Ranma ½ Something I'm Thinking of Putting up on Anime Addventure

#1
The title, despite it's poor quality, pretty much explains things, and I really which I could come up with a better one.

This is the thread I'm looking at adding to, any advice on adding to Anime Addvanture would be appreciated. Note that I'm writing to workable decision points, despite how short this makes the episodes, I've got 2 and a half below, the third is giving me a bit of trouble. The Senshi option in the last episode linked is the one I'll be working off, and I'll be including options below, the bolded ones are how I'll be continuing

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Cologne smiled. “Those Sailor Senshi had shown up, claiming a strange energy was around, but you were able to ... win them over.”

“Ranma, you pervert, how could you.” Bellowed Akane.

“What?” Cried Ranma.

“Saotome, one of the Senshi is a little girl, I think that's what Akane's upset about, and I can't blame her.” Answered Nabiki.

“Don't worry, son-in-law, you didn't have sex with the little girl. In fact you only had sex with 4 of them. When the ten of them showed up and where effected by your aroma, two of them dragged off that Tuxedo Mask fellow who's often with them while removing his clothes, causing the little one you where worried about to curl up and mutter something about 'not being the right time to visit'. Two of them dragged each other off somewhere, if we look around we might find them. The oldest looking one, who I suspect is somehow is older then me, disappeared into a portal. Which leaves you with four of them.” Replied Cologne

“Airen have hard time tearing outfit off her. Shampoo want fuku maker's name Good clothes hard to find.” Added Shampoo.

“So, where there any other girls?” Ranma cautiously asked.

* “No, no more girls, now it's time to start arranging things for the wedding.” Answered Cologne.

* “Yes, and their names where …” Answered Cologne.

* “No, but there are a few things all of you need to know.” Answered Cologne.

* Something Else

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“No, no more girls, now it's time to start arranging things for the wedding.” Answered Cologne.

“Wedding? What wedding?” Asked all those present and concious.

“All you don't think that this would be without consequences do you?” Stated Cologne. “Now the son-in-law has to marry...”

* “Shampoo, of course.”

*”Kasumi.”

* Other girl option 1

* Other girl option 2

* Something else

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“Now the son-in-law has to marry Kasumi.” Causing everyone to blink as that was not what they had expected.

“Great-grandmother, Airen should marry Shampoo, not too-too nice girl” Proclaimed Shampoo.

“What's your angle, old ghoul?” Inquired Ranma.

“Who else do you think has a chance at controlling this harem you've accumulated? Which is why you aren't marrying him, great-granddaughter, you want one of your rivals back in the village to take advantage of the situation. But I think we should continue this discussion after everyone has woken up and is ready to talk.” Answered Cologne

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“So that's the basics of the situation, but once I've got some information on the 'Long-term consequences' of using the potion that my great-granddaughter used I'll need to talk to all of you,” Explained Cologne, before turning to stare the Senshi present. “And in your case, your friends as well.”

“That's all very interesting, but stud-boy here can't be fully human, Fubuki is a Shikima and I'm a half blood, no human, even with a life time of training in the martial arts and basically OD'ing on a virility potion would be able to out last one of us, let alone both.” Said Miko, seemingly unconcerned about her naked state.

“You haven't encountered Ranma before, little things like the laws of physics don't tend to bother him.” Countered Nabiki.

“No, she has a point, while it is possible that the son-in-law's natural ability was the cause of his endurance, the possibility of him having some sort of non-human heritage can not and should not be ruled out, but I doubt that is something as gentle as Shikima hertiage.”
 

PCHeintz72

The Sentient Fanfic Search Engine mk II
#2
Mixing Ranma, La Blue Girl, and Sailor Moon?

Heh.. Sailor Senshi fighting the monsters in La Blue Girl...
 
#3
Well Ranma and Sailor Moon characters don't need to get sexually warmed up to fight Shikima, and I doubt that they'll want to, so they'll just sort of nuke them the moment they see them. If I write more of this I'll likely focus on Ranma's heritage.
 

KaiserHaller

Well-Known Member
#4
Nice continuation of that tread. Who are the senshi with Ranma?

Be careful with your gramar because they wil delete your post if isn't well written.
 
#5
You should be able to figure that out. Moon and Mars dragged off Tuxedo Mask, Cibi-Moon curled up into a ball, Neptune and Uranus are only interested in each other and Pluto wasn't affected, at least at first, and got out of there before she could be. So that leaves Mercury, Venus, Jupiter and Saturn.

