Naruto The Bishop [Naruto x DxD]

T.L

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It has been a very long time since I have attempted to write anything.
Quite frighteningly possibly longer than some of you have been alive.
But nonetheless, being quiet at work and having a new tablet lead me to read some Naruto x DxD fics.
What a let down, It seems that Naruto has become the Gary Stu of the fanfiction world and the aura of smooth was rife.

So with that in mind I set out to use my extremely rusty writing skills and see what I could do.
There are three main points I'm trying to cover in the beginning.
1, A plausible way for Naruto to be transported from his world and to be left stranded in the DxD world.
2, An absolute must. Kurama still had to be sealed inside Naruto. [see gary stu]
3, Naruto needs to be able to grow from his childish outlooks and see things for how they are.

With that, I'd thought that post my crap here first and let you guys tear this to shreds.
I trust a lot of opinions here and what better way to see if it's crap or worth continuing.
I'm quite scared actually.


 

T.L

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RE: untitled Naruto_x_DxD

Well after reading that a few time that was a waste.

Lets try again

Welcome

‘Damn it's hot’ thought Naruto as he looked around, all he could see were volcanoes as far as the eye could see, ‘wait a minute’ he thought ‘where is everyone else’. “Turn around Naruto our enemy is behind you” said a voice. Naruto turned around sharply to see Sasuke standing there, a few meters in front of him was Kaguya Otstsuki the self proclaimed goddess of the world, just standing there. “Where are  the others?” asked Naruto.

“They must have been left behind when we were transported here” replied Sasuke. “Anyway that's irrelevant it's up to us to finish this. If either of us die here”, continued Sasuke staring at Kaguya ,“Our world ends Naruto. Your Yang power and my Yin power can seal her and end this. If we can't do that humanity will be annihilated. We must not fail, no matter what”.

With a determined look on his face Naruto replied “I understand what your saying Sasuke”. “We have to create an opening Naruto do you have any ideas?”. “Yeah, I'll have to use that technique, I've been practicing it just in case a situation like this arose”. “Hnnnnnn If it can create an opening in here defense's it's worth a try. Alright my left eye is ready let's end this” commented Sasuke. Looking determined Naruto replied “Yeah, let's go”.

Concentrating on his left eye Sasuke announced “Amatersu” and with that announcement the black flames of Amatersu covered Kaguya. At the same time Naruto moved forward with his hands in a familiar cross shaped pattern. “Sexy reverse harem no jutsu!!!”, and a mass of naked male clones appeared. Looking at the mass of naked men Kaguya flew backwards with a massive nosebleed.

‘I can't believe that worked’ thought Sasuke. He called out “Now Naruto”, with that command both of them raced towards Kaguya with their hands outstretched trying to seal her away. Just as they were about to make contact they were frozen in place. ‘What is this’ thought Sasuke ‘Ice? Ice in a volcano!?’ ‘Just a little bit more’, thought Naruto ‘wh why can't I move and why is it so cold all of a sudden’.

With the three of them frozen in place, Kaguya started to think things through. ‘This isn't working, together they are very strong. It will be easier to separate them and finish them off one at a time’. With that a portal surrounded her and she disappeared inside.

Just as Sasuke was about to use the Amatersu technique again to release them both, a portal opened up behind Naruto, Sasuke looked on in alarm, as a hand reached out and dragged him through. Sasuke fearing the same immediately used Amatersu, with the ice melting he  jumped away from where he was standing and looked around for anything like the portal that took Naruto. Not seeing anything he began to worry, his worst fears were confirmed when a portal opened where he was previously frozen and out stepped Kaguya. His true fears were confirmed when Kaguya stated “I'll be taking my chakra back now!!!”

Having been dragged through the portal Naruto was unceremoniously dropped from a great height into a sand dune. “SAND!!!!!!” he screamed out “Where the hell am I now???” Having been in [size=medium]Six Paths Sage Mode for the fight with Kaguya, Naruto felt the power slip away due to the fall and loss of concentration. With the release of the Six Paths Sage Mode Kurama questioned his host. [/size]“What happened Naruto? Where is Sasuke and Kaguya?”

