Nasuverse Reaching for utopia

Kibbles

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An idea I've been toying around for a long time now. So, in order to either force myself to write more or let the idea die in it's infancy, I'm posting it here ...

Just for the record, I don't have a good history of keeping my attention on any one project for any length of time.

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Prologue: the King's Knight Opening
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My name is Emiya Shirou and I've just murdered a man.

He isn't the first being I'd killed, not even the first human ... that dubious honour goes to that mad scientist that had haunted the city docks a little over a year and a half ago, but he is the first person I killed while looking him in the eyes.

I didn't kill him for his crimes. I didn't kill him because he did something wrong. I killed him because it's the most convenient way to accomplish the mission given to me by the Hierarch of the Consilium of the Rising Sun.

I don't look at the corpse just yet. The stench of blood is enough to dissuade me. I don't think I'm ready to look quite yet.

The name on his passport is Spyridon Stephanidis of the Hellenic Republic. His real name is Dimitris Argyris, same country, born in Thessaloniki. He's ten years older than I am, graduated in Athens ... history. He was working on a doctoral thesis when he left for Japan to fight in the Grail War for the Association and his family's name and honour.

He was a deluded fool, thinking that the Grail's power would grant him the wish he desired.

Still, he is an opening. He had come prepared for the summoning ritual and I had need of both the notes, something my adoptive father and the Divne Thread failed to provide me with, and an artefact with which to summon a spirit familiar for myself.

My mission is to participate in the war for the Pentacle and prevent a disaster like the one that happened ten years ago from repeating itself. The war is the only way I could locate the ritual site and the only way I would get the opportunity to study it's architecture and find a way to dismantle it.

A magus may be incredibly weak against a true mage like myself, but I don't think I'd stand much of a chance against someone the likes of King Arthur, a spirit given shape by humanity's dreams. I'll need help, so the only chance is to summon a servant of my own.

And I don't know what would happen if I were to attempt a summoning. I don't wield magic, like the magus I've just killed. I wield the divine fire, the power stolen from the gods, if you believe the mythical tale of Prometheus to be true. What if my summoning brought forth a dead god, slain by my people during the Celestial War?

So, Dimitris Argyris had to die to give me a chance to compete and a chance to save the lives of everyone in Fuyuki city and possibly the world.

That doesn't make me feel any better, though. Unlike my father, I've never managed to kill my heart and emotions. But ... death isn't something to be feared. I'm not unleashing untold torments and an eternity of hell upon the magus I've slain. No, his soul will go to Stygia, the Kingdom of Crypts, then pass back to the world of the living to be reincarnated.

I hope Dimitris will get a better life, free from magic and the deadly games played in the night.

I take a few more minutes to search the magus' rented apartment. There's a grimoire hidden under a loose floorboard and warded quite well. The wards last less than a second as I decay them into nothingness.

It is said that those that follow the path of the Moros, like myself, wield death. That's ... not quite correct. We wield entropy. The inevitable ending of everything, be they human, sword or even universe.

I can counter magic by wielding the power of endings.

The grimoire will take a lot of work to even open, much less study. Even then, it's useless to me, I can't wield the magic the magus wielded, but it's a good enough source of intelligence. I will send it to the Consilium for study when I find the time.
There's little else to find. A few changes of clothes, a small collection of mementos and a few pictures of the man's family. He had a little brother.

Gavriil. I know everything about my target. It made killing him much harder, but the day I don't find killing hard is the day I've lost sight of who I am. I am a Guardian of the Veil, my purpose is to protect by doing the things no-one else should be forced to do.

I don't look at the corpse even as I leave the apartment. I already know what the police report will contain: 'accidental death'.

There are three magi in Fuyuki city. I am one. One works as a cook in a restaurant that caters to the powerful of the city. He is content to remain anonymous and hidden. The third is in the police force.

Where I am the protector of magi and humanity itself, she is the guardian of the city and it's people, protecting them from all the things hiding in the shadows. She is far more of a hero than I will ever be.

Takenaka Kazue chose to become a protector, facing down a horde of monsters created through the Art with nothing but bravery and her sidearm. I became what I am because I honestly saw no purpose in my life, so I might as well spend it doing something right.

Kazue-san will remove all handle the removal of evidence. She understands the necessity of my work, even if she finds it to be distasteful.

I leave on a motorbike I've borrowed from Fujimura Raiga. He knows of my work and, like any good yakuza, doesn't ask questions. I wouldn't have gotten half as far as I have without his help.

I stop by the pharmacy on my way home, the one that works at all hours. They don't ask too many questions, I'm something of a regular there and I do have the prescription. I'll need the sleeping pills.

I can never sleep without them after I've killed innocents.

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As an aside, the forum's spell-check knows the word 'Yakutsk' but not 'yakuza' ... weird.

Also, the King's Knight Opening (aka Latvian Opening) is a chess move. As named, it is an opening move, but one that often leads to wild, unexpected or tricky positions. Appropriate, I think.
 

nick012000

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So, is this a Mage: the Awakening crossover? The interactions of this Shirou with Archer are bound to be amusing.
 

lask

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Ehh, it's a cool beganing, but I sort of think the power levels were flipped. Awakening mages have profound power, but they don't have MUCH power.
 

Kibbles

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nick012000 said:
So, is this a Mage: the Awakening crossover? The interactions of this Shirou with Archer are bound to be amusing.
The Archer in this conflict will be a very different one going by Shahanshah KuruÜ. He'll play a relatively minor role.

There may be a Counter-Guardian popping up, though. And this Shirou is, arguably, worse than the original one.

lask said:
Ehh, it's a cool beganing, but I sort of think the power levels were flipped. Awakening mages have profound power, but they don't have MUCH power.
I've had countries blown up in my games. Five dots in the matter arcanum and you can, with one success, have forty kilos of antimatter on hand. No containment, but then, it's a suicide move.

Made for a rather impressive, if bad ending, to a campaign. Fortunately, Sweden and Norway aren't all that heavily populated ...

On a more serious note, it's a different skill set and awakened are exactly the wrong kind of opponent for the Type-Moon mages. They are a nightmare to hit in the first place and most of their spells are line-of-sight instant-death type (in particular the Death and Forces Arcana).


In other news, the chapter is progressing slower than I've planned. I've got a lot on my plate at the moment with a difficult exam coming up and my blasted sense of honour getting the better of me. By the way, designing a campaign setting from the ground up is hard work.

So, I'll be posting bits and pieces concerning the setting of the story in between chapters. It's not meant to reveal too much, but there's hints of future developments in them.

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Interlude I
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Excerpt from Shattered mirror: the history of the Servants of the Throne by Heleena Snellman

The ideological split that produced the two opposing groups, the original Diamond (now Pentacle) and the Servants of the Throne, came as a result of the catastrophic ending of the Celestial War. Though triumphant, the awakened civilization ceased to exist in the aftermath as it's centre, the city commonly referred to as Atlantis (though it's actual name remains, as yet, unknown) was destroyed, leaving only scattered survivors stripped of their abilities.

The subsequent awakenings allowed their society to survive, but caused a rift among the survivors. It is important for the readers to note that, at this point, there were no organizational differences between the two groups, merely ideological ones. The group's original form would be continued by the Diamond, whereas the Servants of the Throne, in keeping with their break with their civilization's traditions, formed an entirely new organization.

