[RWBY/GW2] The Noble Roses Chapter 2

Antimatter

Well-Known Member
#1
The Noble Roses: Chapter two can be found Right here

Chapter two takes the cast though initiation, and their first fights. Chapter weighs in at 10,100 or so words.

Chapter three will take us into explanation mode, as well as their first days at school.

edit: switched out for the FFN version.
 

AoMythology

Apparently a report-er
#2

BF110C4

Well-Known Member
#4
Ok, finally read it. First thing first, I don't know anything about Guild Wars 2 so I can only assume that the mechanics are exactly the same in the fic that in the game, but since you did prepare the next chapter for the teams to do an extensive Q&A session to Ruby and Yang I see no problem with my current ignorance since its getting solved very soon.

In fact the only question that came to my mind is where did Yang and Ruby got words like 'farming'? I ask this because there are three ways they could come with a gamer's vocabulary. First by reading from their powers some sort of FAQ that included meta concepts, and depending on how much access the rest of the guild they can all learn with a little bit of study, the second option is for them to make their own vocabulary which they will have to teach the rest and they can do so directly through exposition or off-screen to avoid saturating the reader with knowledge.

The third and more fun option is that there is a gaming community in Remnant and in the middle of exploring and cataloging their powers Yang and Ruby borrowed terms from them. This would be funny because it allows people like Weiss, Jaune and maybe Nora to know the nomeclature while Pyrrha, Ren and Blake are left confused and have to be taugh the lingo, probably after some misunderstandings.
 

Antimatter

Well-Known Member
#5
Videogames exist in canon as they are shown playing some fighting games, so I wager RPG's exist as well, so they are just using familiar lingo.

Weiss actually strikes me as very unfamiliar with games, as she didn't even understand the card game they all played in canon. Others may be familiar with games, but not RPGs in particular. So yeah, I'd expect some, what do you mean by that going on at first. I'll be sure to add a bit to the Q&A that hits on that. And a joke about it to chapter 2.

As for the Q&A, I actually struggled with how to present it in a very Ruby and Yang way. Ended up rewriting it from scratch after getting an idea from my three year old though. The big thing is, while it looks like GW2 the game, it functions more like Guildwars in lore, that is, you see/read about people doing stuff you can't actually do in game. This will become more important as time goes on.

I did map each main cast member to a profession (class) as well as figure out what skills each uses, which was surprisingly easy. I want to avoid a naruto though, and not have people call them out during attacks, so I try to just describe what they do, though they can be referenced by name later, like Ruby did with a Nightfall, a type of greatsword attack.
 

Antimatter

Well-Known Member
#7
Should note that if anyone actually has a question you really want to see, let me know, else i'll try to give what i can, in universe. Some things are going to be unknown to the cast though.
 
Top