Akamatsuverse Last Call

Alzrius

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#1
Keitaro Urashima, like all of the residents of Hinata Sou, had, at one time or another, shaken his head and clucked his tongue in disapproval over KitsuneÆs drinking habit. He just couldnÆt understand why anyone would deliberately drink so much, so often.

Now, sitting at the bar and wobbling slightly as he finished off his third mug of beer, he felt that he was beginning to gain an appreciation for it; no matter how much you heard it on television, you never truly understood how alcohol could help you manage pain until you tried it yourself. And while his fox-faced tenant had never deigned to share what inner turmoil she was dealing with, Keitaro himself was in quite a bit of pain at the moment.

Head down, staring into the empty glass, Keitaro didnÆt bother to look up as he signaled the bartender for another.

ôYou know the drill, pal,ö droned the barkeep, ômoney first, then the booze.ö

With a sigh that seemed to come from his socks, Keitaro dug through his pockets until he managed to get his wallet out. Fumbling with it for a moment, he pulled it open, only to groan as he noted the lack of bills or coins in it. Shaking his head, the bartender, having heard that same noise from countless other patrons, turned to go serve the customers who could still afford to pay, when a five hundred-yen coin was pushed towards him across the bar. Blinking, Keitaro looked over at his benefactor, not having even realized that someone else was sitting next to him.

The fellow on the next stool was fairly nondescript. His black shoes seemed nice enough, and blended seamlessly in with the black corduroy pants he was wearing. The dark jacket that he wore over his white shirt was slightly long, not quite a trench coat, but longer than what a salaryman would have worn. He didnÆt quite seem to be a barfly, but at the same time, seemed to fit in perfectly with the almost-but-not-quite respectable crowd.

ôGive the man another,ö he said to the bartender, ôon me.ö Shrugging, not particularly caring where the money came from, the barkeep nodded and put another one down in front of Keitaro, who slowly turned back to it, even as he kept his gaze on the other guy.

Not wanting to seem ungrateful, but a tad bit worried that he was being hit on, Keitaro gave the guy a polite half-smile. ôThanks.ö

The guy was already turning back to his own beer, but gave the recognition nod û that kind you give when you donÆt know someone, but nevertheless made eye contact or something û and said ôSure. ItÆs my random act of kindness.ö

The conversation seemed to be over, at that point, with the guy apparently losing all interest in the person next to him. Emboldened by the apparent lack of interest his neighbor was showing in him, Keitaro turned around on his stool so he was facing him directly. ôIÆm Keitaro Urashima,ö he said, holding out his hand for a Western-style handshake; it was something heÆd picked up from being around so many other archeologists on his digs.

Looking both surprised and slightly amused, the man turned in kind so he was facing Keitaro directly. ôTaro Yamada,ö he introduced himself, shaking KeitaroÆs hand. Keitaro couldnÆt resist the slightest grunt of amusement. HeÆd thought his own name was bad, but Taro Yamada was so common as to be almost ridiculous; it was the Japanese version of ôJohn Smith.ö

Keitaro had never been the most perceptive man in the world; to him, ôTaro Yamadaö seemed like a decent guy. Had she been there, though, Kanako would have taken an instant dislike to the man without knowing why. Motoko would have been backing away and drawing her sword. Tsuruko would have seen ôTaroö as he truly was and attacked immediately. But Keitaro, who was already halfway drunk and wouldnÆt have realized that anything was wrong even if heÆd been sober, just managed a small smile as he shook the guyÆs hand.

ôSo, Keitaro, tell me, whatÆs the other guy look like?ö asked Taro, nodding towards KeitaroÆs right eye, which was swollen shut and blackened.

At the question, Keitaro seemed to visibly deflate, slowly making the quarter-turn back to the bar so he could take another sip from his beer. It was only after draining half the mug that he managed to mutter, not able to make eye contact with Taro, ôIt wasnÆt a guy.ö It was only after it came out that he glanced over to see the other manÆs reaction, expecting to see the amused disbelief and ridicule.

