Naruto Fever Dream (temp. title)

[rootathell]

This is going to be a Naru/Hina oneshot that came to me, after wondering, why most Anime characters never get sick, except for a plot development.

This is just the first scene of the oneshot, playing shortly after the Bikochu arc (Anime only)

Have fun!

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Disclaimer: Naruto doesn't belong to me, simple as that

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Legend:

blablabla speaking
-What a stupid thing to do- thinking

Fever Kiss - OneShot

It was a day after the failure of the Bikochu mission. Team 8 and Naruto returned a little beat up after the fight and with a useless Bikochu bug, but alive and in good health...well, at least three of them.

Achoo sneezed Hinata Hyuga as she sat on the examination bed in the Konoha Ninja Hospital, being attended by the Hokage herself. Well, it looks like it's just a normal flu, no wonder after being in the cold water for an hour and getting involved in a fight at night in wet clothes explained the Hokage I'll give you some medicine to take with every meal and the rest of the therapy is a warm bed and much sleep, understood?.

Hai Hokage-sama stammered Hinata, with a clinical thermometer still stuck in her mouth. Good, and even if the fewer gets down in a few days, no strenuous activities for at least a week, ok? Now hush, off with you and get home in your bed ordered Tsunade, filling out a recipe for her.

Arigato Hinata answered after receiving her recipe and left hastily, trying to not waste any more of the Hokage's time. After getting her medicine and informing Neji and Mitoko, her personal maid, of her illness, she got herself a small dinner and went to bed.

The next day Hinata awoke with a headache, stuffy nose and high fever. Fortunately the medicine from last night took the brunt of it, so Hinata could at least listen to the songbirds chirp without feeling like elephants were dancing in her head.

Soon after she woke up, Mitoko came into her room with breakfast, a steaming bowl of rice porridge. This was one of the moments, Hinata liked being a Hyuga and thanked kami-sama for small favors.

Carefully sitting up in bed, Hinata thanked the kindred spirit that was Mitoko and ate her breakfast and her flu medicine.

Only minutes after breakfast Hinata was already back in the land of the dreaming...occasionally giggling.

T-he-he-he Danna-sama(1)

The rest of the day went in a similar manner, with Hinata waking up, or being woken up for a meal, eating it, going to the toilet and falling asleep soon afterwards.

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(1): honorable husband

 

[EagleCeres]

good pace, nice characterization, it does pique at one's curiosity on what you have in store for the Hyuuga Heiress

keep up the good work

 

[Lumias]

To short to really comment on, but it's not bad and I'd like to see more as I'm one of the few people on this board that like this pairing.

 

[nuclear death frog]

To short to really comment on, but it's not bad and I'd like to see more as I'm one of the few people on this board that like this pairing.

Few who likes Naruto/Hinata?

Far as I can tell, the only person who doesn't is Moshulel. Everyone else is, at worst, neutral to it.

 

[rootathell]

Here's another part.

Either this happenes the same night, or I'll write something in between

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Later that night, nobody noticed the cloaked figure leaving the Hyuga compound and stumbling over the rooftops of Konoha to its destination

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On the other side of the village, Uzumaki Naruto was sleeping the sleep of the innocent. He was currently at work, clearing the north forest of Konoha with his snoring, so he didn't notice the person entering his bedroom, nor himself being restrained, until it was too late.

He woke up though, as a heavy weight landed on his stomach. Blearily opening his eyes Naruto gazed into the blackness of his bedroom, only illuminated by the beginning of dawn that shone through the window, until his eyes widened in recognition of the feelings his senses transmitted to his sleep-addled brain.

His hands were tied. Check.
Someone was lying on him. Check.
Said someone had blue hair and white, pupilless eyes. Check.
Said someone with blue hair and pupilless eyes, that was lying on him, wasn't wearing much, besides a 'hungry' smile. Double Check.
Said someone was Hyuga Hinata, the shy dark haired weirdo, he could like.

Hi-Hinata, what... Naruto tried to protest, but was silenced by a single finger pressed onto his lips by Hinata.

Shhhh...danna-sama, it's allright, I know murmured Hinata, closing the distance between Naruto and herself even more, before pressing her lips onto Naruto's, while rubbing her assets against his chest.

If Naruto's eyes were opened widely before, they were now the size of dinnerplates, as he experienced an information overload.

Thankfully for Naruto's, at the moment, fragile mind Hinata stopped her kiss, before he could pass out. Having caught himself, Naruto took a look at Hinata, to see her literally burning up in her face, mumbling Danna-sama, I don't feel too well before passing out, while still lying on top of him.

