Harry Potter Reflections 4, complete

Lionheart

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Reflections Through Time
Chapter Four

by Lionheart


AuthorÆs Rant:
Probably the saddest thing about Harry Potter fanfiction is that those stories where every single person betrays him flow so easily, and the ones where anything at all goes right for him seem so forced.

But then, what has Rowling done to make him happy? There were a few moments in Book 1, like where he discovered magic or made his first ever friends. But lately those friends... sigh, itÆs so *believable* when a fan-author has them turn on Harry, sell him out or otherwise betray him. And you donÆt have to stretch the imagination at all for the Ministry to be performing something unspeakably vile and unfair to hurt him, thatÆs straight out of the original! ItÆs like connecting Hermione and books, thatÆs just what they do!

The original author has built a series in which hurting Harry seems to be the only thing that all sides agree on. How twisted is that?


Disclaimer: I want you to carefully consider what youÆve been smoking if you think any of these characters belong to me.

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ôWhere are we going?ö Hermione bobbed around excitedly as the goddess guided them back to the TV set sheÆd emerged from.

ôThe Malfoy Manor first,ö Urd soberly replied.

The Granger girl went pale with shock. ôBut thatÆs not what I wished for. I wanted us to be integrated with our past selves, like Harry was.ö

Urd met her concerned gaze with a kindly expression. ôBut you didnÆt wish to be integrated with your younger selves, Hermione. You wanted new bodies. I did ask if you were so sure on that.ö

ôI... I didnÆt know what it would mean.ö The Granger girl trembled.

ôNow, now.ö The goddess comforted. ôI am doing what I can to mitigate your errors somewhat. You know, this is why an off the cuff wish is better. With some room to interpret we can give you what you really want instead of what you spelled out in excruciating detail. And not knowing how Heaven or the wish system works, you donÆt know the right things to say, so you canÆt describe it in the kind of language that would get you what you want, the way you want it, as well as we could. But IÆll do what I can to make things turn out as well for you as I can, alright?ö

Turning directly to face the trio, Urd kindly soothed, ôIt wonÆt be so bad. This way you dodge one of the major downsides people get through integrating with their past selves, if they donÆt want to change everything that is, which is boredom. You all just wanted to live the same lives over again, for the most part. But what hurts the most for those who do that is nothing is challenging, nothing new, when youÆve already lived that same life before. The same trips happen, you get the same presents, the same people come over to visit, and those few who have asked for it describe it as one of the worst aspects of the experience. It is encoded in your souls to want to grow, and stagnating is one of the worst punishments you can get. People who have gone that route end up tearing their former lives apart, not making the friends they once did, or achieving the same victories, just because the boring down times got to them so badly they began lashing out to make anything different. It may not be what you wanted, but IÆll do what I can to make this wish turn out even better than the one you were intending, alright?ö

With a brilliant smile, she added, ôWho knows? Maybe this really might have turned out better than the wish you were intending, anyway. Still, IÆd love to help it along.ö Putting one foot inside the screen of the TV set, the display became a brilliant surge of colors. Urd then held out a hand to the ghosts, indicating they should follow her. One by one, they did. Once the last had entered, Urd went the rest of the way through herself.

On the other side they emerged from an enchanted painting on the wall of a great and darkly decorated home. ôI thought we were going to have to emerge from the village and fly to the Malfoy home. I know the Malfoys donÆt have a fellymission set.ö Ginny mused.

ôMoving pictures are moving pictures,ö Urd gave her a distracted reply, scanning their environment.

ôIf you knew what we wanted, why didnÆt you grant us life on the first wish?ö Luna penetrated the goddess with her gaze.

Urd glanced back at her. ôLook, IÆm sorry. I wasnÆt at my best. I was uncomfortable and just wanted out of there. So I took a shorthand route to getting done. It was unfair, and I apologize. If Heaven hadnÆt authorized HermioneÆs wish and obligated performance of it by the Ultimate Force, I would have probably have snuck through a full completion of what you wanted the first time and integrated you with your younger selves. But now I wonÆt be able. So IÆll have to promise you a favor to be named later, seeing as how Hermione basically lost her wish trying to get what I shouldÆve granted you the first time.ö

ôA favor?ö Ginny asked.

ôBy rights, it properly belongs to Hermione,ö the goddess clarified. ôAnd it will be on my own powers, not the wish system. So itÆs not really a full value replacement. But it is the best I can do.ö

Urd glanced at her cell phone, as if expecting a call. When nothing happened, she shrugged, seeming bemused as she led them off through the manor.

They passed through a wall, appearing at the head of a set of secret stairs leading down to a hidden sub-basement. Once at the bottom, they saw figures they recognized as the Malfoy family arranged around a curiously formed altar dressed in ceremonial robes. A one-year-old Draco was sitting back by the wall on a deeply green plush cushion, while in itÆs motherÆs arms was another baby, just days old.

