Akamatsuverse Negima fused loop madness

dan27

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#1
I saw a snippet where negi is first introduced in a raman fused loop and though I'd be pro active and get the topic started
 

zeebee1

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#2
Could you think for a moment? The bset way to get a thread started is to put something in it. Not have nothing except a thread title that doesn't use caps.
 

Nanya

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#3
I give thanks to Innortal for some of the information here...

And, I think I just gave some continuity here...

Start here.

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Negi sighed as he walked to class on the first day, again. At least everything had gone normally so far. He just wished that Ranma or Lina were here, but he hadn't sensed hide nor hair of their magical power. Ranma was a great older brother, and took pressure off of his shoulders from all the women. And he had never met a master of black magic like Lina before. He didn't think he was a match for the likes of Jack Rakkan, Eva or his father yet, but he was relatively sure he could take that Oni king if it showed up again.

"Boya, we have a problem here." Eva's voice spoke up in his head. Blinking, he looked over the classroom. Nothing looked out of place, nope, there wasn't... Wait, who was... Negi paled and looked at the roll call sheet. Nope there was no mistake. Blond hair, one eye red, one eye green, smiling happily, a floating bunny above her right shoulder...

Sitting in his class, next to Zazie, was Vivio Takamachi.

Both Eva and Negi remembered what happened when the girl got hurt, even if it was slightly, in the Hogwarts loop that had ended. Both of them privately blamed Bender for that loop.

(---)

Negi stared at the sheer damage of that attack. "What?"

Lina, standing next to him, looked on, her face still. "Draco and his two friends weren't very careful with their magic practice." She said softly, though Negi could hear the steel in her voice. "Seems that Nanoha's daughter got brought into this loop with her and Fate..."

"Oh?"

"Yeah, and one of those three hit the little girl upside the head. She'll be alright but..."

"STARLIGHT BREAKER!"

Negi trembled, okay, THAT had been quite a bit of overkill... Before anyone could say anything to it, the older looping Ranma had grabbed Raising Heart and pulled Nanoha away, whispering something to her, getting her to calm down and rush off towards the school nurse. "What the?" Negi stepped back as all the other anchors started to glow brightly. "What's wrong?"

Lina turned to Negi. "You should know, before these loops started, most of us only had ourselves and close personal friends to rely on, most of us grew up with a parent missing, dead, or alone in some way, shape or form, so, when the loops started, most of us anchors, until our friends started looping were rather lonely. So, that caused a rule to come up between us anchors..."

"That is?"

"Unless the person in question is a jerk, an ass, or being a moron... You don't mess with a member of our family." She said as her turn came up. "Oh boys... Ready to taste my... DIL BRAND!"

"AIIIEEEE!!!!"

(---)

Negi shuddered. Nope, he did NOT want Mahora to become ground zero for a Starlight Breaker. It didn't matter if Nanoha was in this loop or not. She would find out and then whatever hurt Vivio was going to be blown up, then he would be next.

Nope, he had to make sure that she wasn't hurt, no matter what.

Looking at her face, he suddenly got VERY worried for some reason.
 

zeebee1

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#4
Negi seemed to forget Negima rule #1. If a girl is in Negi's class she will eventually fall for him.
 

Nanya

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#5
Well, the thought of being on the receiving end of a pink beam of death is not Negi's idea of fun...

So...

He's more worried about what she'll do if Vivio gets hurt...

Though maybe he should worry more about Vivio if she falls for him...
 

armedlord

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#7
zeebee1 said:
Especially since she's looping.
...damn it.

here's a small piece.

***

Why is this happening to me again?

"Dearly beloved, we are gathered here today..."

Apparently, after the loop with Vivio was over with, the next time he was in a loop with Nanoha, she had practically dragged him next to an altar, and somehow gotten Belldandy to perform a shotgun wedding on the spot.

"...to have and to hold..."

