Naruto Like The Fist Of An Angry God

Knyght

The Collector
#1
Most fanfics with Naruto as main character focus on him as a ninjutsu user, primarily with Shadow Clones, Rasengan and various elements. Some branch out into other areas like kenjutsu, fuuinjutsu or even genjutsu. Yet IÆve rarely come across a story where NarutoÆs a taijutsu specialist. ItÆs understandable to a degree since heÆs a chakra powerhouse and taijutsu is the one of the few styles that doesnÆt need chakra. But he possesses many traits that make him ideal for becoming a martial arts master.

The most obvious trait is his regeneration which allows him to heal many injuries within a short space of time. Considering the method of strengthening muscles, Naruto would be able to train his muscles, tear them in the process and then repair them with absurd speed. Repeat the process and we have a freakishly strong and fast Naruto. Then thereÆs his Uzumaki heritage earns him a unique type of body and the yang chakra constantly flowing into his body from the Kyuubi which can easily be important factors in his growth and chakra enhancement.

Plot-wise, these are main starting points I see for this story:

1) Pre-Canon: NarutoÆs repeated failure at ninjutsu and genjutsu result in him focusing on almost entirely on his taijutsu since heÆs actually decent at it. That could lead to him improving his style or emulating what he sees other do possibly starting to consciously use chakra enhancement if it comes up in class. WouldnÆt be implausible for one of his teachers or Gai to see him and gives him a nudge in the right direction.

2) Wave: Naruto might decide to expand on what he learnt from tree walking and start focusing it in different parts of his body, just like Sasuke does against Haku. It likely wouldn't do much to effect the mission but the seed would be planted.

3) Forest of Death: Say that Naruto doesnÆt get sealed by Orochimaru or wakes up before the Sound team arrives. He looks back at the fight and recalls how hard he had managed to hit that snake when he was pissed. So he wonders if he can replicate those effects, perhaps asking Sakura for some ideas, and considers using his chakra for muscle enhancement. Then the Sound team arrive and Naruto goes to put theory into practice.

4) Training Month: Not much of a stretch for him to start on this because the Final Exam given how much time he wasted during this month. He'd likely get the same inspiration as the Forest of Death concept though now he'd have memories of Kiba, Neji/Hinata and Lee's fighting styles as well.

Now can you imagine how freaking dangerous Naruto would be if he trained nearly as hard as Rock Lee? Not even considering that heÆd likely have Shadow Clones too.

And since Naruto doesnÆt share LeeÆs lack of talent, heÆs capable of taking this further with other areas. Roushi and the two Raikage have shown us how deadly nintaijutsu can be. Mastering nature transformation and developing Wind Release Armour would make Naruto one of the deadliest motherfuckers around.

Thoughts and ideas, people?
 

Meinos Kaen

Well-Known Member
#3
Nice idea. And for inspiration, I'd suggest taking some pages out of Jade Empire, the game from Bioware. In my fanfiction Leadership, I had Ami recreate two of the game's style with chakra.
 

Knyght

The Collector
#4
Figured that I could expand on those starting points I mentioned:

Pre-Canon: Despite having been at the Academy for over two years, Naruto is still failing to successfully pull off ninjutsu and genjutsu while several of his other skills are still sub-par. The only area he has gets relatively high marks in is his taijutsu. One day, he overhears an argument where an older kid is being mocked for being so bad at ninjutsu and genjutsu to which he replies that heÆd become a great ninja without either. This causes Naruto to realise that he should focus on his taijutsu as well though he isnÆt planning to forego the other ninja arts entirely.

So he starts to train his taijutsu and push his body harder than ever. He does what he can to observe the styles used by other students and ninja, develops a harsh training regime and does all sorts of physical activities. He might even attempt to study taijutsu with varying degrees of success. Given his inspiration here, he could become training partners with Lee. It could be interesting if this Lee decides to focus in kenjutsu instead of taijutsu given a recent discussion from in the Funny Naruto Pics Thread.

At some point he learns about chakra enhancement, something which allows them to perform the superhuman feats that they do, and discovers that this can be taken further in various ways. His heritage and Yang-oriented chakra make him well-suited to it though it still isnÆt easy; his chakra control is terrible and improper chakra enhancement can be dangerous to his body which heÆll probably learn first hander. But his talent and healing means he can progress faster in this area than most others would at his age. His chakra control improves by default thanks to his enhancement but he might still suck at the Bunshin no Jutsu with its probable Yin nature. Though if he improves in other areas then he probably wouldnÆt be the dead last anymore which could affect the genin teams.

He could graduate normally or do the scroll method, mainly depending on whether the writer wants him to start off with Kage Bunshin. Or he could go a different route and be allowed to take the graduation exam early in which case heÆd probably be replace one of the members on GaiÆs team.
 
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