The Enlightenment of Alexander - Book One of my trilogy

I'm currently writing my own version of the Fifty Shades trilogy based off of my crush for a guy. This book is based off of both my imagination and events in Fifty Shades of Grey.

A quick synopsis: Two college roommates named Jared Paterski and Alexander Schmidt move in together at Sanford Hall at the University of Minnesota. Jared falls in love with Alex and loves everything about him. He loves him so much that he tries to be just like him by copying the things that he enjoys. He then has erotic desires for Alex that he fulfills many times throughout the novel.

This is just a draft and there may be grammatical errors in it so please let me know of any! Thank you!