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[WizardOne]

Some of those... I dunno... Somethings like that you just wanna say write your own damn fanfic.

Anyway... I'm still figuring this one out.

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Seeing this story updated brings me warm and fuzzy feelings comparable to that of when I read the endless positive comments people have to say about Keanu Reeves in the wake of SadKeanu.

tl;dr, Yaaaay Noriko. I knew you could do it. I love how honesty always her as seemingly non-sequitur comments.

SadKeanu?

Funny Internet meme where you photoshop keanu reaves into a picture in his usual sad, droop shouldered self.

http://knowyourmeme.com/memes/keanu-is-sad-sad-keanu

 

[Dartz_IRL]

It still doesn't help decipher the message....

 

[Anonguy]

1. Keanu Reeves' life sucks.
2. You updating made this person happy.
3. This person is cheering for Noriko.
4. This person fails English.
5. Translation attempt: "I love how honest her seemingly non-sequitur comments always are."

 

[Dartz_IRL]

Another weird one for the same fic. Someone's overdosed on *that wiki*

Oh wow, so this is clearly following the First law of Anime Genderbending then. Once a girl is created, they're stuck. Haha, poor Noriko. You're obviously subverting the Third one because Noriko does her best to hang onto her male self, but then play the Second one awfully straight because she's sort of doing that mind is a Plaything of the Body thing.

Are you going to justify these somehow?

Playing with the loss of identity from the original Noriko taking over. That's almost nightmare fuel.. to feel yourself slowly losing your own mind.. but being replaced by someone else as some form of split personality merge.

Haruhi comes across as a total asspull...what where you thinking with that?

Some of the shout outs are also a bit too blatant... Oceanic Airlines, come on. Noriko Takaya, and Yuki Nagato, come on. I suppose, the surname keeps the shows theme naming thing going.

 

[Andrew Joshua Talon]

I usually don't let negative reviews get to me... Too much... But it's a rare reviewer who leaves both a negative review and insults me over the PM:

Once I found out this was a Mary-sue fic I immediately said fuck it.

Subject: Mary-Sue

Wow, the fact that you insert yourself into your own fics just so you can have
you favorite female characters hit on you is pathetic, go find a girlfriend.

But even this wouldn't usually get my ire up... Until I saw his fanfiction.

His profile

Here's a gem from his latest fic, "Kami no Shinobi":

"Good evening Uzumaki-san. Allow me to introduce myself. My name is Namikaze Naruto, your son. I came from the future because I had nothing else to do and also because I could. Nice to meet you."

Even in a humor fic, this is pretty bad.

 

[Knyght]

It's a shame you can't kick people in the balls through the internet.

 

[Anonguy]

I usually don't let negative reviews get to me... Too much... But it's a rare reviewer who leaves both a negative review and insults me over the PM:

Once I found out this was a Mary-sue fic I immediately said fuck it.

Subject: Mary-Sue

Wow, the fact that you insert yourself into your own fics just so you can have
you favorite female characters hit on you is pathetic, go find a girlfriend.

But even this wouldn't usually get my ire up... Until I saw his fanfiction.

His profile

Here's a gem from his latest fic, "Kami no Shinobi":

"Good evening Uzumaki-san. Allow me to introduce myself. My name is Namikaze Naruto, your son. I came from the future because I had nothing else to do and also because I could. Nice to meet you."

Even in a humor fic, this is pretty bad.

What story was that for?

And DoomMarine? Seriously? And he's pulling the get a girlfriend card?

What a dumbass.

 

[Andrew Joshua Talon]

I usually don't let negative reviews get to me... Too much... But it's a rare reviewer who leaves both a negative review and insults me over the PM:

Once I found out this was a Mary-sue fic I immediately said fuck it.

Subject: Mary-Sue

Wow, the fact that you insert yourself into your own fics just so you can have
you favorite female characters hit on you is pathetic, go find a girlfriend.

But even this wouldn't usually get my ire up... Until I saw his fanfiction.

