Evangelion Evangelion Time Loop

Innortal

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#1
Because they all have to start somewhere....







Shinji blinked as the doors closed behind him. ôOkay,ö he muttered, ôwe learned something today.

ôDonÆt pee in the Reiquarium. They really donÆt like it,ö he said shivering. He was definitely not going to visit them for a few Loops. ôAnd I thought Kaoru was grabby.ö

Sighing, he looked around. Same abandoned streets in front of the abandoned train station, with no real warnings that a giant being of death would be there in an hour. The only thing missing was darkness and some zombies to complete that Resident Evil feeling.

So, he could stay here and wait for Misato to show up à orà

ôScrew it,ö he said with a smile. ôæOrÆ is always more fun.ö With that, he crossed the street and headed towards a shop he needed.

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ôI canÆt believe IÆm so damned late!ö whined Misato, as her car sped along the deserted highway between Tokyo-3 and Tokyo-2. You would think that the boyÆs ticket would have carried him all the way to Tokyo-3. They did have a rail station there after all. What was the whole point of dropping him off so many miles away?

ôWhat the hell?ö she muttered, spotting a figure coming her direction in the oncoming lane.

It was someone on a motorcycle, that much was certain. It wasnÆt the uncommon to see them after all.

They werenÆt wearing a helmet; that much was also certain, as she could make out an unprotected head and face as their distance decreased.

They were also standing up on the bikeÆs seat, arms spread, and howling in joy, as the boy sped past her.

ôWhat the hell is that civilian doing?ö she yelled. YouÆd think the JSSDF would do something about insane people running about. It was like they saw the AngelÆs attack as a way to weed out the imbeciles.

And then it hit her.

ôTHATÆS THE COMMANDERÆS SON!ö she yelled, as her foot slammed on the brakes.

ôKING OF THE WORLD!ö came the boyÆs yell as he ærodeÆ towards Tokyo-3.
 

drakensis

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#2
"So this is the Third Child," Ritsuko said. She didn't seem terribly impressed.

"So you're father's current sex partner," Shinji said with equal enthusiasm.

Ritsuko's eyes went wide (although she wasn't quite as flabbergasted as Misato). "How do you know that!?"

"Oh please," sighed Shinji in a bored voice. "Given my... heritage, do you really think I don't have this place infiltrated and detailed personal records on everyone, Doctor Akagi? Now, shall we proceed to the Evangelion? I'd really like to get this over and done with, there are a couple of bars that don't check ID's all that carefully and I'd like to sort this 'Angel' out before they close."

"Uh... Shinji..." Misato said carefully. "That's highly classified information."

"Don't worry, Captain Katsuragi. I will be sure not to share anything with you that you have not been authorised for."
 
#3
Shinji doing the 'Or' option in the time loop... :rofl:


Random idea: Time loop. Duration: 30 seconds. When: Thirty seconds from the End of the World. It'd be a pretty funny spamfic.


Back on topic... "Do not pee in the Reiquarium." :rofl:
 

kuopiofi

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#4
drakensis said:
"Don't worry, Captain Katsuragi. I will be sure not to share anything with you that you have not been authorised for."
(snerk) :snigger:

Incidentally, has there been a case yet where someone else besides the main character spontaneously becomes aware about the loops without outside assistance? Given Reis... unusual... heritage she might be able to keep her memories after first few loops.
 

PCHeintz72

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#5
kuopiofi said:
drakensis said:
"Don't worry, Captain Katsuragi. I will be sure not to share anything with you that you have not been authorised for."
(snerk) :snigger:

Incidentally, has there been a case yet where someone else besides the main character spontaneously becomes aware about the loops without outside assistance? Given Reis... unusual... heritage she might be able to keep her memories after first few loops.
There has been a story with Rei being in time loops. And several where she did the time traveling.
 

Deathwings

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#7
kuopiofi said:
drakensis said:
"Don't worry, Captain Katsuragi. I will be sure not to share anything with you that you have not been authorised for."
(snerk) :snigger:

Incidentally, has there been a case yet where someone else besides the main character spontaneously becomes aware about the loops without outside assistance? Given Reis... unusual... heritage she might be able to keep her memories after first few loops.
Depend of the version.

