Ranma ½ The Succubus Diaries

[thezorch]

Not a lemon, but it will be M-rated.
What if Ranma didn't fall into the Spring of Drowned Girl? What if it was the Spring of Drowned Succubus? What if he was the reincarnation of that Succubus, and the curse is awakening dormant memories from the past? What if....
What if....
What if....the succubus was a Lesbian?
A naughty but not lemony flavored sex comedy where the return of the Lesbian Succubus creates ripples in the underworld, and nothing will ever be the same again. Currently two chapters are done, and I'm working on the 3rd. Here are some details...
The setting is based on Beneath A Crimson Sky, but with a far more fleshed out lore and history. It's an alternate reality from that series. In this one Ranma isn't a vampire.
Crossovers that will appear...

• Dance in the Vampire Bund
• Sailor Moon Crystal
• Inuyasha
• Girls Bravo
• Senran Kagura
• Rosario Vampire
• Many more...

Once I get 4 chapters done I'll post them in the forums here.

 

[Lawra]

Not a lemon, but it will be M-rated.
What if Ranma didn't fall into the Spring of Drowned Girl? What if it was the Spring of Drowned Succubus? What if he was the reincarnation of that Succubus, and the curse is awakening dormant memories from the past? What if....
What if....
What if....the succubus was a Lesbian?
A naughty but not lemony flavored sex comedy where the return of the Lesbian Succubus creates ripples in the underworld, and nothing will ever be the same again. Currently two chapters are done, and I'm working on the 3rd. Here are some details...
The setting is based on Beneath A Crimson Sky, but with a far more fleshed out lore and history. It's an alternate reality from that series. In this one Ranma isn't a vampire.
Crossovers that will appear...

• Dance in the Vampire Bund
• Sailor Moon Crystal
• Inuyasha
• Girls Bravo
• Senran Kagura
• Rosario Vampire
• Many more...

Once I get 4 chapters done I'll post them in the forums here.

What if you just start with one change and work from there instead of combining a bunch of stuff just to get to a desired result? Also not do a super crossover because they in general become a gigantic awful mess. 

As for your 'what if ranma was a lesbian succubus' question, the answer is that it will probably be written poorly from an outside male pov observing for his own titillation purposes. 

And what if you didn't express ideas in the same form that bad writers try to summarize their stories before ending with 'dont' like don't read'?

 

[Dumbledork]

I like Succubus!Ranma stories, so I'm definitely interested.

 

[zackadoorie]

Please post chapters 1 + 2 I need new ranma-chan lemon stories to gap to.

 

[gemmaethanwhitaker]

I'm pretty sure that Succubus!Ranma is only slightly less done then Senshi!Ranma, Incubus!Ranma might be more original

 

[nuclear death frog]

Die. Die slowly and in great pain. :flameon: [/quote]

 

[thezorch]

Not really going for originality here. I've found that if I write for what I like, and less for what others might like, then I have both more success and I don't burn out as often. Basically, I tried the whole making others happy route and all it did was make me miserable. Now, I go by the philosophy that if you can't please everyone all of the time then write for what makes you happy, and this has worked better for me and got me more positive reviews. Yeah, there's the occasional asshat who doesn't get it, but overall my stories get positive reviews.

 

[Dumbledork]

As you shuold.

 

[The Ero-Sennin]

Not really going for originality here. I've found that if I write for what I like, and less for what others might like, then I have both more success and I don't burn out as often. Basically, I tried the whole making others happy route and all it did was make me miserable. Now, I go by the philosophy that if you can't please everyone all of the time then write for what makes you happy, and this has worked better for me and got me more positive reviews. Yeah, there's the occasional asshat who doesn't get it, but overall my stories get positive reviews.

Here's the thing, man, there is nothing wrong with writing what you like or writing what makes you happy. I write what makes me happy too, and believe it or not, what I write is shit that goes so viciously against the grain that people end up learning new shit about themselves when they read it. People hate Akane? Whoops, now they love her. The idea of Sailor Moon being a heroic violent maniac? Holy shit where has this been all their lives? Draco Malfoy as an Abridged Alucard Certified Badass/Hat Rack? There are people who didn't realize they needed those things but they got them, holy shit.

The problem you have with writing what you like is that what you like is boring. It lacks style. Lawra, Black Dragon6, Ezit Meti, Lord Raa, and so many other authors who are reasonably well-known for their fics have a distinguishing style to what they write that makes people sit back and go "Yo, that shit is fire." What do you honestly have? Cliches. Rehashed ideas. Predictability. You write like gemmaethanwhitaker has ideas, tasteless at best and regurgitated on a good day. 

I'm not saying you should stop, I'm saying that you can do better than this and that other story idea you posted. Try a little harder than something that feels completely and utterly safe to you.