His profile

Here's a gem from his latest fic, "Kami no Shinobi":

"Good evening Uzumaki-san. Allow me to introduce myself. My name is Namikaze Naruto, your son. I came from the future because I had nothing else to do and also because I could. Nice to meet you."

Even in a humor fic, this is pretty bad.

What story was that for?

And DoomMarine? Seriously? And he's pulling the get a girlfriend card?

What a dumbass.

This fic.

I couldn't get past the first chapter.

 

[Anonguy]

I was talking about what story of yours he left the review for. <_<

 

[Knyght]

The Most Heinous of Crimes

 

[A_T_Sigma]

What I don't understand is...

Why are people STILL reviewing Every Woman Loves a Man that Will Listen??? :huh:

Was I not clear in my author's profile page? (if any of these people did take a look at it in the first place >_> )

Yea....I know I said I had the drive and blah blah blah to continue it...but that was....a year and two months now?

I would love to finish it, hell I actually would like to find the interest and drive to redo it over but I just can't do it.

As a matter of fact my complete loss of interest in anything Naruto period has made me just say to hell with anything I started remotely in that fandom.

And then when I look back at what I did then compared to now...I don't think it's all that fantastic. (yet ironically enough it's the story that still holds the most reviews by 500 compared to everything else I started but never finished)

Plus the whole naruto harem!fic stories have sort of become cliche and bland.

Also I know to just leave it alone as it is because I'll half ass it and ruin what I started.

But srsly, nothing is going to ever make me come back to that story again.

I'm flattered but no

Unless Kishimoto does something very awesome and amazing (which i doubt at this point) to make me want to go back and read naruto again. Only then maybe.


other than that, I've still am getting reviews like this (both from the same story) :

hello
2010-10-21 . chapter 2
the f*** update already man o and fyi yes this is a good story

and this

zerox144
2010-10-25 . chapter 2
ARGH! MOAR NAO! Why isn't there chapter 3 yet! JESUS

I'm sorry if i'm being rude but there are people out there fapping to every letter.

Excluding a couple grammar errors it is well written and a type of story i've been waiting for a long time.

---

Haven't come across anything truly constructive or down right insulting since that one time years ago that I will not bring up.

so I must be doing something right,

right? if it's making err people fap :snigger: (even though I haven't written anything really sexual yet)

 

[bissek]

Review for White Devil of the Moon, Chapter 7:

So Precia FINALLY managed to succeed in reviving Alicia.? I wonder how the
TSAB would take it.

I will also note that I actually understand why Nanoha's group would consider
the cause of the war between the Moon Kingdom and the Dark Kingdom to be quite
silly.? I mean, this was a war that started over some royals' love lives and
ended in the literally-overnight Mutually Assured Destruction of two major
civilizations (one of whom spanned at least an entire solar system).? Looking
at it from one viewpoint, it could read kind of like a fantasy version of
Stanley Kubrick's Cold War black comedy classic "Dr. Strangelove".

...Dang it, now I'm having mental images that include but aren't limited to
such things as Queen Serenity declaring that there will be no fighting in the
War Room, one of the Senshi (probably someone like Sailor Mars or something)
riding a nuclear bomb to her doom, and one of the Generals (maybe one of the
canonically more serious types, for epic lulz) declaring that he'll no longer
allow Moon Kingdom infiltration, Moon Kingdom indoctrination, Moon Kingdom
subversion, and the extraterrestial Moon Kingdom conspiracy to sap and
impurify the Dark Kingdom's precious bodily fluids.

Seriously, somebody NEEDS to write a fic like that! I'd certainly read it, at
least if the quality's good enough!

Anyone up to writing Dr Strangemoon?

 

[A Curious Stranger]

So I have this reviewer named Kakashifangirlnumber1000 (what, you can't be fan #1?) who gave me this review.

I loved it.Please update soon again.

Bad, but nothing unique right?

Turns out it's just a generic copy-paste response that she uses as a catch-all when the same exact review, down to the lack of space between it. and please don't show up.

 

[goldenarms]

Most of my reviews are pretty good.