But the expected reaction never came. Instead, TaroÆs eyes widened marginally, even as his brow furrowed and a frown appeared on his face, as though heÆd just been told something very solemn. ôDamnàhit by a girl, huh?ö he asked, shaking his head ruefully, ôA manÆs gotta have a hard time feeling like a man if heÆs gotten his ass kicked by a girl.ö

Keitaro closed his eyes tight at that. The sheer, unvarnished truth of the statement sent shame flooding through him so powerfully that it was almost physically painful; but at the same time, it was almost a relief, like how it felt when you bit off the last of your nail down the cuticle, because you knew it was finally off. He gulped down the last of his beer almost desperately.

ôIÆm guessing thatÆs not æcause you grabbed some chickÆs ass on the train, either, right? Nah, you donÆt seem like the type. Which probably means that itÆs someone you know who gave you that shiner. I canÆt imagine what that must be like, having to face them again and again and again, both of you knowing how she beat you up. To say nothing of your family and friends knowing it too.ö Shaking his head again, Taro put down another five hundred-yen coin on the bar, ôHere, have another one, you look like you need it.ö As the barkeep put the fresh mug in front of Keitaro, Taro turned back to his own for a moment. ôSo, was it like your sister or something?ö

Keitaro was already drinking deeply from the next glass, pausing only at the question. He didnÆt feel angry at the other manÆs litany; instead, he felt a sort of desperate relief. Finally, someone else understood. Someone else understood the sort of pain he was carrying tucked around deep inside beneath the fake smiles and the false laughter. And he wanted him to understand it even moreà

ôMy wife.ö Keitaro managed to whisper.

Taro put a hand on the KeitaroÆs shoulder, his other hand sliding a thousand yen note onto the bar, nodding to the bartender to keep the drinks coming. ôThat must be so emasculating, Keitaro. Seriously. To think that your woman is beating you up, it must be absolutely killing you inside.ö

Keitaro couldnÆt even look at him, giving a mournful nod. He barely noticed as yet another beer was put in front of him, having to grope about for a minute with unsteady hands to grab the handle. It was trueàit really felt like the worst thing in the world.

When he and Naru had gotten married almost a year-and-a-half ago, it had seemed like theyÆd worked out all their problems. TheyÆd finished Todai, and had found happiness together, just like theyÆd promised each other over two decades previously. The problem had been that that happiness hadnÆt lasted. Keitaro had gotten the archeology grants heÆd wanted, and had spent a considerable portion of his post-undergraduate time away on digs. Naru, however, hadnÆt been an archeology major, and as such wasnÆt able to go with him on his expeditions. The amount of time the two of them had been spending apart had been what had started the problems.

Naru had, at first, tried to hide how upset she was at him leaving all the time, but sheÆd never been good at concealing her displeasure. Soon they were fighting about it, and it wasnÆt long before their fights had gotten physical. Or rather, before NaruÆs fighting had gotten physical.

Maybe it was his faultàheÆd told her, once, that heÆd liked it when sheÆd abused him. That had been a fairly blatant lie, though. HeÆd said it just to alleviate her guilt at hitting himàguilt she didnÆt seem to feel anymore. Worse, for whatever reason, his vaunted ôimmortalityö seemed to be deserting him. When heÆd been trying to get into Todai, it had seemed like nothing could ever really hurt him. But nowànow a single punch from Naru was enough to leave him with a black eye.

After that last fight, after sheÆd hit him hard enough to knock him down, Keitaro had had to get out of there. He just couldnÆt be in the same place as Naru while he still felt that awful mixture of anger and despair and shame. HeÆd gone for a walk, trying to sort out his feelings, but all thatÆd happen was that his anger had dissipated, leaving only depression and self-loathing in its wake. Finally, tired and cold, heÆd gone into a bar to drown his sorrows.

