting for him.

Looking ahead she saw Orihime holding a tray with his dinner on it. Standing in front of his room she fidgeted as the girl realized she had no free hands to knock on the door. Before Belldandy could make a move or call out Orihime then carefully made way to his door and while making sure the tray was held firmly she tapped the door twice with an elbow. Hearing her son's consent Orihime with a foot carefully opened the door and stepped through, closing the door after a few seconds.

She smiled and continued forward. She loved the girl dearly, and would welcome her into their family should Ichigo wish to pursue her in that matter. Her smile widened a bit as her own cheeks flushed, recalling her own courtship with Isshin. She brought a hand to her face as one certain memory came forth. Speaking of which...

"Isshin", she said softly.

Behind her, on his knees was her husband in front of Ichigo's door with a glass cup in his hand. "Shhhh", he whispered to her, a finger to his mouth.

"Isshin", she said again, slightly turning her head but not turning around.

Missing her husband's disappointed face he rose and walked to her. Taking his hand, she was about to take a step forward before she stopped in midstep.

"Yuzu", she called out in the same tone.

Yuzu moaned softly in disappointment, her posture mirroring her father's of a moment prior exactly before she rose up to join her mother and father.

Inside and completely unaware of what had happened outside, Orihime watched as Ichigo rose to take the tray and slide it towards the bed. Sitting on his bed once more he gave thanks and began to dig in.

She watched him for a moment, smiling. She then took a seat beside him on his bed.

Stopping in mid-chew her turned to her, surprised at her actions. She sat next to him, a few feet away near the edge so she was not too close and continued to watch him before she turned away. He slowly began to eat once more, not sure exactly what was going on and trying to ignore how easily she did that.

"How - how was your day, Ichigo", she asked after a moment of gathering her courage. It was not the first time she was here nor the first time she sat on his bed, so why was there butterflies dancing in her stomach?

"Oh...okay I guess", Ichigo then responded. After swallowing another bite he frowned. "Then I got to the clinic".

Orihime made a soft sound of confusion as she looked at him. Taking a few more bites Ichigo continued.

"I swear this chick is toying with me", he said, recalling one frustrating moment. Continuing to eat he relayed much of what had happened, and her eyes had widened at hearing what he had to say. "And I get to have fun all over again tomorrow", he grumbled as he took the last bite.

Orihime brought her hands together, twiddling her fingers as Ichigo's last comment reminded her of what she came in for. "Thanks for the food", he said as he leaned forward to put the bowl back on the tray. He then scooted a bit further back on his bed and brought his legs in, sitting Indian style.

"Ich-ichigo-kun", she prompted finally.

"Hmmmm"?

"How..how've you been feeling, recently"?

He looked at her, puzzled now. "I've...I've been fine. Why do you ask?"

"It's just..well, you see...", she paused, trying to form her words. Ichigo looked at her, waiting. "I'm...I'm sorry, Ichigo. Please don't be mad at me", she said, her eyes watering a bit.

Ichigo's own eyes widened at what she said and turned fully to her. "For what", he asked.

"I'm, I'm sorry I didn't help you. Tatsuki did, but I just couldn't move. I was so scared when you collapsed I just couldn't move."

"What are you talking about", Ichigo asked, completely confused.

"At..at the hospital, when we went to go see Keiichi. You've..you've been so different since then".

His lips thinned as he looked down. He remembered now, he had been very disoriented from his 'transition' of being fully awakened. Thinking about it he had been acting normal, or at least he thought, but he realized that he 'probably' acted a bit differently from what others would expect.

He looked up and studied her. The Inoue he 'remembered' was, well, a mystery. He didn't really know her, other than she was good friends with Tatsuki. She also found herself tongue tied or quick to rush away when he did greet her or look at her. He had figured that she was shy, or something, considering Tatsuki never mentioned anything about it.

Looking at the girl in front of him, he could now recall much of his memories with her now. She was very close with his sisters, Yuzu in particular and his mother. He frowned as he recalled that first turning point with her parents, but since that time she's been a wonderful friend, and looking at her now... She really must've known him well if she could see the differences in what he understood as 'normal' for him.

"You've", she continued, bringing him back to the present. "You've also been referring to me as 'Inoue', and you haven't done that since we met". She sniffled as another tear rolled down her cheek. She then brought her legs in and wrapped her arms around them. "If you're doing that than I must've done something to make you angry at me, and, and-"

"Hey", he said, breaking her concentration. Looking at her and making sure that they had eye contact he continued. "You've done nothing wrong".

"Huh"?

"But you're right though. I have been... I have been a bit different lately". He paused as he thought about how he should say this. Orihime watched him, noticing how he had withdrawn in thought. After a moment he spoke again. "There have just been a few things that have happened recently - nothing that you've done", he then said, to soothe her. "I guess, I guess you could say that experience changed me a bit, but it's still me on the inside". He smiled at her.

"It as nothing to do with what you did", he told her. "And for what it's worth, I'm sorry for making you worry". Another tear rolled down her cheek and he frowned.

"Thank..thank you, Ichigo-kun", she said, wiping the tear away with her hand. "I...I still wish I could have done more though". Ichigo raised an eyebrow at her and waited to continue. "I wanted to come here and help you a bit. You and your family have done so much for me that I wanted to be able to give back a bit as well, but with what happened yesterday and your punishment; I feel...I just feel like I've been an extra burden on you".

"Hey", he said, his voice a bit firmer. "Don't talk about yourself like that". She blinked at him, a bit surprised at his tone. "You were here and able to help mom out and my sisters while I was out, both yesterday and today".

She blinked at him, a bit amazed at how firm he was being to her.

He took a breath in as he saw that she was still a bit unconvinced. Remembering a time that Yuzu was like this he decided that maybe doing the same would help Orihime as well. He rose from his sitting position to move towards her a bit and reached forward and laid a hand on her head. He rubbed her head a bit, trying to soothe her.

Orihime went completely still.

"That's more than I could ever hope to ask of anyone", he told her softly, looking her in the eye. "And it's my own fault of what happened, so don't knock yourself on that, ok"?

She blushed madly as she slowly nodded.

"Good", he said, giving her a very small nudge before sitting back and away from her.

"Now c'mon", he said, standing up and reaching out to grab his tray.

Snapping out of her reverie, she then got off his bed and stood up and tried to take the tray from him.

"It's ok, Ichigo-kun, I'll do that", she told him. Before he could retort she added, "I'm here because I wanted to help, remember? I'll take it". With that, she was able to take the tray from him. Walking to the door, she turned to look at him. "Thank you, Ichigo-kun", she smiled at him.

With that, he smiled back at her. Not a grin, but a soft one that was not marred by the scowl he had adopted so recently. Seeing him like that set her heart at ease, knowing that he was right. It was still him in there, no matter what had happened recently.

And that was all that mattered.

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Urd frowned as she carried a stack of folders to the table. Finding the right one she walked over to the door and called the next name. An elderly man walked up, and she in turn led him to the room he would be waiting in.

She smiled at him as he complimented her, and she in turn thanked him as she told him to wait in the room. The others would be taking over from here, as she had not been trained yet by the boy on what to handle next.

The boy, yes, Ichigo.

She nodded at a passing co-worker, taking the next stack from her and returning to her chair to begin filing anew.

She had concluded so far the groundwork was being laid quite nicely. He had tried so hard to keep himself in check but she knew that she had caught his eye. The only thing she had failed to do was to get him alone and properly reveal herself to him.

She had, in hindsight, made a miscalculation in gaining the boy's attention through the workplace she realized.

She had intended to be able to get him alone, and the clinic seemed to have plenty of room for 'opportunity', but it seemed to not want to present itself the night before. Work, it seemed, had presented itself at each turn, and they both found themselves in it as he instructed her on what to do or who to talk to.

'He was just so cute when he was being serious', she thought, recalling his attempts to regain his self control after one of her 'slips'. Still, she felt he wasn't all that bad, and wondered what kind of wish he made.

When she could finally corner him alone she'd be able to ask, and from there see how it pertained to her sister and if it had any bearing on-

-THUD-

Blinking, she found herself snapped out of her thoughts as another stack of folders appeared next to her.

"Have these filed in the same area Ichigo showed you last night", Isshin said before turning back. "Oh, one more thing", he said before he reached the exit.

"Ichigo will be in a little later than normal today", he informed her. Urd momentarily closed her eyes and fought back a growl of frustration at another wrench in the works. Quickly regaining her composure, she asked, "May I ask why he will be in late"?

"He has to take a guest of ours home", he said before a nurse called for his attention.

As he left her alone Urd turned back to look at the stack in front of her and snorted in frustration.

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Ichigo leaned back in his chair and blew out a breath. Holding his arms behind his back he stretched, twirling the pencil he held. Settling back down he reworked the problem that was giving him some issues. After a moment he turned to look at the clock once more and sighed, not looking forward what was to come.

The classroom he was in was long since emptied, and he was only staying around to wait for Orihime finish her club so he could first walk her to his home to grab her stuff, then walk her home while carrying her stuff. Though lighter than what it was when he first lugged it home a few days ago, it was still something he didn't want to do.

His father found it an appropriate part for his punishment, since he would need to see her home he could also take her stuff, and then come for training at the clinic.

'It's only appropriate because of the timing', he mentally growled. Looking at the clock once more, he scowled as he went back to his homework.
 

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"Ahh, nothing like going home after a long school day", Keigo chirped, hands in his pockets. Walking down the street, he grinned and smiled at each girl who passed by, pointedly ignoring the way their eyes rolled at him, looked at him in disgust, or simply did not notice him.

'It's not easy being me', he thought happily. He enjoyed his go-home club status, more than happy to be out of the place that caged him away from freedom. Feeling the change in his pockets he breifly debated stopping by at the arcade before an image of Mizuho's angry face appeared before him. His good mood slightly wilted at his sister, who no doubt had a list of things to do when he got home. Just because she was on the student council and had to stay at school didn't mean she could drop all the chores on him...

He sighed, again contemplating spending some time away from home as he smiled at another pretty girl that walked by. 'Karakura High uniform', he noted. 'I am gonna love high school', he thought, turning around and walking backwards for a time to gaze a bit longer at the girl and the short skirt she wore. He grinned at that, and again felt his face.

No pain.

Man, the gods and goddesses truly were on his side to have such a miraculous healing bestowed upon him.

He turned at another corner as yet again he thought of the other day, when the beautiful Belldandy touched his face and spoke to him; 'You were right, they do look worse than they are. I believe you should start feeling better later on tonight.', he recalled.

AND SHE TOUCHED HIM!

He smiled giddily at the reminder. 'Damn you, Ichigo Kurosaki', Keigo thought in pure envy. 'I'd LOVE to have a mom as hot as Belldandy and a girl as beautiful as Orihime to talk to. Instead, I have *her*, he scowled, another image of his sister coming to mind.

He soon turned another corner and noticed another person walking up ahead.

'Sado', he realized. Even looking at his back he knew no one else that size and was then suddenly reminded about earlier.

He and Mizuiro had eaten lunch with Ichigo and his friends again, and again the subject of his women came up. He did not get his fellow man at all. Ichigo had ranted once more and had mentioned that he would be busy taking Orihime home and would end up carrying around her stuff. And that he sounded angry when he said it...

'That ungrateful bastard', Keigo thought once more. 'If it were me I'd wait all day in the rain barefoot to be able to hold her stuff'. An image of her unmentionables also came to mind. 'Aah', he mentally whined, 'I'd volunteer in a second if she asked...' - "Hm?", he said as something caught his attention.

There were two boys peeking over at Sado from one of the corners up ahead, a corner that Sado had just walked by.

Before he could think of anything else he saw the two begin to move towards Sado from behind and noticed that one of them was carrying what looked to be a large rock. Pretty heavy looking, from the way...

His eyes widened when he realized what was happening and Sado fell to the floor, unconscious. Quickly dashing to the closest corner, he slowly moved his head around the wall and took a peek before hiding himself once more.

'Ohmygodohmygodohmygodohmygodohmygodohmygodohmygodohmygodohmygodohmygod...'

Trying to calm himself, he slowly turned the corner to take another look and gulped. The two boys, one long haired and another with glasses were attempting to drag Sado away, but looked to be having a hard time. The rock that they had used now lay spread in pieces over the road.

He pulled back and slid down the wall until he sat down, his pulse still racing. 'If I stay here quietly they'll be gone soon', he thought, 'if I stay here and don't make a sound they won't see me'. 'Gottakeepquietgottakeepquietgottakeepquietgottakeepquiet'. He again tried to calm himself down and brought his hands to his face to rub it.

He paused as his hands reached his face.

-Man, the gods and goddesses truly were on his side to have such a miraculous healing bestowed upon him.-

-"Did you really think you would I would just ignore that! After I told you not to go near or look at her!"
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He touched his face softly, feeling no pain. A few days ago, it hurt like hell, but he had been lucky in more ways than one. It could have been worse. His stomach clenched in realization that for Sado, it will be worse.

*Much worse.*

"What do I do?", he thought. Distraction? No, Sado's knocked out and can't run. There's no way in hell I'm strong enough to fight. And Mizuho's not around, and she'd probably be able to beat them to death. Damn!

-"It pisses me off when I see that shit".-

He paused.

-I actually wanted to thank you for the other day, and that I gotta say your mom knows her stuff!-

'Kurosaki-san? Yes! Sado was one of his friends, that's right!', he remembered. 'If I can find him but where would he be!?' He thought furiously and remembered that Ichigo said he'd be waiting at the school to take Orihime home afterwards. But where at school!?

He turned to peek around the corner and saw the two boys struggling to lift Sado's dead weight away.

He clasped his hands in prayer and looked up. 'Oh, please don't let them see me!', he prayed. Pushing himself off the wall he ran, nearly screeching at trying to move as fast as he could.

Nakamura and Kanayama looked behind them to see somebody hightailing it out of the area.

"What the hell was that", Kanayama asked, straining as he tried to hold on to Sado's weight.

"Someone...", Nakamura groaned, "being smart". He pulled on Sado again. "Damn this bastard's heavy".

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'Ok, that should do it', Ichigo thought, writing the answer to the last question on his homework. He looked at the clock again and noted the time. 'Only 10 more minutes or so'. He reached over to his carrycase to put his work away when he heard some commotion coming from outside the classroom.

Ignoring it he started placing his work inside. Taking a math book out and placing it on the table he pulled out a blank piece paper to write on and read the first question. He stopped as whatever the hell was going on outside was getting louder.

He set it aside again and tried to concentrate on the problem when he finally made out what was being yelled.

"KUROSAKI-SAN!"

'What'?

"KUROSAKI-SAN!"

Rising up from his seat he quickly made way to the door and opened it. Looking outside into the hallway he saw many people doing the same thing he was in trying to see who was making all that noise.

"Asano?"

"KUROSAKI-SAN!", Keigo shouted again, seeing him. Rushing from down the hall he stopped in front of Ichigo, heaving as he bent slightly and put his hands on his knees.

In the hallway dozens on dozens of students were each looking out of the doors of their classrooms, now concentrating on the two.

