Riddle of the Moon

The Eromancer

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The Dark Link Chronicles
Book One: ôRiddle of the Moonö
By: The Eromancer
Edited: toraneko

Chapter 1: Birth of the Dark One

With a haggard sigh of relief, Link stumbled from the Boss chamber of the Forest Temple dripping blood and sweat. The adrenaline had worn off a while ago and now he couldnÆt even pick up his sword to re-sheath the bloodied weapon. Link was no stranger to killing his enemies, so the black blood dripping from its razor-sharp edge didnÆt bother him one bit. He was more curious as to how an insubstantial phantom could bleed in the first place, but then again, how could his Master Sword have actually struck the ghoul if it couldnÆt?

If it bleeds, it can die.

Navi, seeing Link ponder on the blood that dripped off the Master Sword, answered, ôThe Master Sword is rightly named Sword of EvilÆs Bane, Link. The phantom created by Ganondorf was obviously evil. It didnÆt matter if it was nothing more than ectoplasm; the Master Sword would have been able to cut it."

Nodding his head in understanding, brushing his long golden hair out of his face, he finally managed to muster the strength to lift his blade and slide the sword into its sheath. Cocking his head from side to side, he felt two distinct *pops* and sighed; now he felt better.

As the Hero of Time left the Forest Temple through the glowing, bright blue portal to the Chamber of Sages in the Sacred Realm, neither he nor Navi felt the dark presence re-enter for a quick moment before disappearing once again.

When Link and Navi were returned to the Temple after saying a tearful hello and goodbye to Saria, the new Forest Sage, they were deposited outside the temple on the small platform with the beautiful yet simple triforce symbol on it. This didn't allow for them to notice the carpeted floor in the boss chamber.

The blood was all gone.

Meanwhile, back in GanondorfÆs castle, the red haired King of Evil smiled devilishly at the whirling ball of magic he held in his hand. Inside the magic ball was a significant amount of black and red blood - black from his useless phantom and red from the Hero. Using his magic and the Triforce of Power, he mixed the two bloods together. When the blood finally settled, it was a disturbing reddish black when he held it over a candle. Perfect.

Holding the ball of magic with the mixed blood in it close to him, Gannon started to slowly murmur in the ancient tongue, his deep commanding voice slowly rising in volume. The heavy feel of potent magic in the air would have made it for any lesser man hard to breathe - around Ganondorf reality seemed to distort like heat rising from a fire. At the crescendo of his spell, Ganondorf was shouting his words to the high heavens like a curse. His voice echoed like a tolling bell in the empty hall of the former great castle of Hyrule, where its once great walls and lovely gardens were now nothing more than dull black stone and dead ash.

His spell complete, Ganondorf raised the ball of glowing purple energy and threw it with all his might to the ground several feet away from his towering form.

As the globe hit, a blinding light flashed and thunder crashed in the hall, signaling the dark spell's completion. In the night sky above the once great castle, thunder rolled in the black clouds, but none of its drumming beat could reach into the dark castle.

Gannon lowered his arm from his shielded face; his eyes quickly readjusted to his surroundings and looked to where he had thrown the globe.

There, kneeling as if it was wounded, was a living shadow. As the creature rose from its prostrated position on the ground, only a little common sense would have been needed to easily tell it was not truly of the living. It was black, not just its clothes or the color of its skin, it was black in a way that was unnatural, darker than pitch, darker than the deepest depths of the Shadow Temple. Deep luminescent red lines pulsed softly like a heartbeat, crossing over the black like an electrical circuit, glowing tatoos, they covered its body. Where its face would be were two gleaming red rubies, its hellfire eyes burned with unholy light and with frightening intelligence. It wasà aware of itself, this damned creature of shadow.

Gannon watched silently as the thing he created tested itself. Moving fingers, arms, neck, making sure it could walkà then it jumped, and oh what a jump it was. Easily it made a spinning twist in midair landing back on its feat as silently as a cat, its back was turned to Ganondorf, who was grinning at his accomplishment. Now that he knew how to create theseà shadows of the Hero, he would send them out as assassins to kill him.

ôWho the hell are you?ö broke him out of his musings, he quickly set his attentions on the creature heÆd created. He did not expect it to have such ability as to talk; none of the other creatures under his command could speak either, except for a few.

