Harry Potter The legend of Harry Potter Part 05

kingdark

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Part 05
With the Potters an hour before events of last chapter
Harry and Dudley looked at the other and then both vanished. John blinked and then the two real versions entered the lounge. You can come to the hearth of the base now Dudley said, we disabled the defenses to let you trough. John nodded and followed them instantly. Once they had entered the lounge, John was impressed what they had done. It wasnÆt long before they were laughing at each other again. Sparring with each other ûwith words mind you-. Just as John was going to give a retort at what Dudley had just said he froze and listened in horror to the message his old friend gave him.

His anger swelled up again, as Albus was part of the reason the Potter family had died. He tried to control his anger as much as he could and finally he said: Albus Dumbledore, prepare to DIE! Harry and Dudley blinked and slowly backed away. They immediately realized that John wasnÆt angry at them, but at this Albus Dumbledore character. John stood up his anger flashing and a strong breeze travelled trough the room, which was impossible since the room lay underground. Finally John reigned his magic back in and said: we have a situation.

When I was younger I met this beautiful bird named Fawkes. He is what you call a phoenix. He and I were friends for years, but then I met this wizard named Albus Dumbledore. The kid had great potential, and Fawkes had taken a liking towards the boy. So Fawkes told me he wanted to stick with Albus, to guide him because he foresaw a hard life for him. I told my friend to go as I had plans of my own, and so we went our separate ways. However, a few years ago, I tried to call my old friend, and when he finally appeared, he told me to bugger off.

Not in so many words, but he did tell me that. I always had the feeling he didnÆt want to say that, but he fire-flamed away before I could ask him anything. Every since, he ignored my calls. The phoenix is bonded to the head of the Potter family, that means the oldest of you two John continued. How do I call him? Said Dudley? Wait a minute said Harry, who says you are the oldest? I donÆt say anything, maybe I am, and maybe I am not. If I try to call him, and he doesnÆt respond, then you are the oldest.

If I do call him, and he does respond, then that makes me the oldest. Actually offered John, since you are a twin, that means Fawkes decided who will be the leader. He has a good sense in that area. The fact you are a twin, will reinforce the call. If he is controlled in some manner, can you break it? John nodded confidently and said: I am confident I can break anything the old man tried on Fawkes. Just focus on the familiar of the Potter family. Ask him to come, tell him that you are his bonded by right, and no magic can change that fact.

Both boys concentrated, and John was presented with the most beautiful magic he had seen in years. Blue wires appeared around them, and whirled around them in random directions. The blue colour was from Dudley John just knew by instinct.
Another colour appeared and this one was red. John knew that this one was also from Dudley. That meant that he had two animal forms. John felt proud for him, and watched in awe looking of Harry his colours.

The next colours that appeared were Grey, green and red. John frowned, red and green were opposites of each other, like day and night. The grey colour meant that he had come into contact with more questionable magics. These three colours belonged to Harry obviously. John wondered if this meant he had three animal forms? Then an ugly black brown colour appeared. It attacked the nicer colours in fury. John knew by instinct that the ugly brown black colours represented the controlling magic over Fawkes.


The grey green and red colours seemed to support the blue and red colours in an effort to defeat the ugly brown black. At first they seemed to win, but then the ugly colours made an assault of its own. John realized something, if Fawkes wasnÆt here, then that meant he couldnÆt remove whatever that was controlling him, not only that, but if the magic was so powerful, that it could fight the natural bond with the potters, then he needed to act quickly! He decided to put in his own magic. One adult Potter, and two kid Potters should be enough to overwhelm the chains that controlled Fawkes.

His own colours were purple and green both colours changed into their respective animals: a hawk and a fiery wolf. Together they attacked the brown black magic that had changed into a fiery cobra and a scorpion. Finally, the combined might of the three powers overwhelmed the controlling magic, and it vanished with a loud BANG.

The old man also known as Albus Dumbledore stared in shock at Fawkes. The Potter children had overwhelmed the bond! It was impossible for them to do hat with the block on their cores! Even if they somehow had got rid of the block, he had made sure that it needed adult support. Albus paled, that meant there was still a Potter alive!

He stared at the phoenix who looked at him in triumph and sent a short mental message: you didnÆt really think that your magic could keep my proper bonded from calling me do you? You will get yours soon enough Albus Dumbledore. That is something I will personally guarantee you off.
Goodbye.

With that Fawkes flamed away to the source of the call. He hoped that John would forgive him.

Potter HQ
Harry and Dudley fainted after that effort. John smiled proud at them, and took them gently from the floor and put them in their beds. When he returned in the main room, he saw his old friend looking at him. John Fawkes started hesitantly. John smiled and said: donÆt say anything old friend, I always knew that you didnÆt mean it when you said that. DonÆt worry, the revenge we will have on Dumbledore will come. I have no doubts he is calling in all kind of favours right now to ensure anything we try will go down the drain.