The first of these groups sought to recover, rebuilt and, eventually, restore their civilization to what they deemed it's rightful place. This group, that would eventually become the Diamond, claimed that, as victors and survivors of the Celestial War, they had a duty to rebuild and guide humanity to 'ascension' (see chapter VII, Ascension in the eyes of the Pentacle).

The opposing group, claimed that with the advent of the Abyss magic had become too dangerous to use, that it was the mage's duty to safeguard civilization from it and that the lessons of the Celestial War should be taken to heart. According to this group, later to become the Servants of the Throne, magic was a thing of the past and better left forgotten.

The only factor that prevented outright war was the two groups' relative low numbers. As a result, a cold war would break out with the two groups vying for knowledge, influence and power over millenia.

The split would finally end with the destruction of the Servants of the Throne as an organized force in the so-called War of the Throne, instigated by the Pentacle with the capture of ...
 

Kibbles

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Well, this has been on my hard drive for a couple of days now, but I hadn't had the time to clean it up properly until now. Chapter 1 follows and we are introduced to the actual plot for the first time ...

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Chapter I: Launching Armageddon
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Waking up is always harder after I've taken the pills. I come back slowly, groggily.

It's a good thing Sakura is away on a trip with the rest of the archery club or she'd ask questions. Questions I can't answer if I am to keep her respect.

After all, how many people would want to be friends with an unrepentant murderer?

I can take my time with breakfast. Fuji-nee is gone along with the club, so she's not here like she usually is.

She claims to come by each morning for breakfast. It's not a bad lie, I'm a rather good cook if I do say so myself ... Sakura is just as good and she does show up most mornings at my place, so the food is excellent. I know the truth, of course. I can't read minds, but I've known for a long time. Fuji-nee isn't subtle enough to pull one over me, she hasn't been for a long time.

She worries about me. I'm family and considering the environment she was raised in ... that is a very important thing. She thinks I've been through too much in my life and need looking out for.

If only she knew ...

I'm not in any particular hurry to get to school. To be honest, I'm enjoying the time I've freed up by leaving the archery club. It was good exercise, but my studies consume too much time ... and now I've got time for my first love, art. Sculpture, to be precise. The act of creation is something that attracts me.

I've had a few pieces displayed in the chambers of the Consilium. Anywhere else, you'd find people asking questions. Questions like: 'where did all that gold come from?' or 'could you explain the existence of a diamond the size and weight of a human being?'.

I suspect I won't have much time for that now that things are heating up. I've received reports of two other magi being involved already with more to come.

The rest of the day will likely be consumed by the summoning and tomorrow I'll need to drop by the Ryuudou temple. It's fortunate that the city's strongest, untainted, hallow lies in a temple. It makes it easier to access, plus, I like the place. It's ... calming.

I don't have time for much other than breakfast, the pills have thrown my usual schedule into disarray, so I'm forced to leave without the planned revision of the ritual. I toy with the idea of taking the notes to school, but Fuji-nee won't be present today and that means I might be caught. Something tells me getting caught with notes on summoning rituals involving human blood might cause trouble for me, so the notes have to stay behind, hidden on the other side of the Gauntlet.
It's the safest place I can think of.

The trip to school doesn't take all that long, but the rest of the day seems to take forever. It's the excitement and the anticipation. The feeling is instinctive, something every awakened feels when studying the Art. I don't often get a chance to revel in it, most often my research is used to harm others and manipulate them.

Even this ritual has that express purpose, but I can put that concern away for the time being. No need to act too quickly, more information is needed. A good assassin can't operate on bad intel and I am a good assassin, no matter how much I may despise that fact.

I find I can't maintain concentration during the day. I keep doodling ritual elements on the margins of my notebooks, I just can't help it. If it works out right, and it should, then I'll have a spirit as a familiar. And not just any spirit, the personification of human belief in heroes.

Well, one hero in particular. I don't know which one it will be, as my research into the dagger recovered hasn't yielded any results yet, but a spirit of that level of power ... it will be a familiar few would be able to match.

So, naturally, it's hard to stay calm.

Lunch break comes as a welcome relief, so I quickly make my way to the student council room. Not being a member, I'm not really supposed to be there, but Issei is the only one to use it during lunch break and, despite rumours to the contrary, I do like a conversation.

I suppose it's a fear of silence. My awakening wasn't traumatic, like some I've seen and heard about, but it still left scars. The moment of silence in the middle of an all-consuming fire, people's mouths open in an soundless scream ... I won't admit it openly, but I don't like silence. It reminds me of that moment, of the inevitable. Of death.

So, yeah, I usually strike up a conversation with Issei or Fuji-nee.

Issei has arrived before me, as he always does. Sometimes I suspect he's secretly a mage and just portals to the room while no-one's looking.

He fixes me with a look after adjusting his glasses, "Emiya, you're still coming to the temple tomorrow?"

That's Iseei for you, he can be refreshingly direct. A welcome change from the byzantine intrigues of awakened society.

I'd developed a habit early on to help out at the Ryuudou temple whenever I could. I will admit to having an ulterior motive, the temple sits on top of a hallow. As it is, I usually drop by once a week, sometimes more often to help out in little ways. I've got a gift for fixing things and, more than that, I'm willing to get my hands dirty to help out, so I'm always welcome there.

I nod in response, "Yeah, Sakura and Fuji-nee will only be coming tomorrow evening and the house gets a bit quiet with just me there."

Issei is the only person who knows I don't like the silence. He knows nothing of my existence as a mage and an assassin, of course. I like it that way, it allows me to be a normal person around him, to be Emiya Shirou, student, teen-aged boy with no concerns or duties beyond the immediate.

Issei's expression is inscrutable as he replies, "You never know how much you take something for granted until it's gone, even if temporarily."

He's practicing to be a priest, again. As his friend, I'm regularly the subject. Of course, this little non-sequitur has a deeper meaning. Issei had been trying to hook me and Sakura up for, oh, half a year now, in his own subtle way. He's not subtle enough, I was trained to operate around magi, many of whom can run rings around you while asleep.

Still, I've yet to find a way to let her down gently. I'm a Guardian of the Veil, possessing a thousand faces, none of my own. She really does deserve better.
I make a vague, philosophical reply to Issei's statement, feigning ignorance of the subtext. Emiya Shirou is supposed to be a bit thick regarding that and I play the part perfectly. The conversation goes on from there, not touching upon the sensitive topics.

The conversation ventures into philosphy. I've never held much of an interest in the subject, but every mage is taught it and I do enjoy a good verbal spar. It keeps the mind sharp.

All too soon, the lunch break ends and I'm forced back into class. I've got Kuzuki-sensei and while I pity the man for what he was raised to be and respect him for defying his fate, I have nothing but contempt for the subject he teaches.

History is written by the victors, but it is also written by the bystanders. Pentacle records are very comprehensive and, more importantly, completely intact, stretching back thousands of years. The history taught in schools is ridiculously slanted in favour of certain ideas and groups, not to mention that half of it is based on guesswork.

At least I can put my mind off the ritual for the duration of the man's lectures as I force myself to correct the lecture on the fly. It's something of a challenge and takes all of my attention as I'm worked from half-remembered sources and books I've only glanced through, but that's a good thing, really. At least I'm not thinking about the ritual.

