Ranma ½ Saotome Ranma no Yabou

Fellgrave

Well-Known Member
#1
Because it's 1:37 in morning and I hate you all. Here.

Ranma sighed as he noticed the approaching storm clouds on the horizon, their dark grey underbellies portending rain. He could only hope that he reached wherever it was the blonde girl was leading him to before the storm arrived. If he had to reveal his curse, he wanted to do it with as much control of the situation as possible. It was miracle that he hadn't changed already, having been marching alongside the army of mostly Ashigaru soldiers for nearly a day after the failure to rescue Oda Genba from Imagawa Yoshimoto's advancing army.
Just as in his history books, just the day after arriving in Owari, Yoshimoto had already brought down two of the five forts that protected the province: the fort at Mt. Marune, commanded bu Sakuma Daigaku Morishige, and the fort at Mt. Washizu, commanded by Oda Genba. Both forts fell to the numerically superior forces of the three provinces under Yoshimoto's control, a twnty-five-thousand strong army composed of men from Suruga, Totomi, and Mikawa, the latter the location of the the Imagawa clan's original holdings.
By the morning of the nineteenth day of the fifth month of 1560, the two forts had fallen to the Imagawa, both commanders slain in their defense, but not before they got out a message. It was on the eighteenth that the head of the Oda clan, pondering the state of affairs in the province from the main fort of Kiyosu Castle, received the first news of the arrival of Yoshimoto's forces. There had been no sign that Yoshimoto would do anything other than pass through on his way to Kyoto, but first appearances could be deceiving. Daybreak signalled the arrival of messengers from both forts, alerting their master to
It had made no difference in the end, hardly surprising considering the sheer weight of numbers on the Imagawa side, but nevertheless the battle hadn't been a total loss. If the Oda hadn't been there when they were, then Ranma would have most likely wound up appearing in the midst of a hostile force in enemy territory, in a land where ninjas where relatively common and often found sabotaging food supplies or assassinating officers. No, he was glad for the differences between the past history from his time, compared to the present he currently found himself trapped in.
As far as he could tell, there had been no talk of alliance between the Oda and Dosan clan of Mino, which meant that Yoshitatsu Dosan had not yet begun to give sign that he was eventually going to betray his father and
The long march was certainly mind-numbingly dull, for a martial artist whose every waking hour was filled with some form of chaos, and Ranma was just about to call it and head off on his own when he saw one of officers from the battle approaching on horseback. As the brown-haired young woman drew closer, Ranma couldn't help but stare as he noticed that even beneath what had to be a solid steel breastplate, as to bear anything else into battle was asking to be killed, he could clearly see how the motion of the horse sent certain parts of her anatomy to movement, implausible and impossible as that should have been.
He tore his eyes away just in time for her to notice him, as his luck with the sometimes opposite gender for once seemed to work his way, as she seemed not to have seen his staring. With nothing else better to do, he couldn't train properly while on the move, he stepped towards her and raised his hand in greeting, oblivious to the flinches and disbelieving looks he received from some of the nearby soldiers.
"Hey, would you mind telling me how long it is until we're wherever we're going?" If merely gesturing towards one of the officers had been enough to draw flinches, then it was no surprise that his shouted words caused the eyes of those around him to widen as they quickly stepped back from the obviously suicidal man. The officer herself looked stunned for a moment, and Ranma idly wondered just which officer she would have been in his world, before she regained control of herself, though it was only for the most part, as a vein above her had begun to pulse quite visibly.
"H-how dare you address your superior with such an uncouth tongue you, you commoner! I should strike you down for such impertinence!" Ranma's eyes grew wide as he flipped backwards to avoid having his head hit by the haft of the spear that had suddenly materialized in the officer's hands. The brown haired woman glared at him and he was forced to scramble in order to dodge her follow up strike as she dismounted her horse in a leaping strike that sent up a cloud of dust.
"Hey watch it ya dang tomboy!" The ashigaru soldiers watched with undisguised shock and awe as the strange man their leader had picked up during the last battle wove himself around a near endless flurry of blows from one of the greatest warriors in the Oda ranks. Blows that would split a man in twain where dogded by the closest of margins, strikes that would shatter armor avoided with an impossible agility.
"What is going on here?"
 

The Ero-Sennin

The Eyes of Heaven
Staff member
#2
Let's play a painful game!

What is this story about?
 

Fellgrave

Well-Known Member
#3
Well, it's a crossover between Ranma and an anime/light novel series called Oda Nobuna no Yabou. The premise of the series is that an ordinary high-schooler gets dropped headfirst into a skirmish between the forces of the Oda and Imagawa clans. He gets saved by the man who have gone on to become Toyotomi Hideyoshi, except when he saved the teens life he gets shot through the chest.

