Naruto Random AU idea

#1
After being marked with a cursed seal and losing his father, Hyuuga Neji, genius ninja, devotes his life to training. However, he has an ulterior motive. Developing a previously unknown advanced version of the Byakugan, he slaughters the entire Hyuuga clan, leaving one survivor: his younger sister Hinata.
 

Moshulel

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#2
Reyemile said:
After being marked with a cursed seal and losing his father, Hyuuga Neji, genius ninja, devotes his life to training.? However, he has an ulterior motive.? Developing a previously unknown advanced version of the Byakugan, he slaughters the entire Hyuuga clan, leaving one survivor:? his younger sister Hinata.
Ummmm. No.

Get the facts right and rework the idea mate.
 

TheEcchiSessha

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#3
Reyemile said:
After being marked with a cursed seal and losing his father, Hyuuga Neji, genius ninja, devotes his life to training. However, he has an ulterior motive. Developing a previously unknown advanced version of the Byakugan, he slaughters the entire Hyuuga clan, leaving one survivor: his younger sister Hinata.
Despite being just a "replace name here" idea. It has given me an idea.


What if the Naruto stalker was an Uchiha(female of course) instead of Hinata?

~The Ecchi Sessha
 

Moshulel

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#4
What if the Naruto stalker was an Uchiha(female of course) instead of Hinata?
I think i can point you to a fic like that. It's Sasuke's little sis that has a fixation on Naruto there. I must say though that the idea isn't quite well... exploited. *As in wasted 30 seconds to read that first chapter*
 

GenocideHeart

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#5
TheEcchiSessha said:
Reyemile said:
After being marked with a cursed seal and losing his father, Hyuuga Neji, genius ninja, devotes his life to training.? However, he has an ulterior motive.? Developing a previously unknown advanced version of the Byakugan, he slaughters the entire Hyuuga clan, leaving one survivor:? his younger sister Hinata.
Despite being just a "replace name here" idea. It has given me an idea.


What if the Naruto stalker was an Uchiha(female of course) instead of Hinata?

~The Ecchi Sessha
You're devious. And I like it.

Mwahahahahahahahaha.... :rofl:
 
#6
Neji pulling an Itachi has the small problem of any knowledgable main-family Hyuuga using the seal against him and killing him with a gesture.

Now, if he's enough of a genius to have somehow broken the seal without killing himself and without the clan head becoming aware, that's one thing. Unfortunately, I suspect the seal can't be removed at all.
 

Prince Charon

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#7
nuclear death frog said:
Neji pulling an Itachi has the small problem of any knowledgable main-family Hyuuga using the seal against him and killing him with a gesture.

Now, if he's enough of a genius to have somehow broken the seal without killing himself and without the clan head becoming aware, that's one thing. Unfortunately, I suspect the seal can't be removed at all.
If all the members of the Main House are asleep, he could do it, and it would be called a perfect example of mass silent killing. Would he really kill Hanabi, though? (Perhaps she was going to sound the alarm?)

Also, IIRC, Hinata is Neji's cousin, not his sister.
 
#8
Prince Charon said:
nuclear death frog said:
Neji pulling an Itachi has the small problem of any knowledgable main-family Hyuuga using the seal against him and killing him with a gesture.

Now, if he's enough of a genius to have somehow broken the seal without killing himself and without the clan head becoming aware, that's one thing. Unfortunately, I suspect the seal can't be removed at all.
If all the members of the Main House are asleep, he could do it, and it would be called a perfect example of mass silent killing. Would he really kill Hanabi, though? (Perhaps she was going to sound the alarm?)

Also, IIRC, Hinata is Neji's cousin, not his sister.
Uh, I didn't mention Hinata. But on the subject, Neji and Hinata are technically at least half-siblings, since their fathers were identical twins. We don't know anything about the mothers.
 

Mighty Bob

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#9
Why wouldn' he kill Hanabi? Considering she's Hiashi's choosen favorite I'd imagine she probably has a helluva attitude problem. And he was willing to kill Hinata who treated him like an older brother and with more respect than Branch members usually get from Main house members. Hell, if he was gonna snap and kill em all he might even start with her; just to spite his dear old Uncle.

I happen to like Hinata as a character (though she's made to stutter in fiction way too much and the pairing is too saturated) so the idea of her being an Uchiha stalker rather than a Hyuuga one interests me. How would this work out, Sasuke is a Hyuuga instead and Hinata is left as the sole survivor? Or would this take place in an AU where Itachi doesn't decide to go on a killing spree?
 
#10
Moshulel said:
Ummmm. No.

Get the facts right and rework the idea mate.
You're right, I meant his cousin, and I forgot the details of the seal. Oops. My bad. Thanks so much for helping me refine my... no, wait, you didn't actually point anything useful out to me, you just made a wiseass comment. Never mind.

To Charon and Nuclear Death Frog, actual thanks. There are several ways to justify the sucessful slaughter, from "they were asleep" to "Neji is a genius" to "Whatever the hell the next Byakugan does." I hadn't really thought to hard about it, though I suppose I should. And yes, I meant cousin--my bad.

As for Hanabi's death? I hate Hanabi. Really, she could just as well be alive, though that would probably have major repurcussions in the fic.

And TheEcchiSessha, yes, it is just a "replace name here" fiction, but not one I've seen anywhere else.
 

zeebee1

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#11
Actually it has been done several times before. All times without mention of an evolution of the byakugan. Sometimes the killer was Hanabi. Usually it's Hinata. Often with the guidance of Itachi.
 

Prince Charon

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#12
zeebee1 said:
Actually it has been done several times before. All times without mention of an evolution of the byakugan. Sometimes the killer was Hanabi. Usually it's Hinata. Often with the guidance of Itachi.
I've never seen any fics like that.

Could you give us links, please?
 

puckreathof

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#13
There's also a random Hyuuga OC that destroys the branch family in There Where When Is Now by TokehGecko

It spans three books, with the third incomplete. I think it's darn good, (at least entertaining with some good concepts) although it's strange that an outside Hyuuga is brought in to decimate the clan. Main House, no less, and he only decides to decimate the Branch House. Sadly, there's little focus on them afterwards, save for a few moments with Neji (who is one of the main characters of the fic. Basically, there's all kinds of stuff with Gennins/Chunnins getting kidnapped left and right. I'm going to avoid saying who, because it'd spoil the end of the first book, but let's just say that this story arc starts ... I think it acts as if Naruto and the others succeeded in bringing Sasuke back.)
 
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