So I found a pretty bad story and wanted to share it but because it's a Justice League fic, there was no real spot to put it so I'm creating this for any bad story to be talked about. the first one is this.
Alien Magic
By: Unrealdean
A deadly assassin heralds the death of old ideals and heroes are forced to accept a new world while dealing their their own short comings. reviews are welcomed. Declaimer : All characters are own by DC comics except original characters.
Rated: Fiction M - English - Drama/Hurt/Comfort - [Clark K./Kal-El/Superman, Zatanna Z.] [Billy B./Captain Marvel/Shazam, Diana of Themyscira/Wonder Woman] - Chapters: 27 - Words: 112,266 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 10 - Follows: 11 - Updated: Mar 25 - Published: Jan 18, 2016 - Status: Complete - id: 11739779
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11739779/1/Alien-Magic
This story has a lot wrong with it; but the worst is the OC Mary Sue Villain, of all things, that the author tries to make sympathetic. I've seen quite a few Mary Sue's out there, but this is the first time I've seen one as the Villain.
Edit: So it turns out that the author took down the story in order to re-write it, so I'm going to see how the re-write is.
Alien Magic
By: Unrealdean
A deadly assassin heralds the death of old ideals and heroes are forced to accept a new world while dealing their their own short comings. reviews are welcomed. Declaimer : All characters are own by DC comics except original characters.
Rated: Fiction M - English - Drama/Hurt/Comfort - [Clark K./Kal-El/Superman, Zatanna Z.] [Billy B./Captain Marvel/Shazam, Diana of Themyscira/Wonder Woman] - Chapters: 27 - Words: 112,266 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 10 - Follows: 11 - Updated: Mar 25 - Published: Jan 18, 2016 - Status: Complete - id: 11739779
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11739779/1/Alien-Magic
This story has a lot wrong with it; but the worst is the OC Mary Sue Villain, of all things, that the author tries to make sympathetic. I've seen quite a few Mary Sue's out there, but this is the first time I've seen one as the Villain.
Edit: So it turns out that the author took down the story in order to re-write it, so I'm going to see how the re-write is.
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