Everything was frozen. Candles refused to flicker, and it was obvious to the three ghosts that they were watching a scene on pause, stopped between the ticks of time.

Urd began an explanation without prompting. ôThe ancient Purebloods are crazy about magical purity in their bloodlines. Thus the highly imaginative name. However, in their quest for that it leads to some dark practices we do not approve of. This is one of them. In order to avoid the embarrassment of a squib being born into the family, the more fanatical ones test their children for power only a few days after their birth, where they place a baby in danger of various forms to see if its innate magic will protect it at all. If it does not, they destroy it, rather than have a child grow up who wouldnÆt be a proper witch or wizard.ö

Urd frowned at the frozen scene, not acknowledging the gasps from ghosts behind her. She continued in disapproving tones. ôThis one is a test based on the four elements. It is believed that if they dunk a child in water it will float via magic rather than drown, or the fire will not burn it. Basically, they give their own kid four chances to do something magical or get hurt. If it fails each time they destroy it. Nevermind the fact that some of the best magical children wouldnÆt respond to such things because their gifts arenÆt aimed toward that sort of threat. How youÆd know if your kid is a seer from that kind of test is beyond me. But they are sure these disgusting practices are what will make them strong.ö

ôWhat... what is going to happen here?ö Hermione asked, googly-eyed.

The goddess sighed. ôIn your original timeframe? This girl failed all four tests, and Lucius Malfoy blasted her to pieces. The shock was bad enough his wife lost her ability to have more children, so Draco became an only child. It failed to significantly change how he turned out.ö

ôWhy are we here?ö Ginny probed, fearful of herself.

A platinum head drooped. ôBecause the way the Ultimate Force resolved to fulfill HermioneÆs wish calls for each of you to be given new bodies, placed in circumstances that fill holes which otherwise would have formed, saving lives where possible. One of you will be displacing this child. She will be sent off to another family, probably as someoneÆs twin. And whichever one of you chooses to take over for her will get a brand new infant body in her position. Each family will be made to believe the girl they receive is their daughter.ö

She raised a hand to cut Hermione off and favored her with a kindly smile. ôDonÆt call in your favor now, kiddo. IÆm already going to do all I can to make everything bearable for each of you. But the instructions I received were to fill three certain slots, thatÆs not up to me to change at this point.ö

Instead, Hermione licked ghostly dry lips and asked, ôWhat is her name?ö

Her response was a kind but sad smile. ôThe Malfoys donÆt believe in naming their kids until theyÆve passed a test like this one. But in her heart, the childÆs mother wants to give her the name Pomona. However, sheÆll almost certainly be overruled by her husband, who wants to call a daughter Anastasia.ö

ôI will take over this position,ö Luna volunteered.

ôWhy?ö both her friends blurted, horrified at the thought.

They were answered with a somewhat off smile. ôTo save you both from being Malfoys, of course.ö

A bit humbled by her sacrifice for them, they meekly nodded.

ôBesides,ö Luna continued. ôI want to see if it is really true that dryads frolicking in her private woods is what drove Druzella Malfoy mad enough to paint her son orange when he was ten, and address all of his Hogwarts mail to: Carrot-Top.ö

ôYes,ö Urd calmly replied. ôThey didnÆt like her a bit, but it traumatized Lucius for life. To this day heÆs deathly afraid of dryads and doesnÆt go out into forests if he can help it.ö

Ginny and Hermione spent a moment gaping, while Luna issued forth another smile, this one flavored with a hint of triumph.

Urd was regarding Luna seriously. ôNow, you know you are magical already, but in order to make this test more bearable for you IÆve decided to grant you one of the lost gifts of magic, one that Father hasnÆt sent to anyone for awhile because of past abuses.ö

ôWhat abuses?ö Ginny probed, glad it wasnÆt her in danger.

ôWhat gift?ö Hermione also probed, more out of curiosity for her friendÆs future.

Well-tanned shoulders gave a tiny shrug. ôA Firelord, in this case lady. You see it in comic books a fair amount. The most famous historical one was named Brigitte, and the Celts confused her for a goddess of fire. They tend to get involved in wars alot, as their magical gift lends itself to combat better than most. Father stopped sending them when the last one got fed to a beast as a baby in a test alot like this one, by parents believing that a child who couldnÆt soothe a hungry wolf was obviously nonmagical.ö

Urd made a disgusted face. ôJust like people like the Malfoys have destroyed beast-speakers in tests alot like the one theyÆre doing now.ö

Giving herself a small shake, Urd turned her attention to Luna. ôYouÆll still look like you did before, with some modifications as per HermioneÆs wish. So, are there any questions before you take the plunge?ö

Luna nodded. ôWas Draco the first born?ö

One could easily tell Urd did not like the topic, but she answered it. ôNo, he was third. But the first two children failed their tests, just as this one would have done. Anything else, say, on a happier topic?ö

Luna smiled softly. ôWhy are children so apt to forget to remember with up so floating many bells down? Or when someones marry their everyones, laugh their crying and do their dance, they say their nevers and sleep their dreams?ö

Suddenly laughing, Urd leaned forward and whispered in the ghostÆs ear, bringing a sudden bright twinkling of understanding to LunaÆs eyes.

