bissek said:
I would like to note that I haven't even started working on the next chapter, but I have decided that due to the comments I have received I am replanning a major battle that I had originally planned to be fought by Signum and/or Vita to be handled by the Senshi without TSAB assistance and a second battle to require Senshi aid because you people are right in that they need more time in the spotlight.
That should help at least some though it still doesn't really do much for fixing the biggest problem that the story has, which is how completely out of character the Sailor Moon characters have been acting for the majority of the story and the fact that relationships between the moon cats, senshi and Momaru as they've been shown in the story make no fucking sense no matter if you are drawing from the manga, anime, or even dubbing.
Not to mention the really, really bad Sailor Pluto and Chibi-Usa bits. :no:
For anyone who simply doesn't like the direction I chose to take the story (And the biggest problem I have with these comments is simply that they are all coming about a year after the point where things allegedly started going wrong), you're free to write your own version. Just give me credit for the original idea.
Except that from what I remember quite a few of us
did complain and largely ignored or given out of the story excuses that you never seemed to have focused on or at least given any real showing so far in the story.
And for most of us from what I can tell, it isn't so much the direction of the story that people are finding irritating but the fact that for most of the fic, that most of what you written is coming across as a badly done Sailor Moon bashfic with none of the characters acting at all like the actual characters; basically the type of story that you usually see some two bit writer who has never actually bothered to see the real series but instead bases everything off of bad fanon.
...Which is somewhat annoying given that I've seen you write stuff before that was good. The 'Child of Hope' for example for all of its' problems was actually alright and didn't have nearly the number of plotholes or OOC that this is currently having or at least have them as nearly as noticeable. It had some, but the plot was fairly good and didn't come across as being continuously forced forward in order to work.
Edit: It doesn't help to me, that a number of the badder plotholes and really bad writing on the part of the Sailor Moon characters seem to come from you trying to rush the plot forward as quickly as you have been and feels like it could have been largely avoidable while still having the same basic framework for what you wanted.