First, the original concept
Some fun additions
I'm not sure Su isn't a supervillian...at least in the Us release she noted one of her dreams was world conquest.
Well she did kidnap Keitaro and the other girls at the Hinata-sou and brought them to Molmol with her and tried to force the harem route down Keitaro and the other throat and let her Molmolian goon squad open fire on Seta's plane with live ammo when they tried to escape.
Sounds pretty villainy and totally selfish to me if you want to put Su in a minor super-villain category. Not to mention opening fire on Keitaro with RC tanks with explosive ammo and Mecha Tamas with all kinds of weapons.
Not to mentions this pic from the Ps2 game... :sweat2:
Well of course Su knew Keitaro was kryptonian. In fact the reson she wanted the Harem ending, is because she knew that the best way to get varied, viable kryptonian hybrids was to have Keitaro impregnate multiple women. Sadly since he wouldn't persue the Harem ending on his own, she had to force the issue....
She had originally planned to brainwash the other girls into persuing the harem ending, but the acceleration of his relationship with Naru forced her to act before she was really ready or had a fool proof plan...
However, now with Supergirl in the picture Kaolla Su must re-evaluate her plans. Afterall think of what she could do if she got her hands on Keitaro and Kara's child.
[insert villain laugh]
Then I guess it's time that the JLA steamroll their way through Molmol and bring Kaolla Su to justice for breaking multiple laws and for kidnapping.
Or that they send one of the incarnations of Suicide Squad to extract Keitaro from Molmol.
Finally the piece that made me realize that this really could work:
I think we could have some fun with this, concept.
Ordo said:
Keitaro, during his world trip, learns he has Kryptonian DNA (the why we'll figure out later, but it's DC comics we can make it work) from a past ancestor. Since his Kryptonian blood is so thin, it generally manifest as something similar to Superboy's tactile telekinesis. Still he does need help dealing with his growing abilities and is fortunate enough to get that help from Kara Zor-El AKA Supergirl.
Keitaro becomes something of a scientist/adventure hero during his training with Kara, and later Black Canary (He decides to learn to fight after getting stomped by the Android Amazo) and returns to the hina inn a good year after he was originally suppose to.
Now...although he and Kara are 'just good friends' the Hina girls do feel a bit...threatened by this foreign woman who wants to take 'their man' in their minds.
So the story follows Keitaro's adventures as he attends university, treks through the more fantastic elements of the DCU and has to deal with the Hina girls misinterpreting his relationship with Kara Zor-El.
Kara might be inclined to snuggle up to Keitaro, not because she likes him 'that way' but because it's fun to see him blush and it's making the Hina girls re-evaluate how they treat her new best friend.
Keitaro becomes something of a scientist/adventure hero during his training with Kara, and later Black Canary (He decides to learn to fight after getting stomped by the Android Amazo) and returns to the hina inn a good year after he was originally suppose to.
Now...although he and Kara are 'just good friends' the Hina girls do feel a bit...threatened by this foreign woman who wants to take 'their man' in their minds.
So the story follows Keitaro's adventures as he attends university, treks through the more fantastic elements of the DCU and has to deal with the Hina girls misinterpreting his relationship with Kara Zor-El.
Kara might be inclined to snuggle up to Keitaro, not because she likes him 'that way' but because it's fun to see him blush and it's making the Hina girls re-evaluate how they treat her new best friend.
DhampryX2 said:
Suddenly several of the Hinata girls go on quests for power-ups to better "compete" with Kara.
And you have Superman doing his best to properly set up Keitaro and Kara for real because he has come to like the former Ronin and thinks Keitaro would make an excellent cousin-in-law.
And you have Superman doing his best to properly set up Keitaro and Kara for real because he has come to like the former Ronin and thinks Keitaro would make an excellent cousin-in-law.
Crusader said:
As for your interesting DC universe crossover idea, i think it would be interesting to what the entire Justice League of America would say about Keitaro's treatment at the Hinata-sou, Seta's irresponsible driving and Keitaro's neurotic obsession with Naru as well as Naru's own issues with Keitaro and Seta.
DhampryX2 said:
As for other member of the League treating to the possibility of Keitaro/Kara, most would thing it's cute or it's noboby's busines but the kids involved. I could see Bruce vetting Keitaro's background as a favor to Clark and making... inquiries into issues raised in Keitaro's life. I could see Bruce checking Naru for mind-control powers before assuring Clark that she has none and Kara just has to make an effort to make Keitaro look somewhere other than at Naru.
"I don't understand it Bruce. He just takes the abuse over and over again from all of them. What could make a man do that?" Clark demanded of his friend.