Naruto's panic returned immediately, as he could now feel Hinata's heightened body temperature.

Kuso, Kuso, what can I do rambled Naruto, before remembering Tsunade. Now the next problem was how to alert her, as he was still kind of tied up. His first try got the result that even while feverish Hinata could still tie one heck of a knot and even brute force didn't help against the rope that held him.

Next he tried to at least roll Hinata from him, but noticed in the last moment, that his small bed couldn't hold a second person on it and without the help of his hands, Hinata would most likely land on the cold floor below.

Then Naruto tried to create a kage-bushin. Forcing his tied hands into his favorite hand-seal, Naruto poured chakra into the technique. His cry of Kage Bushin no Jutsu was rewarded with two *poofs* at his bedside.

Kage Bushin#1 immediately ran off to alert Tsunade no baa-chan of the emergency, while Kage Bushin#2 tried to loosen Naruto's bonds, only to poof out of existence as he touched the rope.

Damnit, what was that? Kage Bushin no Jutsu
nothing.

Kage Bushin no Jutsu
*cricket* *cricket*

Then a thought shot through Naruto's head.
-That's an ANBU rope...where did she get that?-
Followed by another
-I can't get out of these and I just send my last clone to get Tsunade here...I'm doomed-

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[Lumias]

Few who likes Naruto/Hinata?

Far as I can tell, the only person who doesn't is Moshulel. Everyone else is, at worst, neutral to it.

I'm not saying they hate it, but I thought more then a few of them mentioned they don't really read them anymore because they feel it's an overused pairing.

Back to the story,

Strange addition, but interesting, I really wonder how much Tsunade is going to Tease Naruto for this.

 

[ttestagr]

The most overused pairing is still Sasu/Naru though :headbanger:

 

[GenocideHeart]

Where did I see a 'Naruto is tied up and Hinata gets amorous' fic before? B) :lol:

 

[Lumias]

The most overused pairing is still Sasu/Naru though :headbanger:

/vomit

agreed, It wouldn't be so bad either if either of them would just kiss a girl at some point, because when you try and tell the fangirl's there's no basis for it they both mention the accidental kiss and point out that neither has ever done anything with a girl.

 

[EagleCeres]

Feverish kinky Hinata... i approve! :yay:

 

[ttestagr]

Am I just strange, or is having a feverish Hinata sneak into Hanabi's bed and utterly dominate her made of win? I'm going to have to look for a fic like that...

 

[rootathell]

Am I just strange, or is having a feverish Hinata sneak into Hanabi's bed and utterly dominate her made of win? I'm going to have to look for a fic like that...

Haven't seen a fic like that one yet, but thanks for the idea...

 

[TheEcchiSessha]

To short to really comment on, but it's not bad and I'd like to see more as I'm one of the few people on this board that like this pairing.

Few who likes Naruto/Hinata?

Far as I can tell, the only person who doesn't is Moshulel. Everyone else is, at worst, neutral to it.

I kinda like the pairing ^_^ .... as long as the fic is not a complete character rape and/or they get paired up in one chapter...for no reason. :angry:

One thing that also annoys me; Hinata is ,basically, a serial stalker to Naruto. Yet that little fact gets overlooked much of the time in fics.

I must say I like where your taking this story. I'm always up for a kinky Hinata. It's a breath of fresh air from all the stuttering she does in most fics.

~The Ecchi Sessha

 

[Antimatter]

To short to really comment on, but it's not bad and I'd like to see more as I'm one of the few people on this board that like this pairing.

Few who likes Naruto/Hinata?

Far as I can tell, the only person who doesn't is Moshulel. Everyone else is, at worst, neutral to it.

I kinda like the pairing ^_^ .... as long as the fic is not a complete character rape and/or they get paired up in one chapter...for no reason. :angry:

One thing that also annoys me; Hinata is ,basically, a serial stalker to Naruto. Yet that little fact gets overlooked much of the time in fics.

I must say I like where your taking this story. I'm always up for a kinky Hinata. It's a breath of fresh air from all the stuttering she does in most fics.

~The Ecchi Sessha

Dude, you could totally cros that with Tamoe from Strawberry panic, and have their paired in some hot stalker yuri.

At any rate, i'm a hinta fan, despite how very little i've read of the manga. shes just cute dangit.

 

[ttestagr]

To short to really comment on, but it's not bad and I'd like to see more as I'm one of the few people on this board that like this pairing.

Few who likes Naruto/Hinata?

Far as I can tell, the only person who doesn't is Moshulel. Everyone else is, at worst, neutral to it.