I don't know Kurama, we had began to fight Kaguya and were about to seal her, when we were trapped in what appeared to be a giant ice block. The next thing I knew we were dumped here alone.” Kurama began to think about the implications of being alone, “Naruto was there anybody else there with you and Sasuke when you were fighting Kaguya?” “No, There wasn't, We were alone. Why, Is it important? We were just about to seal her away when I ended up here”. “Hmmmm, I think we have a huge problem.” “Of course we have a problem they are there and we are here! We have to find a way to get back to Sasuke and seal Kaguya.”

“Naruto do you know of a way to cross dimensiones? Because I don't and without a way to get back to Sasuke we are stuck here until Kaguya comes back.” Said Kurama gently already fearing the worst. Naruto thought about it for a minute and then suddenly exclaimed “Wait a minuet the Toads!. The Toads should be able to reverse summon me back to Mount Myoboku”. “That could work Naruto but how do we get to Sasuke? Remember he is in a different dimension as well”. “One thing at a time Kurama we’ll cross that gap when we get to it.”

Biting his thumb and drawing on his chakra Naruto call out, “Kuchiyose no Jutsu”slamming his hand upon the ground, the summon circle and lots of smoke appeared indicating a toad had arrived but nothing else  happened. “What!? No way” exclaimed Naruto, he tried again [size=medium]Kuchiyose no Jutsu”[/size], But still no toads answered his call. Again and again he tried with the same result. No toads and a lot of chakra wasted.

After five minutes of fruitless trying Kurama decided to step in. “Naruto it's not working, stop wasting chakra”. “But Kurama it's the only way we're going to get home”. “I realise that, but after five minutes, even you should be able to understand that a jutsu that you know and can use, isn't working”. Said Kurama frustratingly  “What do you mean by ‘even I should understand’”. “Look at the bigger picture Naruto, the jutsu isn't working, and Kaguya could be back any minute”.

“NO, what do you mean by ‘even I should understand’”, said Naruto angrily. “I have to get back, everyone is depending on Sasuke and I to stop this madness and end the war”, He snapped. “Look Naruto I understand, I really do, but with our only means of getting home not working, we have to look at the bigger picture. Kaguya could return any minute, and with you and Sasuke separated you can't beat her. It needs the two of you working in tandem to seal her away.” Kurama snapped.

Having the wind taken from his sails with that comment Naruto deflated “I'm sorry Kurama, I didn't mean to get angry at you. But with everyone depending on me to use this power the pressure is building up, and I didn't mean to take it out on you”, after thinking for a few seconds “So what should we do now?” he asked. “Well for starters we need to move somewhere not too far from here. This is where she left us, so it's only natural this will be the first place she comes back to”

Naruto looked around, “Um Kurama in case you didn't know we are in a desert, there's nowhere to hide here.” “I know that but moving from here will give us an advantage, she left us here and here she'll probably return. We don't have to go far, just a few hundred meters should give us enough time to prepare for when she arrives.” “Right let's get to it then” said Naruto.

After moving a few hundred meters from where they arrived, “This should be far enough I think, We seem to be on a higher dune than what we were before, at least she'll have to come uphill to get to us”. Kurama didn't reply. “Hey Kurama” Naruto shouted did you hear me. “Yes I did Naruto, but there seems to be a problem.” “What else could go wrong today” griped Naruto. “Well for some strange reason my chakra seems to be weaker than it normally is.” “What do you mean weaker?” asked Naruto concerned for his friend.

“Well I seem to have as much as before, but it feels weaker than usual. If I had to guess I'd say not as potent as usual. I'm not sure, what's happened.” Mused Kurama. Naruto thought about it for a few minutes and had an idea. “Perhaps it's because we aren't in our home dimension any more?” “Possibly” replied Kurama, “But keep it in mind when we have to fight. Things might not turn out the way we want.”