The rest of the day isn't as amusing. I catch myself three times reciting the incantation for the ritual under my breath. I get a couple of odd looks from those seated near me, prompting a blush and a muttered apology.

Finally, school ends and I'm free to go home. I'll have the usual company tomorrow evening, so the ritual has to be done before then as I'll need time to produce the necessary cover story.

Once I'm home, I eat a quick meal, then retreat to my workshop, the shed. It's well warded and isolated. Not to mention that it's easier to activate my home's protections from there and, besides, I have a couple of surprises stored there in case things do go wrong. Being an assassin and spy tends to foster at least some paranoia, more than is usual among magi anyway.

It doesn't take long to set up the summoning circle. It's a basic skill for a mage and I've used ritual circles before, even made my own. There are differences, of course, the circles I've done are usually tied to death, rebirth and the soul, this one is a summoning circle, but the basics are the same, the motions are the same. I use sanskrit for the symbols.

While Inidia has long since become contested grounds between Pentacle and Servants, one of the old mottos of the Diamond was in sanskrit.

'Yato Dharmastato Jaya' ... where there is Righteousness, there shall be Victory. It's long outdated, but I'm feeling more than a bit nostalgic and it's a good motto to keep in mind during this war. My cause, the Pentacle's cause, is just. I'm not foolish enough to think that would help in and of itself, I've ended many just causes and righteous people, but faith is important.

Not to mention that using the High Tongue is very risky. I might get a hero, I might get a deity or I might just summon the Abyss and doom the entire world.

The Grail is supposed to do most of the work anyway, if the Divine Thread is correct.
Nevertheless, I spend a couple of minutes making sure the circle doesn't contain mistakes. Specters of the dead aren't dangerous, a spirit is very much so.

The circle is good enough, so I activate the mana sinks. That's the time limit, the seals will empty in three minutes, I have that much to do the summoning. I've added only a bit of my own mana to them, enough to identify me as the summoner, not enough to twist the ritual into something else.

Two minutes, fifty seconds left. I start the incantation written in the magus' notes. Fortunately, the incantation was in latin, not greek, or there might have been trouble.

Ye first, O silver, O iron
O stone of the foundation, O Archduke of the Contract
Hear me in the name of our great teacher, the Archmagus Schweinorg
Let the descending winds be as a wall
Let the gates in all directions be shut, rising above the crown, and let the three-forked roads to the Kingdom revolve.
Shut. Shut. Shut. Shut. Shut.
Five perfections for each repetition.
And now, let the filled sigils be annihilated in my stead!
Set.
Let thy body rest under my dominion, let my fate rest in thy blade.
If thou submittest to the call of the Holy Grail and if thou wilt obey this mind, this reason, then thou shalt respond.
I make my oath here.
I am that person who is to become the virtue of all Heavens.
I am that person who is covered with the evil of all Hades.
Thou seven heavens, clad in a trinity of words,
come past thy restraining rings, and be thou the hands that protect the balance!



There's a flash of light as I finish, blinding me temporarily, then ... the feeling of something tasting my magic, my soul. It's a terrifying thing ... like I've been violated, none of my protections and shields even impeded the probe. I can feel a foreign presence seeking purchase and taking hold.

My right hand burns.

I have to blink a few times before I can see again.

There's a person standing in front of me. It's a woman in dark robes, purple and black. She's wearing a hood, hiding her features. I can spot a strand of blue hair peeking out from under the hood. I suppose I shouldn't be surprised, heroes are supposed to be larger than life. Them having plain features would be surprising.

And just like I'm watching her, she's watching me. She's also the first to speak.

"I ask of you, are you my Master?"

It sounds like part of the ritual, but the notes didn't cover that part. I'm forced to wing it.

"I'm the summoner, yes."

There's some tightening in the facial muscles that I can see. If I were forced to guess, I'd say she was frowning. Maybe I used the wrong words?

Still after a moment she nods and then, finally, identifies herself, "I am Medea, the Servant Caster and I will fight for you in this Grail War."

To be honest, I only have a vague recollection of the name Medea. I barely recall some greek tragedy I'd watched in Majilis al Jinn during a conference. Some kind of witch who went on a killing spree? Hardly sounds like a hero, but I don't exactly hold the moral high ground myself.

How fitting, a murderer for a murderer.

I identify myself to her, "I am Emiya Shirou, a Guardian of the Veil. I have been tasked by the exile orders to destroy the Holy Grail and end these wars."

It's surprisingly hard to read someone wearing a hood and voluminous robes like Medea is. I think she's frowning again, but I can't be certain.

"Revealing that information wasn't very wise, master. Fortunately, I am not interested in the Grail. Another servant might have tried to kill you for that."

I'm surprised, the notes indicated I would end up with a slave, bound to my will ... it seems that the notes were incorrect, "You're more independent than the notes indicate."
"Notes? May I see them?"
"Of course."

She takes a minute leafing through the notes and I find myself curious as to how an ancient Hellene can speak Japanese and read English, she's not even supposed to know of Japan's existence and English only came into being more than a thousand years after Hellene city-states ended. One can only assume that it's a function of the Grail, but that makes the damned thing ridiculously complex.

I'm not entirely sure I'll be able to deconstruct the ritual. Destroy it, yes, deconstruct it properly ... I'm not so certain.

Finally, Medea returns the notes, "The ritual is correct, but most of the details regarding servants aren't. Any orders you give can be defied, except those enforced by the command spells you carry. Even then, the more precise the order, the more difficult it is to resist. If you issued a general one with a command spell, like: 'obey me', I'd feel compelled to do so, but I would be able to resist."

I ... hadn't known that, "Oh. Then I suppose this is a partnership, then." That means loyalty is paramount, if I can't trust her, we won't be able to work together, so I have to make a fair offer, "But if we win, I get what I want, the Grail destroyed. What do you want?"
The answer comes instantly, "A life, here, in the living world."

That's something of a surprise and something that warrants further investigation, later ... for now, I smile and readily agree, "Now that is something the Pentacle can help you with. So, in exchange for you helping me with the destruction of the Grail, the Pentacle provides you with everything you'll need to make a life for yourself in this world."

She seems confused, I suppose I agreed to the deal too quickly, not even trying to bargain, "Why would you do something like that for me?"
I'm not sure I can explain why, she really didn't ask for much and the Pentacle regularly creates new lives for it's members and allies, "Why not? It's within our capabilities. If you'd prefer to continue our discussion somewhere more comfortable?"

She seems to be digesting the information and follows quietly as I lead her across the yard. Being in front, I can't exactly tell what Medea's doing behind me. I'm not worried about being stabbed in the back, not here, not in my seat of power.

"How defended is this house?"
The question is abrupt, but reasonable, I suppose, we'll be working together, "Magically? About as good as it can be. The more powerful defences need to be specifically activated to work, though."
"They drain too much power?"

Again, a fairly logical assumption, the local lay line is sufficient to power the defences, if only barely, but I'm a wielder of the Spirit Arcanum, "Well, no. Guardian spirits can only manifest for brief periods and the ones I'm using are ... dangerous." Explaining the nature of spirits would take a long time, so I try to keep my answer as simple as possible, "Manifestations of human fear of untamed nature. Not powerful individually, but as a group, they're a danger to all but extremely powerful beings. I can give you a basic scheme of the wards to look through later."