The teen, distracted by the dead guy and the consequences to the future, gets his ass saved by the leader of the Oda forces:

The blonde, obviously FEMALE, Oda Nobuna.

So I replaced the average teen with Ranma.

...shenanigans ensue.
 

PCHeintz72

The Sentient Fanfic Search Engine mk II
#4
I had to go read chapter 1, as I had not read this one before...

Not bad for an opening. And hardly the only story I've seen with changed genders of historical figures... just look at FSN, or Koihime Muso.

But I really cannot judge more until there is more to it than that first chapter and this.

I am reminded by a couple of the stories KLSynth was putting out some time back with Ranma in the ZNT (or FOZ if you prefer) universe. Or a less zany version of 'Realms' by Jeffrey Vasquez
 

Lanceavalon

Well-Known Member
#5
I give this FIVE stars, decently in character, the idea of Ranma the history buff isn't hard to swallow, a place where his skill isn't a side show, and being able to fight legends. Putting Ranma in the place of a talentless pervert who is carried through the story by plot shields, makes this FAR more interesting then the original.
 

The Ero-Sennin

The Eyes of Heaven
Staff member
#6
Man if you're going to do all that, then why not just tweak the useless pervert character into something badass on his own? Shit ain't difficult.

I mean, lemme ask some pertinent questions here. Does Ranma miss his home time? Does he even want to go back? What's his relationship with Akane?

Is he here against his will, or is him being here a much needed respite from all the people who are so mean and nasty to him for no reason?
 

Fellgrave

Well-Known Member
#7
The Ero-Sennin said:
Man if you're going to do all that, then why not just tweak the useless pervert character into something badass on his own? Shit ain't difficult.

I mean, lemme ask some pertinent questions here. Does Ranma miss his home time? Does he even want to go back? What's his relationship with Akane?

Is he here against his will, or is him being here a much needed respite from all the people who are so mean and nasty to him for no reason?
Hmm.

#1: because I want to have some humourous curse shenanigans as well as Ranma's bad luck with getting into 'perverted' situations without intending them.

#2: Well, so far there hasn't been enough time for him to stop and think about what has happened yet. He just got out of a big time battle and he hasn't been able to rest yet. Yes, he does miss home, yes, he does want to go back (at the moment) and no spoilers on relationships.

#3: He was brought back in time without his consent. None of the others in Nerima were involved with his time-traveling. So no, it's not the cliche 'escape from Nerima' bit.
 

PCHeintz72

The Sentient Fanfic Search Engine mk II
#8
Man if you're going to do all that, then why not just tweak the useless pervert character into something badass on his own? Shit ain't difficult.
That would defeat the effort of making it a crossover story. Consider this a simple logic issue, with one tiny change what can occur, in this case, merely change the one summoned or transported.

#3: He was brought back in time without his consent. None of the others in Nerima were involved with his time-traveling. So no, it's not the cliche 'escape from Nerima' bit.
My only question in regards to this:

Do we know whom did the summoning or causing the portal to appear? Was this accidental like in Zero No Tsukaima where it was a summoning gone bad, or deliberate with intent to lie and manipulate a fighter into doing their bidding like in Dog Days (rotten no good princess should be drawn and quattered, heard got away scott free)?

I ask because I'm curious if then someone behind the scenes is manipulating the whole thing. If so, Ranma will have a thing or two to *say* to the one(s) whom did it. And if it is so and Ranma does not, there had better be a very good explanation why not as I dislike manipulators getting away with crap since we see it all the time in anime.



On a different note, will it ever be revealed if this is a parallel universe, or his true past. It makes a big difference as there is the simple fact Ranma remembers being taught the guy did not die...
 

Fellgrave

Well-Known Member
#9
At the moment, I don't the think the how of it has been revealed yet in the series. I'm waiting to for translation on the light novels before I continue any further.

As for the parallel universe... *shrugs* Not sure yet. Really, it could go either way. I'm still debating on whether or not I'll have Ranma stay in that time period or not. Though, I suppose I could do two possible endings, one where it was a parallel world and he returned to Nerima a changed man, and one where he changed history and resulted in a changed world. Hmm... something to contemplate.

Most of the events will happen along the same lines, since Ranma will be trying to keep things from going to hell in a handbasket, but he is going to try and improve the end result as well. He knows the same as the other guy just how Nobunaga's story ends, and with how he is around girls...
 
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