ôWhen a felonÆs not engaged in his employment, when a criminalÆs not occupied in crime, their capacity for innocent enjoyment, is it as great as any honest man?ö she asked.

ôNo,ö the goddess told her frankly. ôI donÆt have a good analogy for it, really. But to the extent you fill yourself up with a desire for good things, to that same extent you canÆt tolerate the bad, and vice versa. ThereÆs no mixing. Those who give themselves over to evil lose those parts that are able to appreciate the simple joys. They burn them away, and seek their pleasure in less innocent pursuits.ö

Luna nodded. ôDo fairies truly get addicted easily to mugwort syrup? And do they truly smell it and seek it out for miles?ö

ôNo, on both counts,ö Urd shook her head. ôBut the wizard who thought so had a three year old daughter whoÆd cast a charm with his wand that caused the jello pudding of his muggle neighbor to do the same thing. HeÆd just ascribed that effect to the wrong source.ö

Luna nodded. ôI am ready.ö

Her two friends eyes were bugging out over her choices of questions.

Urd looked at them, puzzled. ôWhat? Everything she asked was perfectly relevant. Narcissa is scared to death of fairies. If her daughter knows something to attract them, she can get all of the private time she wants by dodging into a forest, where Lucius would never go, and calling some fairies, which her mother cannot stand to get close to. That makes it almost not an issue to have evil people for parents, because she can protect herself from them at need.ö

ôIÆm sorry,ö Ginny ventured. ôWeÆre just not used to someone who understands what Luna means when she says anything.ö

Hermione nodded, agreeing. ôWeÆve been close to her for years and only about half of her statements make any sense.ö

Urd gave a negligent shrug. ôThen you need to learn to listen better.ö

Not waiting for another question, the platinum haired goddess raised a hand toward the infant in its motherÆs arms, which vanished in a flash of light. An instant later, Luna the ghost was gone and a fresh new baby was in Narcissa MalfoyÆs embrace, looking (being honest here) alot like the baby that had just vanished.

Time was no longer on pause and the scene progressed.

A tremulous Narcissa, filled with concern and fear, handed her child over to Lucius who, with some ancient chants full of self-congratulatory phrases instead of magic effects, moved to plunge his child into the water.

From her new perspective Luna could see that Lucius, now her father, was missing an eye. The recent injury of a gaping, empty socket leered at her, and she made that known to her friends before using her new divine gift to send a cone of fire into the manÆs face, searing the flesh of his chest and hands - a cone that was cut off abruptly as the man dropped her, stumbling back, and Luna was dunked into the water.

Narcissa fished her out instantly, getting her ceremonial robes soaking as she did so, and only then looked over in concern towards her husband, whose injuries were not as bad as they might have been.

ôI think little Pomona proved herself, donÆt you darling?ö

Her husband scowled, but there was some cheer there as well. Already he was planning on what to do with a daughter who could produce flames. A rare gift indeed! But he recovered enough to scoff, ôPomona? A nymph who grew trees? Ridiculous! She will have a name to reflect her glory, equal to an empress! She shall be called Anastasia!ö

ôAnastasia Pomona Malfoy?ö Narcissa ventured, trying to settle for second place with a middle name of her choosing instead of nothing, which Lucius was far more likely to leave her.

The murderer considered turning down her request just for the sheer maliciousness of doing it, then conceded. ôVery well, but she shall have one more name to reflect a power that shall make our enemies fear and tremble, and remind them of our proud ancestry. She shall be called Anastasia Brigitte Pomona Malfoy, and any mudbloods who know our history ought to take warning at the reminder of why our ancestry makes us more powerful than they!ö

ôQuite pompous, isnÆt he?ö Luna giggled over their shared mental link.

ôDraco was worse,ö Hermione answered, with a grin. ôHe was every bit as arrogant, yet not half so intelligent, so he kept acting a buffoon, only he MEANT it! And he expected everyone to treat him as if he was as witty and clever as his father.ö

ôLucius was a cunning bastard, but that didnÆt save him in the end.ö Ginny shrugged.

ôWell, I hope the next family will at least name their kids before trying to kill them.ö Hermione tried on some false cheer.

Urd pretended not to care. ôI wasnÆt the one to choose the slots youÆll be filling. If it was up to me I never would have made any one of you a Malfoy. But I think youÆll find that none of the rest are quite so challenging as LunaÆs new future.ö

ôWhere are we going next? And will Luna be alright?ö Hermione pled.