It was an...interesting thing for the Anchors of the loops. While going to a marrige ceremony wasn't so interesting, the fact that it was a marriage between two loopers was.

"I do."

The fact that he died from the aftermath of the honeymoon and gone into another loop didn't seem to slow either Fate or Nanoha down to get Negi married once again to Vivio.

"Negi. Do you..."

From last count, this should be his tenth marriage with Vivio. As per usual, Ranma was being his best man...and being hogtied as usual in an attempt for every other woman in the audience to get Ranma in some kind of polygamous marriage just so they could get a piece of, as they say it, 'The Manly god above all other Manly Gods.'

They really are serious about this I guess. At least he's kind of in the same boat as I am at times.

"...Until death to you part?"

Feeling Raising Heart jabbing behind his back and knowing the consequences after the fifth marriage, of where he tried to answer 'no' and caused Vivio to cry, he gave a small nod before his answer.

"...I do."

How was he going to get out of this?
 

Nanya

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#8
:rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:

*Can't stop laughing*

Oh, that was GREAT!

I dunno if Eva's laughing her lolicon butt off or scared at that moment.
 
#9
Why do I get the feeling that Negi decided to emulate his father's disappearance? :p

Of course, that may led to "Great Crusade" Scenario where Vivo and his harem searching for Negi... :snigger:
 

Nanya

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#10
ZeroRanger said:
Why do I get the feeling that Negi decided to emulate his father's disappearance? :p

Of course, that may led to "Great Crusade" Scenario where Vivo and his harem searching for Negi... :snigger:
Hee heehee. That is funny.

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"Honestly, is it that bad?"

Negi, in his fake adult form, glared at Ranma before drinking another shot of liquor. "No, it's not. I just wish that those two wouldn't drag me to the alter every time they're in the loops."

Ranma laughed and took another drink himself. "Oh, I know that feeling." He then smirked evilly. "Should i call you son-in-law?"

"GAH! Don't do that!" Negi cried out. He then blinked. "Wait, when did you marry them?"

"I didn't, I just wanted to mess with you."

Negi grumbled, he needed to get back at Ranma for that one.

"Besides, at least you don't have to worry about certain problems, huh?"

"I fail to see how being unable to move every morning because of what Vivio does to me not worrying about certain problems."

Ranma shrugged. "At least she's not complaining about you not able to perform."

Negi blushed and opened his mouth. "There you are!" Negi blinked and turned, paling as he saw Vivio and several of his students standing at the door. "Come on now! Your harem and I need more loving!"

"Help!"

"Good luck to you, Negi!" Ranma raised a glass, laughing softly as Negi was dragged off. "Remember to use healing spells on him, ladies, and make sure he gets plenty to drink!"

"Right!"

"Traitor!" Negi cried as he was dragged out.
 

Shikaze

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#11
*Can't stop laughing*

Oh, that was GREAT!

I dunno if Eva's laughing her lolicon butt off or scared at that moment.
Laughing. Definitely laughing. And more likely partnering with Nodoka to find a way in Vivio's psyche in order to made her share the goods.
 

bissek

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#12
How many people have been injured during the 'speak now or forever hold your peace' section?

Remember, Chisame got Ayame to help her fight Chachamaru's net avatars by telling her that Negi would be forced to marry Chao if he lost the big fight at Mahorafest.
 

Nanya

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#13
bissek said:
How many people have been injured during the 'speak now or forever hold your peace' section?

Remember, Chisame got Ayame to help her fight Chachamaru's net avatars by telling her that Negi would be forced to marry Chao if he lost the big fight at Mahorafest.
Makes me wonder if Belldandy supports Polygamy.

It's not like the gods have taboos on stuff like that...

But will others go for it?
 

bissek

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#14
Belldandy is a Norse Goddess (Actually, she's technically a giantess, but since giants and gods interbreed often in Norse mythology, and Loki, who was born a midget frost giant, is considered god of flame, the races are apparently quite similar. Skuld is also supposed to do double duty as Norn and Valkyrie). Norse mythology does not accept polygamy. Having multiple wives one at a time is allowable, multiple wives at the same time is not.