Fawkes nodded his agreement. Then he asked: but didnÆt you ædieÆ in the eyes of the magical community? John blinked and said only one word: shit. Are you strong enough to give me a lift Fawkes? Said bird gave a nod and said: IÆll have the strength to bring you to the ministry, donÆt worry. I am not going to abandon my rightfully bonded.

John grabbed the paws of Fawkes, and in a whirl of flames they both vanished, neither noticing two set of eyes watching and hearing the whole conversation.
What do you think they are going to do? IÆm not sure, but I trust John. LetÆs get some sleep for now. His partner nodded his agreement and both boys went back in their room and fell asleep in minutes.

The ministry
John Potter entered the ministry with all the dignity he had.
Every department he passed, people paused to watch him, and then ask quietly who that man was. And why he looked like a Potter? Which was supposedly impossible since the only Potter left was the boy who livedà

John entered the hearth of the ministry, the office of the minister.
Two aurors were standing before the office of the minister and stopped John from entering the office. IÆm sorry sir, but the minister is having a meeting, you canÆt enter.
John simply stared at them and said: by right of the Potter family, and according to the magical law page seven hundred and fifty chapter four paragraph two, a member of an old family can always talk to the minister unless a war is being fought or an emergency has been called. Not only that, but the minister owes me a life-debt. The two aurors hesitated, and John promptly said: you tried to stop me, but I caught you by surprise, and thatÆs the reason I got past you twoà Both guards smiled and stepped aside. If they could bother the incompetent minister in this, they would do so in an instant. No auror like the minister because he was ûbeing blunt- an incompetent fool that couldnÆt lead candy shop.

John entered the office and instantly recognized the current Malfoy leader pointing his wand at the minister. Imp- John reacted instinctively and quietly said: stupefy! The Malfoy leader collapsed into unconsciousness. John went outside the office and said: I caught the Lucius Malfoy casting an imperious curse on the minister. I suggest you take him into custody. And, if I find out, that evidence has been misplaced, you will be guarding the statue of magical friendships and cooperation for the rest of your career. The aurors smiled and said donÆt worry sir, well make sure this gentlemen wont escape his punishment this time around.
John re-entered the office with the minister still staring blankly at the wall.
Erh said John, excuse me minister Fudge. Fudge seemed to ignore him, so John waved his hand a few times before his eyes. Finite Incantatem john muttered silently. Whatever that it was that had its influence over fudge, it ended as soon as John had finished his spell.
I find Lucius Malfoy g- ergh?
The minister seemed to blink a few times and the said slowly: John, please tell me why I am sitting in this office, and what the FUCK is going on?
Now it was JohnÆs turn to blink.

What do you remember?
I remember that I wanted to find Lucius guilty! That PRICK tried to bribe me! I did NOT become minister so a punk like him could BRIBE me!!!!
John felt a big headache coming up. The minister had been under a controlling spell for more then nine years, and NOBODY noticed it!

I think minister that youÆll find you did quit a bit of thinks that wasnÆt typical you. I suggest you have a meeting with the department head of law enforcement.

Fudge nodded quickly. However, what I am coming to you for is just as important.
John realized that fudge was behind things for nine years, so he couldnÆt help him even if he wanted too! Damn it he cursed.
The headache was coming with a vengeance.

Look Cornelius, Albus Dumbledore isnÆt the master of light as he makes everyone think. He will be coming to you for a matter, act like you will do it, but be sure to be on your guard. This matter of mine isnÆt within your power to help right now. In fact, as long as you havenÆt read up until today you wonÆt be able to help me.

Cornelius sighed and said: I have messed up a lot havenÆt I? And I canÆt announce this because it will mean that I am not able to resist mind control. He sighed; perhaps it is best that I let someone else more competent be minister.
Cornelius! John snapped! Cornelius snapped out of it and shook his head. What did I do he asked? JohnÆs headache had just increased to the level of nuclear explosion.
What the FUCK am I going to do now he wondered?

Meditate old friend, John finally said. And donÆt let anyone except Madame Bones inside your office. Fudge nodded and pressed a button and said: could you please ask madam bones to come to my office? ItÆs urgent. John sighed again and figured, it might be better if he sticked around.

When Amelia entered the office, she looked at John, and promptly fainted.
Now, there wasnÆt much that could make the head of law department faint, but when you see a very old, and very close friend you thought to be dead for years, then that is a reason to faint.

John growled in frustration, is everything going to against me these days?
Enervate John snartled, he had to vent his frustration, and an innocent spell like that didnÆt hurt anyone! Amelia woke up abruptly. She wondered for a moment why she was here, and then she remembered: she had seen one of her oldest friends, that couldnÆt possibly alive!

Before you say something, yes, I AM John Potter, and yes IÆm still alive, and NO I did NOT die that day, that was so I could live my live for a while without external sources knocking on my door. Amelia frowned then blinked, then frowned again and then she laughed. In fact, she started laughing so hard, that it started to hurt her in the sides. You always had a way in saying things John, she chuckled happily. Fine then, I had my fun, now could you tell me what is going on? Why is Lucius Malfoy in prison after he was declared innocent?

