Maybe the legend of the Potter brothers is more correctly?
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part 02 for your enjoyment.
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PART 02
1 day left.
Finally, Dudley woke up after two days of interrupted sleep.
Harry hadnÆt gone to his aunts and uncleÆs house since Dudley fainted, and now he finally woke up. So you finally decided to wake up? Dudley still wasnÆt completely awake and blinked a few times. Wow he muttered, what was the number of that truck that hit me? Harry simply shook his head and said: you remember what that book said? You mean Visit your core and more?
Harry nodded. It said that each personÆs core is a representative of the owner personality. It can be something personal, or it can be a subject nevertheless it is usual something typical of said person. And? What was wrong with it? Harry snapped out of it and replied: it was chained down. Some chains were severely weakened, but the core was still heavily chained down. It talked to me and helped me to destroy the weakest chains. Once they were gone, the rest couldnÆt handle the pressure of your core and so the core finally broke free.
Lets see if I can do magic better this time he promptly suggested? ThatÆs fine with me, but you better keep it something basic. You have a lot more power now remember that little fact.
Dudley thought for a moment before he knew what to do. He walked to a part of the wall and focused. Change! The wall started to shift and in its place was a video screen. Step one complete muttered Dudley silently, he again focused and said again: change! The entrance of their hiding place was nicely hidden. And just above the entrance a small camera shifted and a moment later the video screen showed what the video was monitoring. Is THAT something small asked Harry? Dudley blinked and then grinned sheepishly. IÆm sorry, but I just had a need to do what I just did. Something told me what to do, IÆm not sure why. Harry sighed and said: well we now know that you are at least powerful enough to create a security network ey?
How long was I out anyway Dudley asked? Tomorrow the plan will have engaged Harry promptly replied. Dudley nodded and asked: did you gather our supplies? We have to limit the times we exit the network you know. Harry nodded and said: I went to the grocery market a few days ago and bought plenty. We should be able to last at least six to seven months. And if we go to the market once in a month we shouldnÆt have any problems Harry offered.
ThatÆs good muttered Dudley.
The Day of Judgment Has Arrived!
A random post office:
Oy john! We have a priority level 1 letter for the Scotland Yard department.
John looked up and accepted the package. It was a discrete package with a short note on top of it:
For those that have this package, send it to the closest police office. We might not be alive to see the result, but we can at least try to punish our captors.
H&D
It was so short and to the point that the people of the post office couldnÆt help but realize it was not a joke. OY john, get your but moving to Scotland Yard! John nodded and accepted the package. Once he was seated in his post-mobile as he personally called it, he took something out of his pocket and muttered a silent word: analysis. The results were what john made to shift the car in high gear and go to the police station with risk that he was given a high fine. He didnÆt care though; he now knew that this package was authentic.
One hour later he entered the police station, and demanded to see the highest ranked officer available. John was a retired police officer, and he had captured enough of his own thugs in his career to make sure he had made a name for himself. His job had two parts. On one hand he was the post clerk that sent the more urgent post to its destination and on the other he was an unofficial cop that patrolled the neighbourhood and reported serious offences. There was only one situation where he was allowed to contact the person that had his old job as high Commissioner
When John entered the office of his successor he was still deep in thought. He had a feeling that his retirement was about to be cancelled. The reason he was so good at his job was because he was a wizard. He had left the magical world once he had graduated. With the voldemort situation, the muggles had no idea how to react, so they needed at least one wizard on their side.
John. John! JOHN! John snapped out of his thoughts and realized that Joe, his successor had finished his phone call. Joe was one of the few who knew about John his secret. Normally that wasnÆt allowed, but Joe was good at his job, and needed to know about John.
John decided to get right to the point and said: I donÆt know what you are going to find in this package, but whatever it is, it is true. It has not a trace of fake-ness on it. Joe nodded and carefully opened the package to see what was in it. As soon as he had done it, two big bundles of photographs catched their eyes. It was obvious that the photos were done in secret.
Joe stood up abruptly and said: IÆm going to put my research department to work on this. From the little I have seen, those two adults donÆt deserve to live. Can you trace those two boys? IÆm not sure replied John. I have the impression they have the same gift as I have. And itÆs quit powerful as well. If my intuition is right then I donÆt think your police will find them. I suggest keeping this quiet by all means Joe. If this goes into the media à I donÆt want them to know about this. Joe nodded and both men exited the office and went into a secured door.