I cut off further inquiries by briefly explaining the layout of the house as we enter. There's enough rooms here to house half a dozen people. Still, space where magic can be practiced is at a premium, so I give Medea directions to the guest room. It's somewhat isolated from the rest of the house, but it also offers the necessary privacy for mage work.

Not to mention that any guests I received would be sleeping there and, as far as anyone else will know, that's all Medea will be. An old acquaintance of my father's, actually. He had too many to count and a lot of them were paranoid people. In case anyone asks, Raiga will readily identify Medea as one of father's friends.

I wouldn't have gotten half as far as I have without the help of Fujimura Raiga.

As we reach the sitting room, I motion towards the table, "Please, make yourself comfortable." Before taking a seat myself, I ask, "Would you like some tea?"
"Please."

I admit, I don't often get a chance to show off. Magic is kept such a closely guarded secret that even those that do know of my status have never seen me use it, excepting other awakened. I suppose my urge isn't as much to show off, my abilities don't exactly come off as highly visible or overly impressive, but to show an artist's pride in his craft.

The act of creation is a complex one. The image I need to force an object into being must be perfect and the more complex the object, the more skill is required to craft it.
Therefore, summoning something as simple as a tea set and tea, at just the right temperature, is a lot harder than it may seem, no matter how small the objects in question may be.

I can cheat, to a certain extent. I can make copies, specific patterns I have ... stored for lack of a better word. It's easier than creating an entirely new template from scratch. Because of this ability, I can replicate an assault rifle, but I can't create my own as I don't know how.

Medea seems mildly impressed by the act, or perhaps the appearance of the tea set. Each creation must be unique and a work of art. I would allow nothing less, though I have moved away from the rule at times, when I'm creating something in a hurry.
It's something of a waste, too. I already have a dozen sets in storage and every time I create a new one, I'm forced to throw one of the old ones out to save space. One year I'd given out a tea set to everyone I knew and I still had quite a few to spare.

The tea is excellent. I should know, it's a precise copy of the best tea I've had, molecule for molecule. Oddly, I had it in Vladivostok, while I was mediating a few issues between two local cabals. As an outsider I was deemed neutral enough. The dispute was relatively dull, the vacation was ... dare I say it, fun.

At least there wasn't any shooting, stabbing or attempted dismemberment using abominations of nature and magic. I still carry the scars from the time I actually did go up against abominations of nature and magic. Nearly lost my arm to one of the beasts.

As far as everyone else is concerned, I suffered an accident while being my helpful self. A crate fell on my shoulder. If anyone has noticed that the scars could only be made if the crate had claws, they've not mentioned it so far. I kept the scars, it would be hard to explain their absence ... and I kept them as a reminder never to be that stupid again.

I am the first to speak, "We will need to create an identity for you. For the time being, I believe I can produce a believable facsimile of a Turkish passport that should ward off suspicion until proper documents can be made."
"Turkish?"
Right, I'd forgotten ... at best, Medea's knowledge is two thousand years out of date, if not more, "A nomadic people who started settling Anatolia a thousand years ago. There's still a Greek minority there. It'll rise fewer questions than having two Greeks in the city at the same time, especially with one of them dead."
"I can become incorporeal at will, master. There's no need for a cover story."

I smile as my mind works through the possibilities. It's not a surprise, really. As a spirit, it's only natural, but it's nevertheless exceptionally useful. Caster is many times more powerful than the guardian spirits I've bound to my focus.

Still, it's apparent she knows nothing about the proper way to play the game, "The key in this war is to appear first and foremost as someone who isn't involved in the first place. No-one involved in the war would openly announce the presence and identity of their servant."
She seems surprised, "Hiding in plain sight?"
"Exactly. We are going to flaunt your presence ..." I trail off, I'm not certain what she'd find agreeable, so best let her make her own decisions about that

Medea seems to be thinking my statement over, "Servants can sense each other, but I believe I can cloak our presence to other mages."
"Excellent. Tomorrow evening I'll introduce you to my contacts, they'll provide the cover story. We'll be going downtown for dinner, officially to welcome a friend of mine home and celebrate her achievement during a competition." I'm running a quick calculation in my head, I've got a lot to do and only limited time to do it tomorrow, "I'll only return home late in the afternoon, so you can use that time to get acquainted with the house and erect any protections you feel necessary. In addition, there's quite a few books dealing on a variety of subjects. I'd recommend the ones on recent history, in case anyone asks questions."

Of course, I'm not being entirely honest here. I have ulterior motives for the visit, ones that Medea has no need to know. To be honest, I have ... suspicions. The Divine Thread's recent reports on every potential participant in the Grail War have been troubling and I have no-one to blame but myself for missing the signs ... taught to be the perfect spy and, as a result, I've been so determined to find a refuge from my tasks that I've blinded myself to the people around me.

Invading the privacy of one's thoughts is frowned upon by the awakened, but I need confirmation. No matter how intangible such proof may be, it will suffice. A favour of this magnitude will use up most of my credit with Yuudai-san, but it's a price I'm willing to pay. I just hope the suspicions in the reports are unfounded.

We finish up the tea and I erase the set from existence. I'll refill my mana store tomorrow anyway, I can flaunt a bit. Afterward, I get Medea a couple of books on topics she expressed interest in and the schematics for the house defences. The schematics, if they can be called as such, are mostly the initial sketches that the defences were erected by, but do give a good account of their capabilities.

I don't really need them, the defences are tied to my soulstone, so I receive constant reports through that, but during the planning stage a basic schematic is necessary.

After that I excuse myself politely and go to my room. I've begun noticing a drain from Medea's continued presence and it might turn into a problem. Best option for now is to recover what mana I can through meditation each evening. The drain takes barely a fraction of my reserves but it's constant and I'm reasonably certain consumption will go up if my Servant actually uses her abilities.

As I sit down to meditate, I make a mental note to look into methods of moving Medea's soul into a proper, physical body to save energy. I'll need to talk with Yuudai-san about that ...

It seems I will be owing Fukui Yuudai a lot of favours once the Grail War is over. Most powerful cook in the city indeed.


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Now, for the usual post-fic explanations. The Armageddon referred to in the chapter title is, again, a chess term. In this case, a type of game where the black player only needs to tie in order to score a victory while the white player needs to win outright. It's a reference to the Pentacle's goals here, all they need to do really is stop the War from ending. Victory is irrelevant.

Majilis al Jinn is a cave in the Middle East, or, rather, a large chamber in a cave complex and yes, it's a real place. Literally, the name means 'gathering place of the Jinni' with Jinni in Arabic mythology being one of Alah's creations, like men possessed of free will but created from smokeless fire (that is, energy). The Awakened in this world appropriated the title for themselves so that they can feel special.

Of course, the Majilis al Jinn referred to by the Awakened isn't in the Middle East, it's underneath Geneva, but that's nitpicking.

The Diamond, for those that don't know is the older version of the Pentacle, as the Pentacle only came about in the 20th century with the forming of the Free Council and it's addition to the old organization.
 

sworded

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#6
Nice start to the story, but I have a question reguarding the prologue. Why didn't Shirou use Corpse Mask to alter the corpse to make it look like Dimitris had a brain anurism or some other medical condition that caused his death?
 