Urd shot her a golden smile, reassuring her, ôOur baby Brigitte there will be just fine. ThereÆs nothing more stressful than a diaper change on the books for her for months. So you can rest easy on her account, and you can keep in touch with that mind-link you have.ö

ôIÆve been meaning to ask about that,ö Hermione followed the goddess out of the secret underground chamber and up the steps, out the wall, and into the closest painting, Ginny tagging along behind listening to every word they said. ôHow is it that when we got our telepathic ability it only worked between us and Harry? WeÆd been trying to pass messages along to others, but never could get any results.ö

ôStrictly speaking, itÆs not full-fledged telepathy, only a mind-link,ö Urd spoke as she led them out of a monitor inside of a muggle hospital. ôWe approve of those for ghosts, on the whole, but very few use them. As you well know, ghosts are the spirits of the departed who refuse to leave the mortal realm for some reason or other. Most donÆt even know their own reasons for staying, except a vague feeling of connection or a fear of going on causing them to linger. In essence, what you did was to bond yourselves to young Harry, making him your reason for staying. The moment he died, youÆd all pass on together, which we find cleans up the ghost population nicely, so any spirit willing to can do so. To encourage more to do it... well, thatÆs why you get advantages like sharing a mental link with him, and knowing where he is and how heÆs doing at all times. ItÆs mostly sugar coating on a cake. Ghosts canÆt progress until they pass on, and a few centuries of boredom is enough to encourage most to cross the veil, but one mortalÆs lifetime is a much shorter period than a few centuries and better for everyone involved; so those we can get to use the shortcut are welcome to it.ö

Urd paused at the door to a hospital room, a surgery. ôThe whole mortal experience was set up to be to your benefit, you know. The whole thing still is, except where bugs or demons get involved, and even those have set limits where they donÆt often cause too much trouble. It may not feel like it at times, but Heaven cares deeply about each and every one of you guys down here.ö

More humbled by that statement than theyÆd expected to be, the two ghosts gave her each a soft nod and followed her into the room. Time was stopped, as before, but the scene was one slightly unexpected.

ôA C-section,ö Urd explained, having crossed her arms and leaning against a wall. ôThe baby has water on the brain, which makes a normal delivery impossible as the kidÆs head has grown too big. What they donÆt know is that the child also has a complex heart condition, which means that between them there is nothing muggle science can do to save the childÆs life - either one, yes; together, no. SheÆll live a couple of weeks at most unless someone like us intervenes.ö

ôSo... what is our plan, then?ö Hermione ventured enough to ask.

The goddess shone forth a brilliant smile, leaning forward suddenly to favor both ghosts with her gladness. ôWhy, intervene, of course! The magical community has potions and charms that can fix this kid up with ease, so our plan is to switch her out to be the twin of someone about to be born there right about now. St MungoÆs Healers will save her life with nary a concern, and one of you will take over her position here.ö Urd winked and raised a finger. ôNo health problems, just like you wished. The doctors wonÆt know why the girl will come out with a clean bill of health when the ultrasounds said otherwise, but IÆm told there are alot of those unresolved mysteries in medicine,ö Urd stopped to consider, touching her chi in thought, ôprobably because we do alot of intervening in cases, IÆd guess.ö

ôThere are still alot of deaths in the world, and suffering,ö Hermione hedged.

The golden tanned goddess shrugged, then roundly pierced the ghostly girl with her eye. ôDidnÆt I just say that the mortal experience was set up for your benefit? Death is part of that experience, isnÆt it? Believe me, you donÆt know how much of a blessing it is that life has an end. Immortality would be the worst curse you could give anyone, and I mean worst. As you already know, your spirits, memories, and everything that makes up you still exists after you die and lose your body. What you donÆt know is what awaits you once you cross over. Having been there, I believe I can say that itÆs pretty pleasant. ThereÆs a reason we call it Heaven, you know.ö

Gulping, both ghosts nodded.

ôAnd the suffering is mostly your own fault, caused by people against other people. You donÆt know how sad that makes us sometimes.ö The goddess shook her head over her folded arms. ôWhen it gets too bad we generally have to wipe out the offending culture to prevent it from contaminating everything else. Voldemort had gotten things to that point before you came back into the past. Father had already called for a meteorite to strike that portion of the Earth, turning Europe into an island chain and putting a stop to his madness.ö Pausing, the goddess considered. ôHopefully, you and Harry will succeed in destroying him early and we wonÆt have to do that again.ö

Opening her closed eyes, the Norn regarded them again. ôBut if you read of a once great civilization thatÆs fallen, thatÆs generally the reason why. We donÆt do meteorites all that often, but plagues or barbarian hordes generally do just as well, and donÆt mess up the land so people canÆt live there later.ö

Thinking about the Middle Eastern deserts, she paused, again considering. ôWell, not too often at any rate. I donÆt know why it was so fashionable for so long to cap wells and poison streams, sowing salt into your enemyÆs fields, but it was.ö

ôGetting back to the topic at hand,ö the bookworm reminded, ôcould you tell us more about this situation? What is life going to be like for whichever one of us take over this girlÆs position?ö

ôParents are muggles, obviously,ö Urd accepted the change of topic. ôIf either had been magical our help wouldnÆt have been required. Their file says they are physicists, and this birth messes up the motherÆs womb enough she wonÆt be able to have any more kids. The couple are loving, if a touch distant. Being workaholics is pretty much their only major flaw. They have a house in Scotland, and one in London. They would have another couple on the European Continent if not for security at their workplace insisting they stay on British soil as much as possible. When they travel, itÆs always with guards.ö

ôWhy does that remind me so much of Snape?ö Ginny asked.

