Some time ago Antimatter suggested a rather boring story idea. It went something like this,
At least, I found it boring. So, I went and replied to him on the thread listing out points and such. What surprised me was that I ended up having something that could be made into a one-shot. Well, why not? :huh: I asked myself. And so I made this,
<a href='https://docs.google.com/document/d/15srg2A8EOYFBaVOI9fcox9leA6luGL-Z9oEPBczw8xw/edit' target='_blank' rel='nofollow'>Tama X-Change DRAFT COPY</a>
Now, I originally wanted Antimatter's opinion before posting this openly, but he hasn't replied to me past the first PM and I'm inclined to think that he's forgotten about the whole thing. <_<
Personal politics aside
, I'm starting to reconsider my decision about making this. Quite frankly, I think I've written myself into a corner and am not sure what to do next. And for that matter, there are some scenes in the middle which I feel could be changed as well.
If anyone has any suggestions or corrections or any thoughts on this I would much appreciate it. Feel free to butcher the plot or my writing style as you see fit. Hopefully, I'll learn something.
Hell, if you think you've got some good scenes, feel free to write it and if it's good, I'll add it in. We could jointly co-author this if you like.
Oh, and it's a Mutsumi+Keitaro pairing story.
-chronodekar
At least, I found it boring. So, I went and replied to him on the thread listing out points and such. What surprised me was that I ended up having something that could be made into a one-shot. Well, why not? :huh: I asked myself. And so I made this,
<a href='https://docs.google.com/document/d/15srg2A8EOYFBaVOI9fcox9leA6luGL-Z9oEPBczw8xw/edit' target='_blank' rel='nofollow'>Tama X-Change DRAFT COPY</a>
Now, I originally wanted Antimatter's opinion before posting this openly, but he hasn't replied to me past the first PM and I'm inclined to think that he's forgotten about the whole thing. <_<
Personal politics aside
, I'm starting to reconsider my decision about making this. Quite frankly, I think I've written myself into a corner and am not sure what to do next. And for that matter, there are some scenes in the middle which I feel could be changed as well.If anyone has any suggestions or corrections or any thoughts on this I would much appreciate it. Feel free to butcher the plot or my writing style as you see fit. Hopefully, I'll learn something.
Hell, if you think you've got some good scenes, feel free to write it and if it's good, I'll add it in. We could jointly co-author this if you like.
Oh, and it's a Mutsumi+Keitaro pairing story.
-chronodekar