Response to Hinata Slimegirl Challenge

[David Alan Abramczyk]

Sorry, I got turned around first time.

Motoko: Red
Naru: Orange
Shinobu: Blue
Kitsune: Yellow
Mutsumi: Green
Kanako: Black
Suu: Brown

I've made a start on this, if you're interested. Here it is:


Everyone knows that Kaolla Su's inventions are dangerous, particularly if your name happens to be Keitaro Urashima, and that often, her inventions screw up in a spectaclular fashion, but sometimes, even the greatest cock-ups have positive side effects, at least from a certain point-of-view...

In room Three Hundred and One of the Hinata-sou, Su was tinkering with a side-project to her Mecha-Tamas. A few months earlier, she'd played a computer game called "Deus Ex", and had been impressed by the idea of the Universal Constructor. Since then, she'd been experimenting to create such a device. Even for her, it had been a difficult task, which had meant the creation of Mecha-Tamas had slowed to almost a complete stop.

But now, her first working prototype of a Universal Constructor (She'd yet to come up with a catchy name for it) was ready for a trial run. Carefully, the young girl placed a block of Cheddar cheese into the pan, and began to enter a test programme to turn the cheese into a bunch of bananas. She was about to engage the first stage of the test programme, when an all too familiar sound at the Hinata-sou rang out from downstairs.

"KEITARO YOU PERVERT!!!!"

CRASH!!!

Once again, Keitaro Urashima, the Landlord of the Hinata-sou, had been caught in a situation not of his own design, and had recieved "punishment" from Naru Narusegawa, in the form of the infamous "Naru Punch". Today, however, everyone would have wished that the fiery-tempered Toudai student had kept her cool.

Su watched as if in slow motion as Keitaro crashed through the floorboards, in an unusually shallow angle of climb, and then thundered past her, and into the Universal Constructor with an almighty thump.

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[Mereo Flere]

MWUAHAHAHA!

*Cough*

That's a teaser if I ever saw one.

 

[David Alan Abramczyk]

Shinobu was hanging out laundry on the roof, as Motoko practised her katas. Kitsune was watching the Kentucky Derby on TV, and was on the edge of her seat as the horse she'd been backing began to nose ahead of the pack. Mutsumi was in the hotsprings with Tama-chan. And Naru was grumbling about Keitaro as she sat down to study again.

As Keitaro slammed into the UC that Su had created, a pulse of energy blasted from his body, which sent the machine haywire. A green fog rose from the device as the nanobots gathered in countless numbers. Suddenly, with a whine that rose in pitch, the fog of nanobots began to spin, going faster and faster until it washed out like a green tide from around Keitaro, creeping between the cracks in the floorboards, doorjams and open windows.

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"Ara?" Mutsumi said, as she watched the fog roll towards her. Tama-chan dived into the rockery with a frightened "Myuh!" as the green tide washed over Mutsumi.

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"M-Motoko?" Shinobu said, as she saw green smoke rise around her ankles. Motoko turned to see what the matter was, and then nanomachines rushed upwards.

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Kitsune threw her betting slips in the air and whooped in celebration as her horse crossed the line ahead of the other runners. She grabbed a bottle a sake to celebrate, and was just undoing the lid when a drop of something green landed on her hand. She paused to look at it, and it was joined by two more.

"What in the world is goin' on?" she asked, looking upwards.

A solid mass of nanobots dropped down onto her.

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Naru laid back with a groan as she took her glasses off. Punching Keitaro for groping her when she tripped on her pencils had worked her up, and now she'd lost her impetus to study. Unseen by her, a green shapelessness slowly slipped through the crack of her door and through the window. As she breathed it in, there was a faint, not-unpleasant taste of peppermint to the fog.

 

[Revanant Dragoon]

This is gonna get ugly fast.

Who are they going to blame for this? Su for creating the machine, Naru for bashing Keitaro into the machine, or Keitaro for landing in the machine?

I can see Naru getting pissed off at Keitaro at least, but the rest I'm not sure on.

Very interesting. Moar please.

 

[David Alan Abramczyk]

Keitaro slowly rose to his knees, wobbling from side to side like a tree in a gale. Feeling around on the ground for his glasses, he detected the texture of earth, rather than wood.

