One Piece, Troubles of a Fox (I kinda need help)

If I'm going to pair Akemi with someone, who?

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#1
Ok I kinda need help with this.
Akemi is an orphan who has the power of a devil fruit, the powers of a ninetailed fox/ kitsune. She is from Luffy's childhood.

This the basics of Akemi:
Name: Akemi "Kit" or "Aki"
Sex: Female
Age: ~17-20 (currently 17)
Appearance: Silvery-white hair, fox ears and tail((s), can have up to nine). Wears a necklace with three small Hoshi-no-Tama and one larger one. Only wears light, nor-revealing clothing, hoodies, trousers, things with long sleeves, no shorts.
Species: Human-Kitsune
Personality: Quiet. Prefers to stay away from people (especially loud ones.) Warms to people slowly, then too quickly.
Anime/Manga/Game: One Piece
Other: A childhood friend of Luffy, despite her personality.  Hydrophobic and wants to overcome it. Her hydrophobia came before the devil fruit but was worsened due to it.
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Basically what I need help with is:
  • What to name the devil fruit
  • When to start the actual storyline (I was thinking either at the same time as Sanji on the sea going restaurant or on an island where Akemi would have moved to)
  • If I'm going to ship Akemi with someone, who? (that will be in a poll)
  • Should I actually write this (apart from the fact that this is a SI)
This is about it. Oh and if someone wants to give me an OC just tell me and I'll try to add them in.
 

Vog

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#2
I'm on mobile but I have a question and a few suggestions:
1) Why would she revert to human form if her necklace got taken away? Doesn't match up to any Devil Fruit power that we've seen.
2) it'd probably be named the Fox Fox fruit (Model: Kyubbi no Kistune) it'd make it a mythical zoan fruit.
3) don't make this. It reeks of an OP!SI
 
#3
Oops I forgot to take that neckace bit out. Yes it kinda is a SI, they ain't that bad but I probably won't make her join the crew, just have the odd appearance in the storyline. Sorry but I kinda write a lot of SI's at the moment (and sorry if it sounds like ranting). That's a good idea for a fruit name.
Thanks!
 

balthanon

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#4
One possible route to make it more amusing-- Mythological Zoan fruits are pretty much the cream of the crop for Devil Fruits. There's nothing more rare. Would be kind of amusing to have the character have this awesome, ridiculously powerful devil fruit and just be a complete pushover, so she's just this random character that Luffy and company keep rescuing but is determined to head off on her own and prove herself. Have her get randomly kidnapped and press-ganged by the various crews that the Straw Hats go up against because of her Devil Fruit only to end up as a servant or something when they realize how bad a fighter she really is.
 
#5
balthanon said:
One possible route to make it more amusing-- Mythological Zoan fruits are pretty much the cream of the crop for Devil Fruits. There's nothing more rare. Would be kind of amusing to have the character have this awesome, ridiculously powerful devil fruit and just be a complete pushover, so she's just this random character that Luffy and company keep rescuing but is determined to head off on her own and prove herself. Have her get randomly kidnapped and press-ganged by the various crews that the Straw Hats go up against because of her Devil Fruit only to end up as a servant or something when they realize how bad a fighter she really is.
 
#6
Yeah, I started it and got two chapters (I hate the first one though) https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11616191/1/Troubles-of-a-Thalassophobic-Fox


Akemi is likely to join the crew at some point, just not early on, and, as you said balthanon, will likely receive a lot of trouble due to her powers. She, of course, won't be one to be over powered as her Thalassophobia (fear of deep water and such) will be a great hinderence to her.

Anyway, thanks

For some reason it just reposted the quote
 
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