Kibbles

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#7
sworded said:
Nice start to the story, but I have a question reguarding the prologue. Why didn't Shirou use Corpse Mask to alter the corpse to make it look like Dimitris had a brain anurism or some other medical condition that caused his death?
The honest answer? I forgot about it. The one time I've played a Moros it was more of a creepy child archetype and most of the group I've led tend towards similarly odd characters. Some spells, thus, get very little attention.

The original purpose of leaving an obvious corpse behind was to give a hint that the world all of this is happening in is dystopic, to a certain extent. The point is that Shirou can get away with it and that the police won't even bother investigating. The Sleeper governments are so heavily compromised that magi enjoy full operational freedom with zero interference.

Similarly, when Shirou offered Medea an identity he didn't mean fake ID. She's going to get original documents, entries in all appropriate state documents in Turkey, the people who were supposed to make those entires will remember making them and there will be quite a few people in the alleged hometown who will remember her. Parents, family and friends are optional, but possible.

As you can see, the entire setting here is meant to be shades of gray, dark gray and near-black. Being a Sleeper in this world is not a good thing. That will only get more obvious when the Servants of the Throne come in two or three chapters from now (as a hint, they're the closest this world has to good guys).
 

sworded

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#8
Beeing a Sleeper seldom is a good thing in any cross with WoD. You have next to no ability to really defend against ghosts, vamps, werewolves, mages, spirits, ancient conspiracies, and other dark nasties that exist just out of the corner of the normal peoples' eye. On top of that all I can say is may whatever benevolent force exists in that world help you if you are taken by the Fae...

Do the Servants of the Throne have any connection to the Seers of the Throne?

And can you tell us what Arcana Shirou knows?
 

Kibbles

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#9
sworded said:
Beeing a Sleeper seldom is a good thing in any cross with WoD. You have next to no ability to really defend against ghosts, vamps, werewolves, mages, spirits, ancient conspiracies, and other dark nasties that exist just out of the corner of the normal peoples' eye. On top of that all I can say is may whatever benevolent force exists in that world help you if you are taken by the Fae...

Do the Servants of the Throne have any connection to the Seers of the Throne?
Well, the Seer/Oracle thing doesn't exist. The Atlanteans won the Celestial War, but the aftermath is unclear. The Watchtowers popped up after a while, but no further contact. Whether this is because they're fighting each other or because they let mortals forge their own destinies remains unsaid.

For the purposes of this world, the Pentacle wants to spread magic to everyone. A grand awakening, if you will. The Servants think that it's too dangerous and that it's best to let magic die out. Too many awakened only increases the danger presented by the Abyss.

Suffice to say, neither side is wholly right and both generally pursue the same goal. Keep magic a secret.

Once one side reliably discovers the mechanism for artificial awakening all bests are off and it's war. Or, alternately, when one side achieves overwhelming superiority, the war begins.

And can you tell us what Arcana Shirou knows?
Death 5 - as a result of actually being mostly dead during his awakening. In fact, only Avalon kept Shirou in the world of the living, so he's seen as exceptionally gifted, but Avalon's presence remains unknown
Matter 5 - the last remnants of Shirou's gift for projection and the (now defunct) Reality Marble
Spirit 5 - specific training for the War - unfortunately, Servants have proven to be generally resistant to the spells ... also, again, Avalon helped
Life 1 - the ability to control one's own body is a minimum among heralds, it makes them harder to poison

While undoubtedly exceptionally powerful, Shirou's focus on magical pursuits has limited his abilities and skill-set. He's an exceptional assassin and fairly diplomatic when needs must, but that's about it.

It was relatively necessary for plot purposes to give him so many Arcana, but the Pentacle isn't taking any chances here. Also, the least broken combination for the purposes of the Grail War.


And now, another interlude, this time to show that the Pentacle are not good guys. It was originally meant to go into the epilogue, but it didn't fit with the happy and sweet nature of the planned ending so it was cut. It nevertheless occurs.


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Interlude II: A feast under the Hunter's Moon
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Head meet lorry. Mungo winced, the damage would be a right nightmare to explain and cover up. Especially those the two red smears and two charred corpses that had been four sleepwalkers not a minute ago. Good thing he wasn't in charge of the cover-up, then, wasn't it?

Perhaps he should try and find out how in Heaven's name the police would explain two deaths by electrocution in the middle of the street. He also really wanted to know how they'd explain the fact that another two people died by going from zero to lord-knows-how-many thousand miles per hour in half a second.

Well, now that list had a fifth death added to it. Killed by thrown lorry.

Users of the Forces Arcanum could be so ... messy. And it was bound to end up so very messy.

War was raging in the streets of London, Manchester, Glasgow, Dublin ... all across the world the Association was dying. Whether in battle, to an assassin's blade or executioner's bullet, for the good of humanity and salvation of the world, blood flowed and people died.

And Mungo Mac Pharlain reveled in every blood-soaked minute of it. It was what he lived for ... to kill for a worthy cause, to fight, test his skills and magic to their very limits and either come out victorious or not at all.

He was a rabid attack dog, with nothing but a long career as a murderer and criminal ahead of him before his awakening, useless in the games of subtlety magi normally played ... worthless in a civilized society, but those civilized people always needed someone to get their hands dirty and do the nasty things no-one wanted to think about.

In Mungo, the Pentacle found someone to do the things they didn't have the heart to and Mungo found an outlet that wouldn't land him in prison or dead at the hands of a copper.

So he laughed as a lesser mage died and stalked forward, towards the manor that was his team's goal.

Then he had to cough a bit as the rain got through his mask. Blasted thunderstorm was worse than anything he'd ever seen in his life, though that was kind of the point as it shut down most of England pretty thoroughly. No witnesses to see monsters stalking the streets and murdering other monsters.

Shame they didn't let him do the weather control spell. If it were Mungo, there'd be a lot more dramatic lightning. Make a good background for the fights ... not that the sleepwalkers had much fight in them in the first place.

Mungo blinked at the heavy wrought iron gate standing in the way of Talon one, assault squad of the Consilium of the Seven Seas. Well, that problem had an easy solution.

With a thought he wrenched the entire thing from it's sockets and tossed it aside, opening the way. Probably raised alarms all across the property, but the place was already isolated in a space-time pocket.

There would be no escape. No survivors. Well, maybe their primary target might be captured alive, but chances were he'd be executed later anyway ... provided he was lucky. The old farts wouldn't hold him responsible for everything in the past thousand years ... probably. So, yeah, chances were he'd be merely executed, no tossing his soul into the primordial depths at the edge of dreams.

The rest of his squad flashed by him in the darkness, leap-frogging from cover to cover as they were trained. Mungo did, too. Dying before even getting to a fight was pointless and a sniper rifle was always unfair ... unless it was in Mungo's hands, or the hands of his squad.

A flash of lightning, a clap of thunder, and the ornate wooden doors of the manor are blown inward. Someone screams. The splinters, probably. As bad a fragmentation grenade at close range. It's why Mungo loved that little spell.

Mungo grins and rushes in, sub-machine gun in hand, ready to put an end to any enemy of the awakened, any enemy that stood in the way of their glorious destiny as masters of all of Creation. Well, that's what other awakened like to think to themselves. Mungo just does it for the thrills and that sweet feeling of power when you watch the life fade from another's eyes.