'Ichigo-kun', Orihime thought from the doorway of her arts and crafts club.

Noticing everyone Ichigo grabbed Keigo's collar and was about to haul him inside the classroom when Keigo grabbed his wrist. "No-gasp-wait-Sado-gasp".

Ichigo's eyes narrowed. "What"?

"I-gasp-saw-gasp-Sado-jumped-gasp-".

"What happened?", Ichigo demanded.

Trying to catch his breath as best he could Keigo gave his best description of what happened. "They were dragging him away when I ran", he finished, breathing a bit easier now.

"Where!?", demanded Ichigo.

Keigo gave the description of where he saw it happen and Ichigo's eyes narrowed in concentration. Keigo then spoke again, "I don't know where they could have taken him... They could be anywhere by now".

Ichigo's lips pursed as he focused hard, thinking about what he knew about the area. Eyes widening, he rushed passed Keigo into the hallway into a sprint, ignoring their audience's confused looks.

"KUROSAKI-SAN!?", Keigo yelled after him.

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Seiji Yokomura sat back and stretched in his seat and smiled. The old sofa was still good and the somewhat soft cushioning it still had only helped enhance the upcoming moment he knew he would savor for a long time to come.

In front of him tied tightly to a chair was the first of three pitiful pieces of trash that had the misfortune of getting in his way. While it was not the first two he wanted, the large boy in front of him would do nicely as a warmup for Ichigo Kurosaki and Tatsuki Arisawa.

Just thinking of them caused him to twitch. How *dare* they interfere with him. First Ichigo Kurosaki, for playing hero, and then Tatsuki Arisawa for coming to his aid and doing the impossible to him and his gang. Oh, he would get both of them, be it together or alone. He had caught Kurosaki once, and would do so again. And as for Arisawa...

He licked the edges of his teeth with his tongue, thinking of her nice, toned legs. Heh, oh he wouldn't mind catching her alone...

But this bastard in front of him... Oh, he could've been just fine and dandy being blissfully unaware but he just *had* to get involved as he and the boys were about to deliver Kurosaki's punishment. If his two boys Nakamura and Kanayama hadn't fucked up, they would have finished this guy up yesterday, but *again* Kurosaki interfered. Despite their fuck up, the gods were smiling on him as Kanayama's cellphone, which had been dropped in mid-call, had picked up some interesting things regarding the unconscious lug before him.

'Wakey, wakey, Sado-chan', he mentally sneered. 'It's time for your lesson'.

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Pain.

Pain and dizzyness were the first two thoughts that came to Sado's mind as he slowly regained consciousness. He had yet to open his eyes, but he could make out the snickering around him. Slowly he opened his eyes before quickly shutting them, as the light that greeted him was almost painful. Getting his bearings he opened them again a bit slower, letting himself get used to the light and tried to stretch.

No go. Pulling on his limbs he felt himself ensnared by some kind of rope- no, not rope, some kind of wire from what he could feel around his wrists. It tied his hands behind the chair, along with an extra set wrapped around his arms and waist, further pinning him to his seat. From the feel of it legs were double tied as well, one around his thighs and the other around his ankles, both wrapped around the chair as well.

His vision had cleared enough to see that he was surrounded by a group of boys his age. Two of which were the ones who had bothered him yesterday, but the rest seemed vaguely familiar. From what he could see of the scenery it wasn't good news either, as he had no idea what overpass he was under. Carefully he pulled at his bonds again.

'These wires are pretty thick', he thought. 'I don't think I can break out of them.'

"And so the end has come for Mashiba Junior High's Sado", he heard someone say.

Looking up and ahead, he could see the speaker, a wirey boy with glasses, sporting a cornrow hairstyle that lead to many tied strands falling behind his neck and a nose ring, complete with a chain connecting the nose ring to an earring. The uniform though, was unfamiliar to him.

Yokomura relaxed in his seat, arms open and resting, draped over and behind the back of the sofa, completely caught up in the moment. He taunted Sado again.

"So, how does it feel?", Yokomura asked about the wire. "Does it hurt enough to make you pee your pants", he asked hopefully. "Huh!?"

Sado stared back, neither showing fear nor pain. Almost bored, he replied, "So if this hurts, I'm supposed to piss myself? I guess that will be a while then..."

Yokumura frowned.

"Sorry", Sado then said in a tone that completely dismissed them.

Yokomura's eye twitched. 'Cheeky bastard, aren't ya'? Looking at Sado something caught his eye. 'Ah, yes', he remembered.

"Is that so", he told Sado. Rising up from his seat he moved towards Sado, his eyes never leaving the trinket hanging from Sado's neck which caught his attention. "Well, how 'bout this"?

Reaching out with his right hand he grabbed the amulet and with a small tug the trinket broke free of the thin chain necklace it was connected to.

Sado's eyes widened as he sucked in a breath.

"I know about this! You value it more than your life!"

'He heard', Sado realized. The open cellphone that he and Ichigo found after those two guys ran off yesterday had caught his explanation about his most cherished possession; the amulet given to him by his abuelo, his grandfather.

Yokomura then decided to up the ante by holding up a linemen's pliers to Sado's line of sight in his free hand. Sado stared at it, horrified.

Smirking, Yokomura let the pliers come close to the amulet and stared at it as if to contemplate it. "So if you lost this, then you gotta die, right"?, he reasoned. His smile widened as he then brought the two closer. "Die, you fool". He then opened the pliers jaws.

'Those big and strong fists of yours', his grandfather had asked, 'for what purpose were you blessed with them? Learn about that. This amulet will help you', his grandfather told him on that day he gave Sado the pendant.

-WHOMP-

Yokomura and his gang jumped at the sound, though only Yokomura kept his gaze. Inside though he felt a shiver travel up his spine as he saw Sado's eyes as he strained against the wire, lips pulled back in a snarl. Calming himself and ignoring the straining sound the wire gave off, he remembered exactly who was in control and sneered again, now amused at Sado's hopeless struggle.

"There's no way you'll break that." 'Time to finish this', he thought gleefuly. He turned to look at the others. "GET HI-"

-CRASH-

Yokomura wasn't quite sure what happened. He remembered Sado giving him a look of death as he was about to order his boys to finish him but now he seemed to be looking up into the sky. 'What a nice day', his mind supplied. Blinking, his mind cleared and his eyes settled on an orange topped interloper who....

No.

'No, no, no, No, NO, NO, NO!!!', his mind raged. 'NOT AGAIN!'

For Ichigo Kurosaki, there was cutting it close, and then there was *cutting it close*. Swiftly grabbing the pendant out of the fallen Yokomura's hand he turned and took stock of the situation. After hearing Keigo's explanation and where he saw Chad hit he figured that this was probably one of the best places to have 'quiet time', having been here himself a few times.

His guess was right. Upon arriving the first thing he saw was that bastard Yokomura holding the amulet that Chad had told him about, given to him by his abobo-, no, his abelo- his grandfather, yeah. Seeing him holding it with a pair of pliers along with Chad tied up good he picked up his speed and jumped, landing a kick solidly in Yokomura's face.

"Hey", said Glasses from the other day. "It's-"

"Ichigo Kurosaki", Kanayama finished, nearly wilting at seeing this particular nemesis again.

Kneeling next to Yokomura Ichigo soon noted the others, remembering them well when Kanayama had him in a similar situation. Today was going to be different.

*Much* different.

'Better let the hospital know they're going to get visitors', he gleefully thought, anxious to pay them back in kind for what they attempted to do to him. And more.

Before he could fish for a phone, his mother's words from yesterday came to fore. 'You will though, have to practice more until you get used to your strength, so that way you don't hurt somebody unnecessarily next time'.

He paused in mid reach of Yokomura's jacket, the impending adrenaline rush building in his body momentarily subsiding as he remembered those words he and his mother shared.

Yokomura smirked through the pain. Ichigo's sudden stop and contemplation meant one thing. The little shit realized exactly what he was doing and to who.

And there was no Arisawa bitch to bail him out this time.

"WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU CHUMPS JUST STANDING THERE FOR! GET HIM!", he shouted from the ground. He wheezed a bit as Kurosaki rose to face his now certain death.

'Let's see. One, two, three, four, five', Ichigo counted as they rushed him. 'Well, no time like the present', he thought with his mom in mind. Stepping forward he quickly took a stance and with a breath concentrated on the style he was taught in this life.

"You're dead, Kurosaki", he heard from behind him. "You're all by yourself and your bodyguard bitch ain't here to save you".

Ichigo turned to him, ready to kick him when - oops, that's right.

He ducked as Glasses's fist sailed over him. While tucking he swung his leg in a sweep, catching Mr Fro behind his knee. As Mr Fro fell, he felt the Tall Guy wrap an arm around him. Before he could get a grip Ichigo stomped on his foot and elbowed him in the stomach. Now free Ichigo kicked him away.

As Beanie Head came close Ichigo again tried to retake his stance and caught his attackers thrown fist. Stepping back and using the momentum he twisted and tossed Beanie Boy over into Tall Guy, only to catch a kick in the face by Kanayama in return.

Turning and quickly recovering he brought his arms up and stopped the next punch and counterattacked, landing a combination of blows across Kanayama's stomach. For a moment, Ichigo almost felt... - normal-, would probably be the best word he could describe at that second. Normal in the sense that this was what his old self would do.

As Kanayama sailed back he hopped sideways and twisted, missing a rush attack by Mr Fro and bringing up his foot and catching him in the head, the momentum now causing him to sail away Ichigo. Again, he took his stance as he caught Tall Guy and Glasses both charging him now.

'Something's wrong', he felt.

Both Tall Guy and Glasses threw punches at him, catching him in a pincer. The punches were wild and fierce, and he managed to block as well as he could. Concentrating, he brought his arms- "OOOOFF!"

Opening his eyes he saw Beanie Head had caught him blindsided. 'How the hell..?", Ichigo thought as he again took his stance. Blowing a breath in the milliseconds that passed as Mr Fro and Tall Guy came at him again, he brushed off another feeling of wrongness. He scowled as Tall Guy and Mr Fro again threw their arms wildly at him, with this time Beanie Boy coming up the rear.

Sitting up Yokomura smiled. Rubbing his face and then his back he watched the battle rage before him. Kurosaki had gotten some good hits on him but his boys were quickly gaining the upper hand. Nakamura had now just caught him blindsided and already Ishikawa was using his massive size to try to pin the little bastard when he managed to slip away, only to catch Nakamura's foot in his stomach.

Kurosaki was good, he had to admit, but like before, it was only a matter of time before he fell under superior numbers.

Off to the side Sado looked on, concern growing as Ichigo was starting to lose ground. He had caught a few of them with some big hits early but was quickly losing the situation as the others began to fight together, cutting off any avenue for escape.

"What the hell is going on!?", Ichigo thought furiously, again holding his stance. Nothing seemed to be going right. These guys weren't anything special, and they should have been mincemeat by now! He concentrated again as he thought his way through the next kata sequence.

He caught Mr Fro with an uppercut and twisted with a backhand that felled Kanayama, only to receive a another kick in the stomach from Beanie Head. Glasses then caught him by his head and pulled him forward so they were facing eacher. Grinning maniaclly he reared his head back, readying to throw a long winded head butt to Ichigo.

Reacting instantly when he realized that Glasses had pulled too far back Ichigo threw his body forward with his head straight, catching Glasses under the jaw and into the throat. Coughing Glasses fell back, holding his throat. Unfortunately recovery time for Ichigo was short as Tall Guy's fist immediately caught him in the face.

Ichigo's saw stars as he twirled around and nearly lost his balance. Stopping and squinting his eyes he forced his vision to clear as again he took his stance to maintain form...form? FORM! 'THAT'S IT', he realized.

-Tatsuki looked at him. "Earlier today with those guys", she asked. "You've always had a helluva time with crowds."

Ichigo's mouth opened but no words came out. He then turned back towards the river and squinted as images appeared in his mind. He opened his eyes and sighed. 'I can't believe I had problems with that', he thought.
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Quickly hopping back several feet for space Ichigo with sudden clarity realized what his former self had done and what he had been consciously been trying to mimic now. In his attempt to use his former self's style he had been trying too hard to stick to form, the way he had been taught by Noriyuki-sensei growing up. He had been rigid, and bad habits had formed in trying to keep that, and not letting himself actually go with the flow in actual combat.

That was the other problem.

Combat for much of his life *had* been one-on-one, either in the dojo or in some of the tournaments. The fights that happened in the streets he usually had Tatsuki as his backup. He rarely had to go at it with multiple opponents, at most 2 or 3, but form had held, stubbornly as he remembered being lectured by both Noriyuki-sensei and Tatsuki when they had a class demonstration. He stubbornly clung on to the belief if he held to form, the sequence he learned would see him through as he concentrated on one opponent at a time as they attacked him together.

That was fine for the dojo, but out here in the real world it was proving to be nearly fatal. Not to mention trying to do all this without overly *hurting* any of them...

Despite that, he smirked.

He never had to do that *before* in his old life. And he was only trying to consciously been doing that here. Another realization suddenly came to him.

The other day when he had saved Keigo from Hayashibara and his gang; he had been fighting as he usually did, but the moves had come when they needed to, as if by instinct. At this moment he had been trying too damn hard to consciously make it happen instead of letting it come to him.

His smirk then became a grin. 'Lesson one learned. Let's hope I can keep what I said to mom next.'

The others paused, looking at Kurosaki. When he had hopped back they for a moment thought he was going to bolt for it. He hadn't. In fact, he smirked. They were about to rush him again for disrespecting them when that smirk became a grin. But his eyes.

His eyes!

They had the look of someone who knew they had won.

Kanayama was the first to attack, and a second after the others joined him in their charge.

It was with some surprise that Kanayama was suddenly flying in the other direction, blood falling from his face where Ichigo knuckles connected against it. Ichigo was still moving forward, almost in line with Kanayama's falling body as he was suddenly in the circle of his foes. Catching himself to come to a sudden stop he twisted again, bringing a backhand to Tall Guy's stomach, who was still in forward motion, not quite catching the fact that Ichigo was now inbetween them.

The force of being caught like that unprepared dropped Ishikawa to his knees.

It was at this time that Glasses, Mr Fro and Beanie Head had attacked, now recovered from Ichigo's sudden assault. Glasses managed to grab and hold Ichigo around the waist and attempted to lift him up and throw him to the ground where they could all pound him. Ichigo feeling himself suddenly rising grabbed for whatever he could for balance, which so happened to be Mr Fro's hair as he came by to help Glasses. As he fell he kicked outward, catching Beanie Head in the nose, who then covered his face with his hands as he groaned in agony.

Mr Fro screamed as he felt himself being being dragged down as Kurosaki fell to the ground. Glasses though felt he had Ichigo by rights as he loomed over him and reared a fist back, only to yelp as Ichigo's other hand grabbed his collar from behind. Pulling back on Mr Fro's hair with his right hand and Glasses' collar with his left he smashed the two of them together. Both of them made cracking sounds as their faces met with Glasses' glasses giving off a crunching sound as it flew apart in pieces.