I kinda like the pairing ^_^ .... as long as the fic is not a complete character rape and/or they get paired up in one chapter...for no reason. :angry:

One thing that also annoys me; Hinata is ,basically, a serial stalker to Naruto. Yet that little fact gets overlooked much of the time in fics.

I must say I like where your taking this story. I'm always up for a kinky Hinata. It's a breath of fresh air from all the stuttering she does in most fics.

~The Ecchi Sessha

Hinata being a serial stalker is a fanon idea. When they were in the academy together, she watched him during school but there was no evidence that she followed him there or when they had free time. The one time she did follow him, was when he was leaving and she wanted to say goodbye. She chickened out though.

 

[holyknight]

hmm...Jutsu Wedding coming? :rofl: :snigger: :blink:

 

[SimmyC]

I'm acutally one of the few that 'don't' like this pairing. It isn't that Hinata isn't cute in her own way. I just don't see her as, a ninja. I mean a shy ninja who can't even say goodbye to the person she admires? <_< I would have liked her more in say Love Hina. But not Naruto.

Putting my bias aside for a moment... well, like others have said, this story is too short. Think, longer is better especially for the readers who might want to comment on it.

 

[rootathell]

another little update...
I think this story is going to be a oneshot with ~2500 words

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At about the same time, back at the Hyuga compound Mitoko noticed the absence of the Hyuga heir. Concerned she first checked the bathroom and the surrounding rooms, before alerting Neji, who in turn informed Hiashi of Hinata's absence, who in the words of Queen Elizabeth the 2nd was not amused. Correction, he was furious, that the 'weakest' Hyuga could just leave the Hyuga estates, with the 'elite' Hyuga guard not noticing.

Without delay a large search party was sent out to find the Hyuga heiress, while Hyuga Hiashi went to inform the Hokage of the situation

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At the Hokage Villa, Tsunade was currently enjoying the morning in Konoha, like it should be done. Asleep inside the fluffy confines of her bed. Her enjoyment of the morning however, was cut short, as Shizune burst into her room and woke her up with an urgent message.

Tsunade-sama, there's been an emergency at the Hyuga's ducking under the Hokages' knee-jerk reaction to being woken up she added Hinata's gone missing.

If there was something that could wake up Tsunade now that she was Hokage, it was bad news about one of her patients.

...grmbl...wha?

That just didn't necessarily include waking up fast. She woke up however, as Hyuga Hiashi stormed into her room, and she just barely avoided punching the Hyuga clan-head into next week, thinking he was Jiraiya barging in on her.

But before Tsunade could do anything, the next annoyance showed up in the form of Uzumaki Naruto, making no sense with what he was saying.

Tsunade-oba-chan, Hinata...acting weird...fever...rope...passed out...help....*poof*

While Tsunade dismissed the Kage Bunshin via her fist, and finding out it was a Kage Bunshin, Hiashi and Shizune, who were awake and had all their mental facilities running, could at least figure out that Hinata was currently at Naruto's place suffering from a fever attack.

They quickly took of in the direction of Naruto's apartment, but Tsunade, not wanting to be left out of the look quickly caught up to them.

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Cautious the trio of experienced shinobi entered Naruto's apartment. Upon seeing nobody in the room, the three all went to the door to the room das dubbed as Naruto's bedroom.

Carefully Tsunade opened the door.

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[ttestagr]

I'm acutally one of the few that 'don't' like this pairing. It isn't that Hinata isn't cute in her own way. I just don't see her as, a ninja. I mean a shy ninja who can't even say goodbye to the person she admires? <_< I would have liked her more in say Love Hina. But not Naruto.

Putting my bias aside for a moment... well, like others have said, this story is too short. Think, longer is better especially for the readers who might want to comment on it.

That's part of her character and why she fits with Naruto so well. She's just as much of a failure as a ninja as he is, despite having everything he didn't growing up. It's also why she admires him so much, because he never gave up and improved himself and she wanted to do the same.




As for this latest chapter, it was pretty good. The Queed Elizabeth quote wasn't needed though, and seemed awkward.

 

[zeebee1]

Maybe you should explain who the Mitoko is. Because, I don't remember her from the series. Is she just some random clansmen? If so, you forgot to introduce her.

 

[rootathell]

Maybe you should explain who the Mitoko is. Because, I don't remember her from the series. Is she just some random clansmen? If so, you forgot to introduce her.

First Part of the story, first mention of Mitoko:

After getting her medicine and informing Neji and Mitoko, her personal maid, of her illness, she got herself a small dinner and went to bed.

*/edit: Story posted @ http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3197004/1/