Shadows move with him, the sharp claw of the awakened. A team of four, three men, one woman, all of them the best killers the Consilium of the Seven Seas had produced.

It took less than five minutes, and three corpses, to find their target. Probably woke up from the screaming ... and the gunshots ... and the explosions. Right, kinda hard to miss those.

The man was shaking in his nightclothes, pale like a ghost.

How did that little speech Guardians of the Veil recited every time they executed or arrested someone go? Honestly, Mungo couldn't remember. He was of the Adamantine Arrow anyway, warriors, not sneaky thieves and assassins like those masked bastards.

Well, he still had a speech to make, äLord Melloy, whatever your name is. By the authority of the Consilium of the Seven Seas, in accordance with the decision by the gathering of the Consilii of the world you are to be brought to Geneva to stand trial for your sins and the sins of those you lead. You can surrender, or I can kill you. Either way suits me.ô

The sleepwalker, because pathetic excuses for magic-users like him didn't deserve the title of mage, drew himself up. Still shaking, but an admirable display of courage.

äI will do so, provided you spare my son.ô

Oh, look, there was a brat peeking from around the man's clothes. Mungo reckoned he was six, maybe seven. Slip of a boy, terrified.

Mungo merely nodded and motioned for Rosie to bind him. She'd always been better with the Prime Arcanum than Mungo. Smart girl, made him feel like a violent idiot which, to be frank, he was.

As the Lord whatshisname was being taken past the team, Mungo addressed the brat, äSorry kid, orders are orders.ô

With a shrug, he shouldered his sub-machine gun and fired a three-round burst. The kid collapsed, dead before he hit the ground.

The sleepwalker got loud then, screaming obscenities. Quite the vocabulary for a posh, spoiled sort, but Mungo had no patience for the man's voice so he motioned to Rosie to club him, which she promptly did.

Idiot had forgotten how to cast spells in his ... what? Rage? Sorrow? Mungo didn't care. Sure, killing kids wasn't fun, but orders were orders. And Mungo was a good little attack dog.

Rosie picked up the limp lordling and started heading back for extraction. Mungo, for his part, set off to search the rest of the house. No survivors. No-one to seek vengeance in the future.

Well, that and he had to rob the place's library and set the remaining charges. Demolitions was delicate work, but ultimately very rewarding. And there were those two paintings, now those would a right shame to blow up, needed saving those paintings did.

And Mungo had just the place to hang them back at the demense. Beauty had to be saved and savoured after all.

Mungo suddenly felt like whistling. After a good night's bloody work, he allowed himself the indulgence.

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sworded

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#10
:blink: A triple mastery in his teens? Yeah, thats a hell of alot of skill and power for anyone. I'm suprised he dosen't have any ranks in Prime, but oh well there goes the idea that'd he was a member of the Power Smith Legacy.

Will Medea teach anything to Shirou?

I'm seriously wondering who gets to summon Saber in this fic, but I enjoy the anticipation.
 

elric

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#11
Yeah. Change that matter to mind and you have someone who is capable of utterly horrific combos. Including at least one way to become superpowered to the point where you make Servants look weak. Granted, it places you one sin away from losing your soul, but that kind of power is worth the risk.
 

sworded

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#12
elric said:
Yeah. Change that matter to mind and you have someone who is capable of utterly horrific combos. Including at least one way to become superpowered to the point where you make Servants look weak. Granted, it places you one sin away from losing your soul, but that kind of power is worth the risk.
Morality is for putzes. A master of Death and Spirit magic can live a very long time verging on forever and keep his soul pretty safe from most things.
 

nick012000

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#13
Yeah, Mastery is a bit much, even if he has been Awakened for a decade. In any case, though, I really doubt that any sort of training for the Holy Grail War would be enough to elevate him to Mastery. With that sort of magical line-up, he's probably more powerful magically than the Hierarch of Boston.

Also, I'm pretty sure that they wouldn't classify Type Moon mages as Sleepwalkers, because they're not. Sleepwalkers can't use magic of their own; they merely don't cause it to fail when they see it. Type Moon's Magi can. Truthfully, they're more similar to Proximi dynasties or Gutter Magic Witches from Hunter's Witch Finders book than anything else.

I'm not sure why the Orders are attempting to destroy the Mage's Association, either; for one thing, the Orders lack the sort of cohesion necessary to attempt such a thing; the relationship of the Orders with the various Conciliums is more like that of the UN than that of the Federal Government. For another, there's no real reason for them to do so, and Mage canon is that Mages as a whole tend to ignore other varieties of supernaturals (including other human magicians) since they aren't related to the Supernal Realms. Finally, there's no real reason for them to do so. Half a dozen magi making something that might or might not destroy the world isn't something worthy of genocide. It's something for the local Concilium to deal with, and admitting that they can't do so would be an admission of weakness and/or incompetence by the locals.
 

Kibbles

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#14
nick012000 said:
Yeah, Mastery is a bit much, even if he has been Awakened for a decade. In any case, though, I really doubt that any sort of training for the Holy Grail War would be enough to elevate him to Mastery. With that sort of magical line-up, he's probably more powerful magically than the Hierarch of Boston.
The setting being used for this story isn't straight out of the handbooks, it's one that developed over years of playing. The first change, IIRC, was that ascension doesn't happen. There are, as a result, a lot of high-power magi running around.

The Hierarch and Council of a Consilium tend to be massively powerful and influential. Not to mention old enough to know every trick in the book. To be even considered for a member of the Council one needs to be, at the least, a 6th degree master and even then such a candidate is likely to be dismissed outright as too weak to command respect.

Also, I'm pretty sure that they wouldn't classify Type Moon mages as Sleepwalkers, because they're not. Sleepwalkers can't use magic of their own; they merely don't cause it to fail when they see it. Type Moon's Magi can. Truthfully, they're more similar to Proximi dynasties or Gutter Magic Witches from Hunter's Witch Finders book than anything else.
The awakened have trouble accepting anything as even remotely their equal, much less superior. Someone once pointed out that there were gods and the magi subsequently went and built the Celestial Ladder, stormed Heaven and killed all gods.

So, yes, TypeMoon mages aren't sleepwalkers, the awakened still call them that because whatever they may be, they have no right to call themselves mages. To the average mage aware of their existence (something not common at all), they are sleepwalkers with a couple of parlor tricks.

Shirou will occasionally refer to them as mages mainly because he's less prejudiced, being a Guardian of the Veil infiltrator. He's trained to adopt and discard personalities and beliefs, so he's less inclined to believe himself as superior. He still doesn't view Type Moon mages as worthy of his attention.