'Ah, I must have ended up in Su's room.' he thought muzzily, too confused to realise just exactly what that meant. Finding his glasses, he put them on and blinked to get his eyes used to them again. Looking around, he saw that he'd landed in what looked like a muddy puddle. With a sigh, he put his hands down to lever himself free and back to his feet.

"Keytaro!" a familiar voice called out, and Keitaro felt a pair of legs wrap around his shoulders as Su jumped on to his back. Strangely, he could have sworn he felt something slide over his back as well.

"Hi, Su.... Sorry I messed up your room...." he said uneasily.

"No problemies, Keytaro!" Su said happily. "What do you think of this?"

What?"

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A very, very loud and girlish scream echoed out over the city, followed by the sound of running feet.

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Keitaro hared out of Su's room in blind panic. "Runawayrunawayrunaway!!" he gibbered, before he was suddenly jerked off his feet, and tumbled down into the common room, and landing on his head.

"Well, heyahs, Keitaro, what's the rush?"

"Kitsune! Su- YARRRGH!!!!!" Keitaro wailed, as Kitsune slithered off the couch towards him. Even faster than before, Keitaro jumped to his feet and, when he rushed out the door, this time, he left after-images.

"You're no fun, Keitaro..." Kitsune pouted after the fleeing landlord, before starting to give chase.

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For the next five minutes, it was bedlam in the Hinata-sou, as Keitaro fled from the pursuing girls. All the tenants he'd encountered since regaining conciousness had.... changed, somehow, and they all wanted him, for one reason or another. He was certain now, that he'd finally gone mad, and that he needed to get away before things got worse.

Finally, he ended up in the hotspring. Wildly looking in all directions, he spotted a long drinking straw lying on a sideboard. He grabbed that and, hearing the sound of his persuers, he dived headfirst into the water, using the straw to breathe.

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Unseen by Keitaro, on the other side of the hotspring, Mutsumi gently trailed her fingers through the warm water, giggling slightly at the sensations that created. At that moment, the other girls piled into the outdoor room. Mutsumi looked up.

"Oh my... You've all changed as well..." she said. Tama-chan floated up from behind the rock she'd been hiding behind. Her little turtle eyes bulged out of her head.

"Myah?"

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Breathing through the straw, as he'd once seen in a Samurai movie, Keitaro slowly made his way underwater to the edge of the hotspring, intending to flee down to the teashop to collect his thoughts. He slithered out of the hot spring onto a patch of earth, where his wet clothes dripped soundlessly. With his back to the wall, he crept towards the door. He was almost there when-

"Sempai?" Shinobu called, as she spotted him. Almost quicker than he could follow, the girls surrounded him. Now Keitaro had no option but to acknowledge the the seemingly improbable truth before his eyes.

All the tenants at the apartments, had somehow turned into.... living goo, or something like that. Motoko had turned a brilliant red colour, of the same shade as her hakama. Shinobu was now a dark sky-blue colour, which rippled and turned slightly purple as he looked at her. Kitsune had turned as yellow as a can of her favourite brand of beer, and was giving him a shrewd look that frightened him. Suu had not changed much, and was merely now solid chocolate-brown from head to toe. Mutsumi had turned the same shade of green as her favourite dress, and Naru-

An orange coloured fist was shaken in his face, derailing his train of thought.

"Keitaro......" Naru growled, "I don't know how you did this to us, but you're going to pay!" She drew her fist back to deliver the 'Naru Punch', but suddenly her fist tingled.

"Oh my..." Mutsumi said, putting one green hand to her lips to stifle a tiny laugh.

"Well, Naru, ah never thought I'd see the day!" Kitsune declared, clearly enjoying herself. "And with Motoko, no less!"

Naru turned her head (right round 180 degrees, a creepy sight), and gulped. Her right arm now seemed to grow out of Motokos' left breast, which had taken on a slightly more orange hue than the rest of her.

"Naru?! What are you doing!?" Motoko said sounding furious.

"That looks like fun! Hey, turtule lady, let's try that!" Su said, jumping onto Mutsumis' back in a powerful bearhug. There was a soft sucking sound, and within moments Mutsumi now looked like she was camouflaged, as the brown colouring of Su spread over her green body.

