So if you're familiar with Hearts of Iron, I'm doing a collaborative AAR.
If you're not? Hearts of Iron is a WW2 grand strategy simulation where you can take control of all aspects of any country existing between 1939-1963. AARs, or After Action Reports, are essentially where players take their games and write a story around them. This is what I am doing with a friend of mine. This AAR is titled:
The East is Red: A Worldwide Redvolution AAR
Now, why am I posting this here? Because I, great_chairman, am responsible primarily for writing 'fluff' updates (i.e. those that are text-based, instead of screenshot-based), and, this being TFF, it would be great for you guys to tell me what I'm doing wrong and how to fix it. General comments on the AAR are also appreciated, both preferably on the boards there. Thanks guys! ^_^
If you're not? Hearts of Iron is a WW2 grand strategy simulation where you can take control of all aspects of any country existing between 1939-1963. AARs, or After Action Reports, are essentially where players take their games and write a story around them. This is what I am doing with a friend of mine. This AAR is titled:
The East is Red: A Worldwide Redvolution AAR
Now, why am I posting this here? Because I, great_chairman, am responsible primarily for writing 'fluff' updates (i.e. those that are text-based, instead of screenshot-based), and, this being TFF, it would be great for you guys to tell me what I'm doing wrong and how to fix it. General comments on the AAR are also appreciated, both preferably on the boards there. Thanks guys! ^_^