I'm not sure why the Orders are attempting to destroy the Mage's Association, either; for one thing, the Orders lack the sort of cohesion necessary to attempt such a thing; the relationship of the Orders with the various Conciliums is more like that of the UN than that of the Federal Government. For another, there's no real reason for them to do so, and Mage canon is that Mages as a whole tend to ignore other varieties of supernaturals (including other human magicians) since they aren't related to the Supernal Realms. Finally, there's no real reason for them to do so. Half a dozen magi making something that might or might not destroy the world isn't something worthy of genocide. It's something for the local Concilium to deal with, and admitting that they can't do so would be an admission of weakness and/or incompetence by the locals.
Well, a Consilium in this setting is a form of a federal government (though closer to the Austrian model, very centralized) with various Consilii discussing matters of concern under the aegis of the Imperium Mysteriorum (which, despite the name is closer to an international conference held regularly to discuss common matters than an empire ... for historical inspiration look up nineteenth century European politics and their system of conferences). Initially, the Orders formed the Consilii as a way to provide a common meeting place, but after the Servants broke away they changed to provide centralized control in case of war and as a way for the really powerful magi to expand their own influence and power. They've been around for at least ten thousand years, what constitutes a Consilium has changed a lot over time.

This means that being Free Council sucks, however. Having come late to the party, they tend to get stuck with positions in the diplomatic corps, as Silver Ladder holds leadership, Mysterium the research and archives branch, Guardians of the Veil the Divine Thread (Intelligence) and Adamantine Arrow holds the Dragon's Reach (combat branch of the Consilium). It's like Atlantis in small.

As for the Association being wiped out, a lot of it is indirectly explained in the plot proper, but long story short, the awakened went up to genocide because it's convenient. The Consilium holding the British Isles pushed for action against the Clock Tower while feelings were still running hot. As a sort of a knee-jerk reaction, the others agreed, not caring over-much about 'sleepwalkers'. The Consilium of the Seven Seas, which started the whole thing, did it to get their hands on the Clock Tower's contacts and influence networks and what knowledge they could lift in the process (as the Grail is actually useful as a concept, half-formed though it may be).

Now I'm left with a wonder, though. What happens to a crest when it's hit by an awakened counter-spell?
 

elric

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#15
sworded said:
elric said:
Yeah. Change that matter to mind and you have someone who is capable of utterly horrific combos. Including at least one way to become superpowered to the point where you make Servants look weak. Granted, it places you one sin away from losing your soul, but that kind of power is worth the risk.
Morality is for putzes. A master of Death and Spirit magic can live a very long time verging on forever and keep his soul pretty safe from most things.
Most things. Not all. The method in question involves creating a superpowered demon out of your own mind and merging with him. If the mage sins even once, the demon breaks free of his control and can corrupt/kill you.
 

Kibbles

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#16
I feel honour-bound to assert that this story hasn't, in fact, been abandoned. I've got a tough exam coming up this week and have been exceptionally busy trying to memorize all the information involved.

So, another interlude. Or, rather, piece that was cut out of the story structure and was completed in a brief pause between periods I've got my head stuck in books.

The original concept for the epilogue was fairly conservative ... and they lived happily ever after, and the bad guys ceased to be a threat. Or did they? Having already decided some time ago to cut out the middle part of this, the decision to make the epilogue cloyingly happy came easy. Thus, part 3 was cut out.

As for the reasoning, well, it's simple. Individual magi and their civilization tends to be (relatively) moral within their own cultural standards. Granted, those are a bit sideways from the modern world in many ways, but not unrecognizeable. Nevertheless, they believe research is necessary. And, much like the fact that it was the British Empire that had the largest and most modern supplies of chemical weapons in WWII, the Pentacle needs every advantage it can get, if only so that their enemies don't get their hands on it first.

It still happens, of course. Thus, part 3 of the epilogue:

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Interlude III: No such thing as an inhuman act
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Mysterium Archives, Dated: 2004/4/28, Category: Research project/Biology Division/Far East Section/North Branch
To: Chief Archivist, Michi Hamasaki, Consilium of the Rising Sun; Chief Archivist, Wei Wang, Consilium of the Mandate of Heaven; Chief Archivist, Aleksandra Sokolov, Consilium of the Untouched Wild; Chief Archivist, Haneul Moon, Consilium of the Shattered Kingdom
From: Archivist, Jing Hou, Department of biological studies û Far East, northern branch
Subject: Final report, preliminary study of subject Fuyuki-9

Chief Archivists of the Mysterium Council of Supervisors (Far East, northern branch),

As commanded, this department has finished it's preliminary study of information provided by Herald Emiya (Consilium of the Rising Sun, 5th Fuyuki Grail War). In addition, the first batch of tests with samples synthesized by our laboratories have been completed. As continued research would be counter to the limitations set for this department by the Mysterium Council of Supervisors of the Far East, northern branch this report will contain information gathered so far, as well as a recommendation on further action.

The history of the sample Fuyuki-9 is attached in Appendix 1 of this report and will be omitted in this report, as will the more technical information contained in the remaining Appendices.

It is important to note, at the beginning of this introduction, that the research into this strain of organism has been in progress for several hundred years by one mage alone. Given that the mage in question is not awakened and his knowledge of the sciences involved is exceptionally primitive, it is the belief of this department that further advancements along this research path would be greatly accelerated.

Regarding Fuyuki-9 itself, we have determined that it is a organism of magical origin, however, given it's nature as a product of lesser magicks, it does not cause a pradox to occure upon discovery by sleepers. Furthermore, the organism remains stable and is, presumably, permanent once created (at this point, all subjects synthesized by the research group are still alive and active, six months after their initial creation).

In addition, the structure is, in itself, interesting. The organisms appear to be blank, despite possessing tissues that could facilitate limited cognitive capacity. Furthermore, the organisms are controlled by a single, central, organism (dubbed Fuyuki-10 by this research team), which acts as a control mechanism and a transceiver for the collective group under it's control. Fuyuki-10 has a higher proportion of tissues required for cognitive capacity and could, in concert with supporting Fuyuki-9 organisms, support a sentient construct of human complexity.

The subjects produced by this research team have proven to be blank, empty vessels for, presumably, the soul of the creator. While such a course of action is inadvisable at best, given the Pentacle's higher understanding of the Arts Magical involved, it is entirely possible to gift the subjects with either a limited Hive mind capability or, alternately, a simple programming routine akin to a computer program or even the Doppelganger project.

In the final section of the research, a test subject has been implanted with a number of these blank organisms. Study indicates a surprising integration with the host's nervous system, though the single Fuyuki-10 organism had nestled itself in the host's heart, making it impossible to remove through ordinary measures. Additional research indicates it is possible to force the organisms to integrate further with the subject's nervous system, allowing them to act either as replacement nerve strands or a failsafe measure that would prevent the subject's survival of their removal.

The nature of the Fuyuki-10 organism when used in concert with Fuyuki-9 organisms proved an unexpected boon as the organism actually transmitted data acquired by it's sub-organisms. This data included visual, aural and other forms of information taken by the host's sensory organs.

A problem encountered at this time is that the integration of the organisms with the host's nervous system had side-effects. The organisms tend to program their host to accommodate their existence and maintain them. This is accomplished through a simple pain/pleasure conditioning mechanism. In the event of further research into the organisms, we recommend that a superior method of conditioning be integrated with the organisms.

Possible applications of this organism are multiple. Given their nature, Fuyuki-9 and Fuyuki-10 organisms are generally undetectable except by the most thorough of medicals scans which can easily be monitored by Pentacle agents, given the rarity of the devices in question. As such, the immediate possibility is to use them as an undetectable monitoring device for spies and agents. In addition, their capability to condition their host can be expanded and used to create brainwashed agents without any traces of magical alteration, allowing greater Pentacle capabilities to infiltrate rival organizations utilizing magic.