Taro was still speaking, one hand still on KeitaroÆs shoulder as he continued. ôI mean, anyone who looks at you would know who wears the pants in your marriage. TheyÆd never say it to your face, of course, but you know theyÆd all be talking about it behind your back, just out of earshot.ö

ôYouÆve gotta wonder just how you wound up like you have. ItÆs not like you didnÆt have plenty of other girls to choose from, am I right? But instead of picking any of them, you chose the one whoÆd treat you like garbage.ö

ôCan you imagine how awful itÆd be if you had kids? Think about it, imagine trying to raise a son the way you are now. How could ever look him in the eye knowing that heÆs seen Mommy beat up Daddy? How could you ever teach him to be a man when you arenÆt one yourself?ö

Tears pouring down his cheeks, Keitaro struggled to lift his head up off the bar to take another sip of his beer. HeÆd lost count of how many heÆd had, or of how long Taro had been speaking. All he could do was shudder and try to suppress his sobs as TaroÆs words cut through him, unerringly verbalizing every personal flaw, every self-doubt, every negative thought heÆd ever had about himself.

Keitaro had no way of knowing that TaroÆs words were making him slowly lower his natural defenses; that as his sense of self was eroded, he was leaving his soul open to predation. Even if Keitaro had been sober, he wouldnÆt have realized that the lethargy and despair he was feeling was actually the pain emanating from his soul as TaroÆs hand on his shoulder broke it down and absorbed it, piece by piece.

Head down in a puddle of booze and his own tears, KeitaroÆs last coherent thought was that he wished itÆd all just endà

Giving the other man one last pat on the back, ôTaroö drained the last of his own beer and got up off the stool. Pulling out a cigarette and lighter, he lit up as he exited the bar, inhaling deeply before exhaling the smoke with a wide grin as he walked out into the night.

Back inside, the barkeep frowned as he noticed the guy from before lying down, head on the bar, apparently passed out from drinking too much. Giving another long-suffering sigh, he nudged the unconscious man. ôHey buddy, this is a bar, not a hotel. Sleep someplace else.ö

The guy didnÆt move, didnÆt even twitch, and the bartender frowned again, deeper this time as he hoped he wouldnÆt have to put him in the cot in the back. The guys who got too drunk to wake up tended to puke in their sleep, and he really hated having to clean that up. He nudged him again, ôLook man, I said you canÆt-ô

His last nudge having moved the man enough to make his face visible, the bartender leapt back with a scream, drawing all eyes towards himself as he looked at his now-deceased patron in horrorà

His eyes were gone.

* * * * *

It was almost inappropriate how beautiful it was the day they buried Keitaro. The clear blue sky, warm temperatures, and gentle breeze all seemed to mock the grief of the assembled people as they slowly lowered the coffin into the ground behind Hinata Sou.

As far as anyone knew, Keitaro had died from alcohol poisoning. The autopsy had shown that his blood-alcohol level was high to the point of being unbelievable, and his body had shown signs of massive dehydration. When the coroner had cut him open, KeitaroÆs liver was discovered to have been reduced to a papery lump resembling a waspÆs nest more than a human organ. Strangest of all, however, were his eyes. They were still there, of course, but they were completely desiccated, having lost all aqueous fluids, as though heÆd literally cried them all away. That was patently impossible, of course, but the medical examiner hadnÆt known how else to explain it.

All of this had been kept from the family, of course. It would have been cruel to mention such peculiarities when they were already grieving, so they had simply told them heÆd died from drinking too much, and with the morticians having simply closed the corpseÆs eyelids, no one was the wiser.

Despite his marriage, it was Kanako who had taken the news of his death the worst. During the funeral, she had wailed and howled loudly with grief, and as the coffin was interred, Haruka had had to physically restrain her from throwing herself onto it.

NaruÆs grief was much quieter, but no less palpable. She had just stared silently at the casket during the service, tears running down her cheeks. Once it was over, sheÆd just stood there, staring at the grave as though unable to register what was going on. Kitsune, Mutsumi, and almost all of the other girls had tried to console her, but Naru had seemed almost catatonic in her mourning, barely responding to any of them.