With that Naruto sat down in the sand, thinking about what Kurama said, “Well if that's the case we better find out what differences if any there are.” and began to meditate and draw upon their chakra.

** Heaven **

Sitting upon his throne in the seventh level of heaven god began to feel a power coming from the mortal plane. ‘Hmmmm what is this?’ he thought, ‘I have never felt anything like this before, it feels like my own power but slightly different. Almost like a different flavour.’ With that the doors burst open to the seventh level and the Archangel Michael burst in with several others looking concerned.


“Father!” he burst out, “can you feel that energy coming from the mortal plane”. “Yes I can my son, but I do not know what it is. It feels holy, but at the same time tainted with something, I can't quite describe what it is”. “Could it be something new that our enemies have been working on?” stated Michael. “I am not sure my son, but I must investigate what it is”.

“But father surely one of use can investigate this matter for you.” gesturing towards the assembled angels. “There is no need for you to worry yourself over this, you are needed here.” said Michael. “No” said God standing up “This is something I must do myself, I feel that this is something beyond anything that you have seen before”. God then turned to the side and began to open a portal, he looked back at the gathered angles and smiled, “Michael I leave you in charge until I return. This shouldn't take very long”. With that God entered the portal and disappeared.

Stepping out of the portal God noticed a large power source off to one side. He turned to look at what it was and saw a young teen surrounded by a power that felt like his own, but at the same time different, he noticed that the teen had powered down slightly, but still seemed weary.

** Earlier in the Desert **

Finally entering [size=medium][size=medium]Six Paths Sage Mode[/size], Naruto commented “Your right Kurama, your chakra feels different than before. I can't explain it either it feels less potent than normal”. Just as Kurama was about to reply they both felt a surge of power, the looked towards where they could feel it coming from and saw a portal began to open. [/size]“Well Naruto it looks like our rest time is up, I hope your ready”. “I hope Sasuke’s ok” grimly replied Naruto.

Watching the portal expand Naruto began to charge up an attack to get the first blow in before Kaguya could react, just as he was about to let loose he saw an old man step out. Letting some of his power recede Naruto looked closer at the old man, Cautiously he called out “Who are you?”. The old man looked at Naruto and replied in a voice that seemed to shake the whole desert “I am the one known as God, Who might you be?”.

“My name is Uzumaki Naruto” he replied.

God studied Naruto for several moments, “I have several questions for you young Naruto”. Naruto nodded his head in acquiesce “Go ahead, but you'll need to be quick, Kaguya could return at any moment”. “Kaguya? Who is this Kaguya?” God asked thinking it was the name of a new devil.

Naruto started to give God a summary of everything that had happened up until he arrived through the portal. As Naruto was giving God his summary neither of them noticed another portal being opened back where Naruto first appeared, due to it being similar to Naruto’s [size=medium]Six Paths Sage Mode.[/size]

Kaguya Otstsuki stepped through the portal looking slightly worse for wear. Her clothing was burnt and torn in places, but physically she was not hurt at all. Looking around to see if she could see Naruto, she saw him standing on a large dune with someone else not far from where she was. Noticing the strangers power she realised it was similar to hers but seemed much stronger.

Whilst listening to Naruto’s explanation God finally noticed a rise in the strength of Naruto’s power. Not seeing any extra power coming from the teen, God began to look around for the source. As God looked around he saw a woman radiating power heading towards them. Seeing God not paying any attention to what he was saying any more Naruto sputtered to a halt and looked in the same direction as God.

“Kaguya” he hissed. God glanced at Naruto, “Is this the person you were talking about?” God asked. “Yes” replied Naruto. God just hummed thoughtfully to himself, “She looks like she has had a bit of a fight” he commented, “As I was telling you, that would have been my friend Sasuke, she split us up as we were about to seal her away, and left me here”. With that statement God looked thunderstruck.

