Naruto Raging Waves

[princessbinas]

EDIT: NOW THE STORY IS UP!

REMOVED LINK

I'm writing a Naruto Fanon that revolves around Naruto, Sakura, Sasuke, Kiba, Hinata, and Shikamaru riding out a Hurricane. I am surprised that kind of idea never was written until now, by me. My user page to look out for the story is here. Here's a sneak preview and a few bits:

Naruto then smelled something. It smelled like what a minor thunderstorm smelled like but its smell was more potent.

'Hey Kurama. Do you know what that smell is?', Naruto thought to the fox.

"Your underwear. Did you forget to change it?"

'So that's what the smell was. I got to tell Grandma Tsunade and Pervy-Sage!', Naruto thought and dashed off.

"COME ON! I KNOW WHAT I SAW!", Naruto shouted once more.

"You read a book?"

"I think it said Hairycane."

"I think I know one place..."

"ARE YOU KIDDING ME?!"

 

[zeebee1]

"Quiet down you two!", Sakura said, "Your no better than when Sasuke was egging on Naruto."

"Sasuke didn't throw eggs at me...", Naruto said confused.

In case you were wondering that was proof that I will not read any more of this. If you can't tell jokes then don't.

 

[Cooltony101neo]

long post short, no

 

[princessbinas]

The whole "Sasuke egging Naruto on" wasn't meant to be a joke... That was me keeping them in character. And second chapter is being written. And trust me, most of my stories don't go past the 1000 words mark. So 3000 is considered long for my stories. <_< My jokes involve a lot of slap stick, bathroom stuff, and embarrassment torture half the time.

And if you aren't gonna read it THEN DON'T POST! It's quite that simple. You don't need to call your actions like that.

 

[Knyght]

Did you post the story here and then remove it when you published on FF.net? Yeah, don't do that. If someone posts in the previews section, then I'll read what's written in that section. Put all your work here for us to read and review. If you were several chapters into a story before posting it here, I could understand you linking to the published version but with that fic you should just have the content on here. Less of a hassle for the readers and for anyone responding to the story.

My point being that you should include that chapter you linked to in the opening post. :sisi:

 

[princessbinas]

Actually I was still writing it... Yeah i guess I should have known better... *Sheepish look*

 

[zeebee1]

Naruto being that stupid is not keeping him in character.

 

[princessbinas]

I do have trouble half the time with character keeping. But at least I didn't make him stupid enough to wind surf in the hurricane... Trust I estimate that one person in this entire forum is stupid enough to wind surf in a hurricane. I'm not pointing fingers just stating the facts. At least there were a few moments that he actually had a good idea like getting him and his friend's butts out of danger.

 

[zeebee1]

There's a difference between common sense and a good idea, though they aren't mutually exclusive.