**** Underground Tunnel Network ****
Dudley and Harry were having the time of their lives. Dudley had put a small charm on the package, so they had heard everything that had been said in the office. Vernon and Petunia would finally get what they deserved. They only had to do the final piece on the cake. A potion that would force them to speak the truth. It wasnÆt an easy thing, but they both managed it.
It was a more powerful version then the modern truth serum because it did not have an anti-dote. The truth serum would work for at least one year when you brewed it according to the old recipe. If you brewed it more powerful, it could work for decades.
Harry and Dudley had decided they would brew it strong enough to last at least ten years. That would be punishment enough. Both boys finally went to sleep with the recording charm on a piece of paper, so everything that would be said was written down.
**** Scotland Yard Office ****
John and Joe let out a sigh of relief. Joe had originally worked below John, and in their time they had developed a sign language. As soon as they had started their conversation, John had signed to Joe that it had a charm on it. Joe confirmed that he had understood, and he had followed johns lead. Once they had entered the research department, and had put his people to work they started their real conversation. What the bloody hell is going on John? John sighed and said: there is a listening charm on the package, but itÆs been spelled in a weird way.
The spell is over everything but it isnÆt cast on every photo apart. I canÆt explain it. Joe raised his eyes on this. John had the best results at Hogwarts in a LONG time. John sighed and muttered more to himself then to Joe: and the weirdest part is that it has my signature on it. I canÆt explain it.
Joe blinked.
And blinked.
It has YOUR signature on the package? How is that possible? John sighed and said: I have no clue. But I DO plan to find out. First thing IÆm going to do is confront whoever that is listening. And convince them to meet with me.
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I have a few questions that would allow me to make a better story.
As I have mentioned, John is a wizard. Now, I have two options, I could make the john character a futuristic HP. no this is NOT the usual HP goes back in the past to make everything right idea. I'm not sure i can explain it properly.
Maybe a HP from a different reality where everything went scour, but he still won. 'john' then decided to go to a different reality to live his live without the boy who lived shit.
The john character made up his mind in NOT interfering with the time line of this reality, and simply live his life in peace. unknowing there is a certain twin he can help.
the pictures are disturbing for john but it still hasn't 'clicked' you know? I hope I made any sense in this....
Edit 01:
Beta reader requested. if anyone is willing to reread my chapters and comment on them via mail or msn or any other decent program like it you're hired.
1423 words for your enjoyment.
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part 02 for your enjoyment.
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PART 02
1 day left.
Finally, Dudley woke up after two days of interrupted sleep.
Harry hadnÆt gone to his aunts and uncleÆs house since Dudley fainted, and now he finally woke up. So you finally decided to wake up? Dudley still wasnÆt completely awake and blinked a few times. Wow he muttered, what was the number of that truck that hit me? Harry simply shook his head and said: you remember what that book said? You mean Visit your core and more?
Harry nodded. It said that each personÆs core is a representative of the owner personality. It can be something personal, or it can be a subject nevertheless it is usual something typical of said person. And? What was wrong with it? Harry snapped out of it and replied: it was chained down. Some chains were severely weakened, but the core was still heavily chained down. It talked to me and helped me to destroy the weakest chains. Once they were gone, the rest couldnÆt handle the pressure of your core and so the core finally broke free.
Lets see if I can do magic better this time he promptly suggested? ThatÆs fine with me, but you better keep it something basic. You have a lot more power now remember that little fact.
Dudley thought for a moment before he knew what to do. He walked to a part of the wall and focused. Change! The wall started to shift and in its place was a video screen. Step one complete muttered Dudley silently, he again focused and said again: change! The entrance of their hiding place was nicely hidden. And just above the entrance a small camera shifted and a moment later the video screen showed what the video was monitoring. Is THAT something small asked Harry? Dudley blinked and then grinned sheepishly. IÆm sorry, but I just had a need to do what I just did. Something told me what to do, IÆm not sure why. Harry sighed and said: well we now know that you are at least powerful enough to create a security network ey?
How long was I out anyway Dudley asked? Tomorrow the plan will have engaged Harry promptly replied. Dudley nodded and asked: did you gather our supplies? We have to limit the times we exit the network you know. Harry nodded and said: I went to the grocery market a few days ago and bought plenty. We should be able to last at least six to seven months. And if we go to the market once in a month we shouldnÆt have any problems Harry offered.
ThatÆs good muttered Dudley.
The Day of Judgment Has Arrived!
A random post office:
Oy john! We have a priority level 1 letter for the Scotland Yard department.