“SEAL AWAY A DIVINE BEING!!!” he thundered, becoming very red in the face, “You presume too much child, I sense a similar power from this Kaguya as my own, and to a lesser extent from you as well.” God became livid. Naruto felt a huge amount of power radiating off God, he saw dark clouds form overhead and lighting strike the ground all around them.

Kurama sensing what was going on around them groaned in exasperation “Well done idiot, you have to learn when NOT to tell the full story to someone”. ‘Well…..’ thought Naruto, “Just get the hell out of here” he yelled. With that command Naruto shot off at full speed.

Kaguya seeing what was happening and hearing what was said, smirked, ‘This will be a lot easier than planned’, she thought to herself. Just then a lighting bolt struck the ground just in front of her. Thinking that the being in front of her was trying to attack she started to attack the being in front of her.

God seeing that Kaguya was starting to attack him, not knowing that a lighting bolt had almost hit her, turned his full attention to her. “You dare to attack me” he raged. Bringing his full light power to bear he created a sky full of light spears and launched them at Kaguya.

Seeing the spears flying towards her, Kaguya focused her chakra into the shape of a shield to block the spears. Divine power vs divine power, As the spears hit her shield most of them were dissipated, but some managed to break through and strike her legs doing severe damage. Kaguya not spending any time in this world did not understand that her power had been diminished. Once the attack was over Kaguya fell to the ground in considerable pain. Never feeling this before she became frightened. With that she created a mass of black balls, looking similar to Naruto’s truth seeking balls, she launched them at the being in front of her, but not only directly she sent some in an arc to attack the being from the side and from the rear.

God thinking that no one could stand up to his attacks looked at the cloud of debris in front of him in satisfaction. ‘Ashes to ashes dust to dust’ he thought, and with that he turned to take care of the fleeing Naruto. Looking at Naruto he failed to see the black ball's heading his way. He raised his hand to smite Naruto only to sense the incoming attack too late. Attempting to raise a barrier  in front of himself at the very last minute, it was to little too late, and Kaguya’s attack hit home from all sides.

Even with her power diminished Kaguya still had enough at her disposal to do significant damage to God, almost to the point of destroying him outright. As he lay there in a huge crater with a massive hole in his torso, almost to the point that he had been cut in half, God thought about what to do. ‘What to do, what can I do?’ he thought desperately. With that he remembered what Naruto said about sealing.

God dragged himself to the edge of the crater and looked around, by this time the sand and dust had settled. As he looked around he saw a glassy area. In the middle of the glassy area lay Kaguya unable to move. As he lay there God raised his hands in the air and began to draw more power in. ‘Just a little more’ he thought, and a few seconds later he sent a beam of holy energy towards Kaguya and sealed her away into the actual desert sands inside the glassy area. ‘Done’ he thought ‘at least my children will be safe from that monster, just one last thing to do’.

Meanwhile Naruto had stopped running and turned around to watch the fight between the two divine beings. “What are you doing Naruto, we have to keep moving or we are done for” said Kurama. “It’s no point they will be able to find us no matter where we go. It’s better to save our strength to fight the winner out of this battle”. With that Naruto continued to watch the battle between God and Kaguya.

After watching the brief battle between the two deities, Naruto felt gypped “All that power and it was over in such a short time. That old man was a hypocrite, here he was getting all angry about Sasuke and I sealing away Kaguya and what does he go and do?” he griped. Just then he noticed God lift his hand towards them. Sensing his power waning, Naruto wondered what he was doing.

God feeling his power slip away, realised that he did not have enough power left to seal Naruto as well, thought of something else, ‘the void’ he thought ‘I’ll send them to the void, that should finish him off as well’. With that God used his remaining strength and opened a portal to the void behind Naruto, and with one last almighty push sent him through.

With that done God collapsed onto the ground and died.

