Naruto Secret of Slime

#1
Another chapter in my obsession of coming up with ideas that cross awesome American movies and cartoons with Naruto; this time it's Ghostbusters. Here's the basic premise:

In New York City, sometime in the 1990s, the Ghostbuster's firehouse got sucked into a massive dimensional rift. How it happened I leave up to the writer's imagination: Peter pushes the wrong button on Egon's latest experiment, demon attack, etc. Needless to say it happens, and the Ghostbusters are left looking at an empty hole in the street.

"Our insurance covers this, right?"

Elsewhere/when, the firehouse reappears in another universe, in the area that will become the Elemental Countries a century or two before the start of the Naruto story. Without a power source, the containment system goes critical and every ghost in it escapes, releasing a massive amount of psycho-kinetic energy that saturates the entire continent with spiritual fall out. Some people die from the exposure, most are unaffected, but a significant amount of the population have their spiritual energies boosted in strength by a massive amount. A few decades later and the Age of Ninjas begins after enough people learn how to manipulate their enhanced life forces as chakra.

Now, most of the ghosts, demons, goblins, etc. that escaped from the containment unit were either ripped apart by the sheer amount of energy they were exposed to or scattered far across the planet from where they came. But, a number of the entities began devouring other ghosts, absorbing their strength and becoming incredibly powerful. The strongest of these demons became the Bijuu, and roamed the land as forces of nature.

Finally, we come to a few years before the start of Naruto. A six-year old Uzumaki Naruto is wandering around a training field, watching a six-year old Haruno Sakura, who is crying her eyes out. A few moments before Yamanaka Ino would have found her, the ground underneath her gives way and she falls into a very old, partially-buried building. Naruto jumps in after her, making sure she's okay, before the two fascinated children begin to explore the ruins. Through plot device or any other means the author might come up with, they learn about the Ghostbusters, understand the physics behind ghosts and the Ghostbuster's technology, and come closer, bit by bit, to finding out the origin of the Bijuu and ninja.

But there's a few more pressing matters before they uncover that last secret. After the Kyuubi, the strongest Bijuu, was sealed into Naruto, he began leaking psychokinetic energy into the surrounding area, which either began to make ghosts, minor kami, demons and various other spirits strong enough to take form, or attracted said entities to Konoha. The Village Hidden in the Leaves, and indeed the Elemental Countries as a whole, are experiencing a rise in paranormal activity. While ninjas may be able to manipulate psychokinetic energy, ghosts can't be destroyed nor heavily affected by the elements, and thus most jutsu are relatively useless. Combat styles like the Gentle Fist might scare them off, but only that.

From there, the story can take many different directions. Naruto and Sakura might still become ninjas, but Naruto (needing more income as he's still living alone) and Sakura (possibly to become independent from her parents, who probably wouldn't approve of her friendship with Naruto, or possibly her ninja lifestyle) could start Ghostbusting on the side to get more money and do additional good. Maybe Ghostbusting and ninja-ing become one and the same. There are a lot of ways this story could go in my opinion.

So, thoughts?
 
#3
What? Hey, at least I didn't say "Who are you going to call?"

And why does everyone do this: :huh: for my threads?
 

elric

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#4
Andrew Joshua Talon said:
What? Hey, at least I didn't say "Who are you going to call?"

And why does everyone do this: :huh: for my threads?
:huh:
No idea.
:huh:






:p
 
#5
Oh c'mon, Naruto driving Ecto-1 through Konoha's streets and busting ghosts with a proton pack isn't appealing?

Sound could figure out how to summon ghosts, and Leaf would have only one hope:

The Ghostbusters.

Heck, with the hatred Konoha has for Naruto, if he and Sakura advertised outside it they could rake in a massive amount of dough in other nations and make Konoha look absolutely stupid.

"No thanks, we'll keep our ghosts and demons if only to keep that fox demon boy out of work!"
 

elric

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#6
Konoha would have a better chance than most due to the Jyuuken, but yeah. I can easily see the other nations offering them very lucrative terms to come join up with them.
Kumo: . . . and lastly, if you join up with us, we'll give you your very own catgirl. What do you say?
 
#7
LOL, nice indeed.

If Sakura and Naruto kept up their Ghostbusting on the side of ninja work, I can see them running out of their boring D-Ranks when called (who would be their secretary? Hmmm...) and heading off. And Sasuke. Oh man, how would he handle this?

Especially if the ghosts of his family came back and started haunting him...
 

elric

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#8
Andrew Joshua Talon said:
Especially if the ghosts of his family came back and started haunting him...
:blink:
Especially when his mom comes by to nag him about washing behind his ears. If he explains about how he has to train to kill Itachi, she gives him a lecture about getting along with his siblings. :snigger:
 
#9
Or she just starts stalking Naruto and giving Hinata tips on how to get some nookie.

Or, even better, she possesses Hinata and gets some Naruto nookie, ku ku ku...
 

zeebee1

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#10
There would of course be attempts to steal the proton packs. Even if they didn't know how to use them they'd keep them. And there would be at least one instance where the thieves crossed the streams. I hope they can make extras.
 