I can answer that offered Cornelius. That FUCKING bastard had me put under the imperious spell for more then NINE years! What was still left of the smile from earlier vanished at that moment. Are you saying that our minister has been put under the imperious from more then nine years without us noticing?

John simply nodded.

Fudge catched up with what John had said earlier and said: John, why did Amelia think you were dead? Because I faked my death Cornelius. I faked my death because my family had been brought back to normal strength. The family had grown over ten people so I thought that was enough to ensure the Potter family to survive. Which reminds me: I want custody of Harry Potter and his twin brother Dudley Potter. Since I was declared death, this could bring up some problems, so I want that fixed.

DonÆt worry John, Cornelius offered; IÆll work this out for you. But first I need to review the stupid decisions I have made the last nine years.
Amelia blinked and asked hesitantly: did you just call yourself stupid?

Well, just look at these decisions! No sane person would make these laws! I mean cÆmon, I donÆt really like muggles, but look at law five c paragraphà
IÆm going to go now John offered. Be careful not to let anyone enter without authorization will you? Sure replied Cornelius while he was rereading said law again, and cursing himself while he was doing it. John rolled his eyes and exited the room. This was going to take a long time. He sighed and instead of leaving the ministry, he took a side passage and entered a short cut to enter Diagon alley. He had to money to withdraw, and make sure that Albus couldnÆt access any of their vaults. And while he was at it, he could access his private vault too. He figured it should have made plenty of interest in the last two hundred years. He would use the money too buy plenty of books, so his family could read as much as they wanted. Which reminded him, how should he refer them to? Not grandkids, he didnÆt think that he was old. Sons? No, that might anger them as they could think he was trying to replace their real parents. Friends? Perfect he snickered. I am their overprotective, older friend. That sounded just right!


Just as he entered the bank, he saw Albus entering the tunnels system with, who he recognizes was his vault manager!
Hold that man! He doesnÆt have the PotterÆs permission to enter those vaults!
That was enough for ten goblin guards to appear, disarm Albus and then look at the source of the noise. (Shoot first ask questions later?)

Albus his eyes widened when he recognized John. John knew that he had wasted the element of surprise now that Albus knew he was still alive, but he figured that it was well worth it.

Sharpner, John said, you are still the Potters manager correct? Said goblin nodded shortly. Does it not state clearly in the will of James and Lilly Potter that no Potter may enter any vaults unless a Potter is present to give permission in case said Potter is not yet an adult?

Albus Dumbledore does NOT have a Potter with him, and he does NOT have permission to enter the Potter vaults. Not only that, but I suspect this wasnÆt the first time now was it? In the mean while, the goblins were closing the bank, and finished the customers still present.

Albus knew he had to do something, he now knew why his spell had been overwhelmed, and he also knew he was in a lot of trouble. Then it hit him. He grinned mentally and said: John, my old friend, how is it that you are alive? I thought that you died thirty years ago?

So Dumbledore wanted to play huh? Hah! One doesnÆt become this old and doesnÆt learn to play as well old man he silently thought.

So did I, john replied loudly. However, I recently had a wake up call so to speak. The magical world is going down quickly, and I am here to prevent said downfall. Actually, he silently thought, that will be up to Harry and Dudley, I will be their mentor! It is true that the magical world is going downwards with the pureblood idiocy and all that.

Besides, wasnÆt it because of you I was there in the first place? One would think you would be happy to see me? You look like you know for a fact that I was dead. One wonders how you would know such knowledge since my body was never foundà
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HA take that dumbledore!
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Thoughts, ideas, Comments.... Anything at all?
note:
I have Posted the last (new) part for now. like i said in my previous thread, I am now going to review what i have so far and post that then.
I have reached the 10k words mark. (10.202 words to be precise but who is counting?)
Expect the reviewed post later today or tomorrow (Thursday) at the latest.
 

LonObsrvr

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#2
Well moving quickly at an engaging clip that gives a person a lot to consider.
Wonder if ole dumblydork knew Fudge was imperioed & simply took advantage of the situation to his own ends?

:hmm: trying to frame dumb for conspiracy to commit murder or premediated murder?

Just proves that he's :crazy: :sick: :wacko:
:yay: :yay: :yay:
 

kingdark

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#3
hm should i leave dumbledore in the story or should i get rid of him meaning out the story. or IN the story
1. behind the scenes with his 'evil' army?
2. he manages to get out the situation, but with a big loss of his reputation.
 

LonObsrvr

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hm should i leave dumbledore in the story or should i get rid of him meaning out the story. or IN the story
1. behind the scenes with his 'evil' army?
2. he manages to get out the situation, but with a big loss of his reputation.




Well you should use the outcome you want to take the story in. If you should yourself between two outcomes use the one that you can see fitting best with where you envision the story to be going.
 

kingdark

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#5
just a small update, i'm working on reviewing the story, and its taking me longer then i first though.
When i repost the story, you should reread it from the start since I like my current version better then the first.
 
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