Nasuverse [FF] The Third Magic (FSN/ZnT)

Jomasten

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You'll be able to do it.

[insert monologue about believing in oneself that believes in oneself]

Or some sort.

You're a good writer. Really up there with many others.
 
AlfheimWanderer said:
"Mellon?" Tiffania's voice croaked, as the gates swung open by the spirit's whim, leaving the youth slack-jawed.
Is that a shout out for Tolkien and his Lord of the Rings?
Umh... I think something is missing from Archer/Berserker/Heracles' aswesomeness...
*PING*
I know! There isn't the warning "When he speack, you have to read it with the voice of Kevin Sorbo"!!!
 

zeebee1

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This story isn't fun anymore. You didn't just switch moods, you switched genres.
 

deviatesfish

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Jomasten said:
You'll be able to do it.

[insert monologue about believing in oneself that believes in oneself]

Or some sort.

You're a good writer. Really up there with many others.
Alf's a good writer. I'm just here for the ride.
 

Jorlem

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I really like the idea that the elves might have basically installed backdoors on anything and everything they made for humans, with passwords that are obvious to any elf (or half elf) that happens to come along.
 
Jorlem said:
I really like the idea that the elves might have basically installed backdoors on anything and everything they made for humans, with passwords that are obvious to any elf (or half elf) that happens to come along.
More to the point, they weren't originally made for human use. Humans usually took possession of elven properties if the elves abandoned them or felt it was too much trouble continuing to maintain them.
 
AlfheimWanderer said:
Jorlem said:
I really like the idea that the elves might have basically installed backdoors on anything and everything they made for humans, with passwords that are obvious to any elf (or half elf) that happens to come along.
More to the point, they weren't originally made for human use. Humans usually took possession of elven properties if the elves abandoned them or felt it was too much trouble continuing to maintain them.
That is going to be usefull later. Also, there's some spelling mistakes that no one has pointed out yet. Mostly switching homonyms like "Too" for "two" or "to" and such. Spellcheck isn't infallible. Rogue Angles off Stan and all.
 
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