One wife and multiple mistresses is allowable, though.
 

Tsukino_kage

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#15
So Vivio really has become just like Nanoha... How old is she in this story?
 

Nanya

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#16
Tsukino_kage said:
So Vivio really has become just like Nanoha... How old is she in this story?
1: Time Loops

2: As old as she wants to be physically.

Which applies to Negi as well.

It's just his unfortunate luck that Nanoha and Fate think he's a good guy for their little girl.
 

armedlord

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#17
It's just his unfortunate luck that Nanoha and Fate think he's a good guy for their little girl.
*looks at his snippet*

...Uh... :unsure!:

Considering that it's a Shotgun Wedding...Add along with a misunderstanding from Vivio about Negi and herself sleeping together once with how much she loves him that I had kind of planned to put in eariler on, but took off due to <s>lack of brain</s> time....

Yeah, one of my washed out ideas was having Vivio saying that she also slept with Ranma and they misunderstood that as well.
 

Nanya

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#18
THey'd prolly wonder if he treated Vivio right...

Considering one of the fused loops Fate tied up Ranma, Ichigo and Naruto so that Nanoha, Lina and Anko could have their way with them... And to take some pressure from Nanoha off of herself...

Not that she feels good about that... She did appologize... Even if the sex was great.
 

bissek

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#19
Of course the true potential horror is that since Vivio is from a culture where dimensional travel is possible, once the loops finally end, she'll still be going after Negi.
 

biigoh

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#20
Negi's balls dropped in sheer terror and absolute manliness as he said "no" to Belldandy as she conducted the wedding.

At his answer, Raising Heart prodded him in the back again. "I refuse. Nanoha. and Vivio, I am sorry. You may think you like me. But right now... I have nothing but utmost contempt for you."

As the pair of mismatched eyes, emerald and ruby crimson widened in shock, before tears welled up, Negi had a brief moment of fear before Nanoha's words.

"You made her cry."

And pink light filled his world. He just had to time this.... right. A pity that his hands couldn't be seen due to the long sleeves of his... 'marriage costume' that 'Colonel Sanders' made for him. Or Nanoha would have seen the tattoo-like circuits form on his arms.

"Stagnet. Complexio."

"Full Power. Maximum Destruction! STARLIGHT BREAKER!" "Supplementum pro Armationem!"

Before the point blank barrage of Nanoha's starlight breaker, Negi's body simply disappeared...

Before he reappeared behind Belldandy, inverted eye coloration as his pitch black skin was marred only by pink flashes of lightning.

"I'm afraid that this time... I'm not letting you walk over me, Nanoha. And to misquote you, you will listen to me or you will get beaten up. Fail to listen, and I'll beat you up again."

The survival instincts of those gathered for said wedding had them move aside to allow for this entertainment to be enjoyed. After all, it was rare for anyone to stand up to the White Devil. Much less one of the other main looping 'Anchors'.

"That is an interesting trick. Bind!"

Golden white ribbons wrapped up Negi who simply disapeared from where he stood, only to reappear as Nanoha disappeared with a sonic boom and he stood in her place, a single fist pointing in the direction where she had appparent being hit...

"Your spell is powerful, Nanoha... gathering in the power of the enviroment before blowing things up. And with it fuelling my magia erebea, I now possess Divinus Ultio ultionis. I'll let you experience this... properly while cooling your head off."

As Nanoha stood up, she had the unpleasent experience of being punched from behind, and send forwards at supersonic speeds. Her damaged barrier jacket proved... insuffient to keep the White Devil from simply exploding into a pink mist as she impacted the ground several hundred meters away.

As the world faded to black, Negi suspected that he should have signed on with that Aizen guy or perhaps Fate Avericus... and now... he just might, to not have to deal with this nonsense for the next few loops.