Some kind of scare me...

<a href='http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6677172/1/Zero_Interface' target='_blank' rel='nofollow'>Zero Interface</a>

scott pike
2011-01-30 . chapter 1
Man, when Ranma realizes he's been put into magical slavery he's is going to be pissed. If I were Mr. Colbert I'd be watching my back because sooner or later this situation is going to make Ranma go against his instincts and get very deadly violent. If I were Ranma and I understood this this is what I would do"

Ranma, "So I'm basically a slave as long as we BOTH live? and its because of that bald bastard?", he yelled. The unimportant mage nodded and Ranma used all his sneaking skills and martial arts grace and strength to move behind Colbert, in less then a second placed his hands below and to the side of his head and snapped his neck. Killing him instantly. Then he quickly grabbed the mage's wand and threw it so hard past him that it in bedded itself in Louise's head shutting up the Tsundere bitch instantly. Then Ranma took Siesta and became a soldier of fortune for other countries and eventually went to the elves for a cure for his curse.

End Scene

I'm just saying Ranmas situation went from bad to very much worse, from Akane bitchy and attractive to Louise very bitch, very tsudere and not nearly so attractive unless your into kids. Plus since this is Ranma from the early on in the manga he dosen't have any of the special moves that make him more

impressive later in the series. Are you going to make a way for him to learn martial arts moves in this world that will make up for what he didn't learn in his world yet

Yeah, snapping Colbert's neck like a hyperpsychotic Marine is, um...

And the rest...

One thing that kind of annoys me from the reviews is that a small number of people seem to think/act like Ranma wasn't shit until he got all those Amazon techniques and MT (and, well, Umisenken, too).

:huh:

I wouldn't say he was a 90 pound nerd that just learned how to throw a punch...

 

[PCHeintz72]

Ranma... pre energy attacks, saotome sealed techniques, and amazon training is not near as powerful, that is simple fact... however, to say he was weak or not someone to take serious would be a grave mistake... Cologne was reasonably impressed with him from the start, even if he could not beat her. Ryoga's umbrella, which gave Akane trouble despite her own strength gave Ranma no issues. During the ice skating match Ranma was able to tread water with Ryoga standing on her head and holding two massive blocks of ice, quite the feat.

 

[Nanya]

Ranma... pre energy attacks, saotome sealed techniques, and amazon training is not near as powerful, that is simple fact... however, to say he was weak or not someone to take serious would be a grave mistake... Cologne was reasonably impressed with him from the start, even if he could not beat her. Ryoga's umbrella, which gave Akane trouble despite her own strength gave Ranma no issues. During the ice skating match Ranma was able to tread water with Ryoga standing on her head and holding two massive blocks of ice, quite the feat.

Not to mention the 500 punches in like 5 seconds that he did, PRE Amaguriken training.

Or the kicks he landed on Kuno in the first moments of the manga...

 

[PCHeintz72]

Ranma...? pre energy attacks, saotome sealed techniques, and amazon training is not near as powerful, that is simple fact...? however, to say he was weak or not someone to take serious would be a grave mistake...? Cologne was reasonably impressed with him from the start, even if he could not beat her.? Ryoga's umbrella, which gave Akane trouble despite her own strength gave Ranma no issues.? During the ice skating match Ranma was able to tread water with Ryoga standing on her head and holding two massive blocks of ice, quite the feat.

Not to mention the 500 punches in like 5 seconds that he did, PRE Amaguriken training.

Or the kicks he landed on Kuno in the first moments of the manga...

Welll... I was not trying for a comprehesive list... merely the immediate highlights to come to mind.

 

[goldenarms]

Reading some of my latest reviews on Zero Interface. This one made me lol.

FlashSnap
2011-02-05 . chapter 3
Woots. Really good.

Needs Lesbians, lesbians are like bacon, they go well with everything

Boy, is he going to nut when he reads chapter 5. :lol:

 

[PCHeintz72]

Reading some of my latest reviews on Zero Interface. This one made me lol.