In one peoples need to be brought along by the MC to Awaken, in the other it was a favor given to the MCs by the Gods and Demons trying to repair Yggdrasil so that the MCs could have real companionship, mostly so their chances of staying sane were higher.
 

PCHeintz72

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#8
Jim Starluck said:
PCHeintz72 said:
There has been a story with Rei being in time loops.? And several where she did the time traveling.
Links please? :D
Here.

Rei mentions at one point she had reset the series I think it was 3 times, and she still had problems getting Asuka and Shinji together. Warning, this is the Author's Member Profile Link, but the story itself has graphic content.
NGE 'Only In Your Eyes Am I Worthy' by BloodyAngel - [Status=Not Complete] - [Last Dld=11/28/2006] - [Size=1322kb]Rei, Maya, Misato, and a handful of survivors in Tokyo 3 a couple years after a failed third impact in a very dreary future (Rei refers to Tokyo 3 as a city of the damned) discover a way to go back and fix it all, but only Rei can survive the trip due to her Angelic DNA. She goes back, and attempts to right it all, but ends up dying at the end, though her younger self lives on.
NGE 'Redemption' by Unknown - [Status=Unknown] - [Last Dld=10/20/2002] - [Size=191kb]
  • No known valid link
Regrettibly, while I have what I believe but cannot confirm is the entire 18 chapter story, I have no links, and I cannot even remember the author nor is it in any chapter. Past attempts to find a working link to the story resulted in failure. Even issuing search requests on multiple forums never uncovered it. I'm kicking myself for not having noted the authors name, as I'm normally better than that, but it was 7 years ago. Oh well.
 

SEG-CISR

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#9
:snigger: "KING OF THE WORLD!"

Well, not just King. Shinji was more than that. He was basically God during Third Impact.
 

Prince Charon

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#10
SEG-CISR said:
:snigger: "KING OF THE WORLD!"

Well, not just King. Shinji was more than that. He was basically God during Third Impact.
... which is probably where this universe's loops started.

I'd kind of like to see the 'Shinji pretending to have spies' version expanded to a full fic... well, I would if Gendo and/or SEELE doesn't just kill him off right away.
 

SEG-CISR

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#11
Killing him would ruin the scenario. Yui might not respond to any other possible pilots.

:sisi:
 

marthf1

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#12
Were the potential pilots only ones born after the Second Impact? Because it might be amusing if Gendo tried to be a pilot. Whom better to please Yui than her partner in crime/one true love?
 

SEG-CISR

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#13
IIRC it was only those after 2I. All of Shinji's class are potential pilots.

Kaworu was an Angel, so he doesn't really count.
 

Belgarion213

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#14
Actually If I remember correctly it was only those born after SI. Those who were born BEFORE it and tried to pilot had...unfortunate reactions t o the Eva.


EDIT: and yes the Shinji with lots of 'spies' around NERV would be awesome.
 

drakensis

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#15
"So which one is the Third Child?" Asuka asked scornfully, looking at the two boys Misato had brought along with her.

Misato pointed. "Oh, it's Shinji over..." The purple-haired woman blinked and looked around. "Wait... where is Shinji?"

.oOo.

Ninety minutes later

"Who ordered that plane to launch!?" demanded the Admiral moments after one of the UNS Over The Rainbow's Harrier jumpjets rocketed up out of it's parking area, in complete violation of proper launch procedure. "Get that goddamn pilot on the radio."

"The Angel is heading for the freighter!" shouted one of the bridge officer. He paused and grabbed his headset. "Wait! The Evangelion is active."

"Yes!" cheered Misato. "Way to go, Asuka!"

The Air Operations officer slumped suddenly into his chair. "Oh my god." His strangled expression actually managed to catch attention across the bridge and he fumbled with his controls to put the radio channel to the stolen fighter-bomber on to the bridge's loudspeakers. "S-say again, Harrier-117."

Shinji's voice crackled across the radio waves. "I said 'this aircraft has been comandeered by NERV for special operations. Open a channel connecting me to Evangelion Unit-02 for a combined arms operation."

"How the flying fuck did you get into the cockpit of one of my aircraft!" shouted the Admiral into his microphone.