Hermione looked at her curiously, and the redhead elaborated, ôDuring the Second Rise, our old Potions Professor wasnÆt allowed out very much. When he objected in the most obsequious way imaginable, Voldemort had his legs cut off. Then he told him that he lived to create potions, and that if he failed in any way to please his Lord in that service he would disembowel him and treat his guts with potions so heÆd discover a whole new world of pain before he died.ö

Hermione could only snort. ôI wouldnÆt trust a man like him either. I swear that greasy bully was playing both sides off against the other. He was a Death Eater, æturned LightÆ by reports IÆve heard, however he must have been an enemy agent all along to have killed Dumbledore at the start of the Second Rise, like he did.ö

Urd closed her eyes, folded her arms again, and leaned back against a wall to shut out the world as she explained. ôTo become a Death Eater you have to commit an act of murder, of a muggle or other enemy, using an illegal curse, before witnesses in the forms of other Death Eaters, or Voldemort himself if youÆre important enough. A Dark Mark is nearly impossible to remove because they use the necromantic energies of that death to fuel the spell implanting it on the willing subject receiving it. ItÆs impossible to get one any other way, not by Imperius curse or possession or any other method. The one getting it has to want it, and want it enough to murder in cold blood for it. You canÆt be fooled or confused or controlled and get one. You arenÆt going to wake up after getting drunk and find you have one, unless you are that type of person who kills people and joins secret dark cults in their sleep anyway. That mark is reserved for VoldemortÆs willing followers alone, because it canÆt be given to anybody else, and it gives him an extraordinary measure of control over those who accept it. An ancient magical contract is built into a markÆs basic design, and those who receive one essentially become Tom Riddle JrÆs slaves.ö

Urd opened her eyes briefly to give the girls a serious stare. ôNaturally, he doesnÆt tell them that part. He never has, nor does he intend to. But his ability to find them if they try to escape from him, and their inability to turn their magic against him, are all aspects of that ancient slavery contract.ö

Their guide leaned back against the wall, closed her eyes again, and resumed speaking. ôThat a person has a mark tells you they are already a murderer, and though they donÆt know it, they have sold themselves away to become the property of the murderer who leads them. Since they canÆt use magic against him, or any of his marked agents that he sends after them, they are essentially helpless if he decides to kill them. So very few ever choose to disobey his orders, and because the Mark lets him find them, those who do donÆt live very long. He doesnÆt let his property escape his power.ö

The goddess took a deep breath, only to let it out in a sigh without once opening her lovely eyes, trying hard to ignore the subject matter of what she was talking about. ôSnape never once disobeyed Voldemort. He approached Dumbledore to æspy for the LightÆ only because Voldemort had ORDERED him to do exactly that! When the Headmaster took in his former student, accepting him and his sob story with open arms, Voldemort gained what he was after all along: his own loyal spy in the Order of the Phoenix.

ôDumbledore trusted æhisÆ new man and Voldemort didnÆt. Albus shared with his new agent special secrets to prove his trust in him, and Tom restricted what knowledge Snape had access to, knowing full well that anything shared with the spy had a chance to be told to the other side. Because of this one-way flow of information, Voldemort neutralized the threat of the Order to him, because he always knew their major plans ahead of time. Because he could read minds, it didnÆt matter if Snape was told everything or not. Dumbledore encouraged his people to socialize and make friends with each other, but didnÆt teach them how to defend their minds from SnapeÆs probes. It was at that point that the resistance of the magical world began to fail for the final time.ö

Once again Urd opened her eyes and met those of her audience. ôHarry was our answer to that. Something like that meteor, but less drastic. It was a miracle that allowed him to survive that curse by reflecting it back on his attacker, and we gave it to the magical world so they would have a chance to win the war. Sadly, they chose not to and wasted the time we gave them trying to forget it had ever happened instead of finishing off the ones whoÆd brought it on them, while they could. People make those kind of choices sometimes.ö

ôHarry, are you hearing this?ö A stunned Hermione whispered.

