General Stories you wish you can destroy.

TheKinginRed

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#1
<a href='http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4712540/1/The_Ties_that_Bind' target='_blank' rel='nofollow'>The Ties that Bind</a>
Arashi Kanari is a Shinigami who is cursed with eyes that change with her emotions, she also has the gift to easily master any type of fighting skill, this is one reason Aizen has a strong interest in her, what is it that he has planned & who can help her
Bleach - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 37 - Words: 142,731 - Reviews: 92 - Updated: 1-2-10 - Published: 12-12-08 - Shuuhei H.
Gentlemen, kill.

:flameon: :flameon: :flameon: :flameon: :flameon: :lonegunman: :lonegunman: :lonegunman: :lonegunman:
 
#2
Might as well help the thread along. Pretty much all the fics written by fg7dragon: he wanks, he bashes, he uses cliches in the worst way. An example of his work is being MST'd in the Naruto section by Lightning Hunter.
 

GenocideHeart

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#3
<a href='http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3313462/1/The_rising_of_a_bvampire_b' target='_blank' rel='nofollow'>The rising of a vampire.</a>

Arrrgh.

Gentlemen, ready, aim... FIRE!
 

pacifist

Well-Known Member
#4
GenocideHeart said:
<a href='http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3313462/1/The_rising_of_a_bvampire_b' target='_blank' rel='nofollow'>The rising of a vampire.</a>

Arrrgh.

Gentlemen, ready, aim... FIRE!
Is it a bad sign when a review is longer than the story?
 

Python453

Well-Known Member
#5
pacifist said:
GenocideHeart said:
<a href='http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3313462/1/The_rising_of_a_bvampire_b' target='_blank' rel='nofollow'>The rising of a vampire.</a>

Arrrgh.

Gentlemen, ready, aim... FIRE!
Is it a bad sign when a review is longer than the story?
It's definitely not a good sign.
 
#6
<a href='http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5074674/1/Fire_Melody' target='_blank' rel='nofollow'>Fire Melody</a> reviews
Basically about Evangeline x A dracula. She only has one chance to convince the hottest guy she has ever seen to like her. And suceeds! well, haven't wrote that part yet...but... Anyway, pls review!
Crossover - Negima! Magister Negi Magi/???????? & Twilight - Rated: T - English - Romance/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 451 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 5-20-09 - Evangeline A.K. M. & Edward
This reviewer will tell you everything you need to know.
Corrupto Ingrato 5/10/12 . chapter 1
Evangeline Athanasia Katherina McDowell is NOT a hundred years old. She is around seven hundred years old, give or take a hundred.

Evangeline Athanasia Katherina McDowell does NOT care about fitting in at school. She couldn't give less of a shit about her classmates and she could not care less about what they might think of her.

Evangeline Athanasia Katherina McDowell could wipe the floor with the entire Twilight universe.

Evangeline Athanasia Katherina McDowell would absolutely NOT fall for a random guy. She does not pay attention to anyone but exceptional people.

Evangeline was turned into a vampire at age ten. Therefore, she looks like, and will remain eternally as, a ten years old girl with hair reaching her ankles and the most slutty fashion sense that society would accept if she looked twice her age. Therefore, even if your vampire original character was standing in direct sunlight and sparkling like a retard, Evangeline would still attract stares more than he would.

However, since this is not Evangeline Athanasia Katherina McDowell, also known as The Dark Evangel and a plethora of other titles, and instead your own stand in for Bella, I say that you should change this little fic from a Twilight/Negima crossover and just pass it as a self insert fic.

Even then, your writing style is at all pleasing to the eye. As a matter of fact, you would greatly improve if you learned about what Purple Prose is and how it can ruin otherwise good stories.

Know that I hate you more than you could possibly imagine for your treatment of one of my favorite characters, and am merely posting this review because I felt like giving an extended speech before finally coming out and saying what I truly want to say. After all, if I didn't tell you why I want to say it, it would just be flaming instead of a critique.

Therefore, after pointing out the mistakes you commited, I'd like to say that your story is quite terrible.
 

seitora

Well-Known Member
#7
Basically like, EVERY fiction in the Hetalia section...I wandered into there and it's slashfic after slashfic after slashfic. And none of them are esama who was like, the only author I read who wrote slash relationships in her fics because the rest of it was so damn well.

Edit: Whoops I didn't even realise when the last post was...to used to the Naruto boards at times :)
 

chronodekar

Obsessively signs his posts
Staff member
#8
A thread about bashing stories, eh? Well I just released this,

http://chronodekar.wordpress.com/2013/04/18/fanfiction-review-on-the-wings-of-freedom/

It's a review about a FSN + Sekirei story I read recently; written in a manner that parodies MST3000.

Enjoy!

-chronodekar
 

ragnarok1337

Well-Known Member
#9
Wasn't there already a thread for these fics? Whatever. I don't go out actively looking for bad fics and often try and forget what badfics I have come across, so it'll probably be a while before I can list one.
 

ragnarok1337

Well-Known Member
#11
Maybe I should create a thread for AMAZING authors, because bad authors are all too common.
 

chronodekar

Obsessively signs his posts
Staff member
#12
ragnarok1337 said:
Maybe I should create a thread for AMAZING authors, because bad authors are all too common.
Would be a very subjective thread then. Because as most of us know, different people have vastly different ideas on what an 'AMAZING' author means. Though, in the spirit of this endeavor, I was running a contest earlier. Were you aware of it? Even gave away certificates and all ...

http://thefanfictionforum.net/showthread.php?tid=19511

Though a thread for trashing a story via entertaining reviews would be fun. Such a collection would be nice to read.

-chronodekar
 

MastaofBitches

Well-Known Member
#13
Didn't really want to start a new thread, so sorry about the Necro.

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[font=Verdana, Verdana, Arial]When Yang finally loses her cool, she makes a fatal mistake. Will she be able to handle the consequences, or will team RWBY's fiery brawler be unable to recover? There will be a pairing down the line, but when/who is yet tbd.
RWBY - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 3 - Words: 7,880 - Reviews: 80 - Favs: 131 - Follows: 206 - Updated: 12h ago - Published: Oct 5 - Yang Xiao Long, Jaune Arc[/font]
This fic just pisses me right off. Yang almost murders Jaune, and yet almost seems to be getting rewarded for it, when she's practically handed her dreams of Adventure and meeting her mother immediately after she's expelled. All her thoughts are about her, and about how everything is falling apart for her. Not once sparing a thought for the friend she almost killed. Nope, it's all about her.

And the author seriously wants us to feel sympathetic for her! Fuck that. This authors house needs to go up in smoke.
 
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