John looked up and accepted the package. It was a discrete package with a short note on top of it:
For those that have this package, send it to the closest police office. We might not be alive to see the result, but we can at least try to punish our captors.
H&D
It was so short and to the point that the people of the post office couldnÆt help but realize it was not a joke. OY john, get your but moving to Scotland Yard! John nodded and accepted the package. Once he was seated in his post-mobile as he personally called it, he took something out of his pocket and muttered a silent word: analysis. The results were what john made to shift the car in high gear and go to the police station with risk that he was given a high fine. He didnÆt care though; he now knew that this package was authentic.
One hour later he entered the police station, and demanded to see the highest ranked officer available. John was a retired police officer, and he had captured enough of his own thugs in his career to make sure he had made a name for himself. His job had two parts. On one hand he was the post clerk that sent the more urgent post to its destination and on the other he was an unofficial cop that patrolled the neighbourhood and reported serious offences. There was only one situation where he was allowed to contact the person that had his old job as high Commissioner
When John entered the office of his successor he was still deep in thought. He had a feeling that his retirement was about to be cancelled. The reason he was so good at his job was because he was a wizard. He had left the magical world once he had graduated. With the voldemort situation, the muggles had no idea how to react, so they needed at least one wizard on their side.
John. John! JOHN! John snapped out of his thoughts and realized that Joe, his successor had finished his phone call. Joe was one of the few who knew about John his secret. Normally that wasnÆt allowed, but Joe was good at his job, and needed to know about John.
John decided to get right to the point and said: I donÆt know what you are going to find in this package, but whatever it is, it is true. It has not a trace of fake-ness on it. Joe nodded and carefully opened the package to see what was in it. As soon as he had done it, two big bundles of photographs catched their eyes. It was obvious that the photos were done in secret.
Joe stood up abruptly and said: IÆm going to put my research department to work on this. From the little I have seen, those two adults donÆt deserve to live. Can you trace those two boys? IÆm not sure replied John. I have the impression they have the same gift as I have. And itÆs quit powerful as well. If my intuition is right then I donÆt think your police will find them. I suggest keeping this quiet by all means Joe. If this goes into the media à I donÆt want them to know about this. Joe nodded and both men exited the office and went into a secured door.
**** Underground Tunnel Network ****
Dudley and Harry were having the time of their lives. Dudley had put a small charm on the package, so they had heard everything that had been said in the office. Vernon and Petunia would finally get what they deserved. They only had to do the final piece on the cake. A potion that would force them to speak the truth. It wasnÆt an easy thing, but they both managed it.
It was a more powerful version then the modern truth serum because it did not have an anti-dote. The truth serum would work for at least one year when you brewed it according to the old recipe. If you brewed it more powerful, it could work for decades.
Harry and Dudley had decided they would brew it strong enough to last at least ten years. That would be punishment enough. Both boys finally went to sleep with the recording charm on a piece of paper, so everything that would be said was written down.
**** Scotland Yard Office ****
John and Joe let out a sigh of relief. Joe had originally worked below John, and in their time they had developed a sign language. As soon as they had started their conversation, John had signed to Joe that it had a charm on it. Joe confirmed that he had understood, and he had followed johns lead. Once they had entered the research department, and had put his people to work they started their real conversation. What the bloody hell is going on John? John sighed and said: there is a listening charm on the package, but itÆs been spelled in a weird way.
The spell is over everything but it isnÆt cast on every photo apart. I canÆt explain it. Joe raised his eyes on this. John had the best results at Hogwarts in a LONG time. John sighed and muttered more to himself then to Joe: and the weirdest part is that it has my signature on it. I canÆt explain it.
Joe blinked.
And blinked.
It has YOUR signature on the package? How is that possible? John sighed and said: I have no clue. But I DO plan to find out. First thing IÆm going to do is confront whoever that is listening. And convince them to meet with me.
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I have a few questions that would allow me to make a better story.
As I have mentioned, John is a wizard. Now, I have two options, I could make the john character a futuristic HP. no this is NOT the usual HP goes back in the past to make everything right idea. I'm not sure i can explain it properly.
Maybe a HP from a different reality where everything went scour, but he still won. 'john' then decided to go to a different reality to live his live without the boy who lived shit.
The john character made up his mind in NOT interfering with the time line of this reality, and simply live his life in peace. unknowing there is a certain twin he can help.
the pictures are disturbing for john but it still hasn't 'clicked' you know? I hope I made any sense in this....
Edit 01:
Beta reader requested. if anyone is willing to reread my chapters and comment on them via mail or msn or any other decent program like it you're hired.