Evangelion Misato/Kaji framework

[Mr. Pointy]

A little history. I started writing this as a lemon about 3 years ago, but I never completed it because I lost interest in writing. But for some reason, I kind of feel like I got that interest back now.

I posted it on the lemontastica forums way back, and one of the suggestions was to frame it like a NGE episode 25/26 Instrumentality story. I wanted to write something pornographic using the Misato/Kaji relationship at first. But the more I wrote the framework, the less I wanted to write the sex. Yet it also doesn't feel like analytic like an Instrumentality piece.

I want to do something with this, but I can't really find the direction it should go. Suggestions?

Tentative title: A Sunday

The early morning haze cleared from the eyes of Misato Katsuragi, a normally talkative Tokyo-3 University student. It was definitely early morning - those haggard shafts of light coming between the curtains don't look so bright and angelic during any other time of day.

She drew a sharp breath through her nose to help her awaken her senses. From what the purple-haired woman could tell, she was lying on her back on a terribly uncomfortable mattress.

One thing that was obvious to Miss Katsuragi, dulled senses or not, was the arm of her new boyfriend. He was a scruffy, albeit handsome student by the name of Ryoji Kaji, draped across her stomach, just under her breasts.

Misato couldn't remember exactly how long it had been since she and her boyfriend had decided to go on this sexual bender. She remembered that they went drinking on a Sunday night and then got back to his dorm room. Thankfully it had its own bathroom since she needed to vomit and all.

Then they fucked, as all drunken horny couples do when in lust. Though how they had come to stay in his room and rut for what seemed to be nigh on a week, was something Misato couldn't recall.

He was very, very good, she concluded, though lacking a definite answer.

Misato smacked her lips to wet her parched mouth. She could taste beer, the shrimp and corn pizza from last night, his cum and the slightly sour flavour of sleep. Never the best way to start the morning, she thought.

She then felt her boyfriend stir.

“Kaji?” She whispered, a question forming on her lips.

Misato stared up at the ceiling, feeling his body shift on her right side.

“Yeah?” Kaji croaked, still attempting fully regain consciousness.

“What day is it?”

“Hmmmmph.” Kaji stretched down to the floor, attempting to grab whatever he was after out of his discarded pants. “Where is it?” He fished out his phone and checked the date. “Erm... the 7th. It's Sunday.”

Misato sighed. It really had been a whole week. She rubbed her eyes.

“We should get back to class tomorrow.”

Kaji threw his phone on a bundle of clothes in the corner of his room. He propped himself up on his elbow to get a better look at Misato.

“Yeah. Probably,” he sighed. There was a slight, but unmistakably carefree grin on his face. It only made Misato frown.

“Do you think we missed much?” Her tone showing the barest hint of worry at how their grades might suffer.

Kaji, being the charmer that he was, cocked his eyebrow, rolled his eyes and replied in the most deadpan drawl he could muster, “I doubt it.”

“Yeah.” Misato had to chuckle. It wasn’t that funny, but Kaji had a way of making her forget about important things like classes and social interaction.

“Blah blah blah Second Impact blah blah blah polar ice caps blah blah blah dick.” Giggled Misato, doing a rather lame impression of one of her lecturers. Kaji chuckled, though more because he thought his girlfriend saying 'dick' was funny.

After a minute, Misato became serious again. “What will we say when we get back?” She wondered.

“Sick.”

The purple-haired woman frowned at Kaji's clipped reply. “Everyone will see through that.”

“Anniversary of your father's death or something.”

“Fuck you,” clipped Misato. “Besides, it isn't.”

Kaji interjected, “Yeah but most of the people aren't gonna follow it up. Some your friends would know, I guess. But what are they gonna say?”

Misato's reply was an ambiguous grunt. She smirked as an amusing thought came to mind. “God, Ritsuko would shit a brick if she found out what we'd been doing all this time.”

“That's the blonde one, right? The one who smokes a lot?” Kaji asked.

“Yeah.”

Kaji grew a shit-eating grin, “I think I'd like to see that.”

“Ewwwwwww! You sick perv!” Misato punched him in the shoulder.

“I'm kidding! I'm kidding!” Kaji protested.

Of course he was kidding, but Misato didn't take kindly to weird-ass poop fetish jokes about her friend. Even if they were funny. “I hope you are.” She grumbled.

“Yeah, I'm just...” Kaji wanted to reply, but his thoughts into other areas. “Ritsuko. She seems so...”

M - So... what?.

K - Uptight, I guess.

M - Nah, it's not that. She's... not great around men. That's all.

K - So... she's a lesbian then?

M - No.

K - Awwwww.

M - Stop it.

M - Are you gonna shave that?

K - Are you gonna shave... that?

M - No.

K - Well there's your answer.

M - Do you love me?

K - That's a silly question to ask.

M - What does th-mmmmm.

M - Oh fuck! Don't stop! I'm coming!

K - Misato - God!

 

[goldenarms]

A little history. I started writing this as a lemon about 3 years ago, but I never completed it because I lost interest in writing. But for some reason, I kind of feel like I got that interest back now.

I posted it on the lemontastica forums way back, and one of the suggestions was to frame it like a NGE episode 25/26 Instrumentality story. I wanted to write something pornographic using the Misato/Kaji relationship at first. But the more I wrote the framework, the less I wanted to write the sex. Yet it also doesn't feel like analytic like an Instrumentality piece.

I want to do something with this, but I can't really find the direction it should go. Suggestions?

Well, for starters, you should post this in the NGE Lemon section unless you're cutting out the sexual stuff entirely.

 

[Mr. Pointy]

^Well that's what I'm thinking of doing if I do it as an Instrumentality style story.

I think I'll have to watch NGE through one more time.