ôYes, Hermione, I am.ö his voice sounded over their link. ôSo my mom didnÆt have to die to protect me against that curse! Dumbledore was wrong about that after all!ö

ôDumbledore was wrong about many things.ö Urd said cryptically. ôHave none of you ever wondered why Snape ate in the Great Hall? That man despised his students, he hated them all, only concealing that for a precious few he felt he could turn into useful tools by showing a little favoritism.ö The goddess flicked back her hair in anger. ôThe school rules didnÆt require Professors to eat with the students. That woman who failed to teach anything useful about Divination wasnÆt seen outside of her tower more than once a year. So why did the one man who hated everyone around him bother to socialize?ö

Both ghosts blinked in confusion, puzzling over this, until Urd gave them the answer. ôIt was because he was a brewer of potions, and the cups and plates were set out at every meal long before the food or guests arrived. A thin film around a glass or on the handle of a fork never did get noticed, but had a powerful effect on the behavior of whoever used them - and certain place settings were always used by certain people. Students milled around too much to dose with any accuracy, but a certain Headmaster TRUSTED his æconvertedÆ Death Eater more than those who had been serving him years longer, more than all the rest combined, really. Who do you think he was listening to when he came up with the plan to leave Harry with the Dursleys? Who was in the HeadmasterÆs office convincing him there was nothing he could do to stop the abuses that baby suffered? Why did a Headmaster never appear to notice or care what a certain Potions Professor was doing to his students? Despite the fact that it was so unethical that schools have been CLOSED DOWN over lesser offenses! Why? Because, to quote a certain teacher, he could ôbewitch the mind and ensnare the senses.ö Why do you think he bragged that he could bottle fame or brew glory when he only had a lousy teaching job and a crummy house in a ruined neighborhood, while the real Potions Masters lived on their own in much better circumstances?ö

Once again they felt her eyes on them. ôHe was the worst Professor that school ever had. I know. I checked. But despite that he got away with anything he chose to do. Now given how he so openly flaunts rules, do any of you think that he could be doing this an HONEST way? Or do you concede that the only way he could get away with this would be to cheat, and do something sneaky and underhanded?ö

ôIf you add hurtful, sneaky and underhanded describes everything he does.ö Ginny quipped.

ôBack to the topic at hand, could you tell us how they would raise their daughter?ö Hermione interjected, hope springing in her breast.

The Norn averted her eyes, almost embarrassed. ôMostly... they donÆt,ö she finished in a quiet voice. ôOh, theyÆll do all of the basics, feed and clothe her just fine. But their major flaw IS a flaw, they focus on their work to the exclusion of all else. Neither one of the couple would notice or care about going to work for months wearing the same clothes, so they have a maid service to take care of the cleaning and the washing, and theyÆll hire new ones to look after the baby. Maybe theyÆll notice her as she grows up, but more than likely they wonÆt. Sometime after they retire theyÆll open their eyes to discover they are grandparents or something. About that point theyÆll start to wake up to the fact that theyÆve missed out on their only daughterÆs entire life, but donÆt expect that to happen for another forty years at least. Sixty is more likely.ö

ôIÆll take this life,ö Ginny volunteered.

ôBut why?ö Hermione queried, openly puzzled.

Ginny shrugged happily. ôDidnÆt Urd just tell us that the worst danger of living your life over again was boredom and feeling stagnated? Can you imagine anything any more different from my first childhood? Life at the Burrow was tight, with shared bedrooms and a huge family in your face all of the time. Mom fussed over us constantly, and I was swimming in brothers, not to mention we were Purebloods. I couldnÆt picture anything more different from my last upbringing than to be an only daughter of muggles, unless it was to have a couple of sisters, I guess.ö

ôAlso, this couple is rich, and you were poor,ö Urd softly muttered, examining a wall.

ôWell, yes, there is that.ö Ginny blushed silver.

ôUhm, okay I guess. I do hope youÆll be happy,ö Hermione smiled for her friend.

ôIf you want different, this would be it,ö Luna agreed, proving she was listening over the link. ôHowever, donÆt overspice yourself.ö

ô...variety is the spice of life...ö Hermione muttered. ôI think I understood that.ö

ôIÆd still like to give it a try,ö Ginny reaffirmed.

ôWell, if thatÆs okay with the rest of you,ö the goddess raised her hand once more and the ghostly Ginny was gone. Time resumed just as the operating room techs brought a new baby forth from the cut in her motherÆs tummy.

ôCome along,ö Urd whispered. ôTheyÆll be awhile discovering that she hasnÆt got any health problems despite what the instruments said before they pulled her out, and you and I still have one more house to visit.ö

ôI guess... whatever this turns out to be, IÆm stuck with it.ö the ghostly girl muttered.

Her response was a brilliantly reassuring grin. ôIÆm sure youÆll like it. In many ways I saved the best for last. Your parents arenÆt openly evil or obsessive compulsive worker bees, the situation is comfortable, and your circumstance close to ideal for a healthy growing up period. There are one or two minor little drawbacks, but nothing on the scale the other two have to deal with.ö

ôSo who are we going to go see?ö The brainiac questioned, feeling reassured.