FlashSnap
2011-02-05 . chapter 3
Woots. Really good.

Needs Lesbians, lesbians are like bacon, they go well with everything

Boy, is he going to nut when he reads chapter 5. :lol:

...

Ok...

I would argue that person is not really reading the correct material for their fix, but I guess that falls under 'different strokes for different folks' thinking (pun intended).

 

[Nanya]

Reading some of my latest reviews on Zero Interface. This one made me lol.

FlashSnap
2011-02-05 . chapter 3
Woots. Really good.

Needs Lesbians, lesbians are like bacon, they go well with everything

Boy, is he going to nut when he reads chapter 5. :lol:

*Shudders*

Bacon. :sick: :sick2: :sick: :sick2: :sick3:

 

[Shiakou]

Reading some of my latest reviews on Zero Interface. This one made me lol.

FlashSnap
2011-02-05 . chapter 3
Woots. Really good.

Needs Lesbians, lesbians are like bacon, they go well with everything

Boy, is he going to nut when he reads chapter 5. :lol:

*Shudders*

Bacon. :sick: :sick2: :sick: :sick2: :sick3:

. . . Lesbians are like Bacon? That's an insult to both!

 

[Nanya]

Reading some of my latest reviews on Zero Interface. This one made me lol.

FlashSnap
2011-02-05 . chapter 3
Woots. Really good.

Needs Lesbians, lesbians are like bacon, they go well with everything

Boy, is he going to nut when he reads chapter 5. :lol:

*Shudders*

Bacon. :sick: :sick2: :sick: :sick2: :sick3:

. . . Lesbians are like Bacon? That's an insult to both!

I don't like bacon. *Shudders*

 

[Hashasheen]

tedlay
2010-04-16 . chapter 5
awesome

Trinity Fenton-Phantom
2010-02-12 . chapter 5
great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.

mydog888
2010-01-18 . chapter 5
I loved it! keep updating

i liked how you made Naruto into a Sage, not just some Badass Jonin.

sniper757
2010-01-03 . chapter 5
oh. cant wait to see how this plays out.

please update soon

nobother
2009-12-28 . chapter 5
fun story

 

[goldenarms]

RyumaOmega
2011-02-11 . chapter 4
Great chapter! It was interesting how Ranma made Louise possibly think that she might have an affinity with 'the Void' by explaining to her that if she couldn't use the other four elements of magic, then maybe Void is the element she is attuned to. Along with Kirche, maybe Louise will discover earlier on that she is a Void mage and will work to master the spells for the Void. I also enjoyed how you inserted 'The Book of Five Rings', a book and philosophy by a famous swordsman (Miyamoto I think) from the real world into a fanfiction to try to help Louise's situation with Void. I can't wait to see what happens next in the next chapter! I also hope that Ranma will get a harem pairing with Louise, Kirche, Tabitha, Irukukwu, Siesta, Henrietta, Tiffania, and Jessica. I mean right now it looks like Louise AND Kirche are on their way to thinking of sharing Ranma between them. So why not add other girls who will also start to truly love Ranma as the story progresses. However, make sure that the development of these relationships are believable and not just make it another 'oh I love you', embrace, kiss, lets be together from now on type of relationship. Allow Ranma and the girls to get to know each other and start to develop feelings for each other that will at first lead to friendship, then a crush, until finally they realize that they love each other. Of course, this is your fanfiction and any pairings you come up with is up to you. I just wanted to give you my input. I hope you will at least take my suggestions into consideration. Keep up the great work and update this fanfic as soon as you can

Not to make fun of the guy, since I love all my fans and grateful for their support, but HOLYSHIT -- a harem for all those girls, including Irukuku (which took me a moment to remember) and make it believable?

:blink:

Not to say I couldn't but that's a whole nother story in and of itself.

 

[PCHeintz72]

Hmmm... ditch Jessica and the dragon, add Agnes... that would about do it for me...


However... I seriously doubt such a setup would work, but than, when has that ever stopped harem writers... look at Ranma and NGE and Love Hina and Tenchi.