[IF] From the Outside...

biigoh

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#1
The first time he saw them, he thought that they were strong. United as one. It wasn't hard to do so. After all, they were but three.

Ah... but time moved on. And more importantly, he concealed his presence from them. Them and their enemies.

He could sense danger and the raw power that surrounded them and their enemies. Oh, he helped them by vanishing some of their lesser enemies who stumbled into his territory, but he was no fool. He could see the doom that lay in their enemies, he could feel the weight of destiny upon them. But even so, he didn't desire their enemies to win; for that way led to death for all; Demons and their masters never meant well for the world.

And he was but a minor entity, a nature spirit of the third domain rank who had made accommodations with modern humanity and knew the ins and outs of that beast with its countless heads. But... but he was still a creature of the world.

And so he watched, he lent an appendage when he could, when it brought no danger to him. His very nature ensured that he could not be gainsayed by the lesser of the enemies; not when their very natures rendered them... vulnerable.

He watched as the Golden crescent battled with the Crimson fire over the right of leadership. For dominance. Sapphire coldness serving as a potential aide to victor. He could understand the need to establish who was on top, really he did... but that they did it during what was the utmost danger. That was unacceptable to him, even if their alien mentor/companion/adviser seemed to have no issues with it.

And so... he plotted. He noted their weaknesses. For, even with the additions of Emerald lightning and Golden light, things changed not. They still bickered. They still fought for dominance. If anything, it merely got worse.

And that would not do.

For the fate of the world rested upon their shoulders. He had gathered that much from those minor enemies he had... vanished. Consumed. Unmade. Remade. They served him now, with such pesky things as memories and former loyalty consumed, their existence now tied to him instead of their progenitor.

And if they could not decide upon a leader. Then, he would help. He would make them kneel before him in submission and obedience. He would use them against those who would threaten the world and those who dwelled upon it.

Yes, he would.
 

Tsuki_CB

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#2
This sounds like the beginning of the most epic SM lemon ever to be written :yay:
 

biigoh

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#3
Tsuki_CB said:
This sounds like the beginning of the most epic SM lemon ever to be written :yay:
Thank you...

*holds up a tentacle, waves and bows* B)
 

da_fox2279

California Crackpot
#4
Tsuki_CB said:
This sounds like the beginning of the most epic SM lemon ever to be written :yay:
It does. It really does. ^_^

Quick question(s): This piece connected to your other pieces (Faded Moonlight 'verse)? And will you be fleshing this out more? 'Cause I really like how this turned out, but it feels short... like a prelude, not quite the full chapter.

Looking forward to more.
 
#5
Tsuki_CB said:
This sounds like the beginning of the most epic SM lemon ever to be written :yay:
To seal the deal, this story has been approved by TFF's RL Tentacle Monster.
 

biigoh

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#6
da_fox2279 said:
Tsuki_CB said:
This sounds like the beginning of the most epic SM lemon ever to be written :yay:
It does. It really does. ^_^

Quick question(s): This piece connected to your other pieces (Faded Moonlight 'verse)? And will you be fleshing this out more? 'Cause I really like how this turned out, but it feels short... like a prelude, not quite the full chapter.

Looking forward to more.
Faded Moonlight is not connected to this piece. And I may continue this as soon as I work things out.
 

marthf1

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#7
Quite creepy, I have to say.... And an interesting take on the intra-senshi relationships.

Hmm, it makes me wonder if it is not its hubris talking when it talks about its creation of troops. The first parts seems to hint it is not powerful enough to matter, yet by the end it has entered the land of the creepy. Perhaps the intents or personalities of those it 'converted' leaked over?
 

Skelethin

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#8
one question i have for it though is why you have Usagi put in as Golden cresent, and then have Venus as Golden light.

I would think that Moon would Silver cresent rather than gold, due to 'Silver Millenium' and the fact that the moon in the sky is white, not yellow
 

biigoh

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#9
Skelethin said:
one question i have for it though is why you have Usagi put in as Golden cresent, and then have Venus as Golden light.

I would think that Moon would Silver cresent rather than gold, due to 'Silver Millenium' and the fact that the moon in the sky is white, not yellow




Golden/yellow moon crescent :p
 

biigoh

Well-Known Member
#10
marthf1 said:
Quite creepy, I have to say.... And an interesting take on the intra-senshi relationships.

Hmm, it makes me wonder if it is not its hubris talking when it talks about its creation of troops. The first parts seems to hint it is not powerful enough to matter, yet by the end it has entered the land of the creepy. Perhaps the intents or personalities of those it 'converted' leaked over?
Thank you. B)

It in itself is weak. The youma it caught and did stuff were also weak "cannonfodder" types... :snigger:
 
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