The White Devil of the Moon Chapter 1

#26
Fate can't exactly drag Nanoha off somewhere when she's preparing to attend her brother's wedding. Plus that'd tip her off that something's wrong. And for all Fate knows, Luna and her group are offworlders that could follow them no matter where they went on Earth, so running off somewhere won't help.
 

Tsukino_kage

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#27
Something I don't see anyone having hit on yet: Beryl doesn't like to share.

Dropping Precia and Alicia off in the DK (And it is Dark Kingdom, forget that Negaverse nonsense) might sound like a way to have a villian team up, but given Precia and Alicia's weakened state, they're more likely to be killed or brainwashed by Beryl. Even if she hears them out, there's no guarantee she won't simply use them as cannon fodder. There's no way Beryl would ever share power, that's just not in her nature. And the only reason she obeys Metallia is that she is the source of her power. In short, an outright alliance or even mutual agreement is unrealistic.

For those who want to debate on who is more powerful, let's face it, Beryl may not be as impressive as some other villians, but right now, Precia is barely alive.
 

Elvarein

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#29
Dark Knight Gafgar said:
Fate can't exactly drag Nanoha off somewhere when she's preparing to attend her brother's wedding. Plus that'd tip her off that something's wrong. And for all Fate knows, Luna and her group are offworlders that could follow them no matter where they went on Earth, so running off somewhere won't help.
A trip to Hakone isnt that far from Tokyo, it could be simply hey lets got to the Hot Springs to relax and eat good food or I want to see Kyoto ;p

And true, I did not consider the angle that Fate does not know who these people are. However, that does make the situation much more dangerous, especially if they decide to try agressive negotiations or are too persistant ;p I believe Fate to be very competent with a protective streak a mile wide, it is very difficult for this story to go to far without her finding out about them. For starters, if they keep showing up, she would assign Arf to do so and Arf or she, will quickly find out about the Negaverse. She could then call down the wrath of TSAB + Hayate and Co.

Besides, there are also plenty of other ways which she could get Nanoha away from them such as telling Shamal to fake a call where Nanoha has to go for a checkup etc and then deal with the situation.

This is not going to be an easy story, to be honest, but I do look forward to how Bissek goes forward :)
 

Tsukino_kage

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#30
Actually, would a jewel seed be able to revive Metallia like the Crystal would?
 

nick012000

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#31
Tsukino_kage said:
Actually, would a jewel seed be able to revive Metallia like the Crystal would?
Probably, but she'd probably need to attack the TSAB to get one of them.
 
#32
The thing is, the situation with the Senshi is different than what's in Kurtz's world. Usagi and Endymion are more like Enlightened Immortals, in that memories of previous incarnations are closer to the surface than they are in normal people. Especially after they fully regain their Silver Millennium memories. So, past associations have much greater weight to them than in Kurtz's world.
 

bissek

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#33
Kurtz and Kerr are totally different authors. We're talking Deverry here, not Deryni.

And remember, the reason why Jill refused to marry Rhodry in the Deverry novels is because she knew that if she did, she would have to give up everything she wanted in life other than Rhodry, since marrying Gwerbret Aberwyn would bring with it the numerous responsibilities of Lady Aberwyn, which would leave her no time for the life she wanted to live. And Jill had four hundred years of consecutive reincarnations all pushing her to want to be with Rhodry.

Nanoha has had only one incarnation with Endymion, and could very well end up in a similar situation. She's already found the cause she wants to follow for the rest of her life. Being a reigning monarch would leave her with even less freedom to follow the career she chose.
 

violetshadows

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#34
bissek said:
Kurtz and Kerr are totally different authors. We're talking Deverry here, not Deryni.

And remember, the reason why Jill refused to marry Rhodry in the Deverry novels is because she knew that if she did, she would have to give up everything she wanted in life other than Rhodry, since marrying Gwerbret Aberwyn would bring with it the numerous responsibilities of Lady Aberwyn, which would leave her no time for the life she wanted to live. And Jill had four hundred years of consecutive reincarnations all pushing her to want to be with Rhodry.

Nanoha has had only one incarnation with Endymion, and could very well end up in a similar situation. She's already found the cause she wants to follow for the rest of her life. Being a reigning monarch would leave her with even less freedom to follow the career she chose.
That said, what are you're plans for the relationship with Fate and Nanoha; are you planning on having a Nanoha/Fate spark work it's way in there to add to the tention between Nanoha's past and her present?
 
#35
bissek said:
Kurtz and Kerr are totally different authors. We're talking Deverry here, not Deryni.

And remember, the reason why Jill refused to marry Rhodry in the Deverry novels is because she knew that if she did, she would have to give up everything she wanted in life other than Rhodry, since marrying Gwerbret Aberwyn would bring with it the numerous responsibilities of Lady Aberwyn, which would leave her no time for the life she wanted to live. And Jill had four hundred years of consecutive reincarnations all pushing her to want to be with Rhodry.

Nanoha has had only one incarnation with Endymion, and could very well end up in a similar situation. She's already found the cause she wants to follow for the rest of her life. Being a reigning monarch would leave her with even less freedom to follow the career she chose.
Hehehehehe.

Always fun to see another fan of Kerr. She is too much glossed over, sadly :-(

Though to be Honest, Jill's 400 years o history with Rhodry weren't all pushing her to be with him (though they definitely made him someone IMPORTANT).
 

nick012000

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#36
Yeah. I doubt any degree of memories of being his lover will matter much when her instinctive reaction is "Penis? EWWW!", if lesbians work anything like heterosexual men. :p
 

Tsukino_kage

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#37
The whole Nanoha is lesbian thing is fanon, there's no canon material that outright states she's exclusively going for her own gender. It's more likely she's bi.
 
#38
Tsukino_kage said:
The whole Nanoha is lesbian thing is fanon, there's no canon material that outright states she's exclusively going for her own gender. It's more likely she's bi.
Nanoha and Fate are both at the very least bi, if their occasionally flirtatious reactions to Yuuno are anything to go by. In fact if anyone in MGLN is a lesbian it's probably Hayate.

And, of course, Subaru.
 

Mighty Bob

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#40
Hayate at the least likes boobs. And hell, can any of us really blame her? :cumdrool:
 

Souffle

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#41
My face when no update
 

MWkillkenny84

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#42
Tsukino_kage said:
The whole Nanoha is lesbian thing is fanon, there's no canon material that outright states she's exclusively going for her own gender. It's more likely she's bi.
Given this fact, will the fic become a threesome Fate/Yuuno/Nanoha (similar to Nanya's works)?
 
#43
Why're you asking someone other than the author?
 
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