Bruce decided to take the high road for a change, not mention how Lois tended to treat Clark early in their association with each other, and refrained from suggesting that all Krytonian males were just gluttons for punishment. "I'm sure Kara and Keitaro will work it out in time, Clark," he said instead.
"I don't understand it Bruce. He just takes the abuse over and over again from all of them. What could make a man do that?" Clark demanded of his friend.
Bruce decided to take the high road for a change, not mention how Lois tended to treat Clark early in their association with each other, and refrained from suggesting that all Krytonian males were just gluttons for punishment. "I'm sure Kara and Keitaro will work it out in time, Clark," he said instead.
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Scygnus Darkhawk said:
I think I'd read the Poison Ivy one. The others, not so much.
Her working with Su could have some funny results too. Combining that with her need to mellow... since Keitaro's not into genocide... could produce some interesting results in the Green Energy department.
Her working with Su could have some funny results too. Combining that with her need to mellow... since Keitaro's not into genocide... could produce some interesting results in the Green Energy department.
Sounds pretty villainy and totally selfish to me if you want to put Su in a minor super-villain category. Not to mention opening fire on Keitaro with RC tanks with explosive ammo and Mecha Tamas with all kinds of weapons.
Not to mentions this pic from the Ps2 game... :sweat2:
She had originally planned to brainwash the other girls into persuing the harem ending, but the acceleration of his relationship with Naru forced her to act before she was really ready or had a fool proof plan...
However, now with Supergirl in the picture Kaolla Su must re-evaluate her plans. Afterall think of what she could do if she got her hands on Keitaro and Kara's child.
[insert villain laugh]
Or that they send one of the incarnations of Suicide Squad to extract Keitaro from Molmol.
DhampyrX2 said:
Especially when you consider that Kara was sent to Thymescira for training when she wasn't on the Kent farm. Although I'm still partial to Wonder girl getting a crush on Keitaro and coming to see him as a potentail replacement for Superboy. (Ignorong the fact that Keitaro is only a small portion of Kryptonian amd isn't much the regular super hero type to begin with. Temmeaged girls get odd ideas sometimes.)
Although, if you don't go in thinking he's a pervert the way Naru and Motoko did, it's almost impossible to hate Keitaro for long. He just gives off that kicked puppy vibe that could wake up maternal instincts in more than one Amazon. Then you have the camp that thinks he should be with Kara for the sake of the Kryptonian race and the camp that thinks he should be with Princess Diana's apprentice.
I could see him training with Bruce and compary for a while at Kara and Clark insistence when the see how clumsy Keitaro is to to start off. And knowing Bruce, he'd figure out WHY Keitaro is a mess and actually correct it.
"Wait, you mean the reason I'm clumsy is because of my Kryptonian genes?" Keitaro asked with a wide eyed stare at Batman's report of what he had discovered after Keitaro's physical evaluation in the Watchtower simulator.
"Your reflexes are periodically registering well into the superhuman range at odd intervals. The problem for you is that unlike Superman, Supergirl, and Powergirl, you don't have the superhuman speed and strength to catch up with what your body is trying to react to. You will unconciously try to correct yourself to move out of the way of others or avoid a potentially embarassing situation only to literally trip over you own feet because your mind is moving faster than your body can react to, occasionally while activating your tactile telekinesis," Batman confirmed clinically as be brought the results up on the moniotor for everyone to see.
Clark could only chuckle sympathetuically as the slowed down video footage of several "incidents" between Keitaro and various female leaguers that had volunteered to help Batman research the nature of Keitaro's problem demonstrated that the boy's eyes and reactions showed him trying to move and his body failing to react accordingly. It almost reminded Clark of his own puberty when his powers were fairly erratic. "What can we do for him, then?" Superman asked as he looked over to his old friend.
"Training. Meditation will help Keitaro to better coordinate his thoughts and actions, as well as gain more control over his variation of tactile telekinesis so that he won't involuntarily plant himself to the floor and trip. I'd personally recommend forms based more on evasion and body movelment such as aikido and kung fu to help him gain a better grasp of how his body actually moves. Batgirl could be helpful in that aspect," Bruce recommended.
"Why her? Why not Nightwing or Robin?" Kara asked. Truth be told she was already getting unnerved by how Cassie Sandsmark had beek looking at Keitaro. She wasn't sure of she wanted to add another Cassandra into the mix at this point.
"Most of Keitaro's issues seem to manifest due to being nervous around the opposite sex. Batgirl can help him overcome that handicap while making it manifest directly during his normal training," Batman replied evenly.
"Well then why can't I help him?" Kara asked somewhat annoyed at the clinical way the Bat was treatingall of this.