*end*




Well lets try that and see if some can rip it to shreds for me.
T.L
 

T.L

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RE: untitled Naruto_x_DxD

The Bishop: Chapter 2 [part]

Where to from here.




Welcome

“Nooooo.”

All through heaven the collective scream went out. The collected Archangels still gathered on the seventh level of heaven all sobbed with the death of God. Lesser angels collapsed throughout all levels of Heaven out right, with the loss of presence from the almighty father that they had felt since they had been created.

The Archangel Michael collapsed into the throne of God. “What, What do we do now?” he stated, the shock of what happened overriding the unease of sitting in God’s throne. Gabriel looking up with tears in her eyes and flowing down her cheeks “I don’t know Michael. Father…. Father is gone” she sobbed and with that collapsed to the ground. Everyone else just stood there in grief.

After some time The Metatron pulled himself together. Having not been created by God, but being elevated to his position, felt the pain of the loss of God but was able to draw on his experiences as a human to get things moving. “Michael, Father left you in charge. You need to take control of the situation”. Michael looked the the Metatron with tears falling “I realise that, But where do I start” he sobbed.

The Metatron thought about this for a while, “Well let's go over what we do know.” he raised his hand in the air and began to lift his fingers. “One, We know father left to investigate the power source that we all felt. Two, We need to send someone down to where father went to investigate what happened.” “Three” he continued to mark off his fingers “We need to explain what happened to everyone else. They will be starting to panic and we need to calm things down quickly. Four, You need to figure out, Michael, how we can continue to make heaven continue to run without father here.”

Michael thought about this for a few moments. He could feel the pressure of having to make the final decisions building up and became fearful. Worrying about what to do he felt Gabriel place her hand on his shoulder and leaned down to speak softly to him. “It’s ok Michael we are all here to help. Father believed in you to take care of things in his absence, We believe and have faith in his decisions”. With that Michael felt his worries disappear. Looking up “Uriel” he called out, “You head down to where father fought this beast. See what you can find out”. “The rest of you spread out amongst the other levels, Explain as best as you can what has happened. Let everyone know that I’ll be addressing them soon, once we figure out what happened.” With that command the Gathered Archangels spread out to do what was needed.

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Later in the day the Archangels assembled together in the seventh level of Heaven. Looking over his brothers and sisters from his position in front of God’s throne Michael asked Uriel for his report on what he had found. “Michael there doesn’t seem to be much damage there”, Uriel stated, “There is a circle of sand surrounded by glass, the power signature we all felt is rife through that area, and a rather large crater, with the feeling of father, but it was slowly fading, even with the short time I was there. I doubt it will be there at all now”. the others thought about this for a minute, “....and that’s all”, said Michael incredulously with open eyes and eyebrows lifted. “That’s all that was there. I would recommend doing something about the sand surrounded by the glass though, It feels holy but tainted with malice”.

The Metatron looked alarmed “Holy with malice? How can that possibly be?” he questioned. “I am not sure brother.” stated Michael with a concerned look on his face. “But I noticed in skimming through fathers files a section on a being called Trihexa. Also known to father as The Apocalyptic Beast. Could it be that father fought this Trihexa?, Is that why he was so insistent that he be the only one to go?”

The other Archangels looked at Michael in alarm “The Apocalyptic Beast!!” they gasped almost as one. Uriel looked thoughtful, “It could be possible, I mean there isn’t much damage to the surrounding area, perhaps father was taken by surprise by this Trihexa when he first arrived.” “Perhaps that is what happened.” said Michael “Father confronted this Trihexa, they had a short but brutal battle, and father managed to seal away the beast to protect us.” The other Archangels murmured in agreement, It seemed to be the logical conclusion.

“Uriel, just where did this battle take place.” Asked Michael “On the Kerguelen Plateau.” Michael looked surprised, ‘All the way down there’, he thought ‘at least there were no human outposts anywhere near that desolated piece of land’. “Right” he said “what do we do about that area. We can’t leave it like that someone is bound to find it someday and let the beast out.”

