Inside Out, Riley Growing Up

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Hey folks,
I just started a new fan-fiction over fall break, and I'm looking for people to read, comment, and critique. I haven't written in a long time, so I'm looking for any feedback I can get.
The premise of the fic follows Riley through some of the more raw and real parts of puberty and growing up. The goal is to do this as she bounces between a progressive city culture she's embraced and her folksy, midwestern upbringing. It's definitely targeted at female audiences, so if you're squeamish around a detailed description of a young woman's traumatic first period, this isn't for you.

http://rileygrowingup.tumblr.com/

I'm 3.5 chapters in, around 10,000 words, and I figured now would be a good time to get some feedback.

Thanks, and I appreciate the reads and feedback!
 
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