ôThe Greengrass family,ö Urd told her, just as they arrived through a portrait at that familyÆs estate. ôAncient Purebloods, but ones who carefully horded their neutrality during VoldemortÆs First Rise and long into the Second. They have kind of the opposite problem the MalfoyÆs were concerned with.ö

ôYou donÆt mean weÆre going to visit another ritual room, are you?ö the girl swallowed in disgust.

Urd regarded her seriously. ôThey have one such room on this estate, but itÆs been something on the order of a century since it was last used to test a child. No, there are two problems that generally terrify the ancient families. One is giving birth to an unsuitable baby like a squib, as you saw. The present Greengrasses arenÆt Dark enough to worry about that, theyÆd just give her up to a muggle adoption agency if she hadnÆt displayed any magic growing up, rather than kill her, and claim she died in an accident. The other difficulty ancient families get is having no children to carry on the lineage at all. They are having that problem.ö

The Granger girl was puzzled, objecting, ôBut they do have a daughter! Daphne was in our class at Hogwarts! Unless... you mean a different branch of the Greengrass line is who we are visiting.ö

ôNo,ö the goddess shook her head politely. ôYou are quite correct, and this is that same family. However, Daphne was not born to them as their daughter. You see, ancient and proud families donÆt admit to having embarrassing offspring problems. When they do have a difficulty, they take care of it as secretly as possible. However, with the current war going on and so many magical families getting destroyed, itÆs not hard to buy a baby from a Death Eater who didnÆt quite finish off an entire magical family like he was supposed to.ö

ôThatÆs terrible!!ö Hermione cried out, horrified.

Her response was a careless shrug. ôYouÆll find extremes are the rule when you get any group of people obsessed about being a master race. They do every kind of trick to avoid being caught as being ever-so-slightly less pure than anyone else, when the fact of the matter is that none of them are as æpureÆ as they pretend to be, almost like a bunch of baboons trying to pretend that *their* bottoms arenÆt blue, covering their own while pointing out othersÆ. ItÆs hilarious when you arenÆt caught up in it personally.ö

ôI think our being here is proof enough IÆm going to be caught up in them,ö the girl pointed out glumly.

ôTrue enough, but think of the good youÆll be doing for others!ö The goddess tried to cheer her. ôBecause youÆll be taking over this position for the express purpose of saving a life, James Potter will get another glowing, ghostly warning in time to save the family of one of his friends. The girl who ought to have become Daphne will instead be allowed to grow up with her natural parents and siblings, their lives all having been spared.ö

That was mollifying somewhat. ôBut still, wonÆt you need something like that to put me into this familyÆs care? How will you insert me?ö

Abruptly, she noted the goddess was no longer wearing her sexy, filmy attire, but a body-hugging cloak with a hood, out of which she peered, smiling at her charge. ôNo one in these exchanges likes to be recognized. Usually the family on the receiving end asks only two questions: health and gender. TheyÆd prefer a boy to carry on the family name but will take whatever they can get. You being a girl will mean only two things, theyÆll pay a slightly lower price for you, and theyÆll stay in the market for a boy if one comes up for sale. One doesnÆt - at least not before this current war ends and the market for magical orphans dries up from lack of a readily concealable supply. Any questions?ö

ôYes, how will they pass me off as their daughter when IÆll probably look nothing like them?ö

ôAn inheritance ritual. There are a number of non-Dark ones for use in adoptions like this one. Any child they got would end up looking like their own. The Purebloods have had an interest in concealing acts like this one for a long time, and theyÆve developed a whole library of spells to use, each one improved over the last. One major benefit for you is that youÆll have all of your own magical gifts, plus those you mightÆve inherited from these two if they were your actual parents.ö A platinum haired head paused in thought. ôThough, the one they are likely to use on you will cause that any lineage detection spells will discover only your adopted family, not your true bloodline. I suppose I could give you just about any bloodline, and theyÆd never know.ö

Hermione grimaced. ôFor all of their talk about honor and glory, IÆd take being a muggleborn over a pureblood any day.ö

The goddess had to agree. ôYes, but when no flaw is acceptable, people donÆt stop having them, they just start concealing them. However, IÆve got to agree with you that the families of muggleborns are generally far more upstanding than purebloods whoÆve been hiding their dirty laundry for centuries. On the surface theyÆve got a perfect image, but once you poke though that cover the accumulated junk underneath smells unbelievably bad. And that kind of hiding your dirty laundry inevitably soils you, it cankers the soul.ö

ôSo... how does a person get born with magic?ö the girl asked a question that had been bothering her a long time.

The goddess grinned at her. ôCan you keep a secret?ö

ôYes.ö

ôPromise not to tell?ö

ôUh huh,ö the ghostly girl nodded, becoming quite intrigued.

