Doing Crap Right.

Aarik

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How many of you have seen a good idea for a fic in a summary, took a look at the fic, then, bam, SOMETHING, or alot of somethings, is/are screwed up and the story's sucks.

But.

You still want to see this, but done RIGHT, so you look around, there ARE/IS more, but it suck's too, errors, fanon, lack of author talent, something is consistently making this idea suck.

Leave the idea you want to see DONE RIGHT here, the challenge is to either write the idea yourself, OR find it done right, keep in mind not to specify your idea to much, try to give anyone who take's it up as much leeway as possible while still fitting the idea.

Since I just finished going through the Bleach manga, and I need to drop some idea's to start with...

Hitsugaya in Hogwarts.

I don't care about the reason, go nut's. I don't care when, for either timeline, go nut's. I don't care (much) about pairing, so long as it doesn't crap the fic up whatever is fine.

Just do it RIGHT, don't handwave kido away to make him more awestruck and respectful about magic, Shinigami already HAVE magic, it's just a different kind for different things.

Don't make him forget that he can pull his way out of a Gigai whenever he want's so wizard's can dickslap him while he's 'defenseless'.

Don't make him an oblivious idiot stupid enough to use CHAPPY as a Gikongan in the middle of what will most likely be an undercover mission.

Don't forget that he can kill everyone in the damn castle 'by accident/at will' by crushing 'their souls/them' to death with the weight of his reiatsu.

And don't forget he's older then anyone there, he's at minimum a few decades older then Dumbledore is.

That's all the horrible bullshit error's I can remember from this fic type off the top of my head, ignoring the stuff no one on this forum who writes would ever make.

Two alternative's for the same thing:

Peggy Sue ____(most likely Ichigo) goes back in time to before/during/after Rukia/Shattered Shaft/whenever, it's not SuperFuture!_____ with all new ____ powers, It's just _____ with their powers and knowledge about the figurative bus that's about to hit everyone.

If Ichigo: Please don't make H!Ichigo humane and try to make him less monstrous and buddy buddy with Ichigo, he's the mental manifestation of Ichigo's fighting instinct, love of combat/violence and Sheer Mindless Bloodlust, he doesn't care about tits or ass, or sex or getting laid, or whether Ichigo dislike's him, or being nice, or Ichigo's family or friends, or making jokes, he just want's to spill the blood of enemies, enemies to spill the blood of, strong opponents to kill, and maybe to feast on the souls of the powerful, with a side order of the souls of the innocent if any happen to be available.

Or: Ichigo goes back, the only difference from current canon Ichigo is that he can bust out a more sane/controlled version of his 'full Hollow' mode at will, it's his final powerup, the last trump card, his opening move is (unknown to him) the same one he first used against Ulquiorra, that is, appearing behind 'target' and tearing off an arm, almost always the left one.

Extension of above: he doesn't replace his past self, he arrived one hour after Rukia gave 'him' 'his' power's, he has until the day before Byakuya and Renji arrive before the world get's past whatever he did and destroys him to fix itself, in that time he has to get everyone up to their current Hueco Mundo arc power levels to prevent them from getting gimped during the Soul Society Arc.

Think about it. Domino effect, If they had all been stronger they would have had a much better chance of succeeding, if they had successfully saved Rukia and kept her from Aizen for even another 30 minutes more, what would have happened.

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It's 12:00 am and I'm a little bloated on pizza and soda, so after going over the only part of this I won't be able to fix later (the title.) and checking for spelling errors, I'm gonna post this, if I screwed something up, tell me so I can edit it later.
 
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