I've had this idea floating around in my head ever since I posted this snippet to the "new Intros" thread:
http://z14.invisionfree.com/The_Fanfiction_Forum/index.php?showtopic=10590&view=findpost&p=22042945
The problem is, I'm unsure where to go beyond the scene where Naruto learns kage bunshin, other than including my "New Intros" introduction. Although I'm unsure about a Kyubi playing a 12-year old saying he likes sex in human form. I might alter it so that he says he intends to start having sex again once his human guise is old enough because it's so much better as a human male than as a fox, or I might just drop the sex joke completely.
This idea and the "New Intro" snippet is up for adoption.
Mizuki "I'll tell you the truth, Naruto. You remember learning about the demon fox being killed by the 4th twelve years ago, right?"
Iruka broke in, yelling "No! Don't!"
Mizuki, ignoring Iruka, continued "A special rule was created for the village. Nobody was to talk about the fact that the Nine Tailed fox was not killed, only transformed into a baby.
You, Naruto are the Nile Tailed Demon Fox!"
"The Fox that killed Iruka's Parents and devastated the village."
Mizuki was surprised by Naruto's reaction. Instead of shock and denial, Naruto instead responded only with a bowed head and a look of deep shame and regret.
Naruto then replied "Yes, and just how did you find out that secret instead of the cover story that I was supposed to be sealed in a jinchuuriki? I was put under a genjutsu by Madada Uchia and tricked into going through the village like a mindless beast. He thought it was fitting revenge since I fought against him to help Hashirama.
Since both of you obviously know the secret, I can safely transform..."
To both their shock, the shape of Naruto morphs from that of a young child to that of a large fox with nine tails.
Iruka seems to be going into catatonic shock, while Mizuki starts to lose bladder control.
"I won't let you hurt Iruka-sensi. Let's go for round two! You aren't just facing me as I was when I was forced to attack the village as a mindless beast, you're facing me with full control of my faculties and abilities. Believe it!"
The only surprising thing that happens in the ensuing smack down is that Mizuki lives so that he can answer some pointed questions...
Afterwards, Naruto resumes his child form and has to have a conversation with Iruka, who is in a state of shock and fear.
I've tried to write the dialog, but I keep deleting it because I think it sucks. If somebody wants to see my pathetic attempts, I'll consider posting it and accept constructive criticism. I just haven't bothered because I can't really figure how I'd continue beyond the team introduction, unless Naruto decides to transform to get the bells and scares the crap out of the village, everything would be a re-hash of canon until the battle with Haku.
http://z14.invisionfree.com/The_Fanfiction_Forum/index.php?showtopic=10590&view=findpost&p=22042945
The problem is, I'm unsure where to go beyond the scene where Naruto learns kage bunshin, other than including my "New Intros" introduction. Although I'm unsure about a Kyubi playing a 12-year old saying he likes sex in human form. I might alter it so that he says he intends to start having sex again once his human guise is old enough because it's so much better as a human male than as a fox, or I might just drop the sex joke completely.
This idea and the "New Intro" snippet is up for adoption.
Mizuki "I'll tell you the truth, Naruto. You remember learning about the demon fox being killed by the 4th twelve years ago, right?"
Iruka broke in, yelling "No! Don't!"
Mizuki, ignoring Iruka, continued "A special rule was created for the village. Nobody was to talk about the fact that the Nine Tailed fox was not killed, only transformed into a baby.
You, Naruto are the Nile Tailed Demon Fox!"
"The Fox that killed Iruka's Parents and devastated the village."
Mizuki was surprised by Naruto's reaction. Instead of shock and denial, Naruto instead responded only with a bowed head and a look of deep shame and regret.
Naruto then replied "Yes, and just how did you find out that secret instead of the cover story that I was supposed to be sealed in a jinchuuriki? I was put under a genjutsu by Madada Uchia and tricked into going through the village like a mindless beast. He thought it was fitting revenge since I fought against him to help Hashirama.
Since both of you obviously know the secret, I can safely transform..."
To both their shock, the shape of Naruto morphs from that of a young child to that of a large fox with nine tails.
Iruka seems to be going into catatonic shock, while Mizuki starts to lose bladder control.
"I won't let you hurt Iruka-sensi. Let's go for round two! You aren't just facing me as I was when I was forced to attack the village as a mindless beast, you're facing me with full control of my faculties and abilities. Believe it!"
The only surprising thing that happens in the ensuing smack down is that Mizuki lives so that he can answer some pointed questions...
Afterwards, Naruto resumes his child form and has to have a conversation with Iruka, who is in a state of shock and fear.
I've tried to write the dialog, but I keep deleting it because I think it sucks. If somebody wants to see my pathetic attempts, I'll consider posting it and accept constructive criticism. I just haven't bothered because I can't really figure how I'd continue beyond the team introduction, unless Naruto decides to transform to get the bells and scares the crap out of the village, everything would be a re-hash of canon until the battle with Haku.