Kipupping to his feet he caught a recovering Beanie Head by surprise with a roundhouse kick, sending him to the ground. Turning he saw Tall Guy trying to get his bearings and attacked while he had the chance.

Off to the side, Yokomura was watching, flabbergasted at the turn of events. Just a moment ago they had him. They HAD him. Just like before they had managed to gang up on him and were going to overwhelm him when something happened. He had smiled, the bastard had SMILED and threw himself back into the fight.

Only this time, it was different. Kurosaki was moving smoother, quicker, more vicious. It was like he changed and became someone else...

"This can't be happening", Yokomura mouthed. It was the worst nightmare coming to life as he witnessed the impossible happening in front of him. Looking beyond them he could see Sado with a similar shocked look on his face. Sado... He was still in the chair. He looked back to see Ichigo throw Yoshida over himself and into the ground. Kanayama still hadn't gotten up yet, the runt... If this is the way this was going to turn out, he could at least do one thing...

He charged forward, veering to the side to get around Kurosaki as his boys ran cover. Sado would be helpless when he-URK!"

"AACK!", he choked out as his back felt like it was on fire as he once more found himself staring at the sky. Lifting his head he saw Kurosaki glaring at him.

"We haven't played yet so STAY THERE!", Kurosaki shouted at him before reaching for Yamaguchi.

Yokomura watched in horror as Ichigo continued his onslaught. His boys, his boys who had terrorized the neighborhood with ease in their expansion into this district; his boys who had stood nearly unopposed back home; his boys who were now dropping like flies by a stinking orange topped nightmare named Ichigo Kurosaki...

'This can't be life...'

After one more agonizing moment it was over. Nakamura, Kanayama, Yamaguchi, Yoshida *and* Ishikawa where all lying on the ground, unmoving.

Ichigo stood straight, observing his handiwork around him. All of them now laid at his feet. So he was right. This time he let the fight come to him, and though it wasn't perfect, he managed to catch all of them in time as he fought like he always did. Mr Fro groaned as he toed him, and sighed.

Ok, maybe he did overdo a bit, but he was within rights. And he did try to hold back, so it had to count for something. However the one who really deserved it though was still standing, figuratively speaking. He bit back a groan as he felt pain over his stomach, arms, legs and face. Not to mention his uniform was caked in dirt and concrete. Hopefully pops will see reason this time...

He looked at Yokomura, who was still sitting on the ground, propping his body up with his arms. He smirked as he could see Yokomura quivering at his turn-around victory.

"Well?", he called out to Yokomura. "Are you ready, or are we done now?"

"Done"?, Yokomura squeaked out. "DONE?" He then shakily got to his feet. "YOU THINK WE'RE DONE?!"

Ichigo's smirk fell from his face.

"This is just the beginning, Kurosaki!" Yokomura then rushed him.

Sidestepping a punch Ichigo tapped Yokomura from behind, causing Yokomura to yelp as he found himself trying to not fall over. Catching himself Yokomura again charged, throwing a combination of punches that Ichigo easily blocked and countered, causing him to fall facefirst into the ground.

Yokomura got to his knees and glared at Ichigo, who calmly looked back at him. Ichigo stared at him for a moment and sighed.

"Go home", Ichigo then said, putting his hands in his jacket's pockets. "We're done, there's no point anymore."

Yokomura's eyes twitched at being dismissed. "No point?", he said incredulously. He stood up shakily and glared at Ichigo, who returned it equally and was not even bothering to hold a stance to defend himself now. "YOU REALLY THINK THIS IS OVER!?", he shouted, spit flying from his mouth. His eyes widened, a sign that he was starting to become unhinged.

"This is just the beginning, Kurosaki", he promised. "I'm gonna bury you, I'm gonna toy with that Arisawa bitch, I'm gonna find your friends!", he spat.

Ichigo's eyes narrowed.

"I even hear you have some younger sisters too. I wond-"

Yokomura never finished. The moment he mentioned Ichigo's sisters he had been in motion, eyes wide in rage at what Yokomura was implying.

-"I know what your thinking, that with my training I probably could have put them down easily.-, he had told his father.

Yokomura's feet lifted a few feet off the ground as Ichigo uppercutted him.

-"Under other circumstances, I probably would have, but what they were doing. How they were doing it. Sometimes its best when you give them the right message the first time."-

Yokomura groaned as he doubled over, feeling Ichigo bury a knee in his stomach.

-Isshin tilted his head, arms still crossed. "And if they don't get that message?"-, his father asked.

Ichigo grabbed the falling Yokomura by the head, using his fingers to grab as much hair and skin as possible and hauled him close to look him in the eyes.

-"Then I do it again"-, was Ichigo's reply.

"*You*", Ichigo sneered, boring his eyes into Yokomura's, whose own looked back wide-eyed, "will NOT touch my friends!" He pushed Yokomura out and drew a fist back, images of a smiling Orihime and Tatsuki coming to mind. He buried his fist into Yokomura's stomach again, ignoring the blood that shot forth. "YOU WILL NOT TOUCH MY FAMILY!", he roared, the smiling faces of Karin and Yuzu now visible to him. His mother's face then appeared.

Both of them.

He caught Yokomura by the collar as he collapsed and brought him close once more. "If you dare try ANYTHING again the next time will be permanent", he growled. He then dropped Yokomura, ignoring the heavy thud as the boy hit the ground.

Breathing in and out deeply, he turned to where Sado was at, still under the overpass tied to his chair. The boy was staring at him wide eyed. Ichigo continued to take a few more deep breaths as he tried to calm himself over what Yokomura was threatening to do.

After a moment he moved forward to untie Sado and stumbled a bit as the adrenaline rush was now subsiding. He shook the cobwebs forming in his head as he made his was toward Sado and looked him over. Seeing that Sado's face had some bruises as well he commented, "Boy, they got you good, didn't they Chad"? Before Sado could reply Ichigo pulled a hand from his pocket and presented Sado with a fist. Opening it palm up Sado saw his amulet and relaxed, knowing it was safe.

"Sado", he corrected, now at ease.

"And I toldya Chad sounds better", Ichigo retorted, moving around the chair to try and untie Chad's wrists first. Putting the pendant back in his pocket momentarily he went to work on the wire. After a few false starts Ichigo managed to get some slack on the wire and loosened it a few moments later. With his hands untied Sado rubbed his wrists before working on the wire at his thighs while Ichigo worked on the wire that trapped Sado's arms and chest to the chair.

With the all the wire finally undone Sado rose from the chair, now free. He then turned to Ichigo, who was staring back at him and held out his arm. Catching the signal Ichigo reached into his pocket and returned the amulet to Sado, who then pocketed it.

"Thank you", Sado told him. He nodded to Ichigo and turned.

"You gonna be ok", Ichigo asked. "My family runs a clinic, and my dad can give you a look over".

"I'll be fine", Sado responded. As he started to walk he lurched forward. Before he could fall over Ichigo caught him.

"That didn't look fine to me", Ichigo grunted, bearing Sado's full weight before Sado recovered enough to take some of the pressure off. "C'mon", Ichigo told him as they slowly walked off, both a bit wobbly.

"Hey", Ichigo prompted after making it to the streets, ignoring the stares that the other pedestrians were giving them. "I know you said you made a promise, but you have to admit that there are gonna be times that you do need to, or they'll just keep coming back".

"I can't", Sado replied after a moment. "I will not use these fists for my sake", Sado reaffirmed. Ichigo, unable to shake his head as he continued to help Sado along settled for sighing in defeat.

"And those guys", Sado responded after a moment. "I don't think they'll be bothering anyone for awhile".

"Hmm", Ichigo mumbled, recalling the fight. He frowned at Yokomura spiel at the end. It was no doubt he had cracked, but Ichigo felt his stomach turn at the last bit Yokomura spat out. He had not held back at all in his retaliation, as those words Yokomura yelled gave cause to not hold back. As to if Yokomura understood his message to him...

Tatsuki would be around, and she'd tear into Yokomura if he so much as breathed in the direction of his family, and Ichigo would never allow the bastard to come anywhere near them, but they were only two. He then contemplated Chad once more before coming to a decision.

"Hey, Chad", he said, "How's this sound to ya? You can keep doing your thing, and not fight for your own sake. But if you can fight for mine though, I'll fight for you in your place. If you ever need to risk your life to protect something, I'll risk mine to protect it too." Ichigo then came to a stop and shifted a bit, to look Sado in the eye.

"Promise", he told him.

Sado stared back, his face giving away nothing. After a moment, Sado nodded. "Promise", he responded.

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Isshin found himself taking a deep breath at the sight before him. 'What am I going to do with this boy', he thought. He stood behind the counter in the lobby, and in front of him at the door was Ichigo, who looked like he had been put through the wringer, but he was helping another bigger boy stay afoot, who also looked like he had been in more than a rough spot.

Ichigo returned his father's look, unflinching. He then nodded towards Chad. "Chad was in a bind, so I helped him out. He got hit pretty hard so could you take a look at him?"

Isshin saw the other boy look at him. "Sado", he said. Isshin sighed and walked to open the door to allow Sado to enter. "C'mon. I'll be able to check on you in a few moments."

Tentatively Sado stepped away from Ichigo and slowly made his way to where Isshin was gesturing. Before going through the door Sado turned back to Ichigo. "Thank you", he said. Turning, he looked at Isshin, who looked to be contemplating him before nodding at Ichigo. The door shut behind them as Sado followed Isshin.

Ichigo blew out a breath and started to walk to the door, intent on heading to the restroom and cleaning up a bit.

"So what was all that about", a voice asked.

"Geh!", Ichigo jumped. Turning, he found Urd behind before he winced, feeling his bruises. 'When did she...', he thought. 'I coulda sworn Chad and I were the only ones here'.

Urd stood there, waiting. When his heart finally slowed he spoke. "He got jumped. Another friend of mine told me about it and I went to help out".

Urd raised an eyebrow. "Really", she asked. "You you always help people like that"?

Ichigo looked at her, not quite sure of what to make of her tone. "I just don't like seeing that stuff. Chad also has this weird promise that he won't fight back for himself", he added after a moment.

Urd hummed in acknowledgement. From the visual cues he gave off and the way he spoke she knew he was telling the truth, and from the way he and the other boy came in he really had a time of it. She smiled, her assessment of him rising up a bit.

It was then that she noticed Ichigo had begun to finish his walk toward the door. She moved swiftly to him. "You don't look so hot yourself. Need a hand?", she asked, taking his arm and leaning into him.

Ichigo immediately pulled back. "No, no! I'm ok! I just need to wash up, that's all".

"How mean!", she pouted. "You don't want my help".

"It's not that! I'm fine enough to make it on my own, I swear!".

Urd's face went back to normal. "Was he the one you were supposed to take back?"

Ichigo looked at her in confusion.

"Your father said you were going to be a little late earlier. Something about taking back a guest", she then explained.

"Oh crap!", Ichigo said in realization. "I forgot all about her!"

'Her', she thought, interested now. Before she could ask another question the door to the clinic opened and two people entered the lobby.

"Shi-ichi! What the hell were you thinking, leaving Orihime...", Tatsuki paused, seeing Ichigo in his current state before noticing the woman next to him. Taking a moment to look at this new woman her eyes traveled south as she quickly took note of the short skirt, exotic looks, legs and scowled as she centered on the woman's cleavage.

'Oh ho', Urd thought, not missing being measured by the girl.

Tatsuki put one of the two carrycases she was carrying under her arm and nearly stomped toward Ichigo. Like a deer caught in headlights Ichigo stood frozen and she grabbed him by his collar with her free hand and dragged him back to where she had stood with Orihime. Orihime looked at him in concern before smiling at him as if to say she was sorry for Tatsuki's behavior.

Letting him go Tatsuki grabbed the carrycase under her arm and shoved it into Ichigo's chest, who automatically took hold of it with both hands it and held it to his chest. "What were you thinking!", she hissed at him, lowering her voice so only the three of them could hear. "How could you just run off like that again? Why didn't you come get me? Did you know how worried Orihime was when you ran off!?" Not to mention what she felt, when Orihime had relayed what she saw. That she had an interesting first meeting with Asano and getting the story out of him was also worth noting.

"There was no time", Ichigo answered, his voice also low.

From the counter Urd observed them all, each of them close to each other and made note of the body language of both girls and recalling the short haired one's appraisal of herself. She saw Ichigo then try to explain himself, also speaking in low tones. "Interesting", she said to herself.

"Yes, it is, isn't it?"

Urd sucked in a breath and brought her hands to her heart. Turning she saw Isshin behind the counter, arms crossed. 'I didn't even notice him!', she thought, stunned. Seeing now that his attention wasn't on her she turned back to the three teenagers, who hadn't heard them.

She continued to watch them as both Ichigo and the girl began going back and forth, still talking softly, but she caught the gist of it in that Ichigo explaining about the other boy and the short haired one not quite buying it. She then caught the looks both girls were giving him time to time and noted their body language. She then studied Ichigo and noted his body language and compared them all. 'He doesn't get it', she realized.

"So you see it", Isshin asked in hush tones.

Urd raised an eyebrow at that and nodded. "How long", she asked softly as well.

"I'm confident that it's been pretty much since they've met him. Especially her", he nodded in the direction of the pretty shoulder length copper haired girl.

Urd turned back to Isshin as she heard him shuffling behind the counter before her eyes widened. Isshin had his hands clenched and was slightly shaking.

"Oh, my son!", he softly cried. "If only you realize that I am trying to help!", he quietly lamented before raising his clenched hands.

"Perhaps I may be able to help", Urd offered.

Isshin turned to her, his look giving the impression that she just said she'd give him the cure for cancer. "You think you can cure my boy?", he asked, hopeful.

She nodded. 'It's been pretty hectic here', she thought. 'I may not be able to quite get him alone with all the work here as well as the people, but maybe I can get his undivided attention another way. Besides, he seems like a nice boy, so I don't mind giving him an extra bit of service in exchange for any info on Belldandy'. She smiled, happy at this opportunity.

"Can you give me the details", she asked him.

"Well...", Isshin began.

As he was apologizing to Tatsuki Ichigo felt a cold chill travel up his back. Turning, he caught sight of his father talking to Urd, but before he could do anything he felt a warm hand on his cheek and his head was redirected back to Tatsuki, who then asked for his attention.
 

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Ichigo stretched a bit, feeling better but still somewhat sore. Looking into the mirror of one of the clinic's restrooms he saw the few bruises that sported his face were already fading under his father's ministrations. Even Chad had looked better afterwards but politely refused any help when he had left.

He wasn't sure what Chad said to his father, but for what it was worth his dad hadn't said anything about earlier, so if he wasn't going to mention it he wouldn't.

Also seemingly because of that his father had momentarily stepped out to take both Tatsuki and Orihime home, and then to drive Orihime back to her place. Before leaving though he had made sure that Ichigo was continuing to help Urd familiarize herself with some of the equipment for minor tasks once she brought a patient to a room. At least he had sense of mind to bring some extra clothes for him to change into when he came back.