#11
zeebee1 said:
There would of course be attempts to steal the proton packs. Even if they didn't know how to use them they'd keep them. And there would be at least one instance where the thieves crossed the streams. I hope they can make extras.
Of course, but this IS Naruto we're talking about. He's not about to let his cool technology fall into the wrong hands. Neither would Sakura.

I'm astonished that no one has speculated on the character interactions between Sakura and Naruto, as they'd be big parts of the story as well. Naruto and Sakura, outcasts together. Like brother and sister. Whether or not Sakura would still have her crush on Sasuke, she'd probably treat Naruto better than in canon. Though she'd probably be Egon to his Peter Venkman, heh.

Sasuke would doubtlessly want his hands on a proton pack. A very powerful weapon for use against Itachi, unless you wrote him as wanting to beat Itachi as a ninja, and not as a Ghostbuster.

Heh, and the property damage Naruto and Sakura would doubtlessly cause while on busts...
 

zeebee1

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#12
As shinobi don't have much ectoplasm I doubt it would be too useful. I do believe that seals could be used to contain ghosts.
 
#13
zeebee1 said:
As shinobi don't have much ectoplasm I doubt it would be too useful. I do believe that seals could be used to contain ghosts.
Zeebee, they're unlicensed nuclear accelerators which fire positrons, highly-charged energy particles. Definitely not something you want to be hit by.

Actually, check this quote out from the Real Ghostbusters episode: "Lights! Camera! Haunting!"

Winston: Refresh my memory Egon. What happens if one of those beams [from a proton pack] hits us?
Egon: Our atoms all go on separate vacations!

Ouch.

And yes, seals could contain ghosts, but not as easily as traps can.
 

zeebee1

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#14
So Jiriaya would have side buisness. As they can't be everywhere at once he'd sell seals to hold ghosts in one place until Naruto and Sakura could arive.
 
#15
zeebee1 said:
So Jiriaya would have side buisness. As they can't be everywhere at once he'd sell seals to hold ghosts in one place until Naruto and Sakura could arive.
Well, Naruto and Sakura would probably hire more busters to keep up with demand. Or if Orochimaru begins summoning ghosts.

Any thoughts on who might join them? It's be kind of part time as they are all ninjas, and Sarutobi would be trying to keep other villages from seeing the proton pack technology as a major threat by restricting Naruto and Sakura to only using them on ghosts.

Which means, if Sasuke steals one and uses it on Itachi, well... He might cause another great ninja war.

Good job emo duck.
 

zeebee1

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#16
Hiring more people wouldn't matter if they run out of proton packs.
 

locke69

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#17
Seals sealed Kyuubi. Completely revamped traps and original traps barely sealed various lesser demons.

In my mind, I'm seeing seals as better traps.
 

elric

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#18
Nah, he'd just be marked as KOS for High Treason. If he had used it on someone who was still a member of a village. . .
 

zeebee1

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#19
So, that implies anything less than a biju could be sealed without any sacrifices.
 

TerraBull

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#20
So, upon reading this, the old firehouse was uncovered, along with Ecto-1 and the Containment Unit, which housed a lot of Ghosts.

I admit, when I saw the title, I had Two Thoughts, the thought of the movie, Ghostbusters II, and the river of slime beneath New York, and had the idea mix with the one for the Hokage Monument, cue the bit about all four faces lifting upwards, complete with Ecto Powered Stone Forms to Protect Konoha? Of course, that could happen later to include Tsunade. :lol:

The second thought was, Where was Slimer? Reading this, most of the ghosts were eaten by others, Slimer?
 

Typhonis

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#21
Actually I thought Slimer would be hanging out around Konoha. Little green ghost no one seems to be able to catch or stop. Some think he is just a genjutsu.
 

locke69

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#22
zeebee1 said:
So, that implies anything less than a biju could be sealed without any sacrifices.
Not quite. The really strong ghosts and demons had to be left alone or killed (crossing the streams). The Biju, who ate their fellow "ghosts" in this idea to gain their powers, that would mean that they have transcended beyond what the "god" was in the first movie. The containment system was vast, and many times HAD to be expanded and improved, so the numbers of "ghosts" to eat is massive. Roughly ten years of trapping ghosts with a small number of lesser demons and a handful of normal to How-The-Hells-Did-We-Capture-That level of demons.

Really, I see no problem with having to sacrifice life to seal those "god ghosts."

The only problem I have with this idea, is how did a combination of ghosts eaten make a nekotama.
 

zeebee1

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#23
It might be better if the biju didn't get there power by eating ghosts. Some might have gained more power while others might have been replaced. Shukaku could have been killed and replaced by the Stay Puft Marshmallow Man. That would definately alter Garra's skill set.
 

kingdark

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#25
I first thought that the original squad itself would join naruto.... In ghost form, imagine, that when they die, and stand for the gates of heaven, (the four of them die togther for some reason)

they stand for the gates of heaven, when a big old voice said: You four are responsible to get rid of many ghost spawns, but your technology has been transported to an alternate dimension, xx years ago, so I am sending you there, to train a new squad to keep the ghost population down

ZAP

(the nerd dude, can't remember the names): don't we get any choice in this?

silence...

I guess not....
 
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