***

AN -

Divinus Ultio ultionis = Divine Punishment
 

Nanya

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#21
Aww...

That's not nearly as much fun tho...

Really, if you're going to have him get revenge, wouldn't it have been better through pranks instead of all-out violence?

Besides, an all-out fight with any anchor would rip reality a new one and I'm certain that Kami-sama and Hild aren't going to be very happy about all the headaches and paperwork that'll come from THIS one!

Really, the anchors aren't too interested in fighting each other (other than making the universe explode, there's no real point to it anymore) but rather one-upping each other through deeds and pranks.
 

biigoh

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#22
He's basically borrowing a page from Nanoha-style diplomacy. He'll beat into Nanoha's head that he doesn't want to play with FULL POWER! TOTAL DESTRUCTION!"

Also... he only killed Nanoha, the same thing she's been doing to him for how many loops again and who knows what else she likely did to him with Hayate and Fate? Which resets the loop, not destroy a world.

Even a gentleman has his limits.
 

Nanya

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#23
Yeah.

Honestly, I wasn't the one who did the weddings. I'm innocent on that.

But, no messing with family members...

That's just something that even Negi would agree with.
 

Nanya

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#24
biigoh, I'm gunna add to what you wrote...

Just a warning...

...

It's going to take awhile, I'll put it up when I'm done with it.
 

dan27

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#25
biigoh said:
Negi's balls dropped in sheer terror and absolute manliness as he said "no" to Belldandy as she conducted the wedding.

At his answer, Raising Heart prodded him in the back again. "I refuse. Nanoha. and Vivio, I am sorry. You may think you like me. But right now... I have nothing but utmost contempt for you."

As the pair of mismatched eyes, emerald and ruby crimson widened in shock, before tears welled up, Negi had a brief moment of fear before Nanoha's words.

"You made her cry."

And pink light filled his world. He just had to time this.... right. A pity that his hands couldn't be seen due to the long sleeves of his... 'marriage costume' that 'Colonel Sanders' made for him. Or Nanoha would have seen the tattoo-like circuits form on his arms.

"Stagnet. Complexio."

"Full Power. Maximum Destruction! STARLIGHT BREAKER!" "Supplementum pro Armationem!"

Before the point blank barrage of Nanoha's starlight breaker, Negi's body simply disappeared...

Before he reappeared behind Belldandy, inverted eye coloration as his pitch black skin was marred only by pink flashes of lightning.

"I'm afraid that this time... I'm not letting you walk over me, Nanoha. And to misquote you, you will listen to me or you will get beaten up. Fail to listen, and I'll beat you up again."

The survival instincts of those gathered for said wedding had them move aside to allow for this entertainment to be enjoyed. After all, it was rare for anyone to stand up to the White Devil. Much less one of the other main looping 'Anchors'.

"That is an interesting trick. Bind!"

Golden white ribbons wrapped up Negi who simply disapeared from where he stood, only to reappear as Nanoha disappeared with a sonic boom and he stood in her place, a single fist pointing in the direction where she had appparent being hit...

"Your spell is powerful, Nanoha... gathering in the power of the enviroment before blowing things up. And with it fuelling my magia erebea, I now possess Divinus Ultio ultionis. I'll let you experience this... properly while cooling your head off."

As Nanoha stood up, she had the unpleasent experience of being punched from behind, and send forwards at supersonic speeds. Her damaged barrier jacket proved... insuffient to keep the White Devil from simply exploding into a pink mist as she impacted the ground several hundred meters away.

As the world faded to black, Negi suspected that he should have signed on with that Aizen guy or perhaps Fate Avericus... and now... he just might, to not have to deal with this nonsense for the next few loops.

***

AN -

Divinus Ultio ultionis = Divine Punishment
The only thing I would find bad is being married to the same person for 10 lifetimes although I wonder what's so bad about nanoha I mean negi would be better of married to her or lina inverse though
 
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