"That is a very good question," Shinji agreed. "Please provide me with a detailed report of how a fourteen year old school boy managed to make off with a multi-million dollar military aircraft armed with two post-nuclear weapons. Copy in the Secretary-General of the United Nations and while you're at it, give me an open channel to Pilot Soryu-Langley."

"What's your plan?" Misato asked as the Admiral went an alarming red colour. She gestured for the AirOps officer to set up the radio channel. "For that matter, I didn't know you could fly a plane. How many hours do you have?"

"About... um, four and a half minutes. Whoops." The Harrier flew (backwards) across the flight deck at an altitude of no more than thirty feet. "I didn't know it could do that," the time-looped pilot admitted in amused voice. "Sweet."

"Misato?" Asuka called across the channel. "I'm heading for the carrier. What's the situation?"

"Ah, Pilot Soryu," Shinji cut in silkily, an uncanny impersonation of his father. "This is Ikari. There are nuclear weapons readied for use. We are counting on you to neutralise the Angel's AT field for us. Do not disappoint me."

"You can count on me, Commander!" Asuka shouted, as she landed on the deck of the Over the Rainbow, sending it rocking violently.

'Commander?' the Admiral mouthed and then started gnawing on his knuckles rather than getting into a shouting contest with the teenager who'd abruptly become the world's youngest nuclear power.
 

Typhonis

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#16
Shinji knew that he would get in trouble for this but the situation was desperate.

Misato stared as a staff appeared from nowhere and watched as Shinji grasped it before chanting.

"By my name and my power, I Shinji Ikari do summon forth the angel Hapexiel....to bring Happinesss to NERV, my Father and the Angels attacking the planet Earth."

For some odd reason she couldn't understand....she felt a cold chill run down her spine as pink light errupted from a source neaqrby.
 

Innortal

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#17
Nothing better than a mentally unstable pilot with N2 mines.
 
#18
Hm... I wonder if this is...

Where Shinji time-loops over and over again, trying to 'do it right' and finally decides 'fuck it' and somehow manages to pull it off flawlessly by screwing around and improvising.
 

ovidkid

Active Member
#19
You do know n2 means non-nuclear all the power of a nuke none of the radiation.
 

DhampyrX2

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#20
"So where is the Third Child?" Asuka asked rudely as Misato and the others got out of the helicopter.

Shinji didn't think much of the question until something registered in his mind as he stepped out of the the door a moment later. Wait a minute. Isn't she supposed to ask which one of us is the Third?

His next moments wewre filled with sesnations he was used to, namely pleasure and pain, as Asuka was suddenly kissing him so deeply he forgot where he was for a second, before kneeing him in the crotch. Shinji could only let out a pained yelp as he fell to the deck in agony.

"What the hell Asuka?" Misato asked in confusion at the redhead's actions.

"Just claiming what's mine, Misato. And reminding the baka that I. Don't. Share. Not with you, not with Wonder Girl, not even with Hikari," Asuka responded with a shrug before moving in and giving Misato a relieved hug the threw the Operations Director off even more. Asuka seemed almost... like she was hugging her mother or something.

"I missed you too, you stupid drunken harlot," Asuka whispered to herself, too low for Misato to hear.

She knows, Shinji thought to himself in a moment of painful clarity as he finally started to stand up, wheezing, with the help of his fellow Stooges. It looks like it's going to be one of thoseloops. I musn't run away, because Asuka-chan will catch me anyway.
 
#21
He's probably torn between being glad that he's got some company, and wishing it was from some loop where Asuka had discovered Bi tendencies, and not only shared Shinji with Rei and Misato, but where they tended to have threesomes.
 

zenaku

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#22
Nice. BTW, for those who don't know, Rosarch is working on his own timeloop evangelion fic on his yahoo group. It's called Dr. Strangelove.
 

nixofcyzerra

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#23
zenaku said:
Nice. BTW, for those who don't know, Rosarch is working on his own timeloop evangelion fic on his yahoo group. It's called Dr. Strangelove.
And it is awesome!
 
#24
awsome I would not be surprised if this made a lemon thread in a couple days tops also looping misato would be interesting.
 

ryugabriev

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#25
Link to Group Please.

Searched for Groupname...didnt find right group.
 
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