“Why don’t we cover and seal up the sand, the beast is in, and sink the whole Plateau into the ocean.” said the up till now silent Raphael. “I know that area fairly well, It’s nothing but sand dunes and rocks.” “Well that’s certainly possible, a bit of overkill to sink a whole Plateau, But just do-able between all of us.” the Metatron retorted. “But I think we need to do more” added Raphael. With this Michael became interested as well, “Go on Raphael what do you have in mind” “Well we probably weren't the only ones to sense what happened, so a little misdirection wouldn’t hurt to throw our enemies off about what really happened.”

“Splendid idea Raphael, but what to do and how to do it”, grinned the Metatron, he continued “I have a great idea. Why don’t we get a large rock and surround it with as many large seals, and sealing barriers as we can. Strongest to weakest, bury it in a remote part of the underworld. Leave one or two extremely vague clues as to what it is and where it is and leave it at that.”
Most of the Archangels giggled at that, imagining someone running around wearing a fedora, looking for clues to an item that wasn’t actually there.

“Right that is that sorted out, Now I have to tell you about running Heaven.” said Michael. Instantly sobering up the mood in the room. “It is possible to keep the system running,” hearing a relieved sigh, he continued morosely “But, it will be severely limited.” “How severe”, asked Gabriel. “about 25~60 percent capability, depending on how many of us are for want of better words plugged into it at one time” “What do you mean plugged in?, Are we some sort of power source for the system” asked Sandalphon. “For want of better words Yes. Father ran this system on his own, and whilst we are born from him our power levels are nowhere near what his were. Father foresaw that he would fight the ‘The Apocalyptic Beast’ and left plans in case the worst would happen.” “At least 60 percent is better than nothing” commented Sandalphon looking slightly relieved.

Gabriel watching her brother and seeing the look of worry on his face asked gently “But there is more Michael Isn't there.” Michael sighed “Yes there is. Even with all of us connected to the system, We can not create large scale miracles like father could. Maybe very small things here and there. It's going to be hard enough to sink the Kerguelen Plateau as is.” Massaging his temples with the first of what would be many headaches coming on he continued, “The other major issue we have is that we can not create any more Angels.” The other Angels in the room started murmuring amongst themselves, Michael raised his hand in the air, “I know what that means just as well as you all do. But father was the only one with enough power to create life. It is beyond our reach at the moment. With that in mind we need to stop fighting straight away. We cannot afford to lose any more of our brothers and sisters, either to fighting or falling, We just don’t have the resources to do that any more.” With that he began to walk towards the door. “I think that it is high time to inform the rest of our brothers and sisters, How father defeated Trihexa The Great Beast of The Apocalypse, and saved us all”.

 
***more***

still hoping that someone will rip this to shreds for me
I know I'm not that good.

T.L
 

T.L

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Part 2 of 2


*** The Void ***

It is a strange sensation not being able to use your sight. They say that your other senses compensate for the loss of sight by becoming more acute, I never believed that before, not knowing anyone who was blind or deaf. But I understand now. I am not actually blind, but what I can see is so overwhelming that I can't even bare the sight of it for more than a few minutes. The headaches and nausea that come with what I can see are so overpowering that I don’t even bother any more.

That's all this god forsaken place is good for.

Being trapped here has given me time to think, I have tried to remember as much as I possibly can. My love, childhood, classmates, mentors, friends, enemies, places, and battles.

But with the good comes the bad.

The neglect of my carers, The indifference of my friends and mentors, The small amount of hatred for my burden in places, The hostility for some of my childish actions. I didn't know any better, you try rearing yourself from a young age without any permanent parental guidance. I couldn't see it then but upon reflection I can see it now.