ôI am your creator, and thus am your master.ö Said Ganondorf, confident the shadow would listen to him, he had created it after all. Its response shocked him.

ôI bow to no one!ö the shadow argued, drawing itself upright and crossing it arms. Gannon growled deeply in his throat.

ôI created you, you will follow my orders!!ö yelled Gannon, leveling a glare that would have scared the shit out of anyone else.

ôNo.ö the single answer was met with a frost bitten glare.

ôNo?ö questioned Ganondorf, making sure he heard right the first time. The shadow merely gave him a cocky look of insubordination. ôNO?!ö Yelled Gannon, now fully enraged. ôIÆll show you no!ö He yelled, then quick as a flash shot a blast of pure malevolent energy, glowing a sickly greenish-yellow, at the shadow.

As the energy came in contact with the shadow the shape of its face came into sharp relief. It was the Hero, that blasted blonde haired, childÆs face! GannonÆs mind screamed at the betrayal of it all, and more importantly, why did it not just create another loyal creature to him? Was that damned HeroÆs blood so much stronger than his own phantomÆs? Preposterous!

But walking over to the now unconscious dark copy of Link, he knew it to be true. What to do, what to do? HeÆd spent a lot of energy on this thing he didnÆt want to just waist it! Pondering his possibilities, his eyes suddenly lit aflame at the brilliance of the idea!

Chuckling in his own devilish way, he called forth his power once again and sealed the shadow in a prison of blue crystal; that would keep it in and out of his hair. With a thought he sent the crystal to float above his organ before sitting himself down in front of the massive instrument and began his favorite song æBagalÆeh Tel-uhleÆ, an old peace of music he found quite to his liking, it was also known as the ærequiem of spiritsÆ.

As he started the music up, he felt himself relax and his thoughts more clear, it became easier to sort his thoughts and as a result, plan the best course of action for this little failure. Surrendering to the music he was in his own little world as his mind played out different scenarios.

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Well, this is my first real fic that I would ever post, really its the only one I feel confident about. But in the end, what do you all think of it? :help:
 

The Eromancer

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Alright, second chapter is up now, really people you'll all to kind... NOT SAYING ANYTHING ABOUT THIS DAMN FIC!!! Give me something to work with here people! I need ideas, comments, criticism, hell - FLAMES!!

Chapter 2: Plans and Actions

The shadow clutched its head, what the hell hit it? Sitting up it brought a hand to its face; something had most definitely hit it. Popping its neck it sighed and opened its eyes, it was greeted by blue crystal walls, a prison. And then it all rushed back to the shadow, every memory.

It was a phantom, made in GanondorfÆs image, powerful with a steed of darkness. A living shadow to personally overlook the protection of the Forest Templeà no wait.

It was Link, the Hero of Time, defender of innocentsà why would it want to help those who could not help themselves?

ôI created you, I am your master.ö Yesssà NO! He served NO ONE!!!

Wait, it was a he? The shadow though a moment, it knew the differences between male and female thanks to the PhantomÆs memories, Link new only what a female looked like, he was still a child after all, a child in an adultÆs body, but a child none the less. Grabbing itself, the shadow decided that yes it was a he, he had all the male anatomy after all, and male memories, so why should it not then, logically, be male?

He was Link, he was a Phantom, he was a phantom of Link, so he could not be Link, was he dead? He didnÆt think so, he felt a heart beating in his chest, a strong healthy heartbeat, so he must be alive. But the rest of his still felt quite dead, what was death?

He felt another headache coming from all these complicated thoughts. Ok, donÆt question death right now, too complicated. Then who was he? If he wasnÆt Link and he wasnÆt a phantom, not truly then who the fucking hell was he?!