As for Urd herself, this evening had been a bit of surprise, as she seemed almost different from yesterday. She hadn't made as many mistakes and her butterfingers syndrome seemed to have disappeared, but she still had an annoying habit of getting too close or somehow or another moving in a way that gave him a view that let him see almost too much.

Finished cleaning up he exited the bathroom and made way for the exit. His father was already in the car waiting for him and he was all to happy to go home and eat. Before he reached the door a voice called out to him.

"Hey, Ichigo. Could you hold up for a moment?", Urd called from the counter. That was another thing. Whenever she addressed him she never included a honorific. Sighing he turned around.

The door next to the counter opened and Urd came through, holding some sort of small package. It was a yellow envelope, the ones with bubblewrap in it, the same type that his father used to send small items or papers to a hospital. This one was bulged, but at the moment Ichigo didn't really care what was in it.

"Don't worry, Ichigo", she said as she handed him the package. "It's nothing major, but considering what I saw earlier it looks like this could be of some use".

Ichigo took the package from her and looked at it, turning it around. "Huh?", he said, confused at what she said. She was already at the door opening it. Looking at him in thought Urd fought to roll her eyes at his thickheadedness. "You'll see what I mean. Open it when your alone, ok?"

"Oh...okay", he said. 'What happened earlier?', he thought. 'Was it about Chad?'. Before he could ask anything else she was gone, the door now shut.

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Ichigo closed the last book, all his homework and studies now complete for the night. To the side of him was his dinner, long since finished. Coming home late last night and this night dinner was already prepared for him and he had brought it into his room to eat while he finished.

He barely had a chance to speak with his mother, who was currently in the bath with his sisters, and his father was in his room with Keiichi. Grabbing his clothes he started preparing for the next day, however something had fallen as he did so. Looking at the floor it was the package Urd gave him.

Picking it up he looked at it again. He then sat on his bed and opened it, curious now to what it was and why Urd had said that it could be of some use. Use for what, he couldn't say.

He pulled out what looked to be some kind of video tape, turning it around to see the title his eyes widened and he became very still.

'She...she gave me a..a..', he couldn't finish, shocked at what he now held in his hand. He continued to gaze at the pink label before he realized something else.

He turned the tape around before looking at the front again and blinked. 'What the hell is this'?

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Next Day, Kurosaki Clinic

Ichigo strode through the doors of the clinic. He walked through the door next to the counter and saw Sakaki minding the counter. Stopping he addressed her, "Hey Sakaki-san, have you seen Urd-san"?

Sakaki looked at Ichigo from her magazine and readjusted her glasses. "She's in Room 3, Kurosaki-kun. She actually told me to tell you she wanted to speak with you when you came in".

He nodded at her and turned to walk to the room. "Thank you, Sakaki-san", he called out.

As he reached the room he felt the embarrassment and shock from yesterday return. Feeling his anger rise he was just about to swing the door open and demand what the hell was she thinking when the door swung open from the inside and a hand shot out and dragged him in by his outstretched arm.

He stumbled into the room and heard the door shut. He turned and opened his mouth however she beat him to it.

"Why didn't you watch it?!", she demanded.

Ichigo stared at her, dumbfounded. Open mouthed he shook his head slightly and raised his arms.

"Why?", he asked back, not understand the nature of the question.

"Because you need all the help you can get", Isshin supplied.

Both sucked in their breaths as they turned to see him next to them. Ichigo recovered first.

"Did you put her up to this, old man?", Ichigo demanded.

"Put her up to? The way you are anyone can see the problem". Ichigo's face went red and opened his mouth to reply.

Urd herself had now recovered as both men went back and forth, Isshin annoyingly calm and Ichigo near ranting. She studied Isshin momentarily. 'That's the second time he's managed to do that'.

"I ain't watching it and that's final!", Ichigo shouted. Crossing his arms he huffed. "It's not like anyone can watch it anyway", he mumbled under his breath, softly but Isshin heard.

"And why is that"?

Ichigo tilted his head before deciding to answer. "It looks like a tape but I've never seen one like it before. It had something called 'Beta' written in english on it".

"Beta", Isshin repeated, and hand coming to his chin.

"What's wrong with that", Urd then asked. Isshin turned to her.

"I haven't see one of those in nearly twenty years", he supplied. "It must be one helluva classic", he grinned.

"Eh?", she squeaked, blinking at this turn of events.

"Don't worry though", Isshin reassured her. Turning back to Ichigo. "We have one stashed away at home somewhere, it probably still works", he said, grinning at his son.

"Haah"?

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Ichigo gawked at what he saw before him. He had just got home and walked into his room when he saw *that*.

Next to his tv was a portable tv stand with some kind of player on it. The player had streaks on it from someone trying to quickly wipe off the dust and the wires went from behind it to his normal tv, almost slapdash.

Taped to his tv screen was a note with a single word scribbled on it.

-Enjoy-

He continued to blink as his carrycase fell from his now limp hand.

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Next day, Kurosaki Clinic-

"Why didn't you watch it!", Urd nearly screamed at him again.

"I had better things to do", he nearly screamed back.

Before she could retort a nurse knocked and opened the door to tell them they needed to use the room.

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Ichigo's Room, Later That Night-

Ichigo turned in his bed, tired but not quite comfortable. It was quiet, with the only noise being his breathing. The lamp was still on but at it's lowest setting, giving off a somber light. Finally sitting up the he looked in the direction of the makeshift setup in the corner next to the front of his bed. He looked at it, paying closer attention to it now in the dim light, and noted the similarities with his current player.

After a few moments of thinking he got off his bed and pulled the tape out from where he stashed it the other day. He looked at the tape, turning it over a few times. After a moment he put it back in the pile before turning to go back to his bed and pauseed. Gazing at the tv again he then turned and pulled the tape out of the pile once more and squatted in front of the stand.

He took a small breath and made sure the tape was facing the correct way and brought it up when he stopped in mid motion.

Slowly he turned his head to the left and looked at his door and noted a small but noticable slit, showing that it wasn't completely closed. As he looked at it the door suddenly shut, making a slitting sound.

-BAM- was the sound the tape made as it hit the ground.

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Kurosaki Clinic, Next Day-

Urd, Ichigo had noted when he first met her, was an utterly gorgeous woman. The kind to inspire many emotions within a man; some of which Ichigo had felt first hand. Currently Ichigo was experiencing another one, but it was one he wouldn't have said that first day. The fire in her eyes was a stark contrast to the chill he felt as she held him by the collar with both hands, again demanding why he didn't watch.

"I...I couldn't", he managed.

Letting him go her eyes squinted as she lowered her shivering head and held in her anger. Raising it she looked him in the eyes.

"Are you gay?", she hissed.

Whoa.

Waittasec.

Any fear Ichigo had felt at that moment melted as his face went red and he sucked in a breath. "I AM NOT!", he roared.

"Prove it", she challenged, unflinching at his display.

"DON'T WORRY I WILL!", he promised. Wait...

"Good to hear it", she clipped. She turned around suddenly and walked briskly to the door. Before exiting she stopped. "I'll be waiting", she said without turning.

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Ichigo stared at his tv and beta player. He stood aside the front of the end of his bed, staring at the tv as if it would come alive to fight him.

It was not late, as when he had stepped into the house he marched to his room with a purpose. He'd take a look at the tape, fast forward it he told himself if he had to, and then just say he watched it tomorrow.

Now all he had to do was actually do it.

About ten minutes later he again moved his head around and looked about his room and the door. Satisfied, he went into his pile of clothes and fished out the tape. Swallowing, he stiffly made way to the beta player and crouched down, level with it.

He took a breath and steadied himself he put the beta tape in the player and stopped as he turned to his door once more.

Nothing. And it was completely closed.

With an almost shaking hand he pushed the tape and and the player pulled the rest in.

-CLICK, KACHINK, CLICK, WHIIRR-

His head dashed side to side and locked on his door, convinced that somebody would enter to hear what made those noises. Though in reality the machine's noises were soft, to Ichigo's ears the sounds made were thunderous.

After a moment of silence he turned his head back to the task at hand. He turned his tv on and lowered the volume, which was making a static noise to go along with the noise on the screen. It all went black as he pressed play.

The beta player whirred, now in motion, and again Ichigo stressed his ears. Hearing nothing but the noise of the beta player he placed his right thumb over the stop button, ready for any sudden surprises. The rest of his fingers now had a solid grip atop the player.

The screen, which was black now that the video started suddenly came to life. The title screen appeared, a lacy font which was now accompanied by a sultry moan.

"UUuuhhhhmmmm", the speakers supplied.

Faster than he could blink Ichigo's left hand hit the the tv's volume button and decreased the already low setting. He took quick, shallow breaths as again his wide eyes peered at his door.

Nothing.

Turning back he continued to squat in front of his tv, right hand on the player and left on the volume. Gulping he slowly turned up the volume as he could barely hear what was being said. Little consolation would be had if he knew that he was currently mimicing what many other boys did before him.

On screen the camera view came upon a bed. Two tanned feet swung into view. Slowly, the camera panned upward, making sure to catch the toned legs.

Ichigo gulped again, suddenly shifting his legs.

The camera continued upward, showing the figure was clothed in some kind of lavender colored fabric, the lower half set aside her thighs to show off her legs and on top her cleavage was completely exposed. With some hesitation on the curves of the woman's breasts the camera finally but slowly panned upwards, and he noted that her shoulders were covered and she had some kind of two toned choker. Attached to the shoulder cloth was a cape. Finally, the camera reached her face.

Ichigo gawked in shock.

Onscreen, Urd smiled and winked at the camera, and for a second Ichigo had thought it was directed at him before brushing the ridiculous thought aside.

"Finally", she said in a low, silky voice. "I was getting *very* worried there for second".

Ichigo blinked again as he shifted once more and she stood from the position of her bed. The onscreen image tracked his movements and smiled. The camera panned out slightly, and he saw her raise a leg at the camera. The foot came closer and closer until he felt something warm on his head.

"Huh", he got out before the rest suddenly came forth.

"ACK!", his hands came to his head as he fell on his back. "What the hell", he grumbled. He looked up and gasped.

From the tv Urd continued to rise outward - literally coming *through* the tv. He shuffled backwards, coming to a stop at the door to his closet, his mind trying to believe what it was now seeing while at the same time telling him that this was familiar in a way.

Finally it was over, and barefoot Urd stood in front of his set, her chest stuck out in a pose with her right hand behind her head and her left at the side of her waist. "Hiii~", she greeted, happy to finally be able to get to business.

She moved forward and crouched over Ichigo and smiled.

"You have no idea how frustrating this has been", she told him softly. When he didn't react she frowned and softly tapped his face with her palm, breaking him out of his stupefied state. Before he could stutter anything, Urd traced a line from his cheek to his mouth and laid a forefinger on his lips, silencing him.

Rising up she stood before him. "Allow me to formally introduce myself", she said with a bit of a theatrical bow with an arm raised and extended. "I am Urd, Goddess Second Class, Limited License".

Ichigo gaped, hearing those words. 'God-goddess? Again!?'

Urd then settled from her pose and kneeled next to him and looked him in the eye. "Ichigo Kurosaki, I have come to you to ask some questions". She then smiled and laid a hand on his cheek once more. "If you're a good boy, I can make it worth your while. And from what I've seen of you, you're gruff, but you're honest".

Ichigo dumbly nodded, trying to keep his mouth shut this time should he again cause his life to turn upside-down again.

Still smiling Urd pulled away and stood. "Now", she started, ready to get to business, "What I have to ask of you is this; recently, about a week or so ago, you were granted a wish, were you not?"

Ichigo nodded.

"The one who granted your wish, Belldandy, when the-"

"Ichigo, honey?", a voice called from outside the room. The shouji door slid open and a figure stepped in. "Dinner's been ready for some time now, why...", Belldandy trailed off, seeing Urd in front of her.

Urd turned and went wide-eyed, mouth open.

Belldandy stared back, not believing what she was seeing. "Urd", she softly said. A few seconds passed when her rose toward her sister, visibly shaking. Blinking her eyes, she saw that Urd was still there. Her eyes then began to water and when she blinked tears fell down her cheeks. "Ne..neesan?", she questioned, her voice trembling. She took one small step forward. Then another. And another. "Neesan!", she cried.

Urd was unmoving, shocked at this turn of events and Belldandy's current state of being.

Arms outstretched, Belldandy completed the distance between them and held onto her elder sister tightly. "Neesan! Neesan!", she continued to cry, burying her face in the crook of Urd's neck.

"Bell, Belldandy", Urd said, so stunned at was she was seeing she failed to hug Belldandy in return and her arms stood open over her sister.

From the floor, Ichigo's mood went from being shocked to horrified to confused to concerned as his mother unexpectantly came in. As his mother continued to hug the woman to the point where her shoulders were quaking, he now made out what she had been crying. 'Neesan'?

He blinked as he tried to get his bearings and sat up. 'Her elder sister? Then, then that means that she's my, she's my-"

"Mom", "Mother", two voices asked from the door.

"Everything ok in here?", another voice came by, his father, concerned at hearing his wife.

Ichigo turned to see everyone enter his room and stare in shock at seeing Belldandy holding onto a strangely dressed woman in the middle of Ichigo's room.

Finally Belldandy's cries faded and she slowly pulled away, her eyes puffy and her cheeks tear streaked. "Neesan", she said again, her hands now rising to rest on Urd's shoulders. "It's been so long". Stepping back now and bringing a hand to wipe away some extra tears Belldandy turned to her stunned family at the door.

"Everyone, I'd like you to introduce you to Urd, my elder sister".

"EEEHHHHHHHHHHHHH?!"

Behind her Urd ignored the reactions from the others and concentrated on Belldandy. "Belldandy, what is going on? Why are you-"

"Urd", Belldandy then said. She smiled as she turned to face her older sister and gestured behind her. "I'd like you to meet my husband and daughters. And I see you've already met my son, Ichigo".

Urd's mouth opened as she blinked. Her mouth opened and closed but no words came out. Her forehead creased as her head tilted slightly to the ground and she began to blink again, almost rapidly before slowing to then speed up again as she tried to process what she had been told before finally she stopped and stood still.

Crack went Urd's brain.

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Urd stood in Belldandy and Isshin's room. It had been several minutes since the shock of her life happened and she had still yet to come completely out of it. Within the room besides herself were Isshin and Belldandy, along with another she had not noticed as of yet.

Before she realized what was happening Isshin was suddenly in front of her and placed his hands on her shoulders. "NEESAN!", he cried, manly tears running down his cheeks. "I'M SO HAPPY FOR YOU!", he cried again, shaking her slightly.

Urd just stood there, allowing herself to be shaken. Finally Isshin stood back and crossed his arms with a contemplative look on his face. "Come to think of it, you never mentioned your sister's name, and I would have been more than happy to ask around about it", he said, bringing a hand up to his chin and rubbing his cheek with his thumb. "But", he then continued, "All's well that ends well", he said, a huge grin on his face.

Isshin then turned and made his way to the door. Reaching it he smiled at his wife and sister-in-law. "You both must have lots to catch up on. Bell, I'll be in the family room with the others until you're ready, ok?"