As the girls stared in utter confusion, none of them noticed Keitaro sneak out of the hot spring and start running as if all the demons of hell were chasing him.

 

[David Alan Abramczyk]

Some of the following chapters may need to appear in the "Lemon Section", due to their content.

 

[David Alan Abramczyk]

Keitaro whimpered softly as he ran for the steps. He needed to get away from the madhouse that the Hinata-sou had become, and for the moment, the teahouse looked like his best option. His head spun around as he heard Naru and Motoko both shout out his name, and apled greatly as he saw a reddish-orange coloured mass charge toward him, waving a sword. With an even more girlish scream than before, Keitaro fled down the stairs, not seeing Naru/Motoko be brought down by one of Su's inventions.

Unfortunately, he mis-stepped on the steps, and with a yelp, he dropped down with a long series of *Thumps*, *Crashes*, and yelps as he bounced headfirst down the long slope. It was, extraordinarily painful.

Finally, he collapsed in a heap of pain in front of the teahouse. Slowly, he dragged himself to the door and hauled himself inside.

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Kanako Urashima was in the back room steeping the tea when she heard the sound of someone collapsing onto a seat out in the main area of the shop. Curious, she walked out and saw a sight she couldn't believe.

"Onii-chan!" she exclaimed, seeing her beloved Keitaro bruised, battered, and slightly bloody, as he lay with his face down on the counter.

"Hi, Kanako...." he groaned, not looking up. "I've had a rough day. Everything's gone mad up at the apartment."

When Kanako heard the story, she gasped softly, and put her hand on the back of Keitaro's neck. "Don't worry, Onii-chan," she said softly, touching her forehead to the back of his head. "If they try to come for you here, I'll protect you."

Dazed and confused as he was, Keitaro missed the slight twitch in Kanako's voice. He merely sighed a soft "Thank you" and put his hand on top of hers.

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Back up at the Hinata-sou, the chaos was finally disappearing, now that Naru and Motoko had been seperated, as had Mutsumi and Su. Su had managed to explain what had happened to them all, and now, they all had to think about what was their next move.

The calm was suddenly broken by Naru, who had just had an unpleasant thought strike her.

"Su...... Just how far did those nanobots go?"

"Only as far as the teahouse. Why?" Su replied

"Remember how last week Kanako came to visit for a month? She said she'd be staying in the teahouse." Naru said.

"Come to think of it, Keitaro was heading in that direction when we were chasing him..." Motoko added.

The tenants looked at each other for several seconds. Then, they ran at full speed to the door.

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Down at the teahouse, Kanako had led Keitaro to her room upstairs, and shut the door behind them.

"You should be safe for a while," she said softly.

ôThanks, Kanako. YouÆre a lifesaver,ö said the out of breath Keitaro. The two then sat down on the nearby bed.

ôYouÆre welcome, Onii-Chan. Why were you running from the apartment?ö asked Kanako.

Keitaro wiped his bleeding/sweating forehead, ôI only remember it vaguely. Naru punched me clear into the upper floors and I remember hitting my head on something, which probably knocked me out. Next thing I know Su is dressed in some sort of weird brown outfit and was oozing around me. I ran and heard Naru, Motoko, and MutsumiÆs voices. However, when I looked at them, they were allàsome sort of weird, slimy things. I ran, tripped and somehow ended up here.ö

Kanako placed her arm around Keitaro and squeezed him into a soft embrace, ôWell, youÆre safe now. Hey, remember when we were kids and told each other we would run the Inn together?ö

Keitaro looked at her a little skeptical, ôNow that you mention it, yeah. I remember it. I still intend to keep that promise.ö

Kanako smiled warmly, ôWell, how about we discuss how our relationship?ö

Keitaro didnÆt know what the woman was talking about, but didnÆt really care she placed her other hand beneath his shirt and began to stroke his chest while kissing his neck ever so slightly. The only thing Keitaro could do was groan softly.

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All too soon (for Kanako at least), the two of them heard voices. Keitaro stiffened in horror as the tenants ran into the teahouse.

ôOh no, theyÆre back for me. I gotta get outta here,ö said Keitaro, as the now terrified man then jumped from the bed and ran for the window. Suddenly he felt a slimy sensation at his abdomen and spinal area.