ôAhh, its nice to see youÆre finally up, have a good nap?ö the sarcastic voice came from his right and below him. Looking down to see who spoke, he quickly found Gannon grinning most evilly up at him. Conceited son of a bit-

ôSo, what to do with you?ö Started Ganondorf, looking as if he was pondering what to do with him, the look in the Evil KingÆs eyes told him otherwise. ôI had thought about simply dispelling you from this realm but then all that hard work to make you would have been simply washed away. I can spot good talent when I see it, and itÆs obvious to me that I canÆt control you.ö DoesnÆt mean you canÆt be manipulated though. ôSo IÆd like to make a deal with you.ö

One side of him wanted to know what it was, the other side of him said not to trust it, so he compromised. ôMaybe, whatÆs in it for me?ö

ôFreedom, a real life, IÆll truly give you life, not a mere shadow as you are now.ö Said Ganondorf with relish.

The shadow glared at the evil king suspiciously, should he trust him, could he trust him? Well, of course he knew he couldnÆt trust the Gerudo King, but the blue tinted world around him quickly reminded him that he was really in no position to make deals. Nodding his head, because he really had no other choice than acceptance, he agreed to listen to Ganondorf for his freedom. ôWhat is it you would have me do?ö

Ganon grinned at his own genius, not knowing the shadow he created was already devising its own plans as well. They were practically the same mold after all, Ganon should have realized this before hand. With a simple wave of his hand Ganondorf removed the blue crystal that imprisoned Dark Link; with a grace more suited for a cat the shadow easily twisted in mid drop and landed easily on his feat. The dark copy gave Ganon fierce glare, while the evil king merely looked back disappointedly. He was hoping the little wretch would have fallen on its ass for being the miscreant little shit that it was.

ôThe task for your freedom is simple,ö Ganon started imperiously. ôYou are to wait in the Water Temple in Lake Hylia until a young man with blonde hair, blue eyes, and carrying with him a single strait-sword and shield comes.ö Ganon paused for dramatic affect not being able to help himself. ôYou will kill him, and with his blood you will become whole, no longer a mere shadow, a dark copyà of this hero called, Link.ö

Dark Link stared at Ganondorf for along time, it couldnÆt be that easy, could it? ôHow can you guarantee this will work?ö

ôBecause if you can kill him then I wonÆt have any more need for you, you can consider freedom as a simple reward for his death.ö Ganon said casually.

Despite himself, Dark Link was quite insulted but that comment, the very nerve of calling him useless. Above all the other constructs created by Ganondorf, he alone had gained a semblance of independence from the Gerudo. That was far more than any other minion of GanondorfÆs ever had, he considered himself to be quite unique. Still, he gave the outward appearance of begrudging acceptance, and left it at that.

ôGood,ö said Ganondorf. ôIÆll send you now to the temple, get acquainted with your surroundings, then when the time comes, kill him.ö Dark Link nodded his head, instinctively calling up weapons he had from memory, LinkÆs memories at least. In his left hand appeared a glistening pitch-black strait sword and in his right, a shield of the same consistency. Ganon looked only a little surprised at the appearance of such weapons, he knew he had created the shadow with the ability to construct weapons from itself so he didnÆt take note that its preferred weapons of choice was the exact same type as the heroÆs.

Drawing on his power, Ganondorf easily ripped the fabric of reality to create a portal directly into the water temple. The portal even looked ripped, like a peace of cloth cut right open with a blade of some kind.

Cautiously, Dark Link stepped forward and peered into the portal; just behind the rip was the cold stale air of the water temple, filled to the brim with crystal clear waterà and many tektites. Dark Link looked over his should at Ganondorf questioningly.

Seeing the look Ganondorf replied. ôThose things attack everything, they are an infestation I have yet to get rid of. I canÆt control them, so yes, they will attack you. Now get!ö Ganon yelled while knocking the shadow into the portal with a swift kick. A splash of water and a cursing yell were all the response to the kick that Ganondorf was rewarded with. Chuckling he closed the gate and sighed in contentment. All was going according to plan.

Back with Dark Link however, everything was not going according to plan. Just as his black form had dropped from the ripped portal three tektites had immediately been attracted to the commotion of both water from him falling inà and his rather abrasive cursing he used in the direction of the portal back at Ganondorf.

Finishing his rant off with threats of death, pain, and torture. Dark link froze when he heard the familiar- from link -sounds of tektites hopping towards him. Turning round in the water he gave a gasp of surprise before ducking under the water to avoid the poisonous fangs of the blue water-skiff types. It was a good thing heÆd done it just then as well too. Tektites for some off reason could not sink below the surface, with as big as they were it was any wonder how they stayed hopping on the water.

