Mercsenary said:
Oh yeah have fun with it.
See the thing is I can imagine all these wonderful scenes but when trying to flesh them out into an actual fic it becomes this stilted samey mess.
See the thing is I can imagine all these wonderful scenes but when trying to flesh them out into an actual fic it becomes this stilted samey mess.
That happens to me too actually, but sometimes I get lucky and manage to write things even though I have my doubts about writing proper enough.
I wrote this bad, plain weird snippet on a whim after and while listening to this song again.
Steppenwolf - Born to be Wild
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"Where the hell is he?!?" Naru Narusegawa muttered, tinges of impatience and anger in her voice. "We were supposed to study together and he's late!"
"Ara?" Her study partner from Okinawa looked up from the notes and books she was working on. "Now that you mention it Urashima-kun should've been here by now. I wonder what's keeping him up?"
"Yeah, Mutsumi. I bet something fishy is going on and that Keitaro's somehow behind it." Naru jumped up as she declared it.
"But what exactly is Urashima-kun doing?" Mutsumi Otohime asked her younger friend.
"Dunno," Naru admitted glumly and sat down again by their study table. "Beats me what that idiot and pervert is up to now."
"You could ask the others if they've seen him," Mutsumi advised with a friendly smile.
"Okay, just let me finish a page or two of notes and we'll find out where he's at."
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Somewhere far away from Hinata several individuals on motorcycles resembling choppers were just beginning on their maiden trek cruising around all the parts on the country their bikes could carry them, passing through small towns and villages and large cities with a confidence strengthened by the number of the travellers and the safety that came with numbers.
The sound of Born to be Wild by Steppenwolf was coming from multitudes of radios from these mechanized vehicles.
Ryouga Hibiki was humming along with the catchy tone coming from the radio attached to his motorcycle while his girlfriend Akari clung to his back.
Nozomu Itoshiki was doing his utmost from going into his usual episodes of despair, critical thoughts about society and biker sub culture echoing through his skull.
Tenchi Masaki was just happy to take some time off from Ayeka and Ryoko and everything in general that happened in his chaotic life like the occasional threat from outer space of the week..
Negi Springfield cried out and clung tighter to Asuna Kagurazaka as she increased the speed of her impressive chopper, the bells in her hair tinkling as she took the lead, looking forward to to when to cover version by Slayer came up, she had gotten interested in metal after her team-up with Eddie Riggs some loops ago.
Tomoya Okazaki's bike had a sidecar where his wife Nagisa and their daughter Ushio were seated, and all three of them seemed to enjoy what they saw as a family trip with a mismatched gang of people who didn't seem to have much in common with each other but still found themselves together on a journey.
Inu-Yasha pinched his nose seated in the sidecar of Kagome's bike, holding onto Kagome's bow and quiver of arrows. The half-demon had to admit that Kagome Higurashi looked quite alluring dressed up as a biker and sporting sunglasses.
The young Chinese martial artist having the misfortune being named Pantyhose Taro had only joined this trek in order to search for Happosai throughout the country and try again and again to make the old man change his accursed name.
The entire SOS Brigade, all of them mounted on their separate bikes except for Mikuru Asahina who was crying and clinging to the young man bearing the nickname Kyon.
Keitaro Urashima was whistling along as pearly laughter came from his travelling companion Amara Su, the princess and older sister of princess Kaolla Su of Molmol, who held on gently but firmly to him.
There were so many others on the journey that he had trouble remembering all of them, but he did think he saw Onizuka somewhere. He just hoped that all the other people looking for them wouldn't catch up yet. This loop was starting to get interesting after all when Amara offered to teach him all the carnal delights only a princess of the blood royal of Molmol could give...