ôWhat the heck, whoÆs doin-WHA!ö exclaimed the apartment manager as he turned his head.

Kanako had what looked to be a slimy black arm extending from her stomach, and had him in her grasp. Slowly, ever so slowly, she began to reel him in.

ôWhat are you doing? WHY are you doing this?ö asked the now hysterically fearful Keitaro.

ôI am going to assure that we do run this inn, Onii-chan. Together, and forever...ö said this now slimy woman.

Try as Keitaro might, Kanako just had too good a purchase on his body, he was being absorbed by his sister, or rather a slimed version of her. Things looked bleak for him, and he began to shriek in horror as he felt his body melt into Kanako from the waist down.

Kanako breathed out shakily as she felt herslf become filled with her beloved Onii-chan. As more and more of him filled her body, she felt a warmth fill her, one she recognised from her martial arts training as ki. She'd never felt a source of ki this strong before, and the sheer scale of if sent her to her knees. She gave his cheek a gentle lover's kiss as he began to stop struggling.

"Yes, Onii-chan..." she breathed, as his arms flowed into her. "I'll keep you safe from those mean girls, now and forever..." she said, a soft moan of fulfillment escaping her onyx black lips as Keitaro was reduced to just a head nestling between her breasts. Idly, she pushed a lock of his hair off his face, and leaned down to claim his lips.

*BAM!*

The door crashed open, jolting Kanako to her feet. Naru and Motoko entered the room and gave the goth girl looks of unbridled venom.

ôWhat the hell do you think youÆre doing, Kanako?ö Naru snarled

"I'm saving Onii-chan from the likes of you all.' Kanako replied smugly, as Keitaro struggled to free himself. "I assure you heÆll have so much fun being with me, and being me...ö she added.

ôLike hell you will, IÆm gonna make sure that doesnÆt happen,ö said Naru, as the other tenants appeared. The others looked at Kanako with the same look in their eyes.

The black googirl looked at them all, and began to tap into both hers and Keitaro's ki sources.

"If you want my Onii-chan..." she said, as another pair of arms grew from her body, "Come and get him!" she finished, as the arms turned into wickedly sharp sword blades and she charged.

The battle for Keitaro Urashima had begun.

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I'd like to thank Unknown-Common-827 for his help with the dialogue between Kanako and Keitaro. Cheers man, you're the best!

 

[David Alan Abramczyk]

The teahouse shook violently as if buffeted by a gale. A couple of pedestrians looked in alarm at the building, and reached for their mobile phones. Inside, things were getting heated.

Naru grunted as Kanako piledrived her through the floor, her body splatting apart as it passed through the support beams before recombining on the counter. Getting up again, Naru stretched her body up and back through the hole to the first floor.

"Oh my... Na-chan is very energetic today..." Mutsumi said to Tama-chan, then giggled as the little turtle stuck its' head out of Mutsumis' shoulder to 'myuh' in agreement.

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Back upstairs, Kitsune was hauling on Keitaro with all her might as Shinobu and Naru repeatedly thumped Kanako with Kanako's own gothic paraphenalia. With a sudden, wet *Plop* sound, Keitaro was pulled out of Kanako, and flew down the hole, practically into Mutsumi's lap.

*CRASH!*

"Onii-chan!/Urashima!/Sempai!/Keitaro!" multiple voices rang out, followed by a slightly disturbing organic sound as all the girls tried to get down the hole at the same time, resulting in a multi-coloured mish-mash of body parts landing in front of Keitaro, Mutsumi and Tama-chan.

For a few seconds the only sound was of the tangled up girls seperating themselves from the almost orgiastic appearing tangle. Even so, during that short space of time, Keitaro fled as fast as he could, back up into the Hinata-sou, and down into a secret passage that he'd found once. He needed time to think, to come to terms, but most of all, to calm down after nearly being eaten alive, by his own sister no less!

"Okay... Okay... I need to think on this..." Keitaro said to himself. One of the first things he thought about was how Shirai and Haitani would be green with envy over this.