"Yes", Belldandy said, smiling back. With that, the door slid shut behind her husband.

With that Urd blinked and shook her head. Breathing out slowly she turned to look at Belldandy, who was now walking towards a small...crib? Reaching in her sister brought up a tiny baby. Securing the baby in her arms Belldandy was glowing in a way that she could not remember seeing before.

She then walked up to Urd and angled her arms to give her sister a better view. The baby looked around at his mother with wide eyes and looked at Urd and opened his mouth in a yawn. "Urd, this is Keiichi", she introduced. Urd gazed at Keiichi, stupefied. When Urd didn't reply, Belldandy explained, "It's time for his feeding".

"Bell", Urd then started, "What the hell is going on?", she said, getting to the point.

Belldandy blinked and then answered. "You're in my home, and you've just met my husband and children". She then reached a chair next to her bed and slowly sat in it, careful with Keiichi in her arms.

Urd repressed the urge to pinch the bridge of her nose and took a breath. "Come by again", she asked. Understanding her meaning, Belldandy then spoke aloud the exact words Ichigo used as the wish.

Urd stood stunned. Shaking her head she laid a palm against it. Facing the ground, she muttered, "I can't believe someone could replace their own mother like that", she assumed.

"Urd", Belldandy then said, a bit sharp. Urd snapped to attention, a little shocked at the tone. While it wasn't angry or threatening, there was a sort of heaviness to it that gave her pause.

Gulping herself, Urd then queried, "Maybe we should start at the beginning".

Nodding, Belldandy positioned Keiichi so she could hold him with one arm. With the free hand she then began to unbutton her blouse.

"What are you doing?"

Pulling one side of her blouse aside she reached for the clasp in front of her bra. "It's time for his feeding", she explained again.

Clarity rang within Urd's head.

"I need to sit down".

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"I can't believe it this is soooo exciting!", Yuzu gushed. She and Karin had been literally bouncing up and down the room and on the sofa, utterly astounded at what they saw and heard earlier. Karin was just as excited, and attempted once more to make her way slowly to the hallway to her parents room.

"Karin, I told you let them be for now", Isshin said once more from his seat. When she didn't he reached out and easily managed to pull her back to the sofa with her feet sliding across the floor. Karin crossed her arms as she was pulled back, thwarted yet again. Finally relenting she sat next to her sister.

Off to the side Ichigo sat across from them, on the ground in front of another chair. His head was rolled back on the seat and was staring at the ceiling. He thought about Urd and what it meant now learning of exactly who she was. 'What's going to happen now? What's mom going to do?'

Karin looked at Ichigo and frowned, recalling one odd piece of information. "Hey, Ichi-ni", she said, getting his attention. "What was she doing in your room?"

All eyes turned to Ichigo as he stared back.

Isshin looked at his son and closed his eyes but smiled. Leaning back he opened his eyes and bored them into Ichigo's with his usual humorous intensity. "How sly, my son, I had not known you were progressing so well with your co-worker; to the point where she's already cosplaying for you", he said, his eyebrows moving up and down in a suggestive gesture. "But now that we know she's your aunt I cannot allow this relationship to continue", he stated, nodding.

"WHAT?"

"Bu-bu-bu-but oniisama! What about Orihime-neesama!?", Yuzu cried, scandalized.

"Oh, Ichi-ni...", Karin muttered, palming both hands to her head. "Tatsuki-nee's going to be sooo devastated. First Orihime, then our aunt, how's she supposed to compete"? Karin then smiled evilly and got up to walk to the counter.

"HEY! DON'T JUMP TO CONCLUSIONS!", he shouted as Karin was standing up. "AND YOU!", he turned to his father, "STOP MAKING INSINUATIONS LIKE THAT!" He then turned to see where Karin went and paled. "KARIN! PUT THE PHONE DOWN!"

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"....and he only started to remember last week", Belldandy had said, bringing a close to her story.

Urd sat on the bed, quiet as she processed the entire story. 'Unbelievable', she thought. "So you weren't simply replaced in Masaki's stead", she said, recounting that part. "What about the children then", she questioned. After a moment she looked at Belldandy. "So then were they simply a byproduct of the wish? Since they already existed before and the way the wish was phrased meant that they had to exist here", she reasoned.

"No, Urd", Belldandy then said, lifting Keiichi to her shoulder. Softly rubbing his back she responded, "That's only partially correct".

"In what way?"

"Urd, Masaki was killed when Ichigo was nine, and Karin and Yuzu were already 4 years old".

"But that means", Urd said, suddenly flabbergasted.

Belldandy nodded. She then leaned forward as Keiichi burped and made sure the contents only came onto the cloth on her shoulder.

Urd watched, wide-eyed as she gazed at her nephew. "Belldandy, you know that is next to impossible".

"But it has happened. Four times now."

"But aren't they simply by-"

"Neesan", Belldandy said in that tone again. Softening, she spoke again, "I know what you're thinking, but at the same time you're wrong. Ichigo, Karin, Yuzu and Keiichi: They are my children. They are my blood. I know this, Urd, and even you will feel it as well. They are our blood. Our family", she stated with finality.

"Then in time...", Urd trailed off, eyes wide.

"Yes", Belldandy answered. There were other complications as well, but at the moment Urd was already overwhelmed.

Urd laid her hands on the bed and sat back a bit. Closing her eyes she thought about the implications of what she had learned. Extremely stunning implications. Ever since that event, long, long before she was born, the birthrate among the gods themselves were extremely low. Even amongst the others she and her sisters were thought to be special, but that was thought to having been fathered by Kami-sama himself. To realize that her younger sister had not one, but *four* children... The first three were explainable to an extent, but the fourth? She could only guess how this would be received.

Leaning back to lie on the bed Urd sighed, extremely tired now.
 

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Family Room-

"Will you all calm down, now?!", Ichigo demanded, breathing deeply as his arms were now full of phones and cell phones. He glared at Karin who was back to sitting on the couch, arms crossed and her lower lip stuck out.

"Your no fun at all, Ichi-ni". She then turned to Yuzu. "And you were no help, traitor". Yuzu wilted but kept silent, as she didn't want her brother angry at her or for any problems to happen with Orihime because of her sister's idea of fun.

Before Ichigo could reply he looked behind the girls and their father. Noticing his gaze changing, they followed his line of sight and saw their mother and, if what was said earlier was true, their aunt.

Belldandy stepped forward, making sure all could see her. "Everyone, I would like to introduce you all again to my elder sister, Urd". Urd walked next to Belldandy to look at everyone and smiled as best she could. "Neesan, meet the rest of our family. Isshin, my husband who owns the clinic you were at", Isshin smiled. Gesturing at Ichigo, she introduced him as well. She then turned to the twins, and Karin grinned. "Neesan, this is Karin, and her younger twin Yuzu".

Upon being introduced, Yuzu got up and walked to Urd. Before Urd could say anything Yuzu softly hugged her, stunning her. Taking a step back Yuzu looked up. "It's so great to meet you, auntie!"

Urd looked down at her niece, but at the same time didn't see her. When Yuzu stepped back to look up at her Urd was suddenly reminded of Belldandy when she was that young. As Yuzu greeted her warmly an image of a young Belldandy came to mind, overlaying over her niece. The resemblance was uncanny and it was easy to see why.

'Her eyes', Urd realized. 'They have the same eyes...' Suddenly remembering she had to respond she smiled as best she could and bent over a bit. "And it's nice to meet you Yuzu, we'll have lots of fun together, ok?"

Ichigo looked on as Yuzu happily agreed. He hadn't missed the look on Urd's face when she saw Yuzu nor missed how shaken she was when they walked out. He then watched the byplay as Karin stepped up to her and grinned.

In time they had Urd on the couch and both sisters were bombarding her with questions. Urd did her best to answer them, not sure exactly how to explain everything and sidestepping detailed answers, knowing that her husband and children, outside Ichigo, did not know the truth or their heritage. As she was doing so she couldn't quite keep down a melancholic feeling building within her.

After a half hour of question and answers Urd noticed that Belldandy and Isshin were nowhere to be found. Excusing herself for a moment and asking for where the restroom was, Urd left the family room, intent on finding her sister.

She found them near the kitchen area but stopped before calling to them. Both Isshin and Belldandy were looking at each other, within each others arms, talking softly to one another.

Urd watched, taken aback at what she was witnessing. Neither had noticed her and continued to whisper to each other. Finally Belldandy stood on her tiptoes and Isshin's arms tightened around the small of her back as they kissed each other deeply.

Urd watched, unblinking as her mouth slowly opened. As they continued she finally looked away and felt her heart grow heavy and a large, hollow feeling open within her as another shocking, crushing realization hit her with the force of a freight train. Quietly backing away, she slipped out, slightly stumbling as the two finished.

Isshin and Belldandy entered the family room hand in hand and found both Karin and Yuzu on the sofa, chatting eagerly about their new relative. Both turned as they saw their father and mother walk in. Belldandy looked around, not seeing Ichigo nor Urd.

"Yuzu", she said, turning to the girl, "where's Ichigo"?

Karin piped up before Yuzu could answer, "He left shortly after you and dad did. He said he needed to get to his work and to bed".

Belldandy nodded at that explanation. "What about Urd"?

Yuzu stopped frowning at her sister and looked at her mother and answered. "She walked by a few minutes ago. She said that she needed to step out a bit and would be back a little later".

Belldandy blinked and hummed at that.

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Ichigo turned again, trying to find that sweet spot in the bed. Curling a bit he held on to his pillow a bit tighter. Within moments his body finally relaxed as he could feel himself drift into blessed sleep.

Unknowingly he was now being watched as he started to snore softly.

A few feet away Urd stood, or at least, she attempted to stay standing.

"BURP!", She swayed again, holding a hand to her mouth. In her other hand was a very large bottle of sake, nearly full. Taking another swig, she teetered once more as she glared at her sleeping nephew.

After a day of shock upon shock upon shock the straw that broke the camel's back had been reached. Leaving for a short time Urd had sat in a bar she had discovered recently during her search for Belldandy. After a few hours of sweet talking the barkeeper and nearly cleaning out the bar's stock, she grabbed a few more bottles and left. It was late and she knew she had to make her way back.

It felt good. She could feel the energy in her zigzag walk. Now if she could just make it back to the household in one piece and without falling and emptying her contents in a ditch she had arrived.

The house was quiet, the others already in bed. As quietly as she could she had reached the room, intent on letting Ichigo know how dismayed she was. She now stood over Ichigo's bed, watching him with the last bottle in her hand.

Swaying she continued to glare. 'This boy. *This boy*', she thought.

As long as she had known Belldandy, she had wanted the best for her, she had wanted to protect her, and most of all she wanted to see her happy. More importantly, she had wanted to be *the* one who helped her sister find happiness.

Not that Belldandy had been unhappy. The young girl had found cheerfulness and happiness is just about everything she had come across. Her innocence was just so charming it made Urd love her all the more.

But at the same time, those qualities often led to a bit of frustration for Urd. She could easily see how she was looked at, by both the old and the young. Not to mention those who were close in their age; their happy gazes or competitions with each other to get her and Belldandy to notice them.

And Belldandy had complimented all of them, but at the same time Urd saw that she did not understand why those young gods did what they did in clamoring for her attention. As frustrating as it was, Urd forgave her, as Belldandy was young yet. If anything, it made Urd all the more excited, as the self proclaimed goddess of love was eager to sink her hands into meddling with her sister. For her own good, of course.

Belldandy's naivate was more than up to the challenge, even when she came of age. The number of admirers increased but Belldandy had never acknowledged them in the manner that they had hoped. While it frustrated them, Urd knew it would be all the sweeter to see her precious sister fall in love, and to know it would be because of her would make it all the worthwhile.

Not to mention being able to toy with the object of Belldandy's affections as she would decide if he was good enough for her sister. If he passed muster, then she could really throw herself into it and watch eagerly from the sidelines as two hearts would become one. She could then sit back in content, knowing her sister would be in good hands and that it would all be because of her.

That's gone now.

All Gone.

A tear rolled down her cheek as she tried to steady herself once more.

Because of this boy. This BOY, that she missed it all.

Everything.

Belldandy's first realization that she was in love. Her first kiss. To be there to help it grow to it's full potential and be completely fulfilled! To see if any children would be born...

Gone!

Urd's lips pulled back as she began to growl.

"Ishchigo", she called out. "Wakeup!" When he didn't move, she tried again. "Ishigo!", she said louder. When she didn't move she snarled and reached for him. "Ischi-"

The next thing she knew Ichigo was standing next to her, his arm grasping her's tightly while the other held her back. He blinked, his vision clearing now. "Ur-Urd-san", he said, stunned. He looked at himself and what he was doing. 'Reflex', he had figured. "What are you doing", he questioned before turning to her. "For a moment I thought you were pops", he said. Her head listed a bit as she faced him.

-BURP-

Ichigo suddenly reeled back, falling back on his bed and holding his hands to his face, now awake. "Oh, man, you reek!", he said to her. Noticing her current state he raised an eyebrow. "What happened?"

After a moment Urd regained what composure she had and looked at him, steadying herself.

"Why"?

He blinked. "Why what"?

Urd glared at him. "Why didsh you wish for that? Why'd you wish fer her to be yer mom?"

His gaze at her softened as he realized what she meant. The cause of why she was in her current state made some sense now too.

He looked down. "To be honest, I don't remember making it", he said softly.

"What"?

He looked back up at her. "When it happened, I actually thought she was some kind of ghost. I've seen stuff like that all my life and thought she was just another one. We got to talking, and before I knew it I fell asleep in her lap. I don't remember anything after".

Urd looked at him, incredulous. Blinking, she asked, "You don't remember...anysthing... at all?"

He shook his head at her, feeling for her. "If I had been awake, I know that things would have been different. I would have wished for something else", he explained. A moment passed. "I'm sorry", he then said.

"You're... sorry?", she asked. In her mind she saw Belldandy smiling at her, talking with her. She could see all the other gods vie for her attention, but to no avail as Belldandy's continued to smile.

"You're sorry", she repeated again, a little angrier. Her mind now replayed what she saw earlier, Belldandy holding and kissing her husband. Her *HUSBAND*.... The introduction of Ichigo, her nieces... to see Belldandy show off her newborn to her...

Realization that Belldandy had been pregnant. Four times! And she couldn't be there when Bell needed her. That she missed it ALL!

And that she could never get it back...

"No", she growled. Her breathing became deeper and slower, and Ichigo felt the hairs on his back of his head stiffen further as he could see the change before him. Her eyes then bored into his. "Do you know....what it is you have done?", she asked, slowly, quietly.

A flash caught Ichigo's attention. Then another. Looking around quickly, he couldn't find the source before the next one happened. It was near Urd. Frowning he wasn't sure what he was supposed to be looking at when another happened, but this time he could see the light emanate from her hand.

"Do you?", she growled out.

He numbly shook his head as the next flash was accompanied by a few sparks traveling down Urd's arm.

"You...my *nephew*...have stolen something from me..."