The only good thing to happen to me since this whole mess started was that Kurama and I were in Six Path Sage Mode when we were pushed through the portal to this place. Kurama believes that without being powered up like this we would have perished. We tried to power down once, and the pain was unbearable when the void first touched us, that lead to another problem. Being powered up like this Kurama states that it is damaging my chakra coils. How much we don’t know, I only hope we get out of here before too much damage happens, Even with Kurama’s healing the damage is still happening.

I don’t know how long I have been here, there being no proper way to account for time. One thing I know for sure is that; that God person is a prick. If I see him again I’m going to shove a Rasengan where the sun doesn't shine. What a two faced piece of crap, getting angry over Sasuke and I trying to seal Kaguya and the doing the same thing himself. As if he knew what was happening in our world. What she was doing to humanity with her Infinite Tsukuyomi. Using people as a battery, and then turning them into white Zetsu's when they were used up, how disgusting.

Thinking of sealing Kaguya brings me back to Sasuke, and our conversation about what we think happened.

*flashback*

Seeing how my vision is useless at the moment I spend a lot of time in my mindscape talking to Kurama. Firstly we discussed about where we were and after some time we turned our attention to Kaguya, hashing over what had happened, what we knew, and what we suspected. “Naruto, did you see how Kaguya looked when we saw her after she exited the portal” asked Kurama. Naruto thought back to the fight between God and Kaguya, “Yeah her clothes looked burned and torn in places, But physically she looked fine.” “Naruto I believe that she defeated Sasuke before coming back to get us.” Naruto thought about this and started to get agitated and angry “You don’t know that for sure Kurama, he could have fought her and escaped for all we know. Sasuke's managed to get out of some tough situations before. I can’t accept that he was beaten. He had both the Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan and the Rinnegan for the Sage’s sake. Those two features alone should have been able to stop her for a short time to get away”.

‘I don’t really want to go here’ Kurama thought ‘But it’s best we get this over now rather than later’. “Get away to where Naruto? He was in a different dimension as well or did you forget that?”. said Kurama gently not wanting to agitate Naruto any more than what he already was. “I don’t know?” Naruto snapped getting angrier “The same thing that happened to us could have happened to him as well”. “Naruto think about it, She came back for us! Her clothing was burnt and sliced up! She had no physical damage. I know you don’t want to believe that your friend is gone, But we can make a few guesses as to what happened. She separated us, and left us here for some time. Where did she go? To buy Ice Cream?, I don’t think so. She went back to fight Sasuke. When she returned her clothing was burnt and torn, so we know she was in a fight. So I believe that she went back defeated Sasuke and then came for us.”

“NO” screamed naruto standing up and pacing around “I can’t believe that. I can’t believe that he is gone” “Naruto it all fits, and is the most logical conclusion as to what happened” “NO” screamed Naruto again “I don't believe that for a minute. I can’t believe that happened. “Why not it seems to be the truth as far as we know it.” ‘There's something else going on here, what is it’ Kurama thought curiously.
“NO” screamed Naruto again “There must be some other reason for her condition”. “No it all fits Naruto you have to accept it”. “NO...NO...NO...NONONONONONONO” screamed Naruto breaking out into tears collapsing to the mindscape ground. “Why not?” Kurama pushed.

“BECAUSE I AM THE CHILD OF PROPHECY”. Naruto screamed out wailing in tears and pulling at his hair. “I CAN’T LOSE, EVERYONE IS DEPENDING ON ME TO SAVE THEM, SAKURA, KAKASHI, TSUNADE, I PROMISED…..I PROMISED HINATA THAT I WOULD WIN AND RETURN TO HER”. with that Naruto collapsed emotionally screaming and crying inconsolably. ‘......and there it is’ Kurama thought ‘so much pressure on one child's shoulders. It’s not fair. No one told him you can’t win all the time.’ Sighing, Kurama wrapped a tail around Naruto to try and offer some form of comfort to the still sobbing Naruto.