"Because you're his friend and don't make him nervous. Keitaro is comfortable around you and you have demonstrated that you won't get upset with him when he has a problem. In fact you're the one that notices his issues seemed to be related to his powers. He would feel too at least with you to cause his issues to manifest and the efforts to correct them would be wasted," Batman replied.
Kara didn't know whnhter to feel proud or insuted at that. On one had it made her happy that her firend felt comfortable around her even with the teasing a flirting she engaged in with him on occasion. On the other hand, it was like Batman was saying she wasn't pretty enough get a rise of Keitaro. It was like those stupid arguments about Powergirl have a better figure all over again. Like it was Kara's fault that Star Labs had made some kind of stripper's idea of a superhero outfit with a big hole in the chest for her clone rather than than the Superman shield that Kara preferred.
"Do you really thing I could have fewer accidents, Batman-san?" Keitaro asked tentatively.
"As long as you're willing to work at it you can, Urashima-san," Batman confirmed.
The smile that lit up the Krytonian-hybrid's face at what he had heard would bring a smile to Kara's own for a good long time.
Although, if you don't go in thinking he's a pervert the way Naru and Motoko did, it's almost impossible to hate Keitaro for long. He just gives off that kicked puppy vibe that could wake up maternal instincts in more than one Amazon. Then you have the camp that thinks he should be with Kara for the sake of the Kryptonian race and the camp that thinks he should be with Princess Diana's apprentice.
I could see him training with Bruce and compary for a while at Kara and Clark insistence when the see how clumsy Keitaro is to to start off. And knowing Bruce, he'd figure out WHY Keitaro is a mess and actually correct it.
"Wait, you mean the reason I'm clumsy is because of my Kryptonian genes?" Keitaro asked with a wide eyed stare at Batman's report of what he had discovered after Keitaro's physical evaluation in the Watchtower simulator.
"Your reflexes are periodically registering well into the superhuman range at odd intervals. The problem for you is that unlike Superman, Supergirl, and Powergirl, you don't have the superhuman speed and strength to catch up with what your body is trying to react to. You will unconciously try to correct yourself to move out of the way of others or avoid a potentially embarassing situation only to literally trip over you own feet because your mind is moving faster than your body can react to, occasionally while activating your tactile telekinesis," Batman confirmed clinically as be brought the results up on the moniotor for everyone to see.
Clark could only chuckle sympathetuically as the slowed down video footage of several "incidents" between Keitaro and various female leaguers that had volunteered to help Batman research the nature of Keitaro's problem demonstrated that the boy's eyes and reactions showed him trying to move and his body failing to react accordingly. It almost reminded Clark of his own puberty when his powers were fairly erratic. "What can we do for him, then?" Superman asked as he looked over to his old friend.
"Training. Meditation will help Keitaro to better coordinate his thoughts and actions, as well as gain more control over his variation of tactile telekinesis so that he won't involuntarily plant himself to the floor and trip. I'd personally recommend forms based more on evasion and body movelment such as aikido and kung fu to help him gain a better grasp of how his body actually moves. Batgirl could be helpful in that aspect," Bruce recommended.
"Why her? Why not Nightwing or Robin?" Kara asked. Truth be told she was already getting unnerved by how Cassie Sandsmark had beek looking at Keitaro. She wasn't sure of she wanted to add another Cassandra into the mix at this point.
"Most of Keitaro's issues seem to manifest due to being nervous around the opposite sex. Batgirl can help him overcome that handicap while making it manifest directly during his normal training," Batman replied evenly.
"Well then why can't I help him?" Kara asked somewhat annoyed at the clinical way the Bat was treatingall of this.
"Because you're his friend and don't make him nervous. Keitaro is comfortable around you and you have demonstrated that you won't get upset with him when he has a problem. In fact you're the one that notices his issues seemed to be related to his powers. He would feel too at least with you to cause his issues to manifest and the efforts to correct them would be wasted," Batman replied.
Kara didn't know whnhter to feel proud or insuted at that. On one had it made her happy that her firend felt comfortable around her even with the teasing a flirting she engaged in with him on occasion. On the other hand, it was like Batman was saying she wasn't pretty enough get a rise of Keitaro. It was like those stupid arguments about Powergirl have a better figure all over again. Like it was Kara's fault that Star Labs had made some kind of stripper's idea of a superhero outfit with a big hole in the chest for her clone rather than than the Superman shield that Kara preferred.
"Do you really thing I could have fewer accidents, Batman-san?" Keitaro asked tentatively.
"As long as you're willing to work at it you can, Urashima-san," Batman confirmed.
The smile that lit up the Krytonian-hybrid's face at what he had heard would bring a smile to Kara's own for a good long time.