Basically a "how'd you rewrite/do Avatar" thread.
Please follow format.
# ) The isssue you have The change you'd want to make
Why/How/What
Ex:
1) Iroh is a little too conveniently good. Even when he does bad things.Explain his motives for capturing the Avatar. Show him having subjugated someone somewhere, even fairly, but brutally
I love the character of Iroh but I feel its a bit of a cheat that he's never had to really change and was always a good guy. However it seems the show is hinting at that even if he always loved tea and was a good father he was also something of an implacable foe for a corrupt regime and didn't *care* about that until he lost something of his own. I would show at least one person subject to Iroh's campaign and him have to share what's changed him from supporting Seige of the North to helping the Avatar OR at least show how his plans run alongside but doesn't match up with the Avatar and how that may be a bad thing.
Uhm mainly just seems there are some issues and complaints in the avatar watchers thread and this is a fanfic forum and I'm interested in seeing how you guys view and would work with the series.
Please follow format.
# ) The isssue you have The change you'd want to make
Why/How/What
Ex:
1) Iroh is a little too conveniently good. Even when he does bad things.Explain his motives for capturing the Avatar. Show him having subjugated someone somewhere, even fairly, but brutally
I love the character of Iroh but I feel its a bit of a cheat that he's never had to really change and was always a good guy. However it seems the show is hinting at that even if he always loved tea and was a good father he was also something of an implacable foe for a corrupt regime and didn't *care* about that until he lost something of his own. I would show at least one person subject to Iroh's campaign and him have to share what's changed him from supporting Seige of the North to helping the Avatar OR at least show how his plans run alongside but doesn't match up with the Avatar and how that may be a bad thing.
Uhm mainly just seems there are some issues and complaints in the avatar watchers thread and this is a fanfic forum and I'm interested in seeing how you guys view and would work with the series.