The following weeks passed slowly for Naru. Even the constant companionship from her friends didnÆt help alleviate the massive guilt she felt about her husbandÆs death. After all, it had been her selfishness and bad temper that had driven him to go out and drink, and that had been what had killed him. As far as Naru was concerned, she was responsible for his death as surely as if sheÆd gotten a gun and shot him. And while she knew her friends meant well in trying to help her, she just didnÆt want to hear it. She began spending more and more time away from Hinata Sou, just taking long walks around the district to avoid having to talk to anyone.

It was during one such walk when it started to rain. Despite her depression, she still couldnÆt help but seek shelter, ducking into a nearby bar. Just the sight of the place made her heart ache worse, but at the same time it seemed somehow ironic, in a horrible way. Making her way to the bar itself, Naru sat down on a stool, ordering some sake in a miserable voice.

ôIÆm sorry miss,ö replied the bartender in a contrite tone, clearly taking pity on the bedraggled woman, ôbut we need you to pay in advance.ö

Naru closed her eyes in a silent, mournful sigh. SheÆd left her purse back at Hinata Sou, which was just perfect. Silently preparing herself to go back out into the rain, which was beginning to pick up, Naru had just started to stand when the guy next to her, whom she hadnÆt even realized was there, slid a five hundred-yen coin towards across the bar. ôHere,ö said the unfamiliar man, ôitÆs on me.ö

Blinking in mild surprise, Naru turned to regard the person whoÆd just bought her a drink. He seemed fairly nondescript. His black shoes were nice enough, and blended in nicely with the black corduroy pants he was wearing. The dark jacket he wore over his white shirt was slightly long, not quite a trench coat, but longer than what a salaryman would have worn. He didnÆt quite seem to be a barfly, but at the same time, seemed to fit in perfectly with the almost-but-not-quite respectable crowdà

AuthorÆs Notes: This is based on the framing fiction for ôThe Man at the Bar,ö from The Book of Unremitting Horror.
 

EagleCeres

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#2
dark DARK DARK

brrr... took me a while to get into responding
very clean, very unassuming and scary once you get into the implications and intricacies of the man...

and delving into Kei's psyche so deep, especially post-manga/anime is something few authors do... Kudos!
 
#3
Fucking SPECTACULAR.
 

Antimatter

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#4
Dark Knight Gafgar said:
Fucking SPECTACULAR.
This man speaks truth.

Seriously, awesome story. I can honestly say I hadn't seen anything like that before.
 

Israfel

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#6
Hmm, nice, so all of Naru's abuse finally really caught up with Keitaro and, in away, truly killed him, though I have to wonder what Japanese demon you're basing 'Taro Yamada' off of?
 

Alzrius

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#7
Israfel said:
Hmm, nice, so all of Naru;s abuse finally really caught up with Keitaro and, in away, truly killed him, though I have to wonder what Japanese demon you're basing 'Taro Yamada' off of?
The author's note may not have been as clear as I'd intended it. It's supposed to convey that the character that kills Keitaro is drawn from a creature ("The Man at the Bar") from the d20 RPG book mentioned there.
 

Israfel

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The author's note may not have been as clear as I'd intended it. It's supposed to convey that the character that kills Keitaro is drawn from a creature ("The Man at the Bar") from the d20 RPG book mentioned there.
Ah okay, I assumed you were just referencing a book in which this particular creature was used, not where it originated from. Speaking of odd creatures from books I finally got around to read 'The Call Of Cthulhu' today, that was fun.
 

SimmyC

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#9
I see. Have no clue about that... -_- but still, this is one fantastic dark story! :)
 

Wonderbee31

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#10
Wow! This was dark, and read nice as well. Really enjoyed the way Keitaro's end came, and now, it looks like it's Naru's turn? Too bad for her, but wondered if anyone else at Hinata-Sou could follow after her, maybe Kitsune in grief for her friend?

Just a great story here. :mmm:
 
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