Another bolt. This time several long enough to travel the length of her arm.

Ichigo sat, unsure of what was happening or what to do.

The bolts were now appearing quicker and converging in her hand. He could *hear* it now. 'Wait...no- that was coming from outside!', he realized.

"What you've robbed from me", Urd continued, power building. "Is something that can never be returned!" She then raised her arm.

Ichigo's eyes widened as everything went white.

In her room, Belldandy's eyes snapped open. 'Ichigo!'

Ichigo's stared horrified. As he lost focus his body reacted and moved, diving to the side on the floor. Looking upward he could see the night sky, as the roof had been punctured by...by whatever the hell she did. Turning, he paled as he saw where he was sitting just a few seconds ago, now able to see the back of the house and the trees over the settling smoke.

Urd turned to him, and for the third shock in several minutes he saw she was floating! Rather unsteadily but still in the air.

She looked down at him and the flashes started again. "Stand still and accept your punishment!", she decreed.

Floating near the hole in the wall to cut him off he turned and dashed to his door, sliding it and running out, just missing a smaller bolt sent his way, destroying it.

"You won't escape!", Urd yelled and gave chase, bouncing off the walls in the hallway, cracking it. She threw a few more bolts after him as she chased him into the living room but saw he was already out the front door.

"What's going on?, Karin asked as she and her sister opened the door of thier room at the sounds and feeling their home shake for a second. Coming out they had appeared just in time to see their aunt flying through the hall and into the living room, where they saw a few flashes and heard loud crashing noises.

"Was that?", Karin, said, wide eyed.

"Oniisama!", Yuzu cried as she saw the shattered shouji door to his room and both ran to the living room to find it littered with a few scorchmarks and the chairs overturned. Immediately they saw that the shouji doors at the front were blown outwards, also scorched. They then started to move forward when a voice called out to them.

"Karin, Yuzu!", they stopped at hearing their mother. Quickly turning they saw their mother then rush past them with their father now arriving with Keiichi crying in his arms. They turned to see their mother pause as she stepped just outside, her face widening in horror. Following her, their mouths went agape at what they saw.

In the middle of the open area of the shrine stood Ichigo. Floating above, actually *floating* was Urd!

"She's... flying", Karin said, not believing what she was seeing.

"Why is she after oniisama?!", Yuzu then cried, scared at what was happening.

Ichigo gulped at his predicament. However drunk Urd was when this started didn't affect her so much now, as any drunken motions she had made earlier were now clearing up a bit. 'What to do', he thought furiously. 'I can't go back into the house', he reasoned, 'maybe I can rush outside and let her give chase for awhile'. He stopped as he noticed her again begin to raise her arm.

"Good boy", Urd stated and smiled.

"What, what is she doing?", Yuzu said, afraid.

"Is she some kind of witch or something!?", Karin screeched at seeing Urd begin to glow.

Through this Belldandy had froze as she stepped outside and saw Urd give her son chase. 'Neesan, why?', she had thought. Her body had hurt as she rushed out, still not completely recovered from childbirth, and she found herself aching but pushed it aside, now ready to move out to where both were and stop this. As she started to put a foot forward she saw Urd raise her arm to strike. Ichigo stood, unmoving as he faced upwards.

'Neesan, NO!', she mentally shrieked and felt something click.

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YGGSDRASIL MAINFRAME...

SUBJECT: GODDESS BELLDANDY

GODDESS RANK: FIRST CLASS, UNLIMITED

STATUS: ACTIVE

RECONNECTION STATUS: -00:00:00:00:00:00

COMPLETE-
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Ichigo calmly looked upward, furiously planning his next move as fast as he could. He'd have to make a break as she was in mid swing, he figured. From the looks of it the best option was to run beneath her and try to make way to the gates and just let her chase him. At least if she caught him there'd be no one else around to get hurt.

Urd watched him, guessing what his actions were. Smiling, she gathered the rest of the charge and was about to strike.

'Here it comes!', Ichigo thought and leaned forward, ready to dash.

As he moved his vision was once more blinded by light.

"What the-?", Urd asked, shielding her eyes.

"Huh?", Ichigo remarked, covering his own. 'Did she fire?'

Yuzu and Karin gaped as Isshin turned back to shield Keiichi.

Feeling the light subside both Urd and Ichigo opened their eyes and looked before becoming wide eyed.

Inbetween them stood Belldandy, adorned in her goddess attire. With a stern look she locked gazes with her older sister above her. It was then that Ichigo realized that she was wearing the same thing that she did that night for the wish.

"M-mom?", Karin wondered.

"What...what's going on?", Yuzu wondered.

Karin then started pinching her cheeks. "Wake up, wake up", she told herself.

Isshin stood behind them, watching intently with Keiichi in his arms.

"Neesan", Belldandy began, arms to her sides, "why are you doing this"?

Urd, recovering from her shock then floated down and landed several feet in front of Belldandy. Opening her mouth to explain why she suddenly felt her neck lock up. Surprised, she tried again, and once more found that no words would come forth. Instantly she realized what it was, and looking back at the house she saw that the others were in hearing distance. 'Ultimate Force Protection Program', she thought. Well, there was a one loophole around that particular problem if she guessed right.

<Belldandy>, Urd started, speaking in the language of the gods, <All this is because of that boy! I am going to punish him for what he did!>

<And what is it he has done that is so horrible?>, Belldandy replied in kind. Urd looked at her, incredulous.

<Your right to choose! This wasn't just some oddball wish that was granted! Everything changed for you because of it! You told me how scared you were when you were sent back! Not even Yggsdrasil picked up on that! It simply listed you as missing!>

Ichigo looked at his mother and aunt, arguing in a language he'd never heard before. Or at least Urd was arguing, gesturing as she spoke, however everything she was saying was calmly being rebutted by his mother. This continued on for another minute.

<Not even you could be so accepting of this, Belldandy!>

<Neesan, I know this is difficult to believe, but I am happy here. I love my life with my husband and children. Please, Urd. Please try to understand this.>

Urd paused, again reminded at all she had missed. Though the words were meant to reassure her they cut her with the force of a valkyrie's halberd. Holding back the pain she looked passed Belldandy and centered on Ichigo and felt her hand clench.

<Neesan, please, stand down. I will not allow you to continue this any longer! If you do, neesan, I will stop you.>

Above them, the skies darkened.

Urd closed her eyes, ignoring the empty feeling in her soul. 'So you've made your choice then', she thought. Making a decision, she opened her eyes and stared hard at Ichigo.

"Ichigo Kurosaki", she began and both he and Belldandy readied themselves. Raising her arm, she continued, "I, Urd, hereby-"

The skies above flashed suddenly, catching everyone unaware as a bolt of lightning reached down as if from the heavens above and struck the courtyard, catching Urd dead center.

When the smoke cleared Urd laid facedown within a small crater, twitching every so often.

"Neesan", Belldandy cried, rushing to her. Reaching her Belldandy shook her unmoving form. "Neesan!" Turning her around she could see Urd slightly scorched with her hair somewhat frazzled. Urd moaned in her arms. Turning her eyes slightly she noticed some writing as gasped.

With it being quiet for a moment now the others soon made thier way Belldandy and Urd, now believing it safe to approach with Urd unconscious. Karin was the first to arrive and saw her mother over her aunt. 'She has to be some kind of witch', she had thought. The way she dressed made sense now, but why was her mother dressed similarly now? Coming in for a closer look she stopped just behind her mother.

Yuzu approached, also curious, and like Karin stopped on the other side of their mother. Yuzu though, was staring at her mother's change in clothing, noticing how ornate it was with all the jewelry that accompanied her mother's usual ones.

Ichigo hadn't moved from his spot but was able to see his mother adjust Urd to be more comfortable in her lap. "What happened?", he asked, catching their attention. "Did she misfire?"

"No", Belldandy replied, shaking her head. She turned her head to face her son. "The blast you saw was from Heaven, from the Almighty Himself, Kami-sama."

"Oh", Ichigo said. He then blinked. "Kami-sama?!"

"Kami-sama"?, Karin repeated, incredulous. "Mom, what's going on? What was all that about? Why did she go crazy? Is it because she's some kind of witch? And-", she paused, smelling something in the air. Looking down at Urd she clasped her hands over her nose. "Oh man, she reeks".

Before Belldandy could answer she started to glow. Both Yuzu and Karin stepped back slightly in wonder. As the glow intensified much of the light convered at her back. It was then that both Karin and Yuzu gasped as the golden light gathered into some kind of form that slowly rose out from thier mothers back. As quickly as it began it was over, and behind their mother, bathed in soft light was another woman with wings stretching from her back.

"An...an angel", Yuzu breathed. Karin nodded dumbfounded as well. Ichigo simply stared from where he was at.

She was beautiful, with long blonde wavy hair that curled sharply at the ends. Her wings and arms then fully stretched outwards, as if she hadn't been able to do so in some time. Her breasts were covered by a white cloth that left her shoulders and stomach bare but twirled around her waist, becoming tighter until her lower waist seemed to disappear completely into the thinning twirls of the cloth that lead to their mothers back. Coming to rest from her long stretch she clasped her hands at her chests and looked at the two nearby girls with a joyful expression. Belldandy stared in surprise herself before smiling, knowing immediately that she was eager to meet everyone.

The two girls stared awestruck, too engrossed to feel any other emotion, not even fear. In fact, both would say that they felt safer than they could ever remember feeling, the aura that the angel was giving off seemingly warding away any concerns the girls should have.

It was then that faster than the two could see the angel lowered herself and brought the two to her in a hug, holding each in an arm and nuzzling the two. Both girls found themselves hugging back without hesitation, and after a moment the angel moved back to look at them again, a hand on each of the girls shoulders.

"Mo-mother, who is she", Yuzu asked.

"She is my angel, Holy Bell", she answered, feeling Holy Bell's joy.

"Then, she, she is an angel", Karin stuttered. She then managed to move her eyes away from the sight to look at her mother and really looked at her. "Wait, your angel?", she questioned.

Belldandy then saw Yuzu turned to her too, also mouthing what her sister had said, her eyes wide. "Karin, Yuzu", she said making sure that she had their attention. Holy Bell then moved so she could be behind both girls so they could see their mother. "She is my angel because, you see, I am a goddess".

Both looked at her blankly.

Ichigo looked on, knowing that the two girls were trying to correctly understand what they were being told.

"Amazing, isn't it", he heard. Turning, he saw his father captivated by the sight. Within his arms Keiichi was quiet but awake.

"Yeah, it is", Ichigo finally said, turning back to his sisters. He then finally moved from his spot to get a better look at Urd, who was still out of it.

"A...", Yuzu started.

"...goddess?", Karin finished, blinking.

"Yes", Belldandy told them gently and smiled. "Goddess of the Present, First Class, Unlimited".

"Were...were you always a goddess?", Yuzu asked, turning back to look at Holy Bell.

"Yes".

"Then, does this mean that the witch is too?", Karin then asked.

"Karin", her mother chided. After a moment she looked down at her sister. "She is Urd, Goddess of the Past, Second Class, Limited. She is my elder sister".

"But if she's your sister why would she be trying to hurt oniisama?", Yuzu asked.

To the side Ichigo winced, remembering what Urd had told him. 'My fault', he knew.

"She stinks of booze too", Karin then supplied. "Mom, if both of you are goddesses, then why are you-"

"Um....uhhhhhh", Urd moaned in Belldandy's lap. "Bell...Belldandy", she groaned. Both Yuzu and Karin lept behind their mother to be between her and Holy Bell at seeing her regain consciousness.

"Neesan", Belldandy gently prodded.

"Bell...", Urd blinked, trying to clear her vision. Seeing Belldandy blur into focus above her she saw Holy Bell look over Belldandy at her, both looking at her in concern. "Oh, what a headache", she murmured, placing a hand against her forehead. After a moment she tried to sit upwards and Belldandy supported her. Once upright Urd, turned to Belldandy. "Bell...", she said again and looked around.

Seeing where she was as well as seeing all eyes on her, including Holy Bell she sighed as she with sobering clarity remembered exactly where she was and what had happened. "Not one of my better nights", she said softly, mortified now that the drunken haze and anger had long since subsided.

"No, neesan, it isn't. What were you thinking", she asked.

Urd looked at her, noting her tone as one she had not heard from her before. She hummed in realization at why and closed her eyes and placed a hand on her sister's face.

"Belldandy", she started, "Your entire life has been....", she trailed off as she remembered that the others were here. "Your life as I once knew it is completely different now", she said, phrasing her words carefully with a soft but saddened expression.

Belldandy's face softened at that, knowing Urd had had too many shocks hoisted on her at once.

Removing her hand she then got to her knees to rise up. "And it seems", she gruffed as she stood, "that I overreacted a bit".

"A bit", Karin said incredulously. "A bit!?" Karin then moved aside so Urd could see her. "Do you call *that* just a bit?!", she gestured back to the house. "Look at our home! Just who is going to fix it!?"

"Karin", Belldandy again chided. "It will be ok, trust me".

"But..."

"Trust me", she again asked.

Urd then moved hesistantly, getting her bearings. "At least...at least it can't get any worse", she reasoned, calm enough now to be ashamed of her earlier anger.

"Hey", Isshin said, adjusting Keiichi in his arms and getting a better look at the crater. "What's this?"

The others gathered, looking at where Isshin was facing. On the ground seemed to be a series of ornate lettering that they had never seen before. Urd looked at it and gawked in horror.

"What does it say", Yuzu asked.

"As a result of Urd, Second Class, Limited's misuse of powers, tampering and leaving her post for extended period without permission has resulted in further server malfunctions and multiple crashes throughout the system", Belldandy supplied. "Neesan", she asked, turning to Urd, realizing what it meant.

"Heh", Urd started. "Heh, hehehe, haha", she started laughing until it built into a crecendo that ended suddenly with a sob. Karin looked at her strangely, slowly backing away.

"It looks", Urd supplied as she got ahold of herself, "It looks as if I'm stuck here for awhile then".

Karin frowned, and even Yuzu didn't look that happy at hearing that. Karin then crossed her arms and humphed. "At least you'll be around to help us clean up your mess", she said. "In the meantime what's going to happen to us? What are we going to do until everything's fixed", she asked, noting again all the holes and scorch marks that dotted their home. She stopped as she felt a hand rest on her should and found her mother looking at her.

"It's ok, Karin, that won't be necessary", she told her daughter.

"How?", she asked.

"You'll see", Belldandy then said as she stood up. Holy Bell had then released Karin and Yuzu and moved to her position behind Belldany. With that they walked towards their home. As they walked Holy Bell then turned to Karin and winked, causing her to blush.

Isshin and Ichigo watched Belldandy walk toward their home and come to a stop, wondering what she meant.

She stood ten feet away from their home and clasped her hands to her chest, closing her eyes. After a moment she opened them and turned to Holy Bell. "Are you ready?"

Holy Bell nodded to her, ready. "It's been so long", Belldandy said to her and smiled. "Let's see if we can remember."