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Shinobu quietly walked back into the Apartments, having left while Kanako had started another fight with Naru and Motoko. When they'd all fallen through the hole in the teashop floor,she'd been the only one who'd seen Keitaro flee. The terror in his eyes had stunned her, and she felt a need to comfort her sempai. Shutting her eyes, she placed her ear against a wall and listened. After a moment, she began to hear Keitaro speaking softly to himself. It sounded like he was in one of the secret passages near the boiler room. Setting her jaw firmly, Shinobu glided down into the basement, determined to help Keitaro as he had so often helped her.

Back in the secret passage, Keitaro rubbed his face with his hands. The chill in the passage was stiffening his muscles, but it was also clearing his mind of distractions. Whatever had happened had happened because he'd accidently tripped while stretching and landed on top of Naru while they'd been studying. Someow, he needed to set things right. Only question was, how?

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"Uhm, Sempai? Are you there?" a soft voice called out, as the blue girl slid along the passageway. Peering into the gloom, Shinobu saw Keitaro slumped against the wall, dozing quietly. As she came closer, she saw he was shivering from the cold. Gently, she spread herself around him like a sleeping bag, using her treacle-like body to warm him. She froze for an instant when Keitaro suddenly moved in his sleep, but his only action was to snuggle deeper into Shinobu's warmth, and rest his head on her shoulder, with his lips touching her cheek. He mumbled something unintelligable, and smiled as he slept.

"Oh, Sempai...." Shinobu breathed joyfully. Her heart seemed to swell with happiness, and her tiny body glowed purple. Gently, she placed one hand underneath his head, and stroked his silky black hair.

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As he slept, Keitaro dreamed. When he'd first fallen asleep, he'd dreamed of being lost in a snowstorm, before finding shelter in a cave. Inside, he'd shivered and trembled as he tried to start a fire. He'd all but given up, when finally a spark had struck the kindling and started a small fire. It wasn't much, but it was better than nothing. He huddled beside it, warming up. Soon, he was toasty warm. With a happy sigh, he stretched and looked up. Hovering just above him was a presence that he instinctively recognised as friendly. With another one of his heart-warming smiles, he lay down beside the fire and closed his eyes, feeling the presence settle over him.

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Finally, the fighting between the tenants and Kanako wound down to a stop, as the combatants ran out of breath. Kanako sagged down into a chair, as Naru and Motoko both collapsed against one another and the wall. Mitsune and Mutsumi both went to help the combatants, Mitsune to Kanako, and Mutsumi to Naru and Motoko. The green Okinawan girl knelt down to check on Naru and Motoko, but stopped when, wit a series of bubbling sounds, the kendo-ka and the Tokyo U student began to mix together.

 

[David Alan Abramczyk]

Okay, I had an idea for this fic, but I want your opinions on it first:

Motokos' sword. Should I make it her "sword"?

 

[MnemoD]

FUTA!Slime!Motoko?

WHY NOT?!?!?!?

 

[Prince Charon]

Okay, I had an idea for this fic, but I want your opinions on it first:

Motokos' sword. Should I make it her "sword"?

IMHO, no. To me futa=Do not want.

 

[GenocideHeart]

I say yes, for pure comedy value.

Besides, slimes don't really need weapons, at least not the ones who can alter body density or thickness. They just shift into whatever they want.

 

[Mereo Flere]

Gah.

This is what happens when I don't check this part of the forum.

I nearly missed out on so much AWESOME.

 

[Scygnus Darkhawk]

Awesome. And yes, sword is good. Wonder how many it's been in so far, with all the tangles going on ~

 

[kevinasher]

You know my stance on this. I'd really be disappointed in you if you decided to rip the idea to make Motoko a futa!girl from me because you liked the idea but couldn't ask how I felt... That being said, I guess I have grown to be somewhat of a celebrity among the LH fandom...

 

[David Alan Abramczyk]

Meanwhile, Mitsune and Kanako looked at what was happening to Naru and Motoko. An idea suddenly began to form in Kanako's mind as the fox pulled her out to the backroom. "Ahll right Kanako, what were you thinking, trying to smother Keitaro like that? Ya could have killed him!" the yellow googirl said sternly. The effect was somewhat spoiled by Kitsune adding, under her breath, "And then where would I get my sake money from?"

Kanako, for her part, looked down at her obsidian-black feet. "I... I just wanted to look out for Onii-chan... Aunt Haruka told me about how Naru and Motoko keep beating him... He's not indestructable, no matter what you might think..."