*end*

‘He was right’ thought Naruto. ‘I thought I was invincible, I thought that because I was the child of prophecy, that everything would be fine.’ he snorted. ‘That stupid prophecy, that was the start of everything. I believed in it so badly. Why? Because everyone want's to be the saviour, the good guy. They tend to forget about the rest. The destroyer. To be a destroyer seems to be a bad person. but it comes down to neither good or bad, right or wrong. just winning and losing.’

‘It just shows how dumb I really was.’

‘Kakashi sensei thought that the jokingly named ‘Therapy jutsu’ was something that I came up with. Not really, I didn't know where I get it from, well I can say for sure where I get it from now. Kurama. Kurama spoke to me for ages, just walking me through everything one step at a time. Without his help I would have gone insane.’ ‘I regret many things that happened, But not being able to return to Hinata is the most bitter pill of all.’

Just as I was about to start another round of self recrimination I felt something brush against my senses. “Kurama can you feel that?” “Yes I can, it seems to be getting stronger too.” “I wonder what kind of being could survive in this place” “The strong kind.” With that we continued to float, hoping against hope that whatever this power source was, that it could offer us some help to get out of here.

We floated there for what felt like hours, Just feeling the power signature getting stronger, and stronger. Opening my eyes to look around me I saw a small speck getting larger every minute heading my way. ‘Thank the Sage’ I thought. My elation at finding something else here overriding my issues with what I could see around me. As the speck grew in my vision I began to make things out. I could see that it flew on large wings, and there seemed to be a tail moving from side to side as it moved. But not much else. After a while I began to realise how big this thing was. It was red in colour, and was like nothing I’d ever seen before.

Finally the giant red thing came close enough to me that I was able to grab a talon on the rear leg and hitch a ride. I had tried to communicate with it but got no response. Funny enough my nausea and headaches disappeared once I hitch a ride with the great red thing. as we cruised along I asked Kurama his opinion. “Well, it’s better than just floating there, and the power this thing radiates is enormous. Unlike anything that that prick God or Kaguya ever put out.”. After a while a portal opened in front of us and we travelled through.

Hoping to emerge back to where we came from, We were both disappointed to see that we had emerged into a completely different world than before. “By the sage can anything go right for us with these portal things” Naruto exclaimed. Looking around he noticed a Blue/green sky and large land masses broken up by rivers and large lakes, But no oceans that he could see. As he travelled through the air he noticed smoke and fire underneath him. Too large to be from towns or cities it looked like a large forest fire, heading towards a small village he noticed out of the corner of his eye.

Whilst he was taking in the sights, Kurama called out “Naruto watch out!! There seems to be a portal opening in front of us. Unless you want to keep going I suggest you get off.” “GET OFF!!” he screamed “DO YOU REALISE HOW HIGH WE ARE!!” “No but unless you get off this thing you're heading back to where we were.” Naruto grimaced ‘Fuck that’ he thought and with that he jumped off.

As they hurtled towards the ground Kurama called out, “Naruto!! focus your chakra, we should be able to float like the old man sage did when I was a child.” ‘Float’ Naruto thought how cool would that be. Attempting to focus his chakra Naruto attempted to figure out how to use his Six Path Sage mode to float like the old Sage. But his attempts were for naught, just as he was just about to crash into the ground he thought he saw a young girl with long dark hair sitting near a large tree.

*** Heaven ***

Sitting on the Throne in Heaven, Michael while listening to the Prayers of the faithful, He noticed a large spike in power appearing in the Underworld. ‘Ho what's this’ he thought ‘That feels familiar, …...Hmmmm Great Red, What's he doing down there I wonder.’ Concentrating further he felt a great dread come over him ‘Is that the Trihexa?’ he thought in shock. Just as he was concentrating on the possible Trihexa signature it disappeared. “It’s been a long time since I felt that, I might have been wrong” he murmured.


*end*


**Note**
I know my grammar is crap, and I think my dialogue could use a lot of work.
Any corrections will be given credit and appreciated

T.L
 
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