Naruto The Forgotten One

#1
A sort of AU based around certain forgotten character who survived. Due to the theme, Naruto himself won't be featured. Warning: might not be realistic

Tsukiko was sitting at the edge of grassy plain. She was dressed in a simple black attire with white belt. To her, this represented all she had lost. She remembered the day it happened. The day she tried to kill herself. What she didn't count on was the ridiculously fast healing given to her by that thing. Nor its ability to create a perfect clone of herself and implant part of itself into said clone. The clone was one meant to be durable, at least that's what the thing told her. She had fixed her immediate problem with the help of a person who specialized in this sort of problem

She watched from her hiding place as her clone was killed and the worse part of it was taken away by her captors. Since then, she had lived a cautious life, trying not to get close to anybody for fear that they might use her. This fear was not so far fetched as it seemed, for villages were known to use those like her as weapons only. Moreover, her own village had a power-chasing maniac, known as Danzo Shimura, who had no qualms using the two heads of the council for his own gain. She knew it, for he had tried to get his hands on Kushina-sama's power as well. So she reckoned that he would try to come after her as well.

For these reasons, Tsukiko had opted to remain a nomad until she could find a village that was out of Danzo's reach. Most of villages in Land of Fire didn't fit that bill, so she decided to try other lands. She finally found an independent one and managed to integrate into it quite flawlessly. Part of the thing, as she viewed it as, helped her out sometimes, but it didn't make any efforts to interact with her otherwise. Had she not known any better, she would have thought that it liked her as the host. As things stood, it was merely a quiet type, not wanting to have any attachment to anyone. She soon learned that its bad half had been resealed into someone named Yagura. Not that it particularly interested her. All she could do for now is stay alive.

Note: Yes, Tsukiko is Rin, who managed to survive due to super fast healing ability of the Sanbi and found someone to fix the seal so that it became more durable. She changed her name to avoid detection. The Sanbi in the lake (the one Yagura had) was actually Yin part of it, while she kept the Yang part. Hope you don't find this to far-fetched.
 
#2
Definitely a good start, though you'll have to flesh out exactly how Rin managed to keep herself away from her intense-crush Kakashi coming to save her. I mean, it's every girl's dream, right? to have their Prince Charming come save them, even if they are a Nohara medic nin.

Also, you'll have to explain how Isobu got split in two.

And, you'll have to explain how Obito, with his Mangekyō Sharingan, didn't see another Rin hiding somewhere. And explain why Rin didn't return to the village with a explanation.

I suppose by this point you can bring in lots of OCs, preferably Uzumaki ones, because they are the only realistic people that knows enough sealing arts to stabilize a halfed-tailed-beast sealing, and accept someone like that into their folds.

As it stands, the idea needs polishing, but there is definite potential!
 
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