I would like for someone to obtain the permission from the authors and rewrite the following in the manner described:
Make a Wish by Rorscharch's Blot. I would like this and its sequel to have more descriptions of scenery and actions - as is, the stories are more dialogue than anything else.
Bungle in the Jungle by jbern. I would like this and its sequel to be rewritten in THIRD person, instead of second, which gets very tiresome - lucky for this author, the story in itself is captivating enough to endure it.
More will likely follow as I discover them.
Make a Wish by Rorscharch's Blot. I would like this and its sequel to have more descriptions of scenery and actions - as is, the stories are more dialogue than anything else.
Bungle in the Jungle by jbern. I would like this and its sequel to be rewritten in THIRD person, instead of second, which gets very tiresome - lucky for this author, the story in itself is captivating enough to endure it.
More will likely follow as I discover them.