keikogi vs kimono/hakama
This was probably stated, or well known; but might as well put it out there...
As we all know, the classic Kimono is more the historical formal wear for ladies and gents of traditional families. We've probably seen it more when characters attend an event of cultural/social/political importance (in some cases, where the ladies just plain look good in one when going to a festival/matsuri or just plain enjoy it more than western clothes).
The fact that most readers/fanfic writers decide to go with the "looks like a Miko Hakama"... is because in essence it does look like Miko wear. But as pointed out by alansg, It is factually wrong.
While using the word "Keikogi" is proper, I think is a bit of going into splitting hairs when it comes to how correct the writer wants to be. While the most correct wording may be the Keikogi (or in the case of the Aoyamas, a stylized Kendogi, as they practice kendo); the normal (mortal, lazy, not well informed) reader might not understand the difference unless they are willing to do some tangential learning (aka: pop open a window and browse wikipedia).
Now, one reason why readers and writers opt to go with the "she's wearing Miko clothes" option... the manga (and anime) also has Motoko pulling Miko duties on one New Year's Eve and us non japanese readers/fans would normally not see the difference between her usual clothes, and that can be easily attributed to cultural differences and/or inexperience with either sets of clothes.
I had the chance to visit japan about a decade ago and saw real Mikos in their (bright orange) hakamas, the male priests/attendants wore light blue... I couldn't tell the difference; but then again, I've never practiced Kendo or seen kendokas going at it in real life, only in anime/manga.
I'll leave chapter nitpicks on the google doc.
I also lean toward the idea of changing the (Frag) Grenade into a Flash-Bang... a LOT less messy, and they tend to be good enough to incapacitate most people. Although where the HELL would Gos get one of those outside of the Black Market or stolen off military.
I find Tsuruko's worries about Keitaro's lack of reaction toward the fairer sex cute and funny. She wasn't there when he was judging Motoko's outfits, although the fiancÚ to be was and noticed his responses/reactions (which seem to have been filed for future review, reflection and possible retort!).