As for my grammar is there anything you can see wrong with it? It's normally pretty good
 
#7
From the OP it's hidden because I like things too look nice: http://addventure.bast-enterprises.de/chain.php?episode=180101&pre=10
 
#8
OK, I've finally finished the three episodes I wanted to right, so here they, same format as before, they'll be going up on Anime Addventure in a week with any corrections people want to offer.

Cologne smiled. “Those Sailor Senshi had shown up, claiming a strange energy was around, but you were able to ... win them over.”

“Ranma, you pervert, how could you.” Bellowed Akane.

“What?” Cried Ranma.

“Saotome, one of the Senshi is a little girl, I think that's what Akane's upset about, and I can't blame her.” Answered Nabiki.

“Don't worry, son-in-law, you didn't have sex with the little girl. In fact you only had sex with 4 of them. When the ten of them showed up and where effected by your aroma, two of them dragged off that Tuxedo Mask fellow who's often with them while removing his clothes, causing the little one you where worried about to curl up and mutter something about 'not being the right time to visit'. Two of them dragged each other off somewhere, if we look around we might find them. The oldest looking one, who I suspect is somehow is older then me, disappeared into a portal. Which leaves you with four of them.” Replied Cologne

“Airen have hard time tearing outfit off her. Shampoo want fuku maker's name Good clothes hard to find.” Added Shampoo.

“So, where there any other girls?” Ranma cautiously asked.

* “No, no more girls, now it's time to start arranging things for the wedding.” Answered Cologne.

* “Yes, and their names where …” Answered Cologne.

* “No, but there are a few things all of you need to know.” Answered Cologne.

* Something Else

[hr]
[hr]

“No, no more girls, now it's time to start arranging things for the wedding.” Answered Cologne.

“Wedding? What wedding?” Asked all those present and conscious.

“All you don't think that this would be without consequences do you?” Stated Cologne. “Now the son-in-law has to marry...”

* “Shampoo, of course.”

*”Kasumi.”

* Other girl option 1

* Other girl option 2

* Something else

[hr]
[hr]

“Now the son-in-law has to marry Kasumi.” Causing everyone to blink as that was not what they had expected.

“Great-grandmother, Airen should marry Shampoo, not too-too nice girl” Proclaimed Shampoo.

“What's your angle, old ghoul?” Inquired Ranma.

“Who else do you think has a chance at controlling this harem you've accumulated? Which is why you aren't marrying him, great-granddaughter, you want one of your rivals back in the village to take advantage of the situation. But I think we should continue this discussion after everyone has woken up and is ready to talk.” Answered Cologne

[hr]

“So that's the basics of the situation, but once I've got some information on the 'Long-term consequences' of using the potion that my great-granddaughter used I'll need to talk to all of you,” Explained Cologne, before turning to stare the Senshi present. “And in your case, your friends as well.”

“That's all very interesting, but stud-boy here can't be fully human, Fubuki is a Shikima and I'm a half blood, no human, even with a life time of training in the martial arts and basically OD'ing on a virility potion would be able to out last one of us, let alone both.” Said Miko, seemingly unconcerned about her naked state.

“You haven't encountered Ranma before, little things like the laws of physics don't tend to bother him.” Countered Nabiki.

“No, she has a point, while it is possible that the son-in-law's natural ability was the cause of his endurance, the possibility of him having some sort of non-human heritage can not and should not be ruled out, but I doubt that is something as gentle as Shikima heritage.” Interjected Cologne, causing Miko, Fubuki and Yaku to flinch in response.

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“And that's what happened, father.” Finished Miiko

“I must congratulate you, daughter, in defeat you have found several someone’s to spend your life with, but do you have any idea what this Cologne was referring to when she spoke of this boy's heritage?” Asked her father through to viewing portal.

“No, father, I do not and I get the feeling that there is something I haven't been told yet, more because they only want to explain things once, to everyone at once rather then repeating it several times.” Answered Miiko.

“Very well then, report once again when you have more information.” Replied her father, closing the window.

* To the big meeting with everybody where everything is explained

* How is everyone else in Nerima reacting to these events?

* What's going on with the other Senshi?

* Something else
 
#10
Sean-007 said:
unfortunately it looks like anime-adventures is dead
And this thread is from more than a year ago, before it went down.
 

Prince Charon

Well-Known Member
#11
NuitTombee said:
Sean-007 said:
unfortunately it looks like anime-adventures is dead
And this thread is from more than a year ago, before it went down.
This makes Sean-007's necro particularly ironic... or maybe just that much more pointless.
 
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