As a final word, while the organisms in question are undeveloped and crude, further research by individuals more skilled at the modern sciences and the Ars Mysteriorum would allow a superior strain to be developed, one better suited to the needs of the Pentacle.

Final assessment: promising, recommend further study and development

Respectfully,
Archivist Jing Hou; Department of biological studies û Far East, northern branch; Research group û Atlas

Appendices:

Appendix 1 û history of the development and application of organisms Fuyuki-9 and Fuyuki-10; information on the organism creator (Zouken Matou)
Appendix 2 û field report, Herald Emiya (Consilium of the Rising Sun)
Appendix 3 û tissue sample analysis reports; Fuyuki-9 and Fuyuki-10 organism composition
Appendix 4 û progress evaluation and reports, test stage
Appendix 5 û recordings and medical information, test subject pre- and post- implantation

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Now, for the usual blurb: the title is drawn from a quote originating from A. G. Lyman, the full version is:

"There is no such thing as an 'inhuman act', for there is no act so vile that one cannot find a human willing, or even eager, to commit it."

The purpose of this bit was to add a bit of dichotomy. The characters get a happy end (well, some do), but the world they live in, as a whole, is a very nasty, dark place. Only fitting, since it's the World of Darkness. Still, it's not just tragedy and angst, people do get happy endings. Not everyone, no, but some do and in the end hope is the last to die.

Regarding another subject, this fic is the first time I've tried to write anything in first person and looking back on it ... I honestly don't know what to think. Is it good, bad, boring? From a purely literary stand-point. I'm getting more comfortable with the style, but it's far from what I'm used to.

Don't hold back with the criticism. I can take it.
 

Amodelsino

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#17
It seems to work well enough. You managed to give information without losing the character, which is the biggest danger.

Some of it feels a bit clinical, but given the attitude of the character in question, it fits.
 

Cherry_lover

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#18
Well, I like the way Zouken seems to have got his commupance here, and it implies that Shirou has to find out about Sakura's situation at some point. I just hope that's good news for her, and that his friendship with her will override his will to do his 'job', which would probably be to kill her outright.
 

Amodelsino

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#19
Huh? They want to study her (or rather, the worms inside her and how they effect her), not kill her.
 

Cherry_lover

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#20
Amodelsino said:
Huh? They want to study her (or rather, the worms inside her and how they effect her), not kill her.
The way it's written it doesn't seem like Sakura is in their research lab, though. They have samples of his worms, but there's nothing there saying that they have Sakura. Note that they claim to have implanted them into an 'experimental subject'.

And, I don't think that Shirou would be cruel enough to deliver a close friend (who has been through a hell of a lot) to them for expermentation. He was willing to kill an innocent person to get into the war, but that's because it was for the good of the world. Delivering her to their science department just allows them to gain morw power for themselves, which I don't think Shirou would have any interest in being a part of. But, killing Sakura may perhaps be the best way of preventing Zouken from using her, and that is part of his mandate for infiltrating the war.
 

nick012000

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#21
Yeah. Besides, nMage mages are all about secrets. Secrets about magic, secret initiatory rituals, secrets about other people's secrets...

Also, sixth degree Masters. What the fuck were you playing, because it certainly wasn't regular nMage. :blink: :p
 

Amodelsino

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#22
The way they were talking implied that the study was in relation to the initial worms (as in, the ones in Sakura). She was the subject.

Notice what it says at the end? It's a preliminary report. The information they have came from tissue from her worms and Zouken's records. The worms are crude and underdeveloped instruments because they are created by Zouken. It even says that if recreated by their people, they would have a much better version.

The point is, his job (if he was given one in relation to her) would not be to kill her. If they were going to, they already would have to prevent anyone else getting their hands on the worms.
 

Kibbles

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#23
Amodelsino said:
The way they were talking implied that the study was in relation to the initial worms (as in, the ones in Sakura). She was the subject.

Notice what it says at the end? It's a preliminary report. The information they have came from tissue from her worms and Zouken's records. The worms are crude and underdeveloped instruments because they are created by Zouken. It even says that if recreated by their people, they would have a much better version.

The point is, his job (if he was given one in relation to her) would not be to kill her. If they were going to, they already would have to prevent anyone else getting their hands on the worms.
Actually, the research group implanted a subject with worms made to original specs. Subsequently, they concluded that the version was primitive, lacking and sorely out-of-date and that they could do better, so 'please, please, please can we?'

The preliminary report was whether the project is worth pursuing further. Sakura herself was subjected to several non-invasive scans, but that's about it. The worms in Sakura are inert by the time the epilogue starts. Still there, though.

Notice that it the research group is based in China and one of the Consilii involved is Korea (including the northern parts), which both offer a ready supply of people that 'disappear'. There's no shortage of human test subjects in Far East, northern branch.

nick012000 said:
Also, sixth degree Masters. What the fuck were you playing, because it certainly wasn't regular nMage. blink.gif tongue.gif
It started with the basic Mage handbook roughly seven years ago. The setting started with only one change from the base work, the removal of ascension. Over time, it turned into something entirely different.

Well, to be honest, the first adventure had a fairly high-powered big bad. They got worse, which slowly rose the power levels up until you've got people with gnosis 10 walking around. Since every subsequent campaign took place in the same universe, it turned into a full setting that never really took into account many (or any, really) of the other sources.

Cherry_lover said:
Well, I like the way Zouken seems to have got his commupance here, and it implies that Shirou has to find out about Sakura's situation at some point. I just hope that's good news for her, and that his friendship with her will override his will to do his 'job', which would probably be to kill her outright.
And where did you get the silly idea that Zouken got his comeuppance? The report merely mentions the Pentacle's awareness of his existence and access to his notes. The only actions that would really get the awakened's panties in a bunch would be Zoukens tampering with souls. The other actions on the list, while reprehensible, aren't really the Pentacle's problem.

But, otherwise, within the setting, the average mage will sort people he knows into one of two categories. Friends, for whom they'll take a bullet without a second thought and acquaintances, who they'll put a bullet in if it's advantageous. Well, an acquaintance might get the privilege of getting stabbed from the front, rather than in the back ... if it's a really nice mage doing the stabbing. Everyone else is a potential enemy. Or a sleeper and, therefore, irrelevant.
 

Cherry_lover

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#24
Amodelsino said:
The way they were talking implied that the study was in relation to the initial worms (as in, the ones in Sakura). She was the subject.

Notice what it says at the end? It's a preliminary report. The information they have came from tissue from her worms and Zouken's records. The worms are crude and underdeveloped instruments because they are created by Zouken. It even says that if recreated by their people, they would have a much better version.
The initial worms come from Sakura, yes. That doesn't mean that they needed Sakura herself to be there. Shirou could easily have extracted the worms from her and sent them for analysis. That seems considerably more likely, to me, than Shirou sending a close friend to be tortured and examined as a test subject by the medical research team. Plus, there's no mention of the original subject into which they were implanted in the report.

The point is, his job (if he was given one in relation to her) would not be to kill her. If they were going to, they already would have to prevent anyone else getting their hands on the worms.
He wouldn't be directly ordered to, no, but it would be part of the general 'job' he was given when he was told to infiltrate and stop the war, I'd imagine.

*Edit* lol, sniped by canon....
 
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