Turning back to face her home she raised her arms outward. "Though destroyed in anger and grief, the love of what held this home together remains powerful" she said, her voice taken on an unearthly echo, surprising her family. "Oh spirit of the temple, hear me", she commanded. "Restore our battered home to the beauty it once was!"

From there, almost hesitantly, strands of light began to emanate from her hands They kept flowing forth as they grew in number and surrounded the temple and courtyard, including the area Isshin, Urd, and her children were at. Aside from Urd, they stared, amazed.

It was then that she and Holy Bell began to sing and the glowing mist began to swirl about. Around the temple and around them, the pieces of their home began to rise and move back to their home, almost searching for where they were supposed to be.

Karin gaped at the display and felt her mouth drop as she saw the tiling and crater begin to refill itself and realign. She looked back at her mother, unable to find the words at what she was seeing or hearing.

Ichigo watched in awe, the sound of his mother's singing voice soothing and calming him in a way that he couldn't describe. It made him feel oddly nostalgic as the ethereal song enveloped him completely, reminding him that his mother loved to sing, and he, at least his old self, had loved to hear her, though it was nothing like this! He could definately look forward to more in the future, he realized none too unhappy. Having to tear his attention away he saw his sisters watching in spellbound, utterly in awe of their mother. Turning his head head the other way he saw his father next to him.

Isshin was staring at his wife with a small smile and glazed eyes. Ichigo would comment later that his father was completely enraptured by it, but that was only half of it.

Isshin found himself falling in love again.

Keiichi was quiet, breathing softly as the melody calmed him to sleep.

It was then that the light faded and their home stopped glowing as Belldandy's song came to an end.

-THUD-

Ichigo and Yuzu gaped at what they saw, not hearing Karin fall on her behind as they each could see that their home was completely restored. From how it looked it not only appeared as if nothing had happened but it looked better than any of the children could remember it being.

Belldandy then opened her eyes and thanked Holy Bell, who happily nodded to her. She turned to her family and smiled, walking to them.

Without warning Karin leapt to her feet and ran past her mother to their home, pausing to inspect the door before rushing inside. Yuzu followed shortly, pausing only to look at her aunt before she ran after Karin. Karin came back out before Yuzu reached the door and in a disbelieving voice, uttered, "It's fixed... Everything is fixed." She turned to Yuzu, "It's like everything is brand new!"

"M-mom?", Ichigo said as his mother came near, stunned himself. Before she could answer Holy Bell moved from behind her to Ichigo and drew him to her in a hug.

"Gack!", Ichigo sputtered, stunned. He soon calmed, and to his surprise found himself hugging back. After a moment and one last nuzzle Holy Bell moved away from him and to Isshin and Keiichi. She briefly hugged a blushing Isshin and looked at the sleeping baby, cooing him with a soft expression, much alike his wife.

To the side, Urd watched. She caught the looks the girls gave her and didn't blame them. Sighing, she looked upward into the night.

'I really blew it'.

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Karin turned in her bed again, trying to feel the small bump she knew was there but couldn't seem to find now. Their room, like the rest of the house, looked brand new. To both her and Yuzu's shock this included their clothes and toys as well.

In spite of that she was frustrated. That witch was going to be staying with them, using one of the extra guest rooms. "I can't believe she is staying with us", she said aloud.

"Hmm", Yuzu said from her bed, now pulling the blankets up to her head and curling in the blankets. She was frightened when she thought about it, as images of Urd chasing her came to mind.

"Even after all she did, chasing Ichi-nii", she grumbled. "Hope she tries that again, 'cause next time she'll learn the hard way", she said, her fist striking her palm.

"Ka-Karin, don't say that, don't you remember, she's a goddess too".

Karin growled, unhappy. "No one does that to Ichi-nii, but me".

Yuzu smiled a little at that. Changing the subject to one that excited her, she said, "It's just so amazing about mom!"

Karin's face softened. "Yeah. I always knew mom was special", she said, looking at the ceiling. She then grinned. Just thinking about how mom completely fixed the house with her magic -MAGIC-, was getting her revved up. "Oooh man, it really is exciting, isn't it?", she said with clenched fists.

Yuzu nodded. "It's sooo romantic, hearing that about dad finding mom".

Karin nodded herself, "Yeah, dad must be the luckiest guy in the universe right now".

Both sisters continued to converse amongst themselves now, all exhaustion gone.

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Ichigo stared at the ceiling to his room. He was currently in his bed, under the blankets with his arms around his head. Slowly he panned his head around his room and noted nothing looked out of place. He found himself marveling again at any lack of damage, and remembered that when he scrambled away there was no ceiling and the wall next to him and his bed littered the courtyard.

'It's like it was nothing but a bad dream', he thought. He soon found himself replaying what had happened once everyone was inside the house. Holy Bell had reentered their mother and they each sat in the living room.

Their mother then explained who she was, really, informing them about her status as a goddess. She had then said due to circumstances beyond her control she had found herself stranded on Earth unable to go home and cut off from her powers. It was sometime soon after that she had met their father.

'Not a lie', Ichigo thought, 'but not the complete truth either'.

Belldandy had found herself surprised to hear from Urd that some time after she had left that time between Heaven and Earth had been synched. Again, she had phrased it to tell the truth but not give any mention of the wish, in fact it made it seem like it was another strange occurrence that happened later. When the others asked for clarification Belldandy had mentioned that time is a tricky thing when dealing with Heaven and Earth. Urd then supplied that for them, Belldandy was gone a little longer than what they realized, so it was a complete shock to her and she reacted badly.

Understatement to be sure. But Urd had then apologized profusely for her actions and even apologized to him.

He blew out a breath at that, all of a sudden feeling guilty. Despite being attacked and nearly fried, he found that he couldn't be mad at his aunt, he stopped as he again replayed that reminder, his *aunt* for what happened. He knew that if he was in her position he most likely would've done a lot worse. Much worse and more, thinking of his family.

He slowly slipped into sleep, his last thoughts wondering what was going to happen now that the cat was out of the bag.

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It was quiet. A nice, cool breeze was going by as the night sky had cleared and the moon was free to give it's light. A soft, pale light fell upon their home as they watched, peacefully.

On the engawa Isshin sat with his wife, who sat between his legs in his embrace. Isshin nuzzled the crook of her neck and kissed her jaw, feeling her shiver in delight. They stayed that way for a few more moments before Isshin broke the silence.

"Y'know, she's everything you described her to be", he whispered.

After another moment, she responded. "Are you angry?"

"No. Despite what happened with Ichigo, none of the children were hurt, and I could care less about the house as long as you and the others are ok". He nuzzled her again. "Besides, everything is back in one piece".

After a moment he continued. He sighed. "Ahhh, Ichigo, I wonder what he did exactly to set her off so. Not just that, but he didn't seem all that shocked about everything you told him."

Belldandy breathed out, repressing a shiver.

"He already found out about you, didn't he?", he questioned.

"Yes", she answered him.

"Well, that probably explains his current behavior then", Isshin correctly guessed for the wrong reason. "You know you could have simply told me about it, you didn't have to keep that burden on yourself".

"It was something that he had to deal with himself", Belldandy answered, grateful that her husband had assumed the correct answer without knowing the right question to ask.

Behind them, watching them silently was Urd. She watched them as they talked and again thought about everything that had happened.

She sighed at all the revelations. Bell, married. A family. Four children who were indeed her flesh and blood; her nephews and nieces. She felt with a heavy heart the looks that her nieces had given her - fear, anger, mistrust. All because she blew her temper.

'It's going to take some time, but I will fix it', she promised.

She looked again upon Isshin and Belldandy, aglow in the moon's light as they kissed. She smiled, a tight one, and fought the rising hollow feeling and tried to be glad for her sister's happiness.

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Elsewhere-

In his bed, another figure tossed and turned, moaning in pain at each movement. These last few days had been utter hell, and again the night was proving to be the worst enemy he knew.

He groaned as lifted his arms to fix his pillow and bit back tears at the motion and cursed his predicament again.

"Ichigo Kurosaki", Seiji Yokomura strained, "I'll get you for this..."

-To Be Continued...
 

nantukoprime

Well-Known Member
#5
D'aawwww.

Feel good moment time.

Have to say though, this fic is getting a lot more into AMG! than I had expected.

Bleach working its way back in eventually?
 

nick012000

Well-Known Member
#6
Umm. Didn't Betamax go under because they refused to allow porn to be sold on the format?

Also, a thought: Barragan, God of Hueco Mundo, vs any of the three sister-goddesses of Time. :p
 

GenocideHeart

Well-Known Member
#7
nick012000 said:
Umm. Didn't Betamax go under because they refused to allow porn to be sold on the format?

Also, a thought: Barragan, God of Hueco Mundo, vs any of the three sister-goddesses of Time. :p
Depends. If they are under their seals, they'd probably lose after a protracted fight. The Goddesses are heavily limited when sealed up - I'm pretty sure they can only use between 10% and 25% of their actual power, tops, if even that. Otherwise it'd be hard to explain how at times they struggle with relatively harmless stuff by divine points of view.

Unsealed, now? Total rape, and Barragan's the one who'll have trouble sitting afterwards. Unsealed goddesses of Urd and Belldandy's class are capable of planetary destruction at a bare minimum if they really get going. And while Skuld has less destructive power per se, she makes up for it with her inventions being able to catastrophically damage reality itself.

Not to mention gods and goddesses are technically either ageless or so tremendously long lived that it'd take Barragan way too long to get his power to work on them in any noticeable fashion. He'd get flattened long before that.
 

nick012000

Well-Known Member
#8
GenocideHeart said:
nick012000 said:
Umm. Didn't Betamax go under because they refused to allow porn to be sold on the format?

Also, a thought: Barragan, God of Hueco Mundo, vs any of the three sister-goddesses of Time.? :p
Depends. If they are under their seals, they'd probably lose after a protracted fight. The Goddesses are heavily limited when sealed up - I'm pretty sure they can only use between 10% and 25% of their actual power, tops, if even that. Otherwise it'd be hard to explain how at times they struggle with relatively harmless stuff by divine points of view.

Unsealed, now? Total rape, and Barragan's the one who'll have trouble sitting afterwards. Unsealed goddesses of Urd and Belldandy's class are capable of planetary destruction at a bare minimum if they really get going. And while Skuld has less destructive power per se, she makes up for it with her inventions being able to catastrophically damage reality itself.

Not to mention gods and goddesses are technically either ageless or so tremendously long lived that it'd take Barragan way too long to get his power to work on them in any noticeable fashion. He'd get flattened long before that.
Planet-destroying attacks? Won't do them any good if he ages them to nothing before they hit him. :p

Besides, I'm pretty sure they can die, so his power can kill them. "Kido might last a thousand years, but it doesn't last forever," and all that.
 

holyknight

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#9
GenocideHeart said:
nick012000 said:
Umm. Didn't Betamax go under because they refused to allow porn to be sold on the format?

Also, a thought: Barragan, God of Hueco Mundo, vs any of the three sister-goddesses of Time.á :p
Depends. If they are under their seals, they'd probably lose after a protracted fight. The Goddesses are heavily limited when sealed up - I'm pretty sure they can only use between 10% and 25% of their actual power, tops, if even that. Otherwise it'd be hard to explain how at times they struggle with relatively harmless stuff by divine points of view.

Unsealed, now? Total rape, and Barragan's the one who'll have trouble sitting afterwards. Unsealed goddesses of Urd and Belldandy's class are capable of planetary destruction at a bare minimum if they really get going. And while Skuld has less destructive power per se, she makes up for it with her inventions being able to catastrophically damage reality itself.

Not to mention gods and goddesses are technically either ageless or so tremendously long lived that it'd take Barragan way too long to get his power to work on them in any noticeable fashion. He'd get flattened long before that.
Yep, and knowing things, that will likely meant that Aizen WILL Pull something REALLY insane, if he sees, or believes that the "Denizens of Heaven" are moving against him and his ambitions. There it has to be a sense of equilibrium on the forces in play here. Add, that likely the Ultimate Force will restrain the aiding capacities of the Norns and fellow divinities on Midgard and Seireitei/Rukongai

Also, depending that if some Demons do make contact with Aizen or some of his underlings, i can see a generous faction of the bigger opposers to Daimakaichou Hild's rule on Nifelheim making deals with Aizen in order to rise on the totem pole, or ensure that Hild gets deposed, and causing no end of problems on Midgard in order to have the Valkyries and God/dess buried on work and distracted from whatever Aizen's doing or planning....







PS: Urd on Nurse Uniform!?
 

GenocideHeart

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#10
nick012000 said:
Planet-destroying attacks? Won't do them any good if he ages them to nothing before they hit him.? :p

Besides, I'm pretty sure they can die, so his power can kill them. "Kido might last a thousand years, but it doesn't last forever," and all that.
Being able to age them means nothing if he takes the better part of a day to age them to the point of it being fatal. We're talking about Goddesses who were around since before there was even civilization, possibly even before there were HUMANS on Earth. Barragan, so far, hasn't had to age anything that has lived longer than 2000 or so years, tops. With the Goddesses, we can comfortably assume 20k years if what Marller said about her having known Urd for at least that long is true. And that's only how long they have known each other, not how long they have lived.

Personally, I see Barragan TRYING to do it and getting blown away right after he realizes it's taking him too long to age them to nothing...

(for the record, Hild has been around for a ridiculously long time easily calculated in millions of years, and the god Celestin from the anime was at least 65 million years old, since he at one point mentions having seen the dinosaurs go extinct.)
 

Estrecca

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#11
GenocideHeart said:
Personally, I see Barragan TRYING to do it and getting blown away right after he realizes it's taking him too long to age them to nothing...
It may go a bit like this:

BARRAGAN used RESPIRA!

*it is not very effective!*

*Enemy URD is wrinkled!*

Enemy URD used RIGHTEOUS FEMALE WRATH!

*it is super-effective!*

BARRAGAN would like to faint now.
 

Darkforce222

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#12
Trying to work out A!MG power levels in relation to any other series(uh, including itself most of the time) is just a huge headache.

Checking to see if this fic is still awesome. Unsurprisingly, it is.
 

CatOnFire

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#13
Awesome.

Quite frankly the only Bleach fanfic I'm actively following. I hope to see more soon.

As Heaven seemingly has a totally hands off approach in Bleach canon. I say so do to the fact that Hell is somewhat active so the opposite has to be true. One might consider Seireitei/Rukongai a form of Purgatory for those not blessed or damned enough to accend/deccend. I'd like to see how this effects this alterverse.
 

Waruiko

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#14
CatOnFire said:
Awesome.

Quite frankly the only Bleach fanfic I'm actively following. I hope to see more soon.

As Heaven seemingly has a totally hands off approach in Bleach canon. I say so do to the fact that Hell is somewhat active so the opposite has to be true. One might consider Seireitei/Rukongai a form of Purgatory for those not blessed or damned enough to accend/deccend. I'd like to see how this effects this alterverse.
Soul Society - The Mail Room Of The Dead
 

lask

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#15
This is awesome, and the only possible critizism I could find would be this

Urd stood stunned. Shaking her head she laid a palm against it. Facing the ground, she muttered, "I can't believe someone could replace their own mother like that", she assumed.
Concidering her relationship with her own mother, I would be shooked if she hadn't wished for that very thing countless times.