Swimming underneath them like a fish, Dark Link did not need to breath, he was a shadow, not truly of the living but not truly shadow either. Gliding threw the water the tektites tried to follow him but he was to fast for them. While large and strong enough to kill a normal man, tektites were neither fast nor smart enough to actually set ambushes. They hunted in packs and more often than not the other tektites- if they didnÆt see you ûwould not follow their attacking pack mates. So when he came up on the opposite side of the central pillar in the Water Temple, there were none.

Climbing up onto the stone surface of the central pillar Dark Link finally got a clear look around at his surroundings. The top level seemed to have four doors positioned evenly around the central pillar, and from what he had seen underwater there were 8 more doors. The inner Link inside of him was spurned with excitement from the realization that this entire templeà was a puzzle. Under normal circumstances an elf would have drowned if they werenÆt wearing a Zora Tunic, but then this entire temple was obviously created by the Zora so there would have been no need or care about weather someone would drown in here, one could simply not imagine ità from a Zorian perspective. An amused grin stretched its way across the shadowÆs black-black face, crimson eyes shined with glee. The hero he may not be, but cut from the same mold he still was, and Ganondorf had said to get acquainted with the temple. No time like the present as they say, right?
 

SoulGriever13

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I like it. Also, I'm holding out high hopes that this, contrary to what you'd expect from the genre, _won't_ include massive existential angst and woe. Instead, I'm hoping it includes gratuitous amounts of Dark Link flipping off the Sages, the Goddesses, and anyone getting in the way of his freedom. It would be amusing if, in his self-serving and egoistic way, Dark Link became the device of Ganondorf's final fall (no insert coin, no continue, no shoes, no service) - defeated and sealed away the guy may be, but for destruction, you need someone of a darker temperament than your usual Good Guy Hero.

Please continue.

-Griever
 

Skelethin

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SoulGriever13 said:
I like it. Also, I'm holding out high hopes that this, contrary to what you'd expect from the genre, _won't_ include massive existential angst and woe. Instead, I'm hoping it includes gratuitous amounts of Dark Link flipping off the Sages, the Goddesses, and anyone getting in the way of his freedom. It would be amusing if, in his self-serving and egoistic way, Dark Link became the device of Ganondorf's final fall (no insert coin, no continue, no shoes, no service) - defeated and sealed away the guy may be, but for destruction, you need someone of a darker temperament than your usual Good Guy Hero.

Please continue.

-Griever
I have to agree with Greiver. i normally don't come to this part of the forum, but this story seems like it has quite a bit of promise. And with the 'can make weapons out of nothing', i figure that Dark Link will also be able to make all the gizmos that normal Link has already picked up? make life a hell of a lot easier for him... not to mention, it would mean he wouldn't have to carry antyhing around.


ok, maybe I am getting a little carried away, but its all speculation, ne?

Out of curiosity, what does Dark Link know about Ganondorf, and his powers, that he can use to his own benefit?

and is there the slight chance that he might actually miss navi? I know I sure as hell wouldn't have miss that annoying little piece of.... while playing.
 

The Eromancer

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actually speaking of Navi.... I was hoing to have a rather unusual moment with that damn fairy and Dark Link.

As for Dark Link using Link's many toys? Well, remember that he only has Link's memories up until just after the forrest temple and depending on what Link's done or aquired, thats all Dark Link would know too. So the Big Goron Hammer and Big Goron sword for instance will be a little surprise for out intrepid anti-hero.

However you did bring up a good point, I knew the chapter was missing something and even pulling out Link's OLD toys would help. Boomarangs actually are real weapons and not just children's toys after all.

As for what he gets from Gannon? hehe, well now, that.... is a secret! [:p sorry couldn't help myself]

But if your really wanna know, just go over what you know about Gannon in general and you might get an idea.
 

Skelethin

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#6
Does this mean that Dark Link is going to split Navi in half for being so damn annoying?

Cuz that would be funny as hell.
 
#8
Second lucky necro in a while. This is a decent piece to this point, though it does have a danger of Emo and/or Mary Sueness. I would look forward to reading more.
 
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