Good start, tho feels a bit rushed in certain scenes.
For some reason I can't help but picture Sue from Genshiken whenever I read about chibi-Sarah.
As for the Chibi personalities, I'd think they would complement if not exaggerate their full size doubles, but without dealing the damage on Keitaro (or KeiKei).
Remember to show more than tell, have fun with describing the chibis doing stuff and the "normals" trying to find out how and/or why they do things.
Keep up the good work
For some reason I can't help but picture Sue from Genshiken whenever I read about chibi-Sarah.
As for the Chibi personalities, I'd think they would complement if not exaggerate their full size doubles, but without dealing the damage on Keitaro (or KeiKei).
Remember to show more than tell, have fun with describing the chibis doing stuff and the "normals" trying to find out how and/or why they do things.
Keep up the good work