She would still make incorrect assumptions, but it wouldn't be, 'what kind of freak would do such a thing."
 

zerohour

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#16
You have the worst timing, I found this 10 minutes before class started.

I skipped my first class. <_<


Is it just me, or was this chapter significantly longer than previous ones? Maybe it just seems that way because so many things were happening,w hile previous chapters primarily focused on one thing at a time.


Who do you guys think Urd will try to repair the relationship with first? Isshin, Yuzu and Karin, Belldandy, or Ichigo?


Now that the cat's out of the bag, I'm wondering how long it takes before someone, probably Karin, decides to see if they have divine powers as well. Then again, given how Yokomura seems set on getting revenge on Ichigo, Ichigo might be the first to tap into the OMGWTFPWN potential.



Speaking of Yokomura, I'm guessing that next chapter will feature his revenge? The only question is who the target will be.

Belldandy and Urd are out, since Urd would fuck up anyone trying to hurt her sister. Keiichi's safe since he's pretty much always with Belldandy.

Isshin could definitely hold his own, so he's safe.

Yuzu and Karin... maybe, but I think Belldandy would prevent it.

Asano, Kojima, and CHad are probably all in the clear, since attempts against them, have already failed.

That leaves Orihime, Tatsuki, Yuuya, and Hideo as the remaining targets. Among those four, I think Orihime is the least likely. Yuuya and Hideo, I'm not really sure about, since they were just introduced. I included them since it would be an interesting scene where Ichigo frantically checking on everyone he knows, before realizing he's not thinking about his alternate life.

Tatsuki is probably the most likely, since it's obvious she's really close to Ichigo, and taking her hostage would mean they had one less person to deal with when Ichigo shows up.




Random Thoughts:

-Does Ichigo have a fan club? He's probably one of the top martial artists at the school, and I could see several girls being interested in him. Bonus points if someone confesses their love to him, trying to catch up to Orihime and Tatsuki.

-What color would his spirit thread thing be? He's obviously not a normal human human, and if we take red to be the color of divine power, Ishida might show up early.

-Where's Chizuru, and why hasn't she become Ichigo's BFF to try and score a MILF?

-How long before Urd starts thinking she's old and tries to find herself a boytoy? Alternatively, how long until Kojima starts hitting on her?
 

nick012000

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#17
zerohour said:
You have the worst timing, I found this 10 minutes before -Where's Chizuru, and why hasn't she become Ichigo's BFF to try and score a MILF?
Has Chizuru been seen hitting on anyone but Orihime? Odds are, she'd still continue groping Orihime, and getting beaten down by Tatsuki (since Ichigo's too honorable to hit a girl).

I wouldn't be surprised if Isshin heard about it and gave Chizuru the shovel speech, though. Belldandy seems too nice to do so. :p

I also wouldn't be surprised if she made a loud speech about how she'd be perfectly willing to join Ichigo's harem if it'd mean she'd be able to be with two beauties. I sort of wonder how Tatsuki would react to Chizuru groping her like she usually does Orihime. ;)
 

holyknight

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#18
zerohour said:
Who do you guys think Urd will try to repair the relationship with first?á Isshin, Yuzu and Karin, Belldandy, or Ichigo?

-How long before Urd starts thinking she's old and tries to find herself a boytoy?á Alternatively, how long until Kojima starts hitting on her?
No idea with who she will start. However, we're talking of Urd here. Regardless of what she does, there its an EXTREMELY high chance of whatever she concocted blowing up to high heaven, and causing some really weird shit on the process.

Oddly, i can see here that Karin its highly likely to act with her aunt like Ichigo deals with Isshin's antics. For Urd, it will remind her so much of Skuld sometimes, while Yuzu its like a reflection of Belldandy, downright to the cringing part when she chastised Urd's most wild stunts on that kind but firm tone of voice.

........Karin with a debugging hammer......kukukuku........

Kojima.....that will be interesting to see indeed.

Chizuru? oddly, i can see her acting like an obedient puppy around Belldandy. Its rather hard to go perv on someone else's mom, and one what treats you so kindly that you can't even go perv mentally without feeling like a heel. Urd on the other side...... :rofl:




PS: I just cringed to the fact that Kisuke Uruhara AND Skuld will meet.
 

Nikas_Zekeval

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#19
Why Kurosaki-kun, I get along just fine with your younger aunt!

Yeah, lots of people screaming, crying, and running away.

Of course the two going at it hammer and tongs over using their OWN idea to 'help' Ichigo would be scary too.

Kisuke: "Shattered Shaft. Simple and time tested."

Skuld: "And turns X% into Hollows. We'll use my Respirtualizer Mark IV."

Kisuke: My, my, Mark IV? Did the first three blow themselves up?


Though Skuld showing up might be, interesting. Would she be less a pain given that any 'perversion' is already done? Or is she gonna be on Rukia instead for sneaking into her 'innocent nephew's room' late at night?
 

Waruiko

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#20
Speaking of Yokomura, I'm guessing that next chapter will feature his revenge? The only question is who the target will be.

Belldandy and Urd are out, since Urd would fuck up anyone trying to hurt her sister. Keiichi's safe since he's pretty much always with Belldandy.

Isshin could definitely hold his own, so he's safe.

Yuzu and Karin... maybe, but I think Belldandy would prevent it.

Asano, Kojima, and CHad are probably all in the clear, since attempts against them, have already failed.

That leaves Orihime, Tatsuki, Yuuya, and Hideo as the remaining targets. Among those four, I think Orihime is the least likely. Yuuya and Hideo, I'm not really sure about, since they were just introduced. I included them since it would be an interesting scene where Ichigo frantically checking on everyone he knows, before realizing he's not thinking about his alternate life.

Tatsuki is probably the most likely, since it's obvious she's really close to Ichigo, and taking her hostage would mean they had one less person to deal with when Ichigo shows up.
see
In front of him tied tightly to a chair was the first of three pitiful pieces of trash that had the misfortune of getting in his way. While it was not the first two he wanted, the large boy in front of him would do nicely as a warmup for Ichigo Kurosaki and Tatsuki Arisawa.
He might try to target a friend, but most of his talk felt like him freaking out and spewing shit just for the sake of it. If he did target someone else I think it would be more as a set up for a trap then an attempt to hurt Ichigo through his friends and family. He was able to build up his little gang without attracting the police so for and while a kid might keep quiet about being grabbed out of fear a parent of any real worth won't ignore their kid going missing or being murdered. Chad seems to live on his own and Yokomura wouldn't know about the martial background of Tatsuki's family in this fic, or much of anything about Ichigo's home life beyond that he has sisters to use as leverage against Ichigo and his family to keep them quiet. Yokomura may not be smart, but he doesn't strike me as stupid or lacking common sense.
 

holyknight

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#21
Waruiko said:
Speaking of Yokomura, I'm guessing that next chapter will feature his revenge? The only question is who the target will be.

Belldandy and Urd are out, since Urd would fuck up anyone trying to hurt her sister. Keiichi's safe since he's pretty much always with Belldandy.

Isshin could definitely hold his own, so he's safe.

Yuzu and Karin... maybe, but I think Belldandy would prevent it.

Asano, Kojima, and CHad are probably all in the clear, since attempts against them, have already failed.

That leaves Orihime, Tatsuki, Yuuya, and Hideo as the remaining targets. Among those four, I think Orihime is the least likely. Yuuya and Hideo, I'm not really sure about, since they were just introduced. I included them since it would be an interesting scene where Ichigo frantically checking on everyone he knows, before realizing he's not thinking about his alternate life.

Tatsuki is probably the most likely, since it's obvious she's really close to Ichigo, and taking her hostage would mean they had one less person to deal with when Ichigo shows up.
see
In front of him tied tightly to a chair was the first of three pitiful pieces of trash that had the misfortune of getting in his way. While it was not the first two he wanted, the large boy in front of him would do nicely as a warmup for Ichigo Kurosaki and Tatsuki Arisawa.
He might try to target a friend, but most of his talk felt like him freaking out and spewing shit just for the sake of it. If he did target someone else I think it would be more as a set up for a trap then an attempt to hurt Ichigo through his friends and family. He was able to build up his little gang without attracting the police so for and while a kid might keep quiet about being grabbed out of fear a parent of any real worth won't ignore their kid going missing or being murdered. Chad seems to live on his own and Yokomura wouldn't know about the martial background of Tatsuki's family in this fic, or much of anything about Ichigo's home life beyond that he has sisters to use as leverage against Ichigo and his family to keep them quiet. Yokomura may not be smart, but he doesn't strike me as stupid or lacking common sense.
He may be an idiot, but knowing how things work, its likely that he, or one of his goons may end finding the CD where Mara was locked, or one of the CD that summon her?
 

Nikas_Zekeval

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#22
One thought just hit me, Ichigo and his siblings are now part god, part soul reaper. Specifically they are part NORSE god, you know Valhalla, Valkyries, and Berserkers? If the 11th finds out his heritage will they try to make Ichigo their patron saint?
 

lask

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#23
No, because, while they do have some agressive tendencies, the norms are just too nice. Skuld could win over most of 12, and Urd would make herself the hero of the Kido Core. Belldandy, unforutitously, could only be the patron saint of 4th division.

Dispite all efferts to the contrarry, forth does not kick butt. So Urd and Skuld would have to fix them... :ph43r:
 

CatOnFire

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#24
Nikas_Zekeval said:
One thought just hit me, Ichigo and his siblings are now part god, part soul reaper. Specifically they are part NORSE god, you know Valhalla, Valkyries, and Berserkers? If the 11th finds out his heritage will they try to make Ichigo their patron saint?
What is worrisome would be if they found out the breeding of Divinity and Shinigami resulted in a birth rate equal to that of Human and Human. Or worse Hild came to the same conclusion...

Urd: My God Mom. What have you unleashed!?

Hild: *pouts* But I think Kenpachi-kun and Mara-chan make a fine couple.
 

Wheeljack

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#25
nick012000 said:
Umm. Didn't Betamax go under because they refused to allow porn to be sold on the format?
No, there were other reasons Betamax went under, though in terms of quality it was better than VHS. As for the porn bit, they did through their weight on VHS, from IIRC, it was an easier format.



CatOnFire said:
As Heaven seemingly has a totally hands off approach in Bleach canon. I say so do to the fact that Hell is somewhat active so the opposite has to be true. One might consider Seireitei/Rukongai a form of Purgatory for those not blessed or damned enough to accend/deccend. I'd like to see how this effects this alterverse.
Why are you looking at my notes? :p

Heaven back in the day was a bit more involved though. Who do you think picked Central 46...? Uh, yeah...

lask said:
This is awesome, and the only possible critizism I could find would be this
Urd stood stunned. Shaking her head she laid a palm against it. Facing the ground, she muttered, "I can't believe someone could replace their own mother like that", she assumed.

Concidering her relationship with her own mother, I would be shooked if she hadn't wished for that very thing countless times.

She would still make incorrect assumptions, but it wouldn't be, 'what kind of freak would do such a thing."
I like this, and wouldn't mind changing it to this.

What say the rest? Yay? Nay?


zerohour said:
You have the worst timing, I found this 10 minutes before class started.

I skipped my first class.
Aye, I remember doing that for Albert Green/Skeet's A Thin Veneer.


Is it just me, or was this chapter significantly longer than previous ones? Maybe it just seems that way because so many things were happening,w hile previous chapters primarily focused on one thing at a time.
It's not just you. My outline on this exploded and ended up actually being bigger in size than Chapter 3.

I am somewhat worried though.

I have some work on the outline started on Chapter 6, and at this moment so far this looks to be much, much shorter than the last two chapters.

I know that some chapters just end up exploding, but I hope that most don't think that *every* chapter will be a 100kb+ monstrosity everytime, as I really don't want to disappoint anyone in that way.

-Does Ichigo have a fan club? He's probably one of the top martial artists at the school, and I could see several girls being interested in him. Bonus points if someone confesses their love to him, trying to catch up to Orihime and Tatsuki.
Currently I don't really have anything like this. To be honest, I've thought about it, but I wasn't really sure how to keep it without having it explode in my face, y'know?

Part in mind because we know Urd could potentially exploit it and it would give me some material that would give me some original stories for this, but I find that I'm not exactly sure how to go about it that's not to different that what others have done.

Any suggestions for this? Or should I simply not go this route as I am at the moment?



-What color would his spirit thread thing be? He's obviously not a normal human human, and if we take red to be the color of divine power, Ishida might show up early.
This is something that I actually forgot about. I'm open to what ideas others may have on it, but it won't show up for quite awhile.

-Where's Chizuru, and why hasn't she become Ichigo's BFF to try and score a MILF?
Unfortunately, I have her pegged as being introduced when entering high school, as I have her at a different junior high. I did have this idea though of her seeing Orihime for the first time at the school orientation and completely misinterpreting Tatsuki around her.

Nikas_Zekeval said:
Though Skuld showing up might be, interesting. Would she be less a pain given that any 'perversion' is already done? Or is she gonna be on Rukia instead for sneaking into her 'innocent nephew's room' late at night?
Skuld... is going to be interesting. She will most likely be livid when she realizes her sister has been *violated*. She will also find it frustrating that she can't properly condemn Ichigo about the wish without the protection program stopping her.

The Rukia bit will also be interesting, as I can either have them humor her and let her think that they don't know she's there or have Urd milk the situation for all it's worth...

CatOnFire said:
What is worrisome would be if they found out the breeding of Divinity and Shinigami resulted in a birth rate equal to that of Human and Human. Or worse Hild came to the same conclusion...

Urd: My God Mom. What have you unleashed!?

Hild: *pouts* But I think Kenpachi-kun and Mara-chan make a fine couple.
Y'know, I first skimmed it and had to double take because I thought you said Hild *and* Zaraki.

What a cruel, cruel joke to play on the universe...

Also, in regards to this question:

nantukoprime said:
Have to say though, this fic is getting a lot more into AMG! than I had expected.

Bleach working its way back in eventually?
Book I mostly deals a lot more in AMG with a few Bleach elements thrown in, slowly growing a bit as Book I comes to a close.

It is Book II that we do get to Rukia's arrival and super happy Shinigami fun time.

However, starting with Chapter 6 is when we really start tipping to the AMG side of things, which begs the question-

Should I post Chapter 6 in the AMG section? Up until now I posted here mainly because:

A)Ichigo is our main character. Well, I consider Ichigo and Belldandy to be the main stars of this fic, though others will get their time, but it's Ichigo that this story leans on.

B)The Bleach section is viewed more than the AMG section, so there was more of a chance for people to take a look at it in this section.

Besides, Genocideheart's first thoughts on this idea sprang from this section so I felt it ok to keep it on this side because of that.

But, now that we are going in that direction would it be more prudent to have it there?

Ah, one other thing.

Zerohour, from the last thread did the scene with Ichigo walking in on Orihime and the aftermath meet with your liking?

What about the bits with Ichigo and tape later on?
 
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