Urd was suddenly casual. ôAnyone can do it. Some are noticeably more talented than others. There are many who are gifted, while others have limitations, many have a great deal more difficulty learning than some, and most are never granted an opportunity to learn. But if you compared it to, say, languages: there are some who pick them up easily and readily, others who understand more from their background, and a few poor souls who have lots of trouble learning any. But granted enough opportunity and instruction, anyone could learn. Those who are gifted are liable to be much more fluent more easily, thatÆs all. What the magical society around here does is throw away all of those who find they have trouble learning. Many of those theyÆve called squibs would have been great witches or wizards, they just had trouble getting started.ö

The goddess stared at her stunned companion. ôEinstein was flunked out of his math class, you know. His teacher said he had no talent or aptitude at all.ö

Shaking her hair out, she added, ôBut no, if you are a late bloomer in current magical culture, they assume you have no ability at all, and tell you so, so much and so often, that by the time your gift would normally have developed you are already so convinced you canÆt that you donÆt try. Being convinced you canÆt is most of whatÆs required for it to be impossible. And, for those who are never exposed, those they call muggles, it is a bit like learning how to swim if youÆve never been exposed to water. ThereÆs no real opportunity to try. Most of the muggleborn children had close brushes with Obliviators or other magical events early on, like living close to a magical building or household, and just picked something up.ö

Hermione started laughing, and Urd lifted an eyebrow at her.

ôItÆs just... bwahahaha!! IÆve been... snort... a pureblood my entire life and never knew it!ö The ghostly maiden laughed.

ôWell, of course! Everyone is.ö Urd smiled warmly at her. ôThere are no non-magical people, so everyone is a pureblooded witch or wizard. Most just donÆt know how to use magic, thatÆs all.ö

ôThatÆs hilarious!ö Hermione continued laughing.

ôSo, are you ready to join your new life? TheyÆre going to name you Daphne, just so you know.ö

ôYes, thatÆs fine.ö

Smiling, Urd suddenly had a swaddled baby in her arms, and pulling the hood close about
her head, went in to meet the family. The infant still burbled its amusement from her arms.
 

Lufio

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Everyone is a "pure-blood", they just don't know it. :lol: Having that as a "truth" for this HP world is seriously funny.
 

Waruiko

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Wondeful!
 

Prince Charon

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Lionheart said:
ôAnd the suffering is mostly your own fault, caused by people against other people. You donÆt know how sad that makes us sometimes.ö The goddess shook her head over her folded arms. ôWhen it gets too bad we generally have to wipe out the offending culture to prevent it from contaminating everything else. Voldemort had gotten things to that point before you came back into the past. Father had already called for a meteorite to strike that portion of the Earth, turning Europe into an island chain and putting a stop to his madness.ö Pausing, the goddess considered. ôHopefully, you and Harry will succeed in destroying him early and we wonÆt have to do that again.ö
"But, hey, no pressure!"

You really are very good at this.

Thank you for the update.

As for your rant, I get the feeling that Rowling has been getting tired of writing the series, and so decided around Book Five to make each book progressively worse, in order to lose readers. I have yet to read Book Six, because of the hate vibes toward it from you, and other people whose opinions I respect.

So, do you plan to bring out part 5 soon, or do you have other things you need/want to focus on?
 

Wonderbee31

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Sorry to have taken so long to post, but, wanted to say that all of these chapters are great! One of the reasons that you gave at the start, is the reason that I'm finding less enjoyment with the HP books now, oh I'm sure book seven will sell a ton, but, I don't get much enjoyment out of them as I did in the first few in the series. That's why I find the the fanfiction is giving me more fun these days.

You've got Urd's mischevious nature down pat, imo, as well as the other girls, and I look forward to what occurs next time, and how things will go for them in their new lives.
 

Lionheart

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Prince Charon said:
"But, hey, no pressure!"

You really are very good at this.

Thank you for the update.

As for your rant, I get the feeling that Rowling has been getting tired of writing the series, and so decided around Book Five to make each book progressively worse, in order to lose readers. I have yet to read Book Six, because of the hate vibes toward it from you, and other people whose opinions I respect.

So, do you plan to bring out part 5 soon, or do you have other things you need/want to focus on?
No, no pressure at all! :D

You are very encouraging, sir. Thank you for that.

I am diddling around with a few things, but my brother has taken an interest in this one so it is likely to get continued.
 

Mighty Bob

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I really really like this chapter alot. The various explainations doled out by Urd to the various questions were nice for a bit of background and world building; and the questions and choices made seem to fit the characters very well IMO.

Nice to see that the mental link'll keep working, was wondering how Harry would react to his ghosts just disappearing and never coming back. The bit about Snape eating in the Great Hall constantly is scary for the fact that it makes alot of sense. Then again, it seems that any decent writer that takes the time could do a better job of world building than Rowling did. Never been one of those who laud her as an absolutely fantastic writer. I like her works because everything is so vague that world building and AUs are easy to make.

Looking forward to seeing where the 4 lives of our time travellers'll go. Is the A!MG part